Comments received on poems by Thoughtless
The Service
sorenbarrett said:
WWA, reality show, family gathering, or funeral. A fun read
August 8th, 2024 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
WWA, reality show, family gathering, or funeral. A fun read
August 8th, 2024 07:09
The Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A touching story of overcoming difficulties and enduring love. Nicely written.
August 7th, 2024 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
A touching story of overcoming difficulties and enduring love. Nicely written.
August 7th, 2024 08:51
Dance!
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing write that gives the brain something to think about.
August 6th, 2024 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
Intriguing write that gives the brain something to think about.
August 6th, 2024 11:37
Ambrosia for Us
Teddy.15 said:
Almost made me cry,your deep sorrow, I felt every bit with a beautiful thought at the end. 🌹
August 6th, 2024 08:55
Teddy.15 said:
Almost made me cry,your deep sorrow, I felt every bit with a beautiful thought at the end. 🌹
August 6th, 2024 08:55
My Wedding Night
Doggerel Dave said:
This is it. Sorry virgin ladies, go find the idiot who prizes you if that is what your mindset.....
Experience is all; first to show the way and thereafter (serial monogamy or variations thereof talking here) experience which appreciates……
August 5th, 2024 07:49
Doggerel Dave said:
This is it. Sorry virgin ladies, go find the idiot who prizes you if that is what your mindset.....
Experience is all; first to show the way and thereafter (serial monogamy or variations thereof talking here) experience which appreciates……
August 5th, 2024 07:49
A Story
Doggerel Dave said:
Same again. Lonely street. Woman in opposite direction I felt certain I knew. Bolted. On realisation ran after to apologise. Didn\'t help.....
Thanks for that.
August 5th, 2024 07:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Same again. Lonely street. Woman in opposite direction I felt certain I knew. Bolted. On realisation ran after to apologise. Didn\'t help.....
Thanks for that.
August 5th, 2024 07:38
My Wedding Night
Teddy.15 said:
For anyone who doubts themselves, this is magnificent message, it doesn\'t matter of your past only of your future, sir I\'m delighted to read your beautiful poetry. 🌹
August 4th, 2024 15:32
Teddy.15 said:
For anyone who doubts themselves, this is magnificent message, it doesn\'t matter of your past only of your future, sir I\'m delighted to read your beautiful poetry. 🌹
August 4th, 2024 15:32
My Wedding Night
sorenbarrett said:
Is it the body or the person we love? Old histories should be left in the past. Nice write.
August 4th, 2024 13:55
sorenbarrett said:
Is it the body or the person we love? Old histories should be left in the past. Nice write.
August 4th, 2024 13:55
A Strange Woman\'s Lips
sorenbarrett said:
Confusing to all involved. Incredible is the word. Meaning not credible. A fun read.
August 3rd, 2024 18:47
sorenbarrett said:
Confusing to all involved. Incredible is the word. Meaning not credible. A fun read.
August 3rd, 2024 18:47
The House of my Mind
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well and is well employed. Great wording here.
August 3rd, 2024 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor works well and is well employed. Great wording here.
August 3rd, 2024 05:34
The House of my Mind
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful metaphor here, as mouldy metaphor can be it\'s a brilliant and very emotional to be able to see the imagery of what a mind feels like, I\'ve had these moments in my life on my mind, caused by love🌹
August 3rd, 2024 03:33
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful metaphor here, as mouldy metaphor can be it\'s a brilliant and very emotional to be able to see the imagery of what a mind feels like, I\'ve had these moments in my life on my mind, caused by love🌹
August 3rd, 2024 03:33
I\'m Selfish, I suppose.
Teddy.15 said:
A Certain singing artist comes to mind, who ever she is you just put her on a pedastal. Absolutely beautiful poem. 🌹
August 3rd, 2024 03:29
Teddy.15 said:
A Certain singing artist comes to mind, who ever she is you just put her on a pedastal. Absolutely beautiful poem. 🌹
August 3rd, 2024 03:29
I\'m Selfish, I suppose.
sorenbarrett said:
An expression of worth and most interestingly said.
August 1st, 2024 18:25
sorenbarrett said:
An expression of worth and most interestingly said.
August 1st, 2024 18:25
Don\'t even like Oranges
sorenbarrett said:
Good format for the subject. Short and a bit enigmatic. nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
Good format for the subject. Short and a bit enigmatic. nicely done
July 30th, 2024 19:34
Those Days
sorenbarrett said:
Depressing left with the smell of diapers a brown smog and the smell of diesel. Powerful poem
July 29th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
Depressing left with the smell of diapers a brown smog and the smell of diesel. Powerful poem
July 29th, 2024 06:15
Fugitives
sorenbarrett said:
Something about this caught my mind like a loose fish hook and I was snagged unable to let go and move on.
July 27th, 2024 20:30
sorenbarrett said:
Something about this caught my mind like a loose fish hook and I was snagged unable to let go and move on.
July 27th, 2024 20:30
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