Comments received on poems by Thoughtless
That Night
Doggerel Dave said:
A night to remember easily and simply.
Beautifully understated.
April 13th, 2026 18:30
Doggerel Dave said:
A night to remember easily and simply.
Beautifully understated.
April 13th, 2026 18:30
That Night
Friendship said:
Nicely done, your poem revolves around intimacy and connection, exploring the physical and emotional dimensions of a romantic encounter.
April 13th, 2026 13:03
Friendship said:
Nicely done, your poem revolves around intimacy and connection, exploring the physical and emotional dimensions of a romantic encounter.
April 13th, 2026 13:03
Reflective Pattern Reality
sorenbarrett said:
Behind the smoke of definitions and shiny packaging of what is sold as a new convenience toy I worry about a Pandora box that once opened can not be put back in. It is already opened and whether it is the laziness inherent to our human system or the Frankenstein monster we create and despite whether it runs under programmer constraints or runs as an independent organism it poses threats that for the sake of greed and comercial gain have not been addressed. It has the potential of doing log-rhythmically more damage than the atom bomb yet has no regulation. Top developers have warned but no one has listened. Everyone wants the toy.
March 25th, 2026 03:32
sorenbarrett said:
Behind the smoke of definitions and shiny packaging of what is sold as a new convenience toy I worry about a Pandora box that once opened can not be put back in. It is already opened and whether it is the laziness inherent to our human system or the Frankenstein monster we create and despite whether it runs under programmer constraints or runs as an independent organism it poses threats that for the sake of greed and comercial gain have not been addressed. It has the potential of doing log-rhythmically more damage than the atom bomb yet has no regulation. Top developers have warned but no one has listened. Everyone wants the toy.
March 25th, 2026 03:32
Reflective Pattern Reality
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a funny feeling you are pulling my leg, but then I have a very simple literal mind....
March 24th, 2026 23:54
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a funny feeling you are pulling my leg, but then I have a very simple literal mind....
March 24th, 2026 23:54
See Video
sorenbarrett said:
An audio soliloquy a reflection that in a sense of free association moves from one thing to another. Interesting
March 22nd, 2026 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
An audio soliloquy a reflection that in a sense of free association moves from one thing to another. Interesting
March 22nd, 2026 04:18
Ugly A------ns
sorenbarrett said:
Here anacronyms become the the issue. My political ignorance leaves me in the dust. Visual occlusion hides the illusion. I\'m left in the dust
February 21st, 2026 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
Here anacronyms become the the issue. My political ignorance leaves me in the dust. Visual occlusion hides the illusion. I\'m left in the dust
February 21st, 2026 14:04
Run
Teddy.15 said:
LoL oh this is hilarious, and may I say inspiring because I would have never thought to give them their local names lol genius 👽
February 21st, 2026 00:23
Teddy.15 said:
LoL oh this is hilarious, and may I say inspiring because I would have never thought to give them their local names lol genius 👽
February 21st, 2026 00:23
Freedom
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one is surreal and well said. Defiance or rebellion are at times the defining limits to coercion. Well done
October 23rd, 2025 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one is surreal and well said. Defiance or rebellion are at times the defining limits to coercion. Well done
October 23rd, 2025 16:16
Streaming ad
sorenbarrett said:
All to true today a story of might makes right governments or gangs. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 21:09
sorenbarrett said:
All to true today a story of might makes right governments or gangs. Nicely done
October 11th, 2025 21:09
Mayflies
sorenbarrett said:
This write starts on erotic and quickly erupts into sexual. Its sensual and erroneous wording is a flash fire that burns to embers at the end.
September 27th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
This write starts on erotic and quickly erupts into sexual. Its sensual and erroneous wording is a flash fire that burns to embers at the end.
September 27th, 2025 04:42
Faces
sorenbarrett said:
This one was very well written Thoughtless so true it is and a fave
September 13th, 2025 17:12
sorenbarrett said:
This one was very well written Thoughtless so true it is and a fave
September 13th, 2025 17:12
the aroma
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful smells makes me hungry whether food or love
August 8th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful smells makes me hungry whether food or love
August 8th, 2025 11:05
the aroma
Poetic Licence said:
Fresh coffee a wonderful smell, has that homely feel, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 10:13
Poetic Licence said:
Fresh coffee a wonderful smell, has that homely feel, enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 10:13
Hard Copy
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and accurate write, highlighting how people have electronic relationships and we are losing the ability to communicate in person, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 10:54
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and accurate write, highlighting how people have electronic relationships and we are losing the ability to communicate in person, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 10:54
Hard Copy
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous use of metaphor here to describe todays social relationships as electronic not hard copy and like that may be lost easily in a solar flare or power outage. Well done
July 10th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous use of metaphor here to describe todays social relationships as electronic not hard copy and like that may be lost easily in a solar flare or power outage. Well done
July 10th, 2025 09:59
Untitled
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting mind tingler, working on it, enjoyed the read
May 29th, 2025 15:33
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting mind tingler, working on it, enjoyed the read
May 29th, 2025 15:33
Highway
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is one I would never have thought of. It sits on the fence between haiku and senryu loved it
May 29th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is one I would never have thought of. It sits on the fence between haiku and senryu loved it
May 29th, 2025 04:23
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