Comments received on poems by Thoughtless
Broken by the Arrow of Time
sorenbarrett said:
A melencholy feel to this poem a sense of missing and a longing for reunion. A strong bond that can not be broken.
November 2nd, 2024 15:10
sorenbarrett said:
A melencholy feel to this poem a sense of missing and a longing for reunion. A strong bond that can not be broken.
November 2nd, 2024 15:10
Broken by the Arrow of Time
Cheeky Missy said:
All that\'s left these past twa days is mourning over the proverbial fish that got away, this charming beauty so excellently rendered its haunting poignancy eats through the page into the reader, the imagery likewise a breathing entity we must half reckon with to boot. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 2nd, 2024 12:49
Cheeky Missy said:
All that\'s left these past twa days is mourning over the proverbial fish that got away, this charming beauty so excellently rendered its haunting poignancy eats through the page into the reader, the imagery likewise a breathing entity we must half reckon with to boot. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 2nd, 2024 12:49
Laying down a Road
Cheeky Missy said:
A road to the higher ground and so far yonder mists enclose its further regions. Lovely and evocative, inspiring. Thank you for sharing.
October 27th, 2024 10:52
Cheeky Missy said:
A road to the higher ground and so far yonder mists enclose its further regions. Lovely and evocative, inspiring. Thank you for sharing.
October 27th, 2024 10:52
A Family Halloween
Teddy.15 said:
I loved every line, you have captured the atmosphere of Halloween in all it\'s entirety and magic. Wonderful poetry, i felt I was there. 👻
October 21st, 2024 00:09
Teddy.15 said:
I loved every line, you have captured the atmosphere of Halloween in all it\'s entirety and magic. Wonderful poetry, i felt I was there. 👻
October 21st, 2024 00:09
A Family Halloween
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, this is so very lovely! I absolutely LOVE it!!! Rendered with a subtly winsome poignancy and such captivating imagery I seem to be there in the shadows watching. Thank you so very much for sharing!
October 20th, 2024 13:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow, this is so very lovely! I absolutely LOVE it!!! Rendered with a subtly winsome poignancy and such captivating imagery I seem to be there in the shadows watching. Thank you so very much for sharing!
October 20th, 2024 13:45
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Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Subtly and hauntingly poignant with superb imagery, this is delicately rendered, and hard-hitting. Fascinating and rather intriguing. Thank you for sharing.
September 26th, 2024 01:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. Subtly and hauntingly poignant with superb imagery, this is delicately rendered, and hard-hitting. Fascinating and rather intriguing. Thank you for sharing.
September 26th, 2024 01:32
Almena Dreams
Cheeky Missy said:
This is a beauty, so wonderfully detailed with a mounting, yet subtle dread, richly poignant to effect and delightfully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 08:32
Cheeky Missy said:
This is a beauty, so wonderfully detailed with a mounting, yet subtle dread, richly poignant to effect and delightfully rendered. Thank you very much for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 08:32
Almena Dreams
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t understand all of the local references, to be quite honest, however, I do feel the tragedy It places upon folks who are caught up in the disruption caused by the decline of what I would describe as an outback town.
September 11th, 2024 07:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t understand all of the local references, to be quite honest, however, I do feel the tragedy It places upon folks who are caught up in the disruption caused by the decline of what I would describe as an outback town.
September 11th, 2024 07:09
Working it Out
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely! You\'ll definitely enjoy a delicious meal together, at least in the salad department. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
September 5th, 2024 21:12
Cheeky Missy said:
Lovely! You\'ll definitely enjoy a delicious meal together, at least in the salad department. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
September 5th, 2024 21:12
Not Waking Up
MR.apocalypse said:
simple but somehow you are able to paint a great picture
September 4th, 2024 20:24
MR.apocalypse said:
simple but somehow you are able to paint a great picture
September 4th, 2024 20:24
Oh no! A show!
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure they enjoyed and envied the show. I know I have enjoyed this poem immensely. Thank you for such a fun piece.
September 2nd, 2024 13:30
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m sure they enjoyed and envied the show. I know I have enjoyed this poem immensely. Thank you for such a fun piece.
September 2nd, 2024 13:30
Sadness in her Eyes
Cassie58 said:
I can relate to this poem. I love my home and my life, but I will always pine for my childhood home, my parents and my siblings. This is a lovely tribute to your late wife who would have appreciated your understanding. Much enjoyed JDB.
August 31st, 2024 18:22
Cassie58 said:
I can relate to this poem. I love my home and my life, but I will always pine for my childhood home, my parents and my siblings. This is a lovely tribute to your late wife who would have appreciated your understanding. Much enjoyed JDB.
August 31st, 2024 18:22
Co-dependency
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted on this canvas and like a flash from a film background filled in leaving the reader in a peaceful setting. Lovely
August 29th, 2024 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images painted on this canvas and like a flash from a film background filled in leaving the reader in a peaceful setting. Lovely
August 29th, 2024 05:06
A Mystery?
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice write. Poetic and as all great stories based in truth
August 27th, 2024 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
A very nice write. Poetic and as all great stories based in truth
August 27th, 2024 12:44
\"Sanctuary\"
Bella Shepard said:
Color me ignorant, but I did not know what FWB stood for. Upon googling it, which I do know how to do, I was enlightened, and thoroughly enjoyed this write. I love \"Church of Everlasting Orgies\", seems I missed out on a lot. Fine write!
August 26th, 2024 13:38
Bella Shepard said:
Color me ignorant, but I did not know what FWB stood for. Upon googling it, which I do know how to do, I was enlightened, and thoroughly enjoyed this write. I love \"Church of Everlasting Orgies\", seems I missed out on a lot. Fine write!
August 26th, 2024 13:38
\"Sanctuary\"
sorenbarrett said:
What a write about relationships not just of people but societies and countries
August 26th, 2024 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
What a write about relationships not just of people but societies and countries
August 26th, 2024 09:38
The Bottoms
Dan Williams said:
Lovely, flowing. A lot said in not so many words. Nice work.
August 26th, 2024 00:04
Dan Williams said:
Lovely, flowing. A lot said in not so many words. Nice work.
August 26th, 2024 00:04
The Bottoms
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful description, I can understand your love for this place of peaceful bliss. Being native Missourians, and bird lovers, my husband and I travel through Kansas on our westward vacations, this sounds like something we should definitely check out.
August 25th, 2024 15:03
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful description, I can understand your love for this place of peaceful bliss. Being native Missourians, and bird lovers, my husband and I travel through Kansas on our westward vacations, this sounds like something we should definitely check out.
August 25th, 2024 15:03
The Bottoms
Cassie58 said:
Fabulous imagery here. Just the type of place that would lift spirits. Your words conveyed beautifully and they stimulate the senses. I enjoyed the posted video too. Thank you JDB. I can’t call you Thoughtless, because you aren’t lol.
August 25th, 2024 11:31
Cassie58 said:
Fabulous imagery here. Just the type of place that would lift spirits. Your words conveyed beautifully and they stimulate the senses. I enjoyed the posted video too. Thank you JDB. I can’t call you Thoughtless, because you aren’t lol.
August 25th, 2024 11:31
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