Comments received on poems by Thoughtless
Hard Copy
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and accurate write, highlighting how people have electronic relationships and we are losing the ability to communicate in person, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 10:54
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely and accurate write, highlighting how people have electronic relationships and we are losing the ability to communicate in person, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 10:54
Hard Copy
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous use of metaphor here to describe todays social relationships as electronic not hard copy and like that may be lost easily in a solar flare or power outage. Well done
July 10th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
What a marvelous use of metaphor here to describe todays social relationships as electronic not hard copy and like that may be lost easily in a solar flare or power outage. Well done
July 10th, 2025 09:59
Untitled
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting mind tingler, working on it, enjoyed the read
May 29th, 2025 15:33
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting mind tingler, working on it, enjoyed the read
May 29th, 2025 15:33
Highway
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is one I would never have thought of. It sits on the fence between haiku and senryu loved it
May 29th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Now that is one I would never have thought of. It sits on the fence between haiku and senryu loved it
May 29th, 2025 04:23
A Senryu
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and a powerful point where overreaction has led to terrible injustice
May 24th, 2025 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
Well written and a powerful point where overreaction has led to terrible injustice
May 24th, 2025 08:06
Not much
sorenbarrett said:
Just holding on like staying on s bull in bull riding will get you a score as well as a bruising
May 15th, 2025 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Just holding on like staying on s bull in bull riding will get you a score as well as a bruising
May 15th, 2025 05:46
lawless uniforms
sorenbarrett said:
Glad for the author\'s note for I had not noticed the image, looking straight at the Haiku Very nice
May 12th, 2025 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
Glad for the author\'s note for I had not noticed the image, looking straight at the Haiku Very nice
May 12th, 2025 04:23
Traffic
sorenbarrett said:
How distant we are under our act of social friendliness or bravado. Masked individuals robbing the bank of acquaintance under the guise of friends. Did I miss the point? A most wonderful write.
April 25th, 2025 09:14
sorenbarrett said:
How distant we are under our act of social friendliness or bravado. Masked individuals robbing the bank of acquaintance under the guise of friends. Did I miss the point? A most wonderful write.
April 25th, 2025 09:14
Traffic
Teddy.15 said:
This beautiful. Sad yet honest and the sense of loneliness is to truly palpable 🌹
April 25th, 2025 07:11
Teddy.15 said:
This beautiful. Sad yet honest and the sense of loneliness is to truly palpable 🌹
April 25th, 2025 07:11
The Son
sorenbarrett said:
Caught me by surprise. I think at times he should have. A fun read
April 21st, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
Caught me by surprise. I think at times he should have. A fun read
April 21st, 2025 20:05
experimental haiku
sorenbarrett said:
Trying something new is a good thing. Nature does it all the time. It\'s called evolution. Some mutations catch on and others do not. A fun and great attempt.
April 17th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Trying something new is a good thing. Nature does it all the time. It\'s called evolution. Some mutations catch on and others do not. A fun and great attempt.
April 17th, 2025 04:42
experimental haiku
arqios said:
That relates so much in so few words! Jiminy among them🙏🏻🕊️
April 17th, 2025 00:47
arqios said:
That relates so much in so few words! Jiminy among them🙏🏻🕊️
April 17th, 2025 00:47
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