Comments received on poems by Hugh
The Fall of the House
Cassie58 said:
Quite a fall. Descriptive with some magnetic imagery. The tang of sea salt in the air is unmistakeable. I enjoyed my visit Hugh.
April 15th, 2024 23:51
Cassie58 said:
Quite a fall. Descriptive with some magnetic imagery. The tang of sea salt in the air is unmistakeable. I enjoyed my visit Hugh.
April 15th, 2024 23:51
Well 1
David Wakeling said:
Umm a bleak but realistic view of the nightmare we call Life.Well done
April 14th, 2024 17:24
David Wakeling said:
Umm a bleak but realistic view of the nightmare we call Life.Well done
April 14th, 2024 17:24
Electronic Lamentations
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Soo smoothly said. Thank you for sharing.
April 3rd, 2024 21:06
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Soo smoothly said. Thank you for sharing.
April 3rd, 2024 21:06
Cars on wet roads
Hugh said:
Thank you, I wasn\'t really sure about that particular one, but glad you enjoyed it
March 26th, 2024 19:12
Hugh said:
Thank you, I wasn\'t really sure about that particular one, but glad you enjoyed it
March 26th, 2024 19:12
Strangers and other lovers
Dan Williams said:
Heartfelt. But you lost me with \"fruit machine\".
March 18th, 2024 21:59
Dan Williams said:
Heartfelt. But you lost me with \"fruit machine\".
March 18th, 2024 21:59
Strangers and other lovers
Alan R said:
Relatability... penmanship, imagery I couldn\'t have read anything more relevant today
March 18th, 2024 16:44
Alan R said:
Relatability... penmanship, imagery I couldn\'t have read anything more relevant today
March 18th, 2024 16:44
Colour - Green
Cassie58 said:
Lazing on a sunny afternoon. We can learn alot from ants. We can learn alot from observation. Plenty of imagery here Hugh.
March 11th, 2024 23:40
Cassie58 said:
Lazing on a sunny afternoon. We can learn alot from ants. We can learn alot from observation. Plenty of imagery here Hugh.
March 11th, 2024 23:40
Colour - Green
Khloefaith2024 said:
This poem i can tell means alot because when I read it I thought that well at least one person wants you to stay and not to go so now your welcomed
March 11th, 2024 20:34
Khloefaith2024 said:
This poem i can tell means alot because when I read it I thought that well at least one person wants you to stay and not to go so now your welcomed
March 11th, 2024 20:34
Dogs that bark in the afternoon
Meera Mere said:
Thoroughly expressed the realities of life.
\"Memories of younger summers
Early summer thunderstorms
People running for cover
Sirens call to emergency
Hospitals tend the sick\"
March 10th, 2024 04:28
Meera Mere said:
Thoroughly expressed the realities of life.
\"Memories of younger summers
Early summer thunderstorms
People running for cover
Sirens call to emergency
Hospitals tend the sick\"
March 10th, 2024 04:28
Dogs that bark in the afternoon
Cassie58 said:
A slice of life. So much variety. While we laze in the park in summer heat, after a picnic, so much going on elsewhere. Meanwhile cats sleep and dogs bark. Plenty of imagery here Hugh. Made me reflect on summers past. I enjoyed my visit.
March 10th, 2024 00:38
Cassie58 said:
A slice of life. So much variety. While we laze in the park in summer heat, after a picnic, so much going on elsewhere. Meanwhile cats sleep and dogs bark. Plenty of imagery here Hugh. Made me reflect on summers past. I enjoyed my visit.
March 10th, 2024 00:38
All Fall Down
Cassie58 said:
Four separate situations, each one building in apprehension, leading to that final line. The repetition works well. Reminded me of the nursery rhyme Ring a ring of Rosie’s. That also ends in we all fall down.
March 8th, 2024 21:58
Cassie58 said:
Four separate situations, each one building in apprehension, leading to that final line. The repetition works well. Reminded me of the nursery rhyme Ring a ring of Rosie’s. That also ends in we all fall down.
March 8th, 2024 21:58
Three Short poems on Medicines
Doggerel Dave said:
I do believe there might be more than three short truths embedded within your three short poems here.
I cannot remember a visit to a doctor which didn\'t result in a new different \'script.
For me enjoyably versed.
March 3rd, 2024 15:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I do believe there might be more than three short truths embedded within your three short poems here.
I cannot remember a visit to a doctor which didn\'t result in a new different \'script.
For me enjoyably versed.
March 3rd, 2024 15:53
The Polar bears on honeymoon
Cassie58 said:
Visually beautiful. Your imagery lingered. Nice piece Hugh.
March 3rd, 2024 00:12
Cassie58 said:
Visually beautiful. Your imagery lingered. Nice piece Hugh.
March 3rd, 2024 00:12
The Polar bears on honeymoon
David Wakeling said:
Those polar bears sure know how to live.A fun poem
March 2nd, 2024 17:19
David Wakeling said:
Those polar bears sure know how to live.A fun poem
March 2nd, 2024 17:19
Trees (Weeping Willow)
Cassie58 said:
I have an affinity with both rivers and trees, this poem was a treat to read. The imagery so appealing. Lovely work.
February 29th, 2024 00:35
Cassie58 said:
I have an affinity with both rivers and trees, this poem was a treat to read. The imagery so appealing. Lovely work.
February 29th, 2024 00:35
Wild Thing
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
Your poem is wonderfully human and relatable. It genuinely felt like a genuine and spontaneous exchange between friends or lovers.
February 28th, 2024 17:46
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
Your poem is wonderfully human and relatable. It genuinely felt like a genuine and spontaneous exchange between friends or lovers.
February 28th, 2024 17:46
Trees (Weeping Willow)
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
Your poem beautifully captures the ebb and flow of life\'s emotions, much like the river that runs through its verses.
February 28th, 2024 17:36
Royce Earnest Rasmussen said:
Your poem beautifully captures the ebb and flow of life\'s emotions, much like the river that runs through its verses.
February 28th, 2024 17:36
Trees (Weeping Willow)
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful story of the turning of the seasons.It took me there
February 28th, 2024 15:39
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful story of the turning of the seasons.It took me there
February 28th, 2024 15:39
Wild Thing
Cassie58 said:
A slice of life and so very nicely conveyed. Made me smile with the imagery coming through. I hope you kissed her :) I enjoyed my visit here Hugh.
February 26th, 2024 06:37
Cassie58 said:
A slice of life and so very nicely conveyed. Made me smile with the imagery coming through. I hope you kissed her :) I enjoyed my visit here Hugh.
February 26th, 2024 06:37
Love Letter
Cassie58 said:
The ending of this poem was unexpected. It sent a little shiver through my heart. A poignant write poet.
February 24th, 2024 15:25
Cassie58 said:
The ending of this poem was unexpected. It sent a little shiver through my heart. A poignant write poet.
February 24th, 2024 15:25
My Life as a Marxist
Lorenz said:
Soon the healthy work of the fields and a good bowl of rice !
February 22nd, 2024 13:49
Lorenz said:
Soon the healthy work of the fields and a good bowl of rice !
February 22nd, 2024 13:49
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