Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
~> When An Old Man Dies
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Thad, so much id lost when an old man dies.
Andy
October 25th, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Thad, so much id lost when an old man dies.
Andy
October 25th, 2024 01:15
~> When An Old Man Dies
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
Old men leave records everywhere:
Memoirs and (oh no!) poetry.
Nothing rhymes with poetry but ‘tree’
So leave it alone and let it be -
Trees last longer with less hot air…
Phew - nearly fell over there; ran out of rhyme. You are making it harder.. any time you want me to give up, just say so...
October 24th, 2024 17:02
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
Old men leave records everywhere:
Memoirs and (oh no!) poetry.
Nothing rhymes with poetry but ‘tree’
So leave it alone and let it be -
Trees last longer with less hot air…
Phew - nearly fell over there; ran out of rhyme. You are making it harder.. any time you want me to give up, just say so...
October 24th, 2024 17:02
~> When An Old Man Dies
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed so with each a burning of the library of Alexandria. A point well taken and a great metaphor my friend
October 24th, 2024 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed so with each a burning of the library of Alexandria. A point well taken and a great metaphor my friend
October 24th, 2024 12:16
~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Teddy.15 said:
Definitely spooky. 🌹 Wonderfully nerrated
October 24th, 2024 02:52
Teddy.15 said:
Definitely spooky. 🌹 Wonderfully nerrated
October 24th, 2024 02:52
~> Oh, I need you so much!
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your food Thad it can bring words to your life.
Andy
October 24th, 2024 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Enjoy your food Thad it can bring words to your life.
Andy
October 24th, 2024 01:26
~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
NafisaSB said:
beautiful horror story - scared me...ha ha
October 24th, 2024 00:00
NafisaSB said:
beautiful horror story - scared me...ha ha
October 24th, 2024 00:00
~> Oh, I need you so much!
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad.
Tomato it was – I’d never have known
If your comment from author hadn’t revealed
Your bathtub was not full of blood congealed
Before inspiration appeared full grown.
Does a poet suffer for his art?
Well if you do, just carry on suffering……
October 23rd, 2024 15:07
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad.
Tomato it was – I’d never have known
If your comment from author hadn’t revealed
Your bathtub was not full of blood congealed
Before inspiration appeared full grown.
Does a poet suffer for his art?
Well if you do, just carry on suffering……
October 23rd, 2024 15:07
~> Oh, I need you so much!
sorenbarrett said:
Yea I guessed it might have been tomato but this death apple was thought to be poisonous for some time, being a part of the deadly night shade family. Loved the read
October 23rd, 2024 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
Yea I guessed it might have been tomato but this death apple was thought to be poisonous for some time, being a part of the deadly night shade family. Loved the read
October 23rd, 2024 12:48
~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Goldfinch60 said:
If he rings my doorbell Thad he will be unlucky as I am not in. LOL
Andy
October 23rd, 2024 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
If he rings my doorbell Thad he will be unlucky as I am not in. LOL
Andy
October 23rd, 2024 01:31
~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Doggerel Dave said:
The reaper geezer turns up here this time:
His visit means a finale will be mine;
But \"Go on - sod off I’m not quite ready yet”
Went next door instead – thick as a briquette.
Strained rhyme today – more interested in relieving him of his gold watch before he went next door. You don’t come the Flash Harry round here and get away wiv it….
Forgiving the ‘Muahahaaaaa!’ - a really disciplined write, Thad.
October 22nd, 2024 13:31
Doggerel Dave said:
The reaper geezer turns up here this time:
His visit means a finale will be mine;
But \"Go on - sod off I’m not quite ready yet”
Went next door instead – thick as a briquette.
Strained rhyme today – more interested in relieving him of his gold watch before he went next door. You don’t come the Flash Harry round here and get away wiv it….
Forgiving the ‘Muahahaaaaa!’ - a really disciplined write, Thad.
October 22nd, 2024 13:31
~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
sorenbarrett said:
A great write for Halloween and this time of the year.
October 22nd, 2024 11:54
sorenbarrett said:
A great write for Halloween and this time of the year.
October 22nd, 2024 11:54
~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Neville said:
.. He\'s sure is lookin dapper, made me almost wanna crappa .. actually I think it may have been a dodgy oyster I had for lunch .. Spooky coincidence tho or what
October 22nd, 2024 11:54
Neville said:
.. He\'s sure is lookin dapper, made me almost wanna crappa .. actually I think it may have been a dodgy oyster I had for lunch .. Spooky coincidence tho or what
October 22nd, 2024 11:54
~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Thad.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Thad.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:47
Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever and good loving words Thad.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Very clever and good loving words Thad.
Andy
October 22nd, 2024 01:44
~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
A ruck and a stink - they’re at it again;
The Estate Agent didn’t mention them.
My next door neighbors are a right old pain;
One of ‘em fancies me but she ain’t no femme…….
….. ‘I’m off to see the wizard’ – You know, that old bloke from Oz....see if he can help me out….
October 21st, 2024 16:17
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
A ruck and a stink - they’re at it again;
The Estate Agent didn’t mention them.
My next door neighbors are a right old pain;
One of ‘em fancies me but she ain’t no femme…….
….. ‘I’m off to see the wizard’ – You know, that old bloke from Oz....see if he can help me out….
October 21st, 2024 16:17
~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
orchidee said:
Ahh, a picture of three mother-in-laws there?! heehee.
October 21st, 2024 14:51
orchidee said:
Ahh, a picture of three mother-in-laws there?! heehee.
October 21st, 2024 14:51
~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Neville said:
Maybe I\'m just going through a bad spell .. Not my favourite time of year or celebration, but a great and timely poem nevertheless .. 🐧👍
October 21st, 2024 11:52
Neville said:
Maybe I\'m just going through a bad spell .. Not my favourite time of year or celebration, but a great and timely poem nevertheless .. 🐧👍
October 21st, 2024 11:52
~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
Teddy.15 said:
Some of us find it easy to be a witch 🧹 lol 🤣
another wonderful addition to MPS\'s very own Halloween collection 🎃
October 21st, 2024 10:17
Teddy.15 said:
Some of us find it easy to be a witch 🧹 lol 🤣
another wonderful addition to MPS\'s very own Halloween collection 🎃
October 21st, 2024 10:17
~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch!
sorenbarrett said:
Almost Shakepear Mcbeth a fun read and all in the season of darkness.
October 21st, 2024 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Almost Shakepear Mcbeth a fun read and all in the season of darkness.
October 21st, 2024 10:16
~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Neville said:
A tail told terribly well .. and I hope the old Dog appreciates it ..
October 21st, 2024 03:36
Neville said:
A tail told terribly well .. and I hope the old Dog appreciates it ..
October 21st, 2024 03:36
Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
Doggerel Dave said:
“Now just how sad can it be?
Lucky escape if you ask me…
Don’t crawl, definitely don’t plea -
Sit a fresh babe upon your knee……”
- Quote from page 53 of ‘Mrs Mumpy’s advice to the lovelorn’
Kudos as above, Thad.
October 20th, 2024 14:50
Doggerel Dave said:
“Now just how sad can it be?
Lucky escape if you ask me…
Don’t crawl, definitely don’t plea -
Sit a fresh babe upon your knee……”
- Quote from page 53 of ‘Mrs Mumpy’s advice to the lovelorn’
Kudos as above, Thad.
October 20th, 2024 14:50
Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad, best regards
October 20th, 2024 12:54
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad, best regards
October 20th, 2024 12:54
~> I\'m Sailing Home, To You My Love -
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful. 🌹 I hope you never have to sail again! ❤️
October 20th, 2024 11:20
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful. 🌹 I hope you never have to sail again! ❤️
October 20th, 2024 11:20
Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
sorenbarrett said:
So many of us have felt this way it is easy to empathize. I too have used this rhyme scheme in the past. It does a good job of emphasizing the ever returning thoughts that obsessively fill ones head at such a loss. Very nicely done
October 20th, 2024 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
So many of us have felt this way it is easy to empathize. I too have used this rhyme scheme in the past. It does a good job of emphasizing the ever returning thoughts that obsessively fill ones head at such a loss. Very nicely done
October 20th, 2024 09:13
~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Bobby O said:
I think I would really like Uncle Louie and his brilliant black cat.
October 20th, 2024 02:34
Bobby O said:
I think I would really like Uncle Louie and his brilliant black cat.
October 20th, 2024 02:34
~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh Thad - your dedication all but overwhelmed me.... SOL (Snigger Out Loud)
Picture Uncle Louie training the cat:
Months of hard lessons to get him like that.
And black cats are lucky, so they do say;
Yes – ‘cos Puss got his fortune, by the way.
Keep \'em coming Mate - an always enjoyable interlude experienced here.
October 19th, 2024 19:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh Thad - your dedication all but overwhelmed me.... SOL (Snigger Out Loud)
Picture Uncle Louie training the cat:
Months of hard lessons to get him like that.
And black cats are lucky, so they do say;
Yes – ‘cos Puss got his fortune, by the way.
Keep \'em coming Mate - an always enjoyable interlude experienced here.
October 19th, 2024 19:00
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