Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
~> Cuckoo - Cuckoo ( haiku )
sorenbarrett said:
Great haiku thinking metaphoricalchy watch out for those rubber dollies
September 30th, 2024 05:19
sorenbarrett said:
Great haiku thinking metaphoricalchy watch out for those rubber dollies
September 30th, 2024 05:19
~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet -
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale Thad, we often wonder why they are here.
Andy
September 30th, 2024 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful tale Thad, we often wonder why they are here.
Andy
September 30th, 2024 02:22
~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet -
sorenbarrett said:
A great tale in a sonnet. Nicely done
September 29th, 2024 19:39
sorenbarrett said:
A great tale in a sonnet. Nicely done
September 29th, 2024 19:39
~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet -
Doggerel Dave said:
Archie the alien knew his stuff -
Across the universe for weed not rough.
If Shakespeare had known of this verse so buff
He may have returned as well for a puff…
Alas rubbish rhyme don’t get no better do it…. Totally overshadowed by a Mr Thad Wilk who knows what he’s doing.
September 29th, 2024 19:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Archie the alien knew his stuff -
Across the universe for weed not rough.
If Shakespeare had known of this verse so buff
He may have returned as well for a puff…
Alas rubbish rhyme don’t get no better do it…. Totally overshadowed by a Mr Thad Wilk who knows what he’s doing.
September 29th, 2024 19:12
~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet -
orchidee said:
So that\'s why! lol.
September 29th, 2024 11:18
orchidee said:
So that\'s why! lol.
September 29th, 2024 11:18
~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet -
2781 said:
If nothing else is proves is good pot.
September 29th, 2024 08:54
2781 said:
If nothing else is proves is good pot.
September 29th, 2024 08:54
~> Cuckoo - Cuckoo ( haiku )
Doggerel Dave said:
Meaningful haiku, Thad. That\'ll learn him, and let\'s hope it changes his tune....
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-127216
September 28th, 2024 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Meaningful haiku, Thad. That\'ll learn him, and let\'s hope it changes his tune....
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-127216
September 28th, 2024 18:01
~> Cuckoo - Cuckoo ( haiku )
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, here\'s hoping no men actually try the act with a solid mannequin or they\'ll be howling likewise. Lovely little tribute to the folly with good humor. Beautifully rendered with tasteful brevity and good imagery. Thank you for sharing.
September 28th, 2024 16:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Well, here\'s hoping no men actually try the act with a solid mannequin or they\'ll be howling likewise. Lovely little tribute to the folly with good humor. Beautifully rendered with tasteful brevity and good imagery. Thank you for sharing.
September 28th, 2024 16:48
~> Gals; A True Friend\'s Like,
sorenbarrett said:
I can use a fun read at any time and this was one go get my day strarted. Gave me a smile Thad thanks for that.
September 28th, 2024 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
I can use a fun read at any time and this was one go get my day strarted. Gave me a smile Thad thanks for that.
September 28th, 2024 04:48
~> Gals; A True Friend\'s Like,
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Thad.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Thad.
Andy
September 28th, 2024 01:21
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
Dan Williams said:
Very clever, both feeding and eating. Love the \"a marionet duplicate\". Very nice.
September 28th, 2024 00:16
Dan Williams said:
Very clever, both feeding and eating. Love the \"a marionet duplicate\". Very nice.
September 28th, 2024 00:16
~> Gals; A True Friend\'s Like,
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad
A bra was always a problem for me;
To find the hooks before she cooled off you see.
This was years ago and times I think have changed,
Friendship’s more thoughtful; ideas are exchanged…..
Good laugh Mate, but I remain ever thankful I’m not of that gender forced to wear one of them….
September 27th, 2024 17:04
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad
A bra was always a problem for me;
To find the hooks before she cooled off you see.
This was years ago and times I think have changed,
Friendship’s more thoughtful; ideas are exchanged…..
Good laugh Mate, but I remain ever thankful I’m not of that gender forced to wear one of them….
September 27th, 2024 17:04
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
Cheeky Missy said:
You know, for too many years now I\'ve read tales of the elderly and beggerly catching and eating squirrels, albeit I\'m still too much of a youngster and my only claims are trying to catch one just before dinner in 5th grade [Hey! I wanted a pet and he was too fun!];and having one of my neighbors call the squirrels \"your friend--\"(well, he DID murder one of my potted plants to avail himself of said pot and digging happily in the dirt; and he DID destroy my soft cooler when he wanted the buns I packed there over winter...) And oh! the image! I was too tired to respond at all when you posted this, but stared in fascination at the picture....from, whence you drew inspiration? Awesome! I declare, you\'re a regular riot!!! I just did my duty and read this aloud, as all poetry is to be properly enjoyed: too waltzingly rendered with superb and rollicking humor, not to mention awesome details. Thank you very much for sharing. Me loves.
September 27th, 2024 16:31
Cheeky Missy said:
You know, for too many years now I\'ve read tales of the elderly and beggerly catching and eating squirrels, albeit I\'m still too much of a youngster and my only claims are trying to catch one just before dinner in 5th grade [Hey! I wanted a pet and he was too fun!];and having one of my neighbors call the squirrels \"your friend--\"(well, he DID murder one of my potted plants to avail himself of said pot and digging happily in the dirt; and he DID destroy my soft cooler when he wanted the buns I packed there over winter...) And oh! the image! I was too tired to respond at all when you posted this, but stared in fascination at the picture....from, whence you drew inspiration? Awesome! I declare, you\'re a regular riot!!! I just did my duty and read this aloud, as all poetry is to be properly enjoyed: too waltzingly rendered with superb and rollicking humor, not to mention awesome details. Thank you very much for sharing. Me loves.
September 27th, 2024 16:31
~> Gals; A True Friend\'s Like,
Cheeky Missy said:
Written by a boy, no less, where mine kills me, who refuses to buy bigger and gave up adding the stretcher pieces since the first is an unnecessary expense and the second only renders them too loose. Gaining weight turned them into tourniquets, or painful reminders I dearly need to lose weight. But I digress.
Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a waltzing sense of good humor, as well as being a lovely intro to your revered grandma and good advice, perhaps. Thank you very much for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 12:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Written by a boy, no less, where mine kills me, who refuses to buy bigger and gave up adding the stretcher pieces since the first is an unnecessary expense and the second only renders them too loose. Gaining weight turned them into tourniquets, or painful reminders I dearly need to lose weight. But I digress.
Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a waltzing sense of good humor, as well as being a lovely intro to your revered grandma and good advice, perhaps. Thank you very much for sharing!
September 27th, 2024 12:35
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Thad.
Andy
September 27th, 2024 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Thad.
Andy
September 27th, 2024 01:52
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Thad.
I’m just a vegetarian,
So squirrels are quite safe from me.
Get her onto a pensian
And let the animal go free.
Not for nothing my first name’s ‘Doggerel’. I bow to your superior versification and mastery of a complex form. 👍
September 26th, 2024 18:11
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Thad.
I’m just a vegetarian,
So squirrels are quite safe from me.
Get her onto a pensian
And let the animal go free.
Not for nothing my first name’s ‘Doggerel’. I bow to your superior versification and mastery of a complex form. 👍
September 26th, 2024 18:11
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
sorenbarrett said:
A rather complex write in rhyme scheme and structure. Very nicely done but I\'m a bit picky about what I eat.
September 26th, 2024 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
A rather complex write in rhyme scheme and structure. Very nicely done but I\'m a bit picky about what I eat.
September 26th, 2024 13:16
~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain -
orchidee said:
Good write T. Urgh! Wouldn\'t want to eat squirrel!
September 26th, 2024 09:42
orchidee said:
Good write T. Urgh! Wouldn\'t want to eat squirrel!
September 26th, 2024 09:42
~> My Kitty\'s Plotting To Kill Me! -form Kyrielle-
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of a cat my sister used to have. It haded my younger brother, used to sneak up behind his chair and rake the back of his head with its claws, at night would crap in his shoe, cats have vendetas
September 25th, 2024 20:45
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of a cat my sister used to have. It haded my younger brother, used to sneak up behind his chair and rake the back of his head with its claws, at night would crap in his shoe, cats have vendetas
September 25th, 2024 20:45
~> My Kitty\'s Plotting To Kill Me! -form Kyrielle-
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad.
‘I Tawt I Taw A Puddy Tat a ‘creeping up on me
But you ain’t no budgerigar or dicky bird I see.
So why is it you don’t tell Sylvester to go get lost?
He won\'t \'cos no more regular fishy meals will be the cost.
Cats are bright creatures who know when and where they are well off - too bad yours can\'t read this brill dedication to their efforts.
September 25th, 2024 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad.
‘I Tawt I Taw A Puddy Tat a ‘creeping up on me
But you ain’t no budgerigar or dicky bird I see.
So why is it you don’t tell Sylvester to go get lost?
He won\'t \'cos no more regular fishy meals will be the cost.
Cats are bright creatures who know when and where they are well off - too bad yours can\'t read this brill dedication to their efforts.
September 25th, 2024 16:53
~> My Kitty\'s Plotting To Kill Me! -form Kyrielle-
orchidee said:
Good write T.
September 25th, 2024 10:56
orchidee said:
Good write T.
September 25th, 2024 10:56
~> My Kitty\'s Plotting To Kill Me! -form Kyrielle-
Cheeky Missy said:
The only thing I\'d alter about the image to add realism in a frightening fashion is the male character who obviously can withstand the puddy tat\'s intentions, however ill they may chance to be. Mum having taught me too many years ago that cats are extremely dangerous when babies are in the house since they\'ll characteristically sleep on infants and young babies faces, it is more serious a threat depending on your youth, I suspect.
That aside, you\'re too fun! Me loves this rollicking romp up and down the stairs through mental roller-coasters as the suggested threat strives to gain momentum despite the obvious levity. Beautifully rendered with definitely haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 10:17
Cheeky Missy said:
The only thing I\'d alter about the image to add realism in a frightening fashion is the male character who obviously can withstand the puddy tat\'s intentions, however ill they may chance to be. Mum having taught me too many years ago that cats are extremely dangerous when babies are in the house since they\'ll characteristically sleep on infants and young babies faces, it is more serious a threat depending on your youth, I suspect.
That aside, you\'re too fun! Me loves this rollicking romp up and down the stairs through mental roller-coasters as the suggested threat strives to gain momentum despite the obvious levity. Beautifully rendered with definitely haunting poignancy and excellent details. Thank you for sharing.
September 25th, 2024 10:17
~> \'Pon A Closet Shelf,
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Thad, those memories that can come back can be so wonderful.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Thad, those memories that can come back can be so wonderful.
Andy
September 25th, 2024 01:48
~> Nay, I Shan\'t Share! ( Sonnet-Dedication )
sorenbarrett said:
Greed is not exclusively a human trait but it is the foundation of capitalism maybe birds are capitalists. A fun read Thad
September 24th, 2024 16:44
sorenbarrett said:
Greed is not exclusively a human trait but it is the foundation of capitalism maybe birds are capitalists. A fun read Thad
September 24th, 2024 16:44
~> \'Pon A Closet Shelf,
Cassie58 said:
Treasure for her. To find them again and relive the memories years later. Sentimental poetry Thad. Just my cup of tea. Happy Tuesday.
September 24th, 2024 13:48
Cassie58 said:
Treasure for her. To find them again and relive the memories years later. Sentimental poetry Thad. Just my cup of tea. Happy Tuesday.
September 24th, 2024 13:48
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