Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
Doggerel Dave said:
“Now just how sad can it be?
Lucky escape if you ask me…
Don’t crawl, definitely don’t plea -
Sit a fresh babe upon your knee……”
- Quote from page 53 of ‘Mrs Mumpy’s advice to the lovelorn’
Kudos as above, Thad.
October 20th, 2024 14:50
Doggerel Dave said:
“Now just how sad can it be?
Lucky escape if you ask me…
Don’t crawl, definitely don’t plea -
Sit a fresh babe upon your knee……”
- Quote from page 53 of ‘Mrs Mumpy’s advice to the lovelorn’
Kudos as above, Thad.
October 20th, 2024 14:50
Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad, best regards
October 20th, 2024 12:54
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad, best regards
October 20th, 2024 12:54
~> I\'m Sailing Home, To You My Love -
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful. 🌹 I hope you never have to sail again! ❤️
October 20th, 2024 11:20
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful. 🌹 I hope you never have to sail again! ❤️
October 20th, 2024 11:20
Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme-
sorenbarrett said:
So many of us have felt this way it is easy to empathize. I too have used this rhyme scheme in the past. It does a good job of emphasizing the ever returning thoughts that obsessively fill ones head at such a loss. Very nicely done
October 20th, 2024 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
So many of us have felt this way it is easy to empathize. I too have used this rhyme scheme in the past. It does a good job of emphasizing the ever returning thoughts that obsessively fill ones head at such a loss. Very nicely done
October 20th, 2024 09:13
~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Bobby O said:
I think I would really like Uncle Louie and his brilliant black cat.
October 20th, 2024 02:34
Bobby O said:
I think I would really like Uncle Louie and his brilliant black cat.
October 20th, 2024 02:34
~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh Thad - your dedication all but overwhelmed me.... SOL (Snigger Out Loud)
Picture Uncle Louie training the cat:
Months of hard lessons to get him like that.
And black cats are lucky, so they do say;
Yes – ‘cos Puss got his fortune, by the way.
Keep \'em coming Mate - an always enjoyable interlude experienced here.
October 19th, 2024 19:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh Thad - your dedication all but overwhelmed me.... SOL (Snigger Out Loud)
Picture Uncle Louie training the cat:
Months of hard lessons to get him like that.
And black cats are lucky, so they do say;
Yes – ‘cos Puss got his fortune, by the way.
Keep \'em coming Mate - an always enjoyable interlude experienced here.
October 19th, 2024 19:00
~> Dedicated To My Uncle Louie!
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll bet he did. I\'ll have to think up one for my passing. A fun read
October 19th, 2024 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
I\'ll bet he did. I\'ll have to think up one for my passing. A fun read
October 19th, 2024 10:36
~> I Fucking Hate Loving You
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh no. not you too;
I can\'t understand a word.
I\'m up and away............
....Will probably return, Thad when you come to your senses and write something dirty,😅😂🤣.
October 18th, 2024 21:05
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh no. not you too;
I can\'t understand a word.
I\'m up and away............
....Will probably return, Thad when you come to your senses and write something dirty,😅😂🤣.
October 18th, 2024 21:05
~> I Fucking Hate Loving You
Bobby O said:
That’s a strong piece. I have shared it with friends not in this group and and there is simpatico unanimity !
October 18th, 2024 14:09
Bobby O said:
That’s a strong piece. I have shared it with friends not in this group and and there is simpatico unanimity !
October 18th, 2024 14:09
~> I Fucking Hate Loving You
sorenbarrett said:
\"Where my girl are you sleeping tonight\" remnicent of an old Leadbelly song covered by Kurt Cobain and Nirvana in one of his last perfomances having found that his wife had been sleeping around. A poem of pain, darkness and hopelessness from betrayal and loss. Powerful words and vivid images reach into the soul
October 18th, 2024 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
\"Where my girl are you sleeping tonight\" remnicent of an old Leadbelly song covered by Kurt Cobain and Nirvana in one of his last perfomances having found that his wife had been sleeping around. A poem of pain, darkness and hopelessness from betrayal and loss. Powerful words and vivid images reach into the soul
October 18th, 2024 10:59
~> Best Stay Inside This Halloween! - form Trijan Refrain -
Goldfinch60 said:
Be careful Thad HE\'S BEHIND YOU!
Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Be careful Thad HE\'S BEHIND YOU!
Andy
October 18th, 2024 01:20
~> Best Stay Inside This Halloween! - form Trijan Refrain -
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
‘Snot the smell of fear;
Dental visit (don’t shirk)
Is required here.
Forget the bridgework;
Breath like out his rear….
Doesn’t require any additional commentary, does it? A polished gem…
October 17th, 2024 17:40
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad,
‘Snot the smell of fear;
Dental visit (don’t shirk)
Is required here.
Forget the bridgework;
Breath like out his rear….
Doesn’t require any additional commentary, does it? A polished gem…
October 17th, 2024 17:40
~> Best Stay Inside This Halloween! - form Trijan Refrain -
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad, best regards
October 17th, 2024 13:31
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad, best regards
October 17th, 2024 13:31
~> Never Trust A Stoned Squirrel! ( Limericks )
Neville said:
I only eat meat if or when it is offered me .. I would not turn my nose up at squirrel unless it was served up a tree .. can\'t beat a good limerick can ya .. and this was a bloomin good un, or uns depending on how you look at it .. Neville
October 17th, 2024 11:41
Neville said:
I only eat meat if or when it is offered me .. I would not turn my nose up at squirrel unless it was served up a tree .. can\'t beat a good limerick can ya .. and this was a bloomin good un, or uns depending on how you look at it .. Neville
October 17th, 2024 11:41
~> Best Stay Inside This Halloween! - form Trijan Refrain -
peet said:
The darkness and the fear, both captured so well in these lines.
October 17th, 2024 11:40
peet said:
The darkness and the fear, both captured so well in these lines.
October 17th, 2024 11:40
~> Best Stay Inside This Halloween! - form Trijan Refrain -
sorenbarrett said:
A great Halloween write reminds me of the stories we used to tell when we were kids.
October 17th, 2024 11:38
sorenbarrett said:
A great Halloween write reminds me of the stories we used to tell when we were kids.
October 17th, 2024 11:38
\" IT \"
Neville said:
Edgar Allen Poe would be proud of ya and Thad\'s a fact sir .. either that or on death row sir .. Very timely indeed wot with All Hallows only just around the corner .. Neville
October 17th, 2024 03:04
Neville said:
Edgar Allen Poe would be proud of ya and Thad\'s a fact sir .. either that or on death row sir .. Very timely indeed wot with All Hallows only just around the corner .. Neville
October 17th, 2024 03:04
~> A Shotgun Weddin\' - Redneck -
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad.
Love sonnets I’m afraid aren’t my thing,
They’re wet wimpy and watery, lacking zing.
So don’t come telling me about their fling
And I definitely don’t want to hear of the broken bedspring.
Apart from that, champion effort there, Sir.
October 16th, 2024 14:38
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad.
Love sonnets I’m afraid aren’t my thing,
They’re wet wimpy and watery, lacking zing.
So don’t come telling me about their fling
And I definitely don’t want to hear of the broken bedspring.
Apart from that, champion effort there, Sir.
October 16th, 2024 14:38
~> A Shotgun Weddin\' - Redneck -
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of my ancestors came through Virginia to North Carolina to Tennessee then moved to Utah. Hillbillies from the south, fought for the loosing sind in the Civil War but are all educated today
October 16th, 2024 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of my ancestors came through Virginia to North Carolina to Tennessee then moved to Utah. Hillbillies from the south, fought for the loosing sind in the Civil War but are all educated today
October 16th, 2024 10:39
~> Never Trust A Stoned Squirrel! ( Limericks )
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good limericks Thad.
Andy
October 16th, 2024 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good limericks Thad.
Andy
October 16th, 2024 01:19
~> Never Trust A Stoned Squirrel! ( Limericks )
Mutley Ravishes said:
My friend saw a cat eating a squirrel`s guts under a tree once upon a time. Well, another face of Mother Nature`s!
October 15th, 2024 18:41
Mutley Ravishes said:
My friend saw a cat eating a squirrel`s guts under a tree once upon a time. Well, another face of Mother Nature`s!
October 15th, 2024 18:41
~> Never Trust A Stoned Squirrel! ( Limericks )
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day, Thad
As a vegetarian I can’t find that much to say,
But if the dope was quality I might see it your way.
Still, perhaps he died happy….
October 15th, 2024 15:41
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day, Thad
As a vegetarian I can’t find that much to say,
But if the dope was quality I might see it your way.
Still, perhaps he died happy….
October 15th, 2024 15:41
~> Never Trust A Stoned Squirrel! ( Limericks )
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad, best regards
October 15th, 2024 14:43
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Thad, best regards
October 15th, 2024 14:43
~> Never Trust A Stoned Squirrel! ( Limericks )
Abdullah123 said:
I genuinely laughed at the endig. Amazing
October 15th, 2024 09:01
Abdullah123 said:
I genuinely laughed at the endig. Amazing
October 15th, 2024 09:01
~> Never Trust A Stoned Squirrel! ( Limericks )
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved limericks and this is a good one. I think I would have had him for lunch but served him to someone else. Don\'t like the idea of eating furry tailed rats
October 15th, 2024 09:00
sorenbarrett said:
Always loved limericks and this is a good one. I think I would have had him for lunch but served him to someone else. Don\'t like the idea of eating furry tailed rats
October 15th, 2024 09:00
\" IT \"
sorenbarrett said:
Fast food? They say revenge is a dish best served cold. A fun read.
October 14th, 2024 17:34
sorenbarrett said:
Fast food? They say revenge is a dish best served cold. A fun read.
October 14th, 2024 17:34
\" IT \"
Doggerel Dave said:
Such cunning deception
Enforces the perception
That family life
Is better sans wife…….
I can’t believe that?
Better off with cat….?
Oh come on Thad - with your three wives, he should be on overtime rates.........🤪
October 14th, 2024 16:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Such cunning deception
Enforces the perception
That family life
Is better sans wife…….
I can’t believe that?
Better off with cat….?
Oh come on Thad - with your three wives, he should be on overtime rates.........🤪
October 14th, 2024 16:18
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