Comments received on poems by Thad Wilk
~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought you would not miss a rhyme today, Thad. Salute to Dad worth all your skills.
October 28th, 2024 17:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Thought you would not miss a rhyme today, Thad. Salute to Dad worth all your skills.
October 28th, 2024 17:45
~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
Neville said:
I have never encountered one of these double acrostics before .. but what I have seen, I like .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 11:34
Neville said:
I have never encountered one of these double acrostics before .. but what I have seen, I like .. Neville
October 28th, 2024 11:34
~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a father on a special day. Most lovely and lovingly said in verse. Very nice
October 28th, 2024 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a father on a special day. Most lovely and lovingly said in verse. Very nice
October 28th, 2024 09:53
~* Father *~ [ double Acrostic ]
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write and a touching tribute to you father! Well done!
October 28th, 2024 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent write and a touching tribute to you father! Well done!
October 28th, 2024 09:52
~> A Really Sad Story! ( Cry )
Goldfinch60 said:
Those seagulls have a great deal for which to answer Thad. LOL
Andy
October 28th, 2024 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Those seagulls have a great deal for which to answer Thad. LOL
Andy
October 28th, 2024 02:46
~> A Really Sad Story! ( Cry )
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad
I sat on the beach communing with nature;
Keen so I was to work out my future.
Impeded by a minor apocalypse:
Two bloody seagulls came and nicked my chips..
I hope my little contribution brings added depth to an already rich narrative.
October 27th, 2024 16:49
Doggerel Dave said:
G’day Thad
I sat on the beach communing with nature;
Keen so I was to work out my future.
Impeded by a minor apocalypse:
Two bloody seagulls came and nicked my chips..
I hope my little contribution brings added depth to an already rich narrative.
October 27th, 2024 16:49
~> A Really Sad Story! ( Cry )
sorenbarrett said:
Thieves they are. Had them try to pilfer from me too. When was younger took my kids to the beach and we would hand them bread as they glided in the air at head level. A most fun read
October 27th, 2024 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
Thieves they are. Had them try to pilfer from me too. When was younger took my kids to the beach and we would hand them bread as they glided in the air at head level. A most fun read
October 27th, 2024 15:07
~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to be a heavy smoker and gave up exactly forty two years ten days ago on 16th October 1982. Not that I am counting of course.
Andy
October 27th, 2024 02:51
Goldfinch60 said:
I used to be a heavy smoker and gave up exactly forty two years ten days ago on 16th October 1982. Not that I am counting of course.
Andy
October 27th, 2024 02:51
~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
orchidee said:
When did ya meet me?! (lol).
October 27th, 2024 02:24
orchidee said:
When did ya meet me?! (lol).
October 27th, 2024 02:24
~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
Neville said:
I lost track of the number of years since I quit .. but it\'s still the tobacco that counts, or so they used to say .. very much enjoyed sir .. your poem I mean .. Neville
October 27th, 2024 01:42
Neville said:
I lost track of the number of years since I quit .. but it\'s still the tobacco that counts, or so they used to say .. very much enjoyed sir .. your poem I mean .. Neville
October 27th, 2024 01:42
~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Captivating, intriguing writing , speak so much and shows your heart felt words
October 26th, 2024 19:18
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Captivating, intriguing writing , speak so much and shows your heart felt words
October 26th, 2024 19:18
~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad - usual spot:
Nico was my gal once; kissed her regularly;
So now smoke gets in my eyes, and I cry.
Some love affairs ain’t wot they’re cracked up to be;
Why was it so early we wanted to die?
Don\'t miss her at all now.... but it has been thirty five years......
October 26th, 2024 15:42
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad - usual spot:
Nico was my gal once; kissed her regularly;
So now smoke gets in my eyes, and I cry.
Some love affairs ain’t wot they’re cracked up to be;
Why was it so early we wanted to die?
Don\'t miss her at all now.... but it has been thirty five years......
October 26th, 2024 15:42
~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I too was once a smoker giving up was the best thing but yes, I did miss that sleek camel very much for a long while. 🤣 Kudos.
October 26th, 2024 15:08
Teddy.15 said:
LOL I too was once a smoker giving up was the best thing but yes, I did miss that sleek camel very much for a long while. 🤣 Kudos.
October 26th, 2024 15:08
~> It\'s Been A Drag Without You!
sorenbarrett said:
Many of us have love affairs with things that hurt us. We often take abuse for years before we give up. A great write
October 26th, 2024 11:58
sorenbarrett said:
Many of us have love affairs with things that hurt us. We often take abuse for years before we give up. A great write
October 26th, 2024 11:58
~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Parisab said:
Wow-truly scary -but I’m afraid he’s real and out of his costume-thanks for the great structure in your poem…
October 26th, 2024 10:36
Parisab said:
Wow-truly scary -but I’m afraid he’s real and out of his costume-thanks for the great structure in your poem…
October 26th, 2024 10:36
~> Oh, I need you so much!
Neville said:
and they are very good for your prostate too .. thought you girls out there would be pleased to hear that as well ... 🍅😎👍
October 26th, 2024 03:31
Neville said:
and they are very good for your prostate too .. thought you girls out there would be pleased to hear that as well ... 🍅😎👍
October 26th, 2024 03:31
~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Neville said:
There is something inherently sinister about clowns that goes back to well before the time of court jesters .. I could write a thesis on it .. in fact I did once .. However, I digress .. Now, where woz I .. Oh\' yes, this is a great Halloween poem Thad that has some great credentials, not least the prettiness of it as it lays on the page but also is built atop of a firm foundation and from which, it rises so rhythmically .. Neville
October 26th, 2024 02:47
Neville said:
There is something inherently sinister about clowns that goes back to well before the time of court jesters .. I could write a thesis on it .. in fact I did once .. However, I digress .. Now, where woz I .. Oh\' yes, this is a great Halloween poem Thad that has some great credentials, not least the prettiness of it as it lays on the page but also is built atop of a firm foundation and from which, it rises so rhythmically .. Neville
October 26th, 2024 02:47
~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good parody Thad.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good parody Thad.
Andy
October 26th, 2024 01:11
~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
Mary, Mary, quite contrary
Why do clowns scare you so?
With choppers like that, I’d be scared too
Of them sharp pointy things in a row.
Would never have thought of Mary getting roped in for Halloween, plus never understood why people were afraid of clowns until....Oh so well writ. Thanks.
October 25th, 2024 14:49
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
Mary, Mary, quite contrary
Why do clowns scare you so?
With choppers like that, I’d be scared too
Of them sharp pointy things in a row.
Would never have thought of Mary getting roped in for Halloween, plus never understood why people were afraid of clowns until....Oh so well writ. Thanks.
October 25th, 2024 14:49
~> Mary, Mary, Quite Contrary -form Parody-
sorenbarrett said:
Bravo! A great Halloween poem it reminds me a little of the movie Secret Window. Well rhymed and metered loved it
October 25th, 2024 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
Bravo! A great Halloween poem it reminds me a little of the movie Secret Window. Well rhymed and metered loved it
October 25th, 2024 10:21
~> When An Old Man Dies
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Thad, so much id lost when an old man dies.
Andy
October 25th, 2024 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Such true words Thad, so much id lost when an old man dies.
Andy
October 25th, 2024 01:15
~> When An Old Man Dies
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
Old men leave records everywhere:
Memoirs and (oh no!) poetry.
Nothing rhymes with poetry but ‘tree’
So leave it alone and let it be -
Trees last longer with less hot air…
Phew - nearly fell over there; ran out of rhyme. You are making it harder.. any time you want me to give up, just say so...
October 24th, 2024 17:02
Doggerel Dave said:
G\'day Thad,
Old men leave records everywhere:
Memoirs and (oh no!) poetry.
Nothing rhymes with poetry but ‘tree’
So leave it alone and let it be -
Trees last longer with less hot air…
Phew - nearly fell over there; ran out of rhyme. You are making it harder.. any time you want me to give up, just say so...
October 24th, 2024 17:02
~> When An Old Man Dies
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed so with each a burning of the library of Alexandria. A point well taken and a great metaphor my friend
October 24th, 2024 12:16
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed so with each a burning of the library of Alexandria. A point well taken and a great metaphor my friend
October 24th, 2024 12:16
~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days!
Teddy.15 said:
Definitely spooky. 🌹 Wonderfully nerrated
October 24th, 2024 02:52
Teddy.15 said:
Definitely spooky. 🌹 Wonderfully nerrated
October 24th, 2024 02:52
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