Comments received on poems by Gewar
Holding your hand while chasing clouds
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful crafted write of the feeling of shame and guilt, sensitively expressed
July 2nd, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful crafted write of the feeling of shame and guilt, sensitively expressed
July 2nd, 2025 04:44
Holding your hand while chasing clouds
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of shame, guilt and forgiveness. So nicely imaged and constructed
July 2nd, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of shame, guilt and forgiveness. So nicely imaged and constructed
July 2nd, 2025 04:41
Mud Bricks
Bragee said:
Great writing!
This one can hit home in numerous ways depending on how you take it!
July 1st, 2025 14:10
Bragee said:
Great writing!
This one can hit home in numerous ways depending on how you take it!
July 1st, 2025 14:10
Mud Bricks
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that has a different meaning than first thought, possibly the comfort of a partner, anything made out of mud is never going to last forever, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 14:08
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that has a different meaning than first thought, possibly the comfort of a partner, anything made out of mud is never going to last forever, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 14:08
Mud Bricks
sorenbarrett said:
This is clearly a metaphor and begs the question of what that drop was. Well written
July 1st, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
This is clearly a metaphor and begs the question of what that drop was. Well written
July 1st, 2025 13:23
Mud Bricks
Caring dove said:
We all need protection and safety .. that something or someone to make us feel better /more comfortable
I like your writing
It’s not nice when the things that make us feel better more comfortable / looked after disappear or are taken away
July 1st, 2025 12:54
Caring dove said:
We all need protection and safety .. that something or someone to make us feel better /more comfortable
I like your writing
It’s not nice when the things that make us feel better more comfortable / looked after disappear or are taken away
July 1st, 2025 12:54
I\'ve built my peace
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of excepting that through a hard life they are on their own, nicely expressed
June 26th, 2025 21:28
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of excepting that through a hard life they are on their own, nicely expressed
June 26th, 2025 21:28
I\'ve built my peace
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being on one\'s own. A tough road and life in general. A lovely write
June 26th, 2025 14:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being on one\'s own. A tough road and life in general. A lovely write
June 26th, 2025 14:27
Have you ever dreamed?
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, around dreaming of love, very relatable, nicely written
May 24th, 2025 06:17
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, around dreaming of love, very relatable, nicely written
May 24th, 2025 06:17
Have you ever dreamed?
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes those naps are short and sometimes they are long sleeps but we always wake up unless we die. A most thought provoking write. Well done
May 24th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes those naps are short and sometimes they are long sleeps but we always wake up unless we die. A most thought provoking write. Well done
May 24th, 2025 04:31
Sometimes
RSM0812 said:
Monotony at its finest in words. Nice write. The day is what we make of it.
May 8th, 2025 06:22
RSM0812 said:
Monotony at its finest in words. Nice write. The day is what we make of it.
May 8th, 2025 06:22
Sometimes
Poetic Licence said:
The troubles all disappear in the night and awaken to a beautiful bright new day, it is a lovely positive way of thinking, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 10:03
Poetic Licence said:
The troubles all disappear in the night and awaken to a beautiful bright new day, it is a lovely positive way of thinking, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 10:03
Sometimes
sorenbarrett said:
How the passage of time and the brightness of a new day changes one\'s disposition. A wonderful write of such a thing
April 14th, 2025 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
How the passage of time and the brightness of a new day changes one\'s disposition. A wonderful write of such a thing
April 14th, 2025 08:51
Such a perfect time
sorenbarrett said:
Tender thoughts expressed about the emergence of feelings all cast in great images consistent with the theme. Very well done
April 1st, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Tender thoughts expressed about the emergence of feelings all cast in great images consistent with the theme. Very well done
April 1st, 2025 04:51
Such a perfect time
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the feeling of love, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 03:19
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write of the feeling of love, enjoyed the read
April 1st, 2025 03:19
Hunger
Poetic Licence said:
But Hunger for what, interesting and enjoyable read
February 5th, 2025 10:49
Poetic Licence said:
But Hunger for what, interesting and enjoyable read
February 5th, 2025 10:49
Hunger
sorenbarrett said:
What pleasure would there be in flavor or food without hunger. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
What pleasure would there be in flavor or food without hunger. Lovely
February 5th, 2025 10:41
The wax
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful feeling of the battle of life against adversity, enjoyed the read.
February 4th, 2025 06:31
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful feeling of the battle of life against adversity, enjoyed the read.
February 4th, 2025 06:31
The wax
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds the power of unfulfilled wishes in the winds of adversity. Powerful!
February 4th, 2025 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds the power of unfulfilled wishes in the winds of adversity. Powerful!
February 4th, 2025 05:01
Brought up with fairies
sorenbarrett said:
Here the difference between fantasy and reality is starkly presented in poetic form. Nicely done
January 31st, 2025 19:45
sorenbarrett said:
Here the difference between fantasy and reality is starkly presented in poetic form. Nicely done
January 31st, 2025 19:45
The Silence After
peet said:
Wow. Lovely. Few words capture such a deep emotion.
October 9th, 2024 09:44
peet said:
Wow. Lovely. Few words capture such a deep emotion.
October 9th, 2024 09:44
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