Comments received on poems by Gewar



Different Kind of Wild
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

July 10th, 2025 12:18

Different Kind of Wild
Poetic Licence said:

Wonderful write, being free and at one with the beauty of nature, enjoyed the read

July 10th, 2025 10:56

Different Kind of Wild
sorenbarrett said:

Such beautiful images of freedom and the being of nature. Most lovely

July 10th, 2025 10:03

Confession
sorenbarrett said:

A cry out of the inner self in poem a most wonderful write

July 5th, 2025 13:52

Confession
Poetic Licence said:

A sense of acceptance of who they are now, nicely expressed and written

July 5th, 2025 13:31

Mantra
Poetic Licence said:

A positive write with sound advice, enjoyed the read

July 4th, 2025 05:19

Mantra
sorenbarrett said:

Well written this poem conveys its message in a direct and clear way with good rhyme and flow a fave

July 4th, 2025 04:43

Holding your hand while chasing clouds
Poetic Licence said:

A wonderful crafted write of the feeling of shame and guilt, sensitively expressed

July 2nd, 2025 04:44

Holding your hand while chasing clouds
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of shame, guilt and forgiveness. So nicely imaged and constructed

July 2nd, 2025 04:41

Mud Bricks
Bragee said:

Great writing!
This one can hit home in numerous ways depending on how you take it!

July 1st, 2025 14:10

Mud Bricks
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write that has a different meaning than first thought, possibly the comfort of a partner, anything made out of mud is never going to last forever, enjoyed the read

July 1st, 2025 14:08

Mud Bricks
sorenbarrett said:

This is clearly a metaphor and begs the question of what that drop was. Well written

July 1st, 2025 13:23

Mud Bricks
Caring dove said:

We all need protection and safety .. that something or someone to make us feel better /more comfortable

I like your writing

It’s not nice when the things that make us feel better more comfortable / looked after disappear or are taken away

July 1st, 2025 12:54

I\'ve built my peace
Poetic Licence said:

A touching write of excepting that through a hard life they are on their own, nicely expressed

June 26th, 2025 21:28

I\'ve built my peace
sorenbarrett said:

A poem of being on one\'s own. A tough road and life in general. A lovely write

June 26th, 2025 14:27

Have you ever dreamed?
Poetic Licence said:

An interesting write, around dreaming of love, very relatable, nicely written

May 24th, 2025 06:17

Have you ever dreamed?
sorenbarrett said:

Sometimes those naps are short and sometimes they are long sleeps but we always wake up unless we die. A most thought provoking write. Well done

May 24th, 2025 04:31

Sometimes
RSM0812 said:

Monotony at its finest in words. Nice write. The day is what we make of it.

May 8th, 2025 06:22

Sometimes
Poetic Licence said:

The troubles all disappear in the night and awaken to a beautiful bright new day, it is a lovely positive way of thinking, enjoyed the read

April 14th, 2025 10:03

Sometimes
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

April 14th, 2025 09:26

Sometimes
sorenbarrett said:

How the passage of time and the brightness of a new day changes one\'s disposition. A wonderful write of such a thing

April 14th, 2025 08:51

Such a perfect time
sorenbarrett said:

Tender thoughts expressed about the emergence of feelings all cast in great images consistent with the theme. Very well done

April 1st, 2025 04:51

Such a perfect time
Poetic Licence said:

A lovely write of the feeling of love, enjoyed the read

April 1st, 2025 03:19

Hunger
Poetic Licence said:

But Hunger for what, interesting and enjoyable read

February 5th, 2025 10:49

Hunger
sorenbarrett said:

What pleasure would there be in flavor or food without hunger. Lovely

February 5th, 2025 10:41

Hunger
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

February 5th, 2025 10:21

The wax
Tony36 said:

Powerful

February 4th, 2025 10:51

The wax
Poetic Licence said:

Powerful feeling of the battle of life against adversity, enjoyed the read.

February 4th, 2025 06:31

The wax
sorenbarrett said:

This poem holds the power of unfulfilled wishes in the winds of adversity. Powerful!

February 4th, 2025 05:01

The wax
arqios said:

Comes at you like a pile driver! Very solid. πŸ‘πŸ•ŠοΈ

February 4th, 2025 04:10

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