Comments received on poems by Gewar
The Depression
James Michael said:
Very well written! The last stanza ties it all together. Hope is a cure for pain.
July 26th, 2025 20:03
James Michael said:
Very well written! The last stanza ties it all together. Hope is a cure for pain.
July 26th, 2025 20:03
The Depression
sorenbarrett said:
Depression is a most difficult thing to overcome. I hear it in this poem and yet at the end there is a light of hope. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
Depression is a most difficult thing to overcome. I hear it in this poem and yet at the end there is a light of hope. Nicely done
July 26th, 2025 12:34
The Depression
Poetic Licence said:
Day by day is all you can do, softly softly, nicely expressed
July 26th, 2025 11:33
Poetic Licence said:
Day by day is all you can do, softly softly, nicely expressed
July 26th, 2025 11:33
Mud Bricks
RSM0812 said:
This is nice rhyming and rythm. It delivers a strong message about nature also. A fav.
July 21st, 2025 09:14
RSM0812 said:
This is nice rhyming and rythm. It delivers a strong message about nature also. A fav.
July 21st, 2025 09:14
Clocks
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of love and time being so intertwined, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 01:09
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely expressed write of love and time being so intertwined, enjoyed the read
July 12th, 2025 01:09
Clocks
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice the issue of time and love intertwined and indistinguishable. Very well done
July 11th, 2025 13:30
sorenbarrett said:
Very nice the issue of time and love intertwined and indistinguishable. Very well done
July 11th, 2025 13:30
Different Kind of Wild
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write, being free and at one with the beauty of nature, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 10:56
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful write, being free and at one with the beauty of nature, enjoyed the read
July 10th, 2025 10:56
Different Kind of Wild
sorenbarrett said:
Such beautiful images of freedom and the being of nature. Most lovely
July 10th, 2025 10:03
sorenbarrett said:
Such beautiful images of freedom and the being of nature. Most lovely
July 10th, 2025 10:03
Confession
sorenbarrett said:
A cry out of the inner self in poem a most wonderful write
July 5th, 2025 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
A cry out of the inner self in poem a most wonderful write
July 5th, 2025 13:52
Confession
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of acceptance of who they are now, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 13:31
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of acceptance of who they are now, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 13:31
Mantra
Poetic Licence said:
A positive write with sound advice, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 05:19
Poetic Licence said:
A positive write with sound advice, enjoyed the read
July 4th, 2025 05:19
Mantra
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem conveys its message in a direct and clear way with good rhyme and flow a fave
July 4th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem conveys its message in a direct and clear way with good rhyme and flow a fave
July 4th, 2025 04:43
Holding your hand while chasing clouds
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful crafted write of the feeling of shame and guilt, sensitively expressed
July 2nd, 2025 04:44
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful crafted write of the feeling of shame and guilt, sensitively expressed
July 2nd, 2025 04:44
Holding your hand while chasing clouds
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of shame, guilt and forgiveness. So nicely imaged and constructed
July 2nd, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of shame, guilt and forgiveness. So nicely imaged and constructed
July 2nd, 2025 04:41
Mud Bricks
Bragee said:
Great writing!
This one can hit home in numerous ways depending on how you take it!
July 1st, 2025 14:10
Bragee said:
Great writing!
This one can hit home in numerous ways depending on how you take it!
July 1st, 2025 14:10
Mud Bricks
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that has a different meaning than first thought, possibly the comfort of a partner, anything made out of mud is never going to last forever, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 14:08
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write that has a different meaning than first thought, possibly the comfort of a partner, anything made out of mud is never going to last forever, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 14:08
Mud Bricks
sorenbarrett said:
This is clearly a metaphor and begs the question of what that drop was. Well written
July 1st, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
This is clearly a metaphor and begs the question of what that drop was. Well written
July 1st, 2025 13:23
Mud Bricks
Caring dove said:
We all need protection and safety .. that something or someone to make us feel better /more comfortable
I like your writing
It’s not nice when the things that make us feel better more comfortable / looked after disappear or are taken away
July 1st, 2025 12:54
Caring dove said:
We all need protection and safety .. that something or someone to make us feel better /more comfortable
I like your writing
It’s not nice when the things that make us feel better more comfortable / looked after disappear or are taken away
July 1st, 2025 12:54
I\'ve built my peace
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of excepting that through a hard life they are on their own, nicely expressed
June 26th, 2025 21:28
Poetic Licence said:
A touching write of excepting that through a hard life they are on their own, nicely expressed
June 26th, 2025 21:28
I\'ve built my peace
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being on one\'s own. A tough road and life in general. A lovely write
June 26th, 2025 14:27
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of being on one\'s own. A tough road and life in general. A lovely write
June 26th, 2025 14:27
Have you ever dreamed?
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, around dreaming of love, very relatable, nicely written
May 24th, 2025 06:17
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write, around dreaming of love, very relatable, nicely written
May 24th, 2025 06:17
Have you ever dreamed?
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes those naps are short and sometimes they are long sleeps but we always wake up unless we die. A most thought provoking write. Well done
May 24th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes those naps are short and sometimes they are long sleeps but we always wake up unless we die. A most thought provoking write. Well done
May 24th, 2025 04:31
Sometimes
RSM0812 said:
Monotony at its finest in words. Nice write. The day is what we make of it.
May 8th, 2025 06:22
RSM0812 said:
Monotony at its finest in words. Nice write. The day is what we make of it.
May 8th, 2025 06:22
Sometimes
Poetic Licence said:
The troubles all disappear in the night and awaken to a beautiful bright new day, it is a lovely positive way of thinking, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 10:03
Poetic Licence said:
The troubles all disappear in the night and awaken to a beautiful bright new day, it is a lovely positive way of thinking, enjoyed the read
April 14th, 2025 10:03
Sometimes
sorenbarrett said:
How the passage of time and the brightness of a new day changes one\'s disposition. A wonderful write of such a thing
April 14th, 2025 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
How the passage of time and the brightness of a new day changes one\'s disposition. A wonderful write of such a thing
April 14th, 2025 08:51
Such a perfect time
sorenbarrett said:
Tender thoughts expressed about the emergence of feelings all cast in great images consistent with the theme. Very well done
April 1st, 2025 04:51
sorenbarrett said:
Tender thoughts expressed about the emergence of feelings all cast in great images consistent with the theme. Very well done
April 1st, 2025 04:51
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