Comments received on poems by Gewar
The Silence After
peet said:
Wow. Lovely. Few words capture such a deep emotion.
October 9th, 2024 09:44
peet said:
Wow. Lovely. Few words capture such a deep emotion.
October 9th, 2024 09:44
Weaver\'s Hand
dandelion.drafts said:
I have a question about the tone in this poem. Does the line \"you gave not a single smirk\" imply a sort of emotional distance between the characters? Because my first read through, I thought \"oh this is cute and flirtatious\" but on my second read through, I\'m not so sure. Also, I really love the imagery here :-)
July 7th, 2024 19:31
dandelion.drafts said:
I have a question about the tone in this poem. Does the line \"you gave not a single smirk\" imply a sort of emotional distance between the characters? Because my first read through, I thought \"oh this is cute and flirtatious\" but on my second read through, I\'m not so sure. Also, I really love the imagery here :-)
July 7th, 2024 19:31
Arid Heart
mixxedchixs said:
I feel this poem in the depths of my soul
keep writing, fellow poet
June 11th, 2024 10:10
mixxedchixs said:
I feel this poem in the depths of my soul
keep writing, fellow poet
June 11th, 2024 10:10
You can cry now
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful write Gewar, wow. Can I use this in my bio?
June 10th, 2024 13:57
𓆩Mase𓆪 said:
Beautiful write Gewar, wow. Can I use this in my bio?
June 10th, 2024 13:57
Under the Clouds of Steel
jarcher54 said:
Very observant! Yes, many things are unable to thrive because they regularly get chopped off... but we keep trying! Someday, that rail may become abandoned and that stubborn root will turn into a home for birds and squirrels!
May 22nd, 2024 13:12
jarcher54 said:
Very observant! Yes, many things are unable to thrive because they regularly get chopped off... but we keep trying! Someday, that rail may become abandoned and that stubborn root will turn into a home for birds and squirrels!
May 22nd, 2024 13:12
