Comments received on poems by Gewar
I will be late
Thomas W Case said:
Quiet and raw—this lingers like frost on bare skin.
I feel the solitude pressing against every line; beautiful emptiness.
January 13th, 2026 08:03
Thomas W Case said:
Quiet and raw—this lingers like frost on bare skin.
I feel the solitude pressing against every line; beautiful emptiness.
January 13th, 2026 08:03
I will be late
sorenbarrett said:
That time when space is needed to hold in mind the wonders of the one loved and where one is headed. Nicely done
January 12th, 2026 16:04
sorenbarrett said:
That time when space is needed to hold in mind the wonders of the one loved and where one is headed. Nicely done
January 12th, 2026 16:04
Never Rushes On
Katie B. said:
Interesting, fast paced, enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Hope you might be able to check mine out today.
December 18th, 2025 06:51
Katie B. said:
Interesting, fast paced, enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. Hope you might be able to check mine out today.
December 18th, 2025 06:51
Never Rushes On
sorenbarrett said:
Uncertainty in this poem builds through the poem. It is the angst of not knowing what is coming that creates the tension. Nicely done
December 18th, 2025 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
Uncertainty in this poem builds through the poem. It is the angst of not knowing what is coming that creates the tension. Nicely done
December 18th, 2025 06:05
The Witness
sorenbarrett said:
Relationship issues fill this poem. Nicely done
December 14th, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
Relationship issues fill this poem. Nicely done
December 14th, 2025 09:29
Radio report
sorenbarrett said:
Is this news of destruction from war in one\'s own town or is it metaphoric. Well written it sounds apocalyptic in nature. Well done
December 13th, 2025 14:41
sorenbarrett said:
Is this news of destruction from war in one\'s own town or is it metaphoric. Well written it sounds apocalyptic in nature. Well done
December 13th, 2025 14:41
Train
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in the train moving forward and leaving the past behind. A bit melancholic. Nicely done
December 2nd, 2025 13:02
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor in the train moving forward and leaving the past behind. A bit melancholic. Nicely done
December 2nd, 2025 13:02
Blissful
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful poem of peace following a storm. A lovely write
November 19th, 2025 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful poem of peace following a storm. A lovely write
November 19th, 2025 12:09
Blissful
Nayak said:
feels like the quiet, comforting warmth that only intimacy can give...
November 19th, 2025 11:54
Nayak said:
feels like the quiet, comforting warmth that only intimacy can give...
November 19th, 2025 11:54
Washed Ashore
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that tells us that despite as bad as it gets things can get better. A lovely write
November 17th, 2025 14:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that tells us that despite as bad as it gets things can get better. A lovely write
November 17th, 2025 14:07
Ghosts
sorenbarrett said:
We all carry our demons with us hidden or not. When we are injured it is hard to trust. A lovely poem
November 16th, 2025 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
We all carry our demons with us hidden or not. When we are injured it is hard to trust. A lovely poem
November 16th, 2025 13:45
The Ripple
sorenbarrett said:
Small signs that evoke past memories and emotions. The greater the past trauma or ecstasy the more sensitive the area. Nicely worded
November 15th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Small signs that evoke past memories and emotions. The greater the past trauma or ecstasy the more sensitive the area. Nicely worded
November 15th, 2025 03:54
ZZ
sorenbarrett said:
I like the statement that love doesn\'t disappear when it changes shape. A lovely poem
November 5th, 2025 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
I like the statement that love doesn\'t disappear when it changes shape. A lovely poem
November 5th, 2025 18:07
Backseat, Economic Class
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a picture of love passing. A lovely letting go. Very nicely worded it is melancholic
November 2nd, 2025 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
This poem a picture of love passing. A lovely letting go. Very nicely worded it is melancholic
November 2nd, 2025 09:29
Tear My Mask
NafisaSB said:
i too admire honesty and applaud those who do have the guts to say what is - as it is
October 29th, 2025 07:36
NafisaSB said:
i too admire honesty and applaud those who do have the guts to say what is - as it is
October 29th, 2025 07:36
Tear My Mask
peto said:
There is so much of this in the world today
Thank you for sharing it
October 25th, 2025 17:21
peto said:
There is so much of this in the world today
Thank you for sharing it
October 25th, 2025 17:21
Tear My Mask
coracaodacripta said:
Something struck me that someone struck you as brave - and that you fear retribution in the case you follow in their steps.
October 25th, 2025 17:06
coracaodacripta said:
Something struck me that someone struck you as brave - and that you fear retribution in the case you follow in their steps.
October 25th, 2025 17:06
Tear My Mask
sorenbarrett said:
Very identifiable and born out in research that many think the same way but are afraid to be the first to speak out. If one person has the guts to say something it can ignite the rest who will then speak out. The idea that it only take one. Nicely done
October 25th, 2025 15:39
sorenbarrett said:
Very identifiable and born out in research that many think the same way but are afraid to be the first to speak out. If one person has the guts to say something it can ignite the rest who will then speak out. The idea that it only take one. Nicely done
October 25th, 2025 15:39
To My Sister (Unspoken)
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Nice Poem. Nicely done. A fav!
October 18th, 2025 12:56
Ezekiel Olayemi said:
Nice Poem. Nicely done. A fav!
October 18th, 2025 12:56
To My Sister (Unspoken)
sorenbarrett said:
A very reflective poem of relationships. Nicely worded and sensitive to the need we have for each other
October 18th, 2025 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
A very reflective poem of relationships. Nicely worded and sensitive to the need we have for each other
October 18th, 2025 12:13
Under stormy clouds
RSM0812 said:
When a person has your back it makes the world a better place. No one should have to go through this life alone. Nice ✍️.
October 14th, 2025 05:28
RSM0812 said:
When a person has your back it makes the world a better place. No one should have to go through this life alone. Nice ✍️.
October 14th, 2025 05:28
The sun is low
RSM0812 said:
Through both warmth and cold lives love. It can not be dampered. Nice write. A fav.
October 14th, 2025 05:13
RSM0812 said:
Through both warmth and cold lives love. It can not be dampered. Nice write. A fav.
October 14th, 2025 05:13
The sun is low
sorenbarrett said:
Although with the insertion of arms it seems a person it could well be directed at the sun and season itself. A lovely write
October 13th, 2025 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Although with the insertion of arms it seems a person it could well be directed at the sun and season itself. A lovely write
October 13th, 2025 13:34
When the Darkness Comes
sorenbarrett said:
A emotional poem of dread and fear, of suspicion and lack of trust that comes and goes with the dark and bright of day. Nicely written and haunting.
October 12th, 2025 14:34
sorenbarrett said:
A emotional poem of dread and fear, of suspicion and lack of trust that comes and goes with the dark and bright of day. Nicely written and haunting.
October 12th, 2025 14:34
When the Darkness Comes
Caring dove said:
An interesting and good writing .. I see shadows sometimes .. of myself or other people but I imagine that’s something to do with my dissociation .. I think
October 12th, 2025 14:02
Caring dove said:
An interesting and good writing .. I see shadows sometimes .. of myself or other people but I imagine that’s something to do with my dissociation .. I think
October 12th, 2025 14:02
The Trust
Poetic Licence said:
A determination to face there fears and beat them, even if it means getting hurt again, well written
October 11th, 2025 17:27
Poetic Licence said:
A determination to face there fears and beat them, even if it means getting hurt again, well written
October 11th, 2025 17:27
The Trust
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of facing one\'s fear and vowing to beat it. Love it
October 11th, 2025 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem of facing one\'s fear and vowing to beat it. Love it
October 11th, 2025 15:32
Under stormy clouds
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message of unity beyond place or time built on commonality. Very nicely said in good poetic form
October 5th, 2025 10:30
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message of unity beyond place or time built on commonality. Very nicely said in good poetic form
October 5th, 2025 10:30
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