Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
whats write for me said:
A truly moving piece, thank you for sharing.
March 20th, 2025 18:46
whats write for me said:
A truly moving piece, thank you for sharing.
March 20th, 2025 18:46
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very heartfelt and, the answer to your question in your comment, no. They don\'t. Well put, and your note asks a great rhetorical question to drive the point home. Well done! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 13:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very heartfelt and, the answer to your question in your comment, no. They don\'t. Well put, and your note asks a great rhetorical question to drive the point home. Well done! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 13:25
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
Poetic Licence said:
Touching and heartfelt write for something that sadly is all to common, for them the battle is just transferred to their head when they return,well written and expressed
March 20th, 2025 13:22
Poetic Licence said:
Touching and heartfelt write for something that sadly is all to common, for them the battle is just transferred to their head when they return,well written and expressed
March 20th, 2025 13:22
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
sorenbarrett said:
Casualties of war are not only bodies but minds and they are not buried or given a funeral but have to be lived with. A powerful write
March 20th, 2025 12:03
sorenbarrett said:
Casualties of war are not only bodies but minds and they are not buried or given a funeral but have to be lived with. A powerful write
March 20th, 2025 12:03
The Outsider\'s Flame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Profound. Those last lines really drive it all home. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Profound. Those last lines really drive it all home. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:35
The Outsider\'s Flame
sorenbarrett said:
The fire of anger burns a firebreak preventing love to spread. Both are fire that fight each other leaving only ashes of what\'s dead. Such great metaphor that plays off of each other in this poem. Beneath the surface great truth and wisdom of emotions out of control that leave devastation for both the hater and the one loved. Burning down one\'s own house is not a good resolution. Very nice a fave
March 15th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
The fire of anger burns a firebreak preventing love to spread. Both are fire that fight each other leaving only ashes of what\'s dead. Such great metaphor that plays off of each other in this poem. Beneath the surface great truth and wisdom of emotions out of control that leave devastation for both the hater and the one loved. Burning down one\'s own house is not a good resolution. Very nice a fave
March 15th, 2025 07:20
The Outsider\'s Flame
Poetic Licence said:
A dangerous emotion anger if left to go unchecked, nicely expressed and written write
March 15th, 2025 06:49
Poetic Licence said:
A dangerous emotion anger if left to go unchecked, nicely expressed and written write
March 15th, 2025 06:49
The Rocking Chair
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful, my friend! Visceral imagery and there\'s a haunting poignancy to it. Well done! 🌹👏
March 10th, 2025 22:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful, my friend! Visceral imagery and there\'s a haunting poignancy to it. Well done! 🌹👏
March 10th, 2025 22:20
Liberation
Neville said:
It costs nothing does it, but it\'s priceless & not always the easiest thing to maintain .. thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:42
Neville said:
It costs nothing does it, but it\'s priceless & not always the easiest thing to maintain .. thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:42
The Rocking Chair
Neville said:
So very sad .. the sense of hopelessness and helplessness pervades the page on which these words sit purposefully .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:37
Neville said:
So very sad .. the sense of hopelessness and helplessness pervades the page on which these words sit purposefully .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:37
Liberation
Cassie58 said:
We develop our insecurities and demons over time. To be liberated from all and to experience life to the absolute maximum is a dream for most people. That freedom comes with confidence and strength and maybe prayer plays a significant part in it for those with a strong faith. We have one life, most wish to live it to the full. I hope you achieve your aims. I enjoyed your words.
March 9th, 2025 10:54
Cassie58 said:
We develop our insecurities and demons over time. To be liberated from all and to experience life to the absolute maximum is a dream for most people. That freedom comes with confidence and strength and maybe prayer plays a significant part in it for those with a strong faith. We have one life, most wish to live it to the full. I hope you achieve your aims. I enjoyed your words.
March 9th, 2025 10:54
The Rocking Chair
Cassie58 said:
Such sadness in this poem. It reminds me very much of my visits to the nursing home to see my aunt. Old ladies sitting in chairs, gazing out of the window , expressionless. No visits, no love in their lives, waiting to die. The end of the line. If it was me, I would pray for my heart to stop. Powerfully delivered, with such a sense of hopelessness. Well done RIS.
March 9th, 2025 07:30
Cassie58 said:
Such sadness in this poem. It reminds me very much of my visits to the nursing home to see my aunt. Old ladies sitting in chairs, gazing out of the window , expressionless. No visits, no love in their lives, waiting to die. The end of the line. If it was me, I would pray for my heart to stop. Powerfully delivered, with such a sense of hopelessness. Well done RIS.
March 9th, 2025 07:30
The Rocking Chair
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well written powerful and sad piece of writing, with a strong of having no hope
March 9th, 2025 05:53
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well written powerful and sad piece of writing, with a strong of having no hope
March 9th, 2025 05:53
The Rocking Chair
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of avoidance and the consequences and if life is all that is desired it works. This poem sets the mood and leaves a sense of hopelessness. Very well written
March 9th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of avoidance and the consequences and if life is all that is desired it works. This poem sets the mood and leaves a sense of hopelessness. Very well written
March 9th, 2025 03:42
Liberation
Poetic Licence said:
I want to be released from my demons and experience the world, you can feel the call in this write, nicely written
March 7th, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
I want to be released from my demons and experience the world, you can feel the call in this write, nicely written
March 7th, 2025 05:17
Liberation
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to be able to experience all. I too feel this urge to see what there is to see. Nicely written
March 7th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to be able to experience all. I too feel this urge to see what there is to see. Nicely written
March 7th, 2025 04:26
Resuscitate
Cassie58 said:
Sometimes we don’t know what we had until it’s gone. That is the feeling your beautiful poem gave me. I hope you can get back what you have lost. I enjoyed reading you RIS.
March 2nd, 2025 17:53
Cassie58 said:
Sometimes we don’t know what we had until it’s gone. That is the feeling your beautiful poem gave me. I hope you can get back what you have lost. I enjoyed reading you RIS.
March 2nd, 2025 17:53
Resuscitate
Poetic Licence said:
A desperation for a lost love to return, a very interesting and well expressed write
March 2nd, 2025 05:41
Poetic Licence said:
A desperation for a lost love to return, a very interesting and well expressed write
March 2nd, 2025 05:41
Resuscitate
sorenbarrett said:
This is a rather sad longing for a past life departed. A desire for its return from the dead. Resurrection is believed in by some. A thought provoking write.
March 2nd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This is a rather sad longing for a past life departed. A desire for its return from the dead. Resurrection is believed in by some. A thought provoking write.
March 2nd, 2025 04:43
Lament for Life
sorenbarrett said:
A poem I can identify with and how true it is. Sad and regretful. A well written poem lovely
March 1st, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem I can identify with and how true it is. Sad and regretful. A well written poem lovely
March 1st, 2025 11:29
Lament for Life
Poetic Licence said:
A lot of truth in this write, although sometimes painful tomorrow may never come, well written and expressed
March 1st, 2025 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
A lot of truth in this write, although sometimes painful tomorrow may never come, well written and expressed
March 1st, 2025 10:46
Lament for Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poem and your note convey much wisdom and truth. Sad it is, for be tomorrow there may not. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
March 1st, 2025 10:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poem and your note convey much wisdom and truth. Sad it is, for be tomorrow there may not. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
March 1st, 2025 10:15
Past Tells No Lies
sorenbarrett said:
Such great metaphor in this poem it fits so well the rhyme and images. Well done
February 22nd, 2025 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
Such great metaphor in this poem it fits so well the rhyme and images. Well done
February 22nd, 2025 13:16
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