Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
Complicit
sorenbarrett said:
A thoughtful poem the place is blame back where control ends with ourselves. Plainly spoken it leads one to think about what is important. Nicely written.
December 12th, 2024 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A thoughtful poem the place is blame back where control ends with ourselves. Plainly spoken it leads one to think about what is important. Nicely written.
December 12th, 2024 04:31
Freedom in Debt
sorenbarrett said:
Set in the proper season of giving and getting this poem speaks to spending money one doesn\'t have on things that one does not need. Greed, gluttony, envy, jealousy and coveting. A nation of inflation, damnation of our creation slaves to debt.
December 11th, 2024 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Set in the proper season of giving and getting this poem speaks to spending money one doesn\'t have on things that one does not need. Greed, gluttony, envy, jealousy and coveting. A nation of inflation, damnation of our creation slaves to debt.
December 11th, 2024 04:05
Freedom in Debt
Poetic Licence said:
Although written in a very satirical way it addresses a real issue in todays world, a very enjoyable read.
December 11th, 2024 03:27
Poetic Licence said:
Although written in a very satirical way it addresses a real issue in todays world, a very enjoyable read.
December 11th, 2024 03:27
Freedom in Debt
Neville said:
This .. or these depending on how one sees it, or them is .. or are, exceptionally brilliant .. If considered a single entity .. it is remarkable .. conversely, if viewed as seven successive but independent little gems they are awesome .. & that is the truth, no mucking about nor messing or satire .. just plain and simply brill ..and likewise awarded the near sacred👍👍.. Neville
December 11th, 2024 02:05
Neville said:
This .. or these depending on how one sees it, or them is .. or are, exceptionally brilliant .. If considered a single entity .. it is remarkable .. conversely, if viewed as seven successive but independent little gems they are awesome .. & that is the truth, no mucking about nor messing or satire .. just plain and simply brill ..and likewise awarded the near sacred👍👍.. Neville
December 11th, 2024 02:05
Trust and You Shall Find
Poetic Licence said:
I find it quite thought proving and really enjoyed the read.
December 10th, 2024 08:24
Poetic Licence said:
I find it quite thought proving and really enjoyed the read.
December 10th, 2024 08:24
Trust and You Shall Find
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts like echoes in a cave resound until the next one arrises and drowns it out. A lovely series in one poem
December 10th, 2024 04:47
sorenbarrett said:
Thoughts like echoes in a cave resound until the next one arrises and drowns it out. A lovely series in one poem
December 10th, 2024 04:47
Lamentation of the Devil
Neville said:
they say every cloud has a silver lining .. if that means we should always look on the bright side then heavens to Betsy I\'ll side with the red guy with the two little horns a tail and a trident any day of the week .. Well penned my literary friend .. Neville
December 7th, 2024 10:57
Neville said:
they say every cloud has a silver lining .. if that means we should always look on the bright side then heavens to Betsy I\'ll side with the red guy with the two little horns a tail and a trident any day of the week .. Well penned my literary friend .. Neville
December 7th, 2024 10:57
Lamentation of the Devil
sorenbarrett said:
There is always a bright side. A fun story, always felt sorry for the devil. He drew the short straw and had to take all the blame. He sounded like a fun guy too, the kind you would like to go to the bar with and hang out with. A most fun read.
December 6th, 2024 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
There is always a bright side. A fun story, always felt sorry for the devil. He drew the short straw and had to take all the blame. He sounded like a fun guy too, the kind you would like to go to the bar with and hang out with. A most fun read.
December 6th, 2024 13:43
Crescent Morning
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed reading this, got a sense of walking on both sides
December 5th, 2024 00:01
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoyed reading this, got a sense of walking on both sides
December 5th, 2024 00:01
Too Sweet for Your Sweet Tooth
Neville said:
it is clear to me that you have thought long and hard upon the subject in question .. and not only that but you are true to your own convictions and that is indeed to be applauded .. I stand firmly by your side on this one .. write on brother ..
December 1st, 2024 10:57
Neville said:
it is clear to me that you have thought long and hard upon the subject in question .. and not only that but you are true to your own convictions and that is indeed to be applauded .. I stand firmly by your side on this one .. write on brother ..
December 1st, 2024 10:57
Too Sweet for Your Sweet Tooth
sorenbarrett said:
In this marvelous poem of yours, the first stanza took me to a personal relationship, but as the poem evolves, it seems much more than personal and society in nature. It seemed to speak of the falseness that lies in relationships today. It talks of Control in relationships and how this poison kills. Hi, particularly loved the last stanza. And how it was equated to taste. Brilliant.!!
December 1st, 2024 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
In this marvelous poem of yours, the first stanza took me to a personal relationship, but as the poem evolves, it seems much more than personal and society in nature. It seemed to speak of the falseness that lies in relationships today. It talks of Control in relationships and how this poison kills. Hi, particularly loved the last stanza. And how it was equated to taste. Brilliant.!!
December 1st, 2024 09:09
Silent Scars
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor for this particular issue. This wonderful poem strikes right at the heart of domestic violence. Children are always the silent victims and bear the scars for the rest of their lives.
November 30th, 2024 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great metaphor for this particular issue. This wonderful poem strikes right at the heart of domestic violence. Children are always the silent victims and bear the scars for the rest of their lives.
November 30th, 2024 10:15
Silent Scars
Neville said:
rammed with relevant imagery .. and yes, you are absolutely write .. it is the children who suffer and who bare scars oft unseen ..
November 30th, 2024 08:37
Neville said:
rammed with relevant imagery .. and yes, you are absolutely write .. it is the children who suffer and who bare scars oft unseen ..
November 30th, 2024 08:37
Silent Scars
Cassie58 said:
Rich in imagery. You take your reader to the core of the subject matter. The children are the collateral damage. Love the elastic band wording and the tension that brings. Such a roller coaster of moods.
November 30th, 2024 08:07
Cassie58 said:
Rich in imagery. You take your reader to the core of the subject matter. The children are the collateral damage. Love the elastic band wording and the tension that brings. Such a roller coaster of moods.
November 30th, 2024 08:07
A Mother\'s Betrayal
Cassie58 said:
What sort of mother indeed. All too easy in the past for leaders to take their country into conflict. As a mother myself, I have imagined the pain in past years of sons leaving for war and not returning. Every mother!s horror story. Unbearable agony. A strong leader looks for diplomatic solutions. Well I can think of one politician of ours (Blair) who took my country into a war. He should be locked up. You raise many issues here. An interesting read which poses many questions.
November 29th, 2024 13:02
Cassie58 said:
What sort of mother indeed. All too easy in the past for leaders to take their country into conflict. As a mother myself, I have imagined the pain in past years of sons leaving for war and not returning. Every mother!s horror story. Unbearable agony. A strong leader looks for diplomatic solutions. Well I can think of one politician of ours (Blair) who took my country into a war. He should be locked up. You raise many issues here. An interesting read which poses many questions.
November 29th, 2024 13:02
A Mother\'s Betrayal
Doggerel Dave said:
No, thanks for taking my efforts in the same direction seriously. These questions really cannot be asked often enough, and it only by repetition and gaining numbers... (how many?) that .....I feel sad and hopeless actually.
November 29th, 2024 08:13
Doggerel Dave said:
No, thanks for taking my efforts in the same direction seriously. These questions really cannot be asked often enough, and it only by repetition and gaining numbers... (how many?) that .....I feel sad and hopeless actually.
November 29th, 2024 08:13
A Mother\'s Betrayal
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting analogies that makes sense and call out for peace not war why violence is the answer to violence is the most interesting question. Sun tzu Said that the best way to win is to win by not fighting. A wonderful poem that has numerous cutting edges and beautiful points made very nicely said.
November 29th, 2024 04:52
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting analogies that makes sense and call out for peace not war why violence is the answer to violence is the most interesting question. Sun tzu Said that the best way to win is to win by not fighting. A wonderful poem that has numerous cutting edges and beautiful points made very nicely said.
November 29th, 2024 04:52
A Mother\'s Betrayal
Neville said:
I have personally run out of questions on the subject of war .. to date, I have found they largely fall on deaf ears .. You have clearly thought long and hard before formulating yours .. and whilst we may not be afforded satisfactory answers, at least it seems like we are on the same side .. Neville
November 29th, 2024 01:58
Neville said:
I have personally run out of questions on the subject of war .. to date, I have found they largely fall on deaf ears .. You have clearly thought long and hard before formulating yours .. and whilst we may not be afforded satisfactory answers, at least it seems like we are on the same side .. Neville
November 29th, 2024 01:58
Farewell to Strangling
Neville said:
I know for a fact there are many in the same boat .... & most of them remain there through fear .. when asked what they are fearful of, most respond with an honest don\'t know .. which just goes to prove that we only fear what we don\'t understand .. and if as you say, you got out .. well done you sir .. yes indeed, bloomin well done .. Neville
November 27th, 2024 12:57
Neville said:
I know for a fact there are many in the same boat .... & most of them remain there through fear .. when asked what they are fearful of, most respond with an honest don\'t know .. which just goes to prove that we only fear what we don\'t understand .. and if as you say, you got out .. well done you sir .. yes indeed, bloomin well done .. Neville
November 27th, 2024 12:57
Farewell to Strangling
sorenbarrett said:
One must do what one fines fulfilling. To be simply a cog in the machine this is not the human dream. A poem of assertion.
November 27th, 2024 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
One must do what one fines fulfilling. To be simply a cog in the machine this is not the human dream. A poem of assertion.
November 27th, 2024 06:09
Farewell to Strangling
Doggerel Dave said:
The only solution was to career way the hell out of there.....
November 27th, 2024 05:58
Doggerel Dave said:
The only solution was to career way the hell out of there.....
November 27th, 2024 05:58
Crescent Morning
Neville said:
Very nicely poemed in my very humble opinion .. Neville
November 26th, 2024 04:29
Neville said:
Very nicely poemed in my very humble opinion .. Neville
November 26th, 2024 04:29
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