Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
LIFE IN REARVIEW MIRROR
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy yes the future is imagination and the past is seen in a rear view mirror. When taking driving lessons in school we had a substitude teacher for a couple of weeks that demanded that we be able to drive in reverse at 40 mph using the rear view mirror. Not so much when I was driving but when riding with the other student drivers
December 17th, 2024 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy yes the future is imagination and the past is seen in a rear view mirror. When taking driving lessons in school we had a substitude teacher for a couple of weeks that demanded that we be able to drive in reverse at 40 mph using the rear view mirror. Not so much when I was driving but when riding with the other student drivers
December 17th, 2024 03:51
LIFE IN REARVIEW MIRROR
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly written poem about the questions we always beat ourselves up with about our lives, we usually ask them when it is already to late, Enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 00:41
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly written poem about the questions we always beat ourselves up with about our lives, we usually ask them when it is already to late, Enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 00:41
Ticking Clock of Doom
Doggerel Dave said:
Wanted to creep me out? You succeeded. Not one I intend to fave.... I want to forget....👍
December 15th, 2024 23:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Wanted to creep me out? You succeeded. Not one I intend to fave.... I want to forget....👍
December 15th, 2024 23:03
Ticking Clock of Doom
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This had THRILLER written all over it...and I am not speaking of the King of Pop\'s hit album or song! LOL! This seriously had me from beginning to end...and what happens? Left to the imagination to figure out. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 19:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This had THRILLER written all over it...and I am not speaking of the King of Pop\'s hit album or song! LOL! This seriously had me from beginning to end...and what happens? Left to the imagination to figure out. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 19:07
Ticking Clock of Doom
sorenbarrett said:
Panic in the face of a threat a normal human response. Well described in vivid images in this poem grow and crescendo as they reach their climax.
December 15th, 2024 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
Panic in the face of a threat a normal human response. Well described in vivid images in this poem grow and crescendo as they reach their climax.
December 15th, 2024 11:40
Ticking Clock of Doom
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting read, i am not sure if sometimes it is both, well written
December 15th, 2024 11:34
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting read, i am not sure if sometimes it is both, well written
December 15th, 2024 11:34
Celestial Trading
Neville said:
It doesn\'t have to be this way .. but of course it is and I doubt it will ever go back to where it once ever was .. it has been increasingly around since forever .. damn good .. how much for the copywrite :)
December 15th, 2024 01:48
Neville said:
It doesn\'t have to be this way .. but of course it is and I doubt it will ever go back to where it once ever was .. it has been increasingly around since forever .. damn good .. how much for the copywrite :)
December 15th, 2024 01:48
Celestial Trading
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep the wormhole open wide. Let them all through with promises of unrestricted growth. Seal wormhole swiftly. Problem solved.
A piece of beautiful satire from you. Breakfast improved no end.
December 14th, 2024 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep the wormhole open wide. Let them all through with promises of unrestricted growth. Seal wormhole swiftly. Problem solved.
A piece of beautiful satire from you. Breakfast improved no end.
December 14th, 2024 16:47
Celestial Trading
Cassie58 said:
Marvelous metaphor here. The ugly and unforgiving side of capitalism on this planet. God forbid it travels further afield. What a thought. Enjoyed your stanzas.
December 14th, 2024 13:42
Cassie58 said:
Marvelous metaphor here. The ugly and unforgiving side of capitalism on this planet. God forbid it travels further afield. What a thought. Enjoyed your stanzas.
December 14th, 2024 13:42
Celestial Trading
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly those ants do own the world and control it`s future, and i fear the colony is only going to get bigger next year, Good Read
December 14th, 2024 12:14
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly those ants do own the world and control it`s future, and i fear the colony is only going to get bigger next year, Good Read
December 14th, 2024 12:14
Celestial Trading
sorenbarrett said:
So true capitalism based on greed has provided great comfort maybe too much. In our laziness we langour and dwindle
December 14th, 2024 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
So true capitalism based on greed has provided great comfort maybe too much. In our laziness we langour and dwindle
December 14th, 2024 11:12
Celestial Trading
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy, this is the truth. Love the ant metaphor and this poem is truly rich in imagery. Wonderful write my friend! 👏🌹
December 14th, 2024 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy, this is the truth. Love the ant metaphor and this poem is truly rich in imagery. Wonderful write my friend! 👏🌹
December 14th, 2024 11:04
Secrets
Neville said:
You are so write sir .. secrets eh\' who would have them if they had any choice once made .. tis best to avoid em like the plague .. but pray don\'t tell a soul 😎👍
December 14th, 2024 03:18
Neville said:
You are so write sir .. secrets eh\' who would have them if they had any choice once made .. tis best to avoid em like the plague .. but pray don\'t tell a soul 😎👍
December 14th, 2024 03:18
Secrets
Poetic Licence said:
Every cupboard has a skeleton, problem being keeping them could be detrimental to ourselves or on the other side of the coin to someone else, and equally if we share those secrets, it`s a hard decision sometimes. Really enjoyed cleverly written poem
December 14th, 2024 01:07
Poetic Licence said:
Every cupboard has a skeleton, problem being keeping them could be detrimental to ourselves or on the other side of the coin to someone else, and equally if we share those secrets, it`s a hard decision sometimes. Really enjoyed cleverly written poem
December 14th, 2024 01:07
Secrets
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There is much truth to this poem and your note. Indeed, we all have those proverbial skeletons, don’t we? Well done, my friend! Excellent, profound write! ✍️
December 13th, 2024 19:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There is much truth to this poem and your note. Indeed, we all have those proverbial skeletons, don’t we? Well done, my friend! Excellent, profound write! ✍️
December 13th, 2024 19:48
Secrets
Doggerel Dave said:
Depends on the secret, I suppose….
My feeling is that the excessive need to keep secrets is detrimental to one’s health. Get it out there if at all possible…..
Appreciated the feeling of torment you portrayed.
December 13th, 2024 18:15
Doggerel Dave said:
Depends on the secret, I suppose….
My feeling is that the excessive need to keep secrets is detrimental to one’s health. Get it out there if at all possible…..
Appreciated the feeling of torment you portrayed.
December 13th, 2024 18:15
Secrets
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem. I was always told that one doesn’t have to worry about secrets or lies if one is honest. That honesty is not always. The best policy honesty can destroy lives and feelings and so I have to remember the lies and secrets that I have. Most lovely writing
December 13th, 2024 15:02
sorenbarrett said:
A great poem. I was always told that one doesn’t have to worry about secrets or lies if one is honest. That honesty is not always. The best policy honesty can destroy lives and feelings and so I have to remember the lies and secrets that I have. Most lovely writing
December 13th, 2024 15:02
Silent Scars
teardrop said:
Love your imagery. Parents should never fight in front of their children. I grew up this way and it is horrible. Great write.
December 13th, 2024 05:40
teardrop said:
Love your imagery. Parents should never fight in front of their children. I grew up this way and it is horrible. Great write.
December 13th, 2024 05:40
Complicit
Doggerel Dave said:
As I try to write this one line, there\'s a clown on the radio who has just informed us that Russia has/is increasing its military expenditure, and therefore we must increase ours too......
December 12th, 2024 17:53
Doggerel Dave said:
As I try to write this one line, there\'s a clown on the radio who has just informed us that Russia has/is increasing its military expenditure, and therefore we must increase ours too......
December 12th, 2024 17:53
Complicit
Cassie58 said:
Our species have alot to answer for. Guilty of so much. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.
December 12th, 2024 13:53
Cassie58 said:
Our species have alot to answer for. Guilty of so much. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.
December 12th, 2024 13:53
Complicit
Neville said:
I think you just about summed it all up in one sir .. well penned my friend .. Neville
December 12th, 2024 10:03
Neville said:
I think you just about summed it all up in one sir .. well penned my friend .. Neville
December 12th, 2024 10:03
Complicit
sorenbarrett said:
Guilty as charged along with everyone else. Nicely written
December 12th, 2024 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Guilty as charged along with everyone else. Nicely written
December 12th, 2024 09:56
Complicit
Poetic Licence said:
We as Humans are guilty of so much, i enjoyed the read
December 12th, 2024 04:46
Poetic Licence said:
We as Humans are guilty of so much, i enjoyed the read
December 12th, 2024 04:46
Complicit
sorenbarrett said:
A thoughtful poem the place is blame back where control ends with ourselves. Plainly spoken it leads one to think about what is important. Nicely written.
December 12th, 2024 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
A thoughtful poem the place is blame back where control ends with ourselves. Plainly spoken it leads one to think about what is important. Nicely written.
December 12th, 2024 04:31
Freedom in Debt
sorenbarrett said:
Set in the proper season of giving and getting this poem speaks to spending money one doesn\'t have on things that one does not need. Greed, gluttony, envy, jealousy and coveting. A nation of inflation, damnation of our creation slaves to debt.
December 11th, 2024 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Set in the proper season of giving and getting this poem speaks to spending money one doesn\'t have on things that one does not need. Greed, gluttony, envy, jealousy and coveting. A nation of inflation, damnation of our creation slaves to debt.
December 11th, 2024 04:05
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