Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity



We Shall Win Someday
2781 said:

It bit like--don\'t cast your pearls before swine.

September 6th, 2024 06:07

Broken Sun
Qurrathul Ain said:

Broken clouds give rain, burning sun gives light.

Loved it!

September 2nd, 2024 19:26

Broken Sun
Tony36 said:

Love it

September 2nd, 2024 12:33

How Does God Feel?
Doggerel Dave said:

Despite my lack of belief or interest in \'God\', I can relate to this. Did anyone request to be born who they were?
For me your poem is a proposition easy to read and understand.

August 31st, 2024 16:31

How Does God Feel?
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 31st, 2024 10:11

Unanswered Sunrises
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 29th, 2024 18:42

Honest Light of Darkness
sorenbarrett said:

Dark and painful this seems a harsh view of existence. Sadness is evoked in its reading. Nicely worded.

August 20th, 2024 05:17

It\'s Your Life
sorenbarrett said:

Choices are the basis of life or at least the illusion of choices. This comes through in this poem so nicely written.

August 13th, 2024 08:39

Unspoken Words
Doggerel Dave said:

Story of my life (well certain patches of it).

I\'m going to fave this one, because it says something close to me.

August 9th, 2024 21:11

Unspoken Words
sorenbarrett said:

Unspoken words can be more powerful I have heard it said it is not what you say but what you do that counts.

August 9th, 2024 11:59

Unspoken Words
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 9th, 2024 09:54

We Don\'t Need Kings and Queens
sorenbarrett said:

A call for revolution, anarchy? Democracy too has its weakness in tyranny of the majority. Don\'t have the answer but certainly enjoyed the write that was clever in its mix of chess and politics.

August 8th, 2024 06:56

We Don\'t Need Kings and Queens
Doggerel Dave said:

Absolutely - to use the term \'democracy\' is a farce in most States in this world.
So all you have left is to shout at the buggers - and when enough people shout......
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August 8th, 2024 05:58

Fading Into The Night
Doggerel Dave said:

Contributing, at least in part, to my reservations re the Dylan Thomas villanelle, I\'d argue that you have posed a question with no answers.
But I do really feel what it must have meant for you.

August 8th, 2024 05:48

Abode of God
Sydney Zane said:

Wonderful. Thank you for sharing.

August 7th, 2024 16:01

Abode of God
sorenbarrett said:

A very nice write and yes dignity is where God resides. Very nice

August 7th, 2024 08:48

Nocturn
sorenbarrett said:

I feel the night in this poem that has so many great images and lines. Nicely expressed with a peaceful feeling to it.

August 5th, 2024 06:58

Fading Into The Night
Diana . said:

I can relate to your poem.Its well writen

August 3rd, 2024 11:01

Fading Into The Night
sorenbarrett said:

Haunting and at the same time soothing. This strange combination left a noir feeling to the poem.

August 2nd, 2024 15:57

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