Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
TV Dinner with Chilled Beer
sorenbarrett said:
Psychological, this piece wanders like a vacant brain looking for grounding in some existential founding. Nicely done
September 15th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Psychological, this piece wanders like a vacant brain looking for grounding in some existential founding. Nicely done
September 15th, 2025 10:16
The Open Window
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This stanza ‘The room stood there
as if the eternal truth—
things you could see,
you could feel.’ Is fascinating contains simile, personification and Imagery. Nice.
September 12th, 2025 10:58
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This stanza ‘The room stood there
as if the eternal truth—
things you could see,
you could feel.’ Is fascinating contains simile, personification and Imagery. Nice.
September 12th, 2025 10:58
The Broken Mirror
Teddy.15 said:
I love this, the emotions of lost love are highly felt. 🌹
September 12th, 2025 10:08
Teddy.15 said:
I love this, the emotions of lost love are highly felt. 🌹
September 12th, 2025 10:08
The Open Window
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dear friend, this lingers like a dream-walk...light and breeze as questions rather than answers, ending with that nudge: “Believe, then see.” Your poet’s note resonated with me…I do believe absolute truths exist, but we almost never know them completely. Every glimpse is filtered through our subjectivity. As Kierkegaard said, truth is subjectivity...and you’ve captured that tension here with striking clarity. Brilliantly philosophical and a must fave for me.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2025 08:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dear friend, this lingers like a dream-walk...light and breeze as questions rather than answers, ending with that nudge: “Believe, then see.” Your poet’s note resonated with me…I do believe absolute truths exist, but we almost never know them completely. Every glimpse is filtered through our subjectivity. As Kierkegaard said, truth is subjectivity...and you’ve captured that tension here with striking clarity. Brilliantly philosophical and a must fave for me.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2025 08:55
The Open Window
Doggerel Dave said:
Depends what is meant by reality, I think: the world observed by Our senses? Our beliefs? Relationships?
It’s too late at night for me to really come to grips with this (I only know there can never be an absolute reality or rather there is, but it will always remain hidden) so I’ll try to get back tomorrow with a clearer head.
September 12th, 2025 08:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Depends what is meant by reality, I think: the world observed by Our senses? Our beliefs? Relationships?
It’s too late at night for me to really come to grips with this (I only know there can never be an absolute reality or rather there is, but it will always remain hidden) so I’ll try to get back tomorrow with a clearer head.
September 12th, 2025 08:37
The Open Window
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely presented. I would agree with you that truth is changeable what is true in moment may not be in another and what is true for one person is not for another, it is an illusion a term that we fall back to like a child to a parent. But beyond the child\'s eyes the parent changes as well. A wonderful write deeply philosophical in a surreal type presentation. Loved it
September 12th, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
So nicely presented. I would agree with you that truth is changeable what is true in moment may not be in another and what is true for one person is not for another, it is an illusion a term that we fall back to like a child to a parent. But beyond the child\'s eyes the parent changes as well. A wonderful write deeply philosophical in a surreal type presentation. Loved it
September 12th, 2025 07:53
The Broken Mirror
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, my friend…I’ve felt that fracture, when memory and regret cut sharper than any glass. You’ve written it beautifully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, my friend…I’ve felt that fracture, when memory and regret cut sharper than any glass. You’ve written it beautifully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 09:17
The Broken Mirror
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful, and a stunning poem telling a poignant story. It\'s so beautifully done!
September 9th, 2025 19:46
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful, and a stunning poem telling a poignant story. It\'s so beautifully done!
September 9th, 2025 19:46
The Broken Mirror
Doggerel Dave said:
The pain of loss, the present pain. acceptance of blame and the hope for her future. That\'s the story isn\'t it? But this is why in the right hands poetry can do it so much better, as here.
Thanks - A write I felt perhaps too much.....
September 9th, 2025 16:40
Doggerel Dave said:
The pain of loss, the present pain. acceptance of blame and the hope for her future. That\'s the story isn\'t it? But this is why in the right hands poetry can do it so much better, as here.
Thanks - A write I felt perhaps too much.....
September 9th, 2025 16:40
The Broken Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel this one Rebellion it is painted well in images and metaphor but its true strong point is the feeling that comes through it is one of the icy cold wind of December that comes under the door and through the window cracks. Some very nice lines: You have an address, a house, but no home. It is the melding of the seasons with the mood that this poem excels a fave
September 9th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel this one Rebellion it is painted well in images and metaphor but its true strong point is the feeling that comes through it is one of the icy cold wind of December that comes under the door and through the window cracks. Some very nice lines: You have an address, a house, but no home. It is the melding of the seasons with the mood that this poem excels a fave
September 9th, 2025 09:19
Catatonia
Neville said:
An incredible array of contrasts and all strung out beautifully but leaning towards the darkest of noir .. 🖤🐈⬛😎👍
September 8th, 2025 05:37
Neville said:
An incredible array of contrasts and all strung out beautifully but leaning towards the darkest of noir .. 🖤🐈⬛😎👍
September 8th, 2025 05:37
Catatonia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is searing. The way you set God, Devil, and life in collision...light, darkness, questions that stab...is super powerful. And that line about “collecting taxes in your tears” has stuck with me. Strong, powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is searing. The way you set God, Devil, and life in collision...light, darkness, questions that stab...is super powerful. And that line about “collecting taxes in your tears” has stuck with me. Strong, powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:28
Catatonia
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Powerful and haunting! The poem’s vivid imagery and dark questions about life, God, and suffering really make you reflect. I love how it challenges blind faith and forces the reader to confront harsh truths. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 09:35
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Powerful and haunting! The poem’s vivid imagery and dark questions about life, God, and suffering really make you reflect. I love how it challenges blind faith and forces the reader to confront harsh truths. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 09:35
Catatonia
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of Friedrich Nietzsche here. Years ago I wrote an essay tongue in cheek about the force of darkness. Toward the end of this poem I sense a bit of Dante as well. Nicely written
September 7th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of Friedrich Nietzsche here. Years ago I wrote an essay tongue in cheek about the force of darkness. Toward the end of this poem I sense a bit of Dante as well. Nicely written
September 7th, 2025 04:48
The Call of The Calling
Doggerel Dave said:
Some calls...... I find it hard to be specific, because for me the call itself felt abstract, while the feelings it evoked definitely did not.
I see it so well painted.
September 5th, 2025 15:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Some calls...... I find it hard to be specific, because for me the call itself felt abstract, while the feelings it evoked definitely did not.
I see it so well painted.
September 5th, 2025 15:46
The Call of The Calling
NinjaGirl said:
The call comes but will we ever be ready? Will we be ready for the next? I love this poem a lot.
September 5th, 2025 14:17
NinjaGirl said:
The call comes but will we ever be ready? Will we be ready for the next? I love this poem a lot.
September 5th, 2025 14:17
The Call of The Calling
Neville said:
There is a sadness here that seemed to linger for some time after my first read .. and then this was tempered with a sigh of resignation and relief .. it takes quite some poem to have that kind of impact on me these days (like a time lapse or delay) always a sure sign of quality .. write on brother .. Neville
September 5th, 2025 11:24
Neville said:
There is a sadness here that seemed to linger for some time after my first read .. and then this was tempered with a sigh of resignation and relief .. it takes quite some poem to have that kind of impact on me these days (like a time lapse or delay) always a sure sign of quality .. write on brother .. Neville
September 5th, 2025 11:24
The Call of The Calling
sorenbarrett said:
A most inspiring poem nicely written
September 5th, 2025 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
A most inspiring poem nicely written
September 5th, 2025 10:52
The Call of The Calling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! My friend, this is moving. The call slipping in quietly, then echoing until “the call finally came”...that refrain hits hard, like a breath finally being released. Strong, and very beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! My friend, this is moving. The call slipping in quietly, then echoing until “the call finally came”...that refrain hits hard, like a breath finally being released. Strong, and very beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:18
Devil’s Medical Plan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one hit sharp. Dark wit runs through every stanza...queues in death, cauldrons as democracy, even the Devil with acid reflux. That moment...“still burning fossil fuel!”...sealed it. Clever, haunting, and funny all at once…satire that bites hard and, of course, I love that! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one hit sharp. Dark wit runs through every stanza...queues in death, cauldrons as democracy, even the Devil with acid reflux. That moment...“still burning fossil fuel!”...sealed it. Clever, haunting, and funny all at once…satire that bites hard and, of course, I love that! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:03
Devil’s Medical Plan
Doggerel Dave said:
I may have to abandon my stance as agnostic..... this could easily be....
September 4th, 2025 16:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I may have to abandon my stance as agnostic..... this could easily be....
September 4th, 2025 16:18
I Called My Wild
Keeter C said:
Tones of someone trying to reimagine themselves to move forward, nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:40
Keeter C said:
Tones of someone trying to reimagine themselves to move forward, nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:40
George Committed Suicide
Keeter C said:
You could actually use George as a metaphor for a nation? Very nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:31
Keeter C said:
You could actually use George as a metaphor for a nation? Very nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:31
Devil’s Medical Plan
sorenbarrett said:
Now most writes have just one hook this one should be illegal it had so many. So well done with one following another it could be the modern Divine Comedy. Daunting oh sorry that was Dante wasn\'t it. Very creative and the humor had me smiling all the way. Such a good fit for today you are quite the tailor, too bad all suits are mass produced today. Enough enough simply a fave
September 4th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Now most writes have just one hook this one should be illegal it had so many. So well done with one following another it could be the modern Divine Comedy. Daunting oh sorry that was Dante wasn\'t it. Very creative and the humor had me smiling all the way. Such a good fit for today you are quite the tailor, too bad all suits are mass produced today. Enough enough simply a fave
September 4th, 2025 04:44
Devil’s Medical Plan
Neville said:
I was hooked write from the off .. captivating poetic entertainment throughout .. respect and much of it .. Good old God .. Don\'t ever try flying Ryan Air tho\' 😎👍Neville
September 4th, 2025 03:49
Neville said:
I was hooked write from the off .. captivating poetic entertainment throughout .. respect and much of it .. Good old God .. Don\'t ever try flying Ryan Air tho\' 😎👍Neville
September 4th, 2025 03:49
....and The Monkey Laughed
Doggerel Dave said:
No way I can add to that - it is its own justification.
August 29th, 2025 07:30
Doggerel Dave said:
No way I can add to that - it is its own justification.
August 29th, 2025 07:30
....and The Monkey Laughed
sorenbarrett said:
The message is strong and the answer is humans do not yet know the meaning of civilized. If you want to know you must ask the bees. Nicely written
August 29th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
The message is strong and the answer is humans do not yet know the meaning of civilized. If you want to know you must ask the bees. Nicely written
August 29th, 2025 04:14
....and The Monkey Laughed
Neville said:
This is a masterpiece .. maybe not everyone is going to get it or agree but that doesn\'t alter the fact .. wish I had poemed something similar .. neville (with a small n but x5 big stars) ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
August 29th, 2025 03:07
Neville said:
This is a masterpiece .. maybe not everyone is going to get it or agree but that doesn\'t alter the fact .. wish I had poemed something similar .. neville (with a small n but x5 big stars) ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
August 29th, 2025 03:07
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