Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
George Committed Suicide
Keeter C said:
You could actually use George as a metaphor for a nation? Very nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:31
Keeter C said:
You could actually use George as a metaphor for a nation? Very nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:31
Devil’s Medical Plan
sorenbarrett said:
Now most writes have just one hook this one should be illegal it had so many. So well done with one following another it could be the modern Divine Comedy. Daunting oh sorry that was Dante wasn\'t it. Very creative and the humor had me smiling all the way. Such a good fit for today you are quite the tailor, too bad all suits are mass produced today. Enough enough simply a fave
September 4th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Now most writes have just one hook this one should be illegal it had so many. So well done with one following another it could be the modern Divine Comedy. Daunting oh sorry that was Dante wasn\'t it. Very creative and the humor had me smiling all the way. Such a good fit for today you are quite the tailor, too bad all suits are mass produced today. Enough enough simply a fave
September 4th, 2025 04:44
Devil’s Medical Plan
Neville said:
I was hooked write from the off .. captivating poetic entertainment throughout .. respect and much of it .. Good old God .. Don\'t ever try flying Ryan Air tho\' 😎👍Neville
September 4th, 2025 03:49
Neville said:
I was hooked write from the off .. captivating poetic entertainment throughout .. respect and much of it .. Good old God .. Don\'t ever try flying Ryan Air tho\' 😎👍Neville
September 4th, 2025 03:49
....and The Monkey Laughed
Doggerel Dave said:
No way I can add to that - it is its own justification.
August 29th, 2025 07:30
Doggerel Dave said:
No way I can add to that - it is its own justification.
August 29th, 2025 07:30
....and The Monkey Laughed
sorenbarrett said:
The message is strong and the answer is humans do not yet know the meaning of civilized. If you want to know you must ask the bees. Nicely written
August 29th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
The message is strong and the answer is humans do not yet know the meaning of civilized. If you want to know you must ask the bees. Nicely written
August 29th, 2025 04:14
....and The Monkey Laughed
Neville said:
This is a masterpiece .. maybe not everyone is going to get it or agree but that doesn\'t alter the fact .. wish I had poemed something similar .. neville (with a small n but x5 big stars) ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
August 29th, 2025 03:07
Neville said:
This is a masterpiece .. maybe not everyone is going to get it or agree but that doesn\'t alter the fact .. wish I had poemed something similar .. neville (with a small n but x5 big stars) ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
August 29th, 2025 03:07
WISH GRANTED
Doggerel Dave said:
Great yarn tinged with irony - enjoyed.
Thinks there may be something in this painting thing, a way forward...... joins an adult education art class......
August 26th, 2025 20:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Great yarn tinged with irony - enjoyed.
Thinks there may be something in this painting thing, a way forward...... joins an adult education art class......
August 26th, 2025 20:51
WISH GRANTED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is sharp and ironic…the wish flipped on its head, love turned into pursuit of a very different kind. Dark humor at its finest, my friend. Brilliant and thus a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 26th, 2025 14:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is sharp and ironic…the wish flipped on its head, love turned into pursuit of a very different kind. Dark humor at its finest, my friend. Brilliant and thus a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 26th, 2025 14:20
WISH GRANTED
Neville said:
You have incorporated much truth therein .. Take heed folks ..
August 26th, 2025 14:11
Neville said:
You have incorporated much truth therein .. Take heed folks ..
August 26th, 2025 14:11
WISH GRANTED
sorenbarrett said:
So true be careful what one wishes for the consequences may be more than one bargained for. A fun read
August 26th, 2025 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
So true be careful what one wishes for the consequences may be more than one bargained for. A fun read
August 26th, 2025 09:42
George Committed Suicide
Neville said:
Jeez .. I\'ve lost count of how many sad and sorry souls have gone down this very same route .. Say it like it so often is .. and keep saying it so well .. this is a topic that is not going to go away until values and society change .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
August 25th, 2025 10:35
Neville said:
Jeez .. I\'ve lost count of how many sad and sorry souls have gone down this very same route .. Say it like it so often is .. and keep saying it so well .. this is a topic that is not going to go away until values and society change .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
August 25th, 2025 10:35
George Committed Suicide
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment where debt is called “a blessing of the country and not a bane” struck me hard. It’s biting commentary...society preaching survival through ruin. You captured it raw. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my friend!
August 24th, 2025 18:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment where debt is called “a blessing of the country and not a bane” struck me hard. It’s biting commentary...society preaching survival through ruin. You captured it raw. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my friend!
August 24th, 2025 18:33
George Committed Suicide
Doggerel Dave said:
Great yarn. Made me think - something he should have done better.
August 24th, 2025 16:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Great yarn. Made me think - something he should have done better.
August 24th, 2025 16:35
George Committed Suicide
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem paints a dark picture. It is poignant and troubling in a capitalistic society built on greed and appearance where pressure to excel beyond others is a mark of masculinity, virility and power. Two lines struck me in this poem.
And God said everyone is allocated a quota of happiness.
One should choose how to spend—
Well written and it gives one thought
August 24th, 2025 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem paints a dark picture. It is poignant and troubling in a capitalistic society built on greed and appearance where pressure to excel beyond others is a mark of masculinity, virility and power. Two lines struck me in this poem.
And God said everyone is allocated a quota of happiness.
One should choose how to spend—
Well written and it gives one thought
August 24th, 2025 12:09
The Mirror Says Aye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That title grabbed me right away, my friend…and the poem more than lived up to it. Raw, unflinching, and honest to the bone. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That title grabbed me right away, my friend…and the poem more than lived up to it. Raw, unflinching, and honest to the bone. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:06
The Mirror Says Aye
Neville said:
The world, or so much of it these days is just so unjust, its unreal but real if you get my drift like I hope I caught the tail end of yours .. Neville
August 20th, 2025 13:33
Neville said:
The world, or so much of it these days is just so unjust, its unreal but real if you get my drift like I hope I caught the tail end of yours .. Neville
August 20th, 2025 13:33
The Mirror Says Aye
sorenbarrett said:
The only safe designation is one\'s name (if it is a popular one) mine does not count. A not so fun read for the poor but one that I\'m sure the wealthy can find some humor in at our expense. Nicely done
August 20th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
The only safe designation is one\'s name (if it is a popular one) mine does not count. A not so fun read for the poor but one that I\'m sure the wealthy can find some humor in at our expense. Nicely done
August 20th, 2025 10:44
Dead-man\'s Chest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Brilliant, my friend. That image of white cranes flying…that’s the one that lingers for me. It’s a release after all the heaviness, like air filling lungs again. A striking close to a striking poem, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Brilliant, my friend. That image of white cranes flying…that’s the one that lingers for me. It’s a release after all the heaviness, like air filling lungs again. A striking close to a striking poem, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:10
Dead-man\'s Chest
Neville said:
The main body of your poem conjures up so very many images & these titillate and elsewise play with this readers senses .. You ask a very interesting question within your authors footnote .. I\'m not sure I know either .. I guess it depends on the situation at any given time .. Neville
August 18th, 2025 11:03
Neville said:
The main body of your poem conjures up so very many images & these titillate and elsewise play with this readers senses .. You ask a very interesting question within your authors footnote .. I\'m not sure I know either .. I guess it depends on the situation at any given time .. Neville
August 18th, 2025 11:03
Dead-man\'s Chest
Poetic Licence said:
Cynicism a leathal weapon, that causes untold and sometimes unrepairable damage, maybe a kind word to the heart might heal, but not always, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 09:41
Poetic Licence said:
Cynicism a leathal weapon, that causes untold and sometimes unrepairable damage, maybe a kind word to the heart might heal, but not always, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 09:41
Dead-man\'s Chest
sorenbarrett said:
Cynicism a cutting knife that can leave wounds and scars. A most questioning poem
August 18th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
Cynicism a cutting knife that can leave wounds and scars. A most questioning poem
August 18th, 2025 09:19
I Called My Wild
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one feels heavy with shadow, yet it carries a flicker at the end that refuses to die out…your wild falling silent, anger stepping in, and then that final remembrance of belief keeping the spark alive. This is both dark and raw, yet still with a glint hope...like the cracking of sunlight in the early dawn. Strongly written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 19:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one feels heavy with shadow, yet it carries a flicker at the end that refuses to die out…your wild falling silent, anger stepping in, and then that final remembrance of belief keeping the spark alive. This is both dark and raw, yet still with a glint hope...like the cracking of sunlight in the early dawn. Strongly written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 19:06
I Called My Wild
Tony Grannell said:
A journey through the emotional struggle of a life lived in the heartfelt efforts to understand the self in a superlative passage of poetry. At that moment, \'someone believed in me\', grasps the reader with a beautiful truth and faith to go on living with a smile. This poem is deserving of much praise as is its author. Very well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 17:00
Tony Grannell said:
A journey through the emotional struggle of a life lived in the heartfelt efforts to understand the self in a superlative passage of poetry. At that moment, \'someone believed in me\', grasps the reader with a beautiful truth and faith to go on living with a smile. This poem is deserving of much praise as is its author. Very well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 17:00
I Called My Wild
Neville said:
To remain young for always is of course impossible but oh to be forever free .. now that\'s something else entirely .. You got me thinking Reb .. thank you
August 17th, 2025 12:02
Neville said:
To remain young for always is of course impossible but oh to be forever free .. now that\'s something else entirely .. You got me thinking Reb .. thank you
August 17th, 2025 12:02
I Called My Wild
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write detailing what the reasons are that give struggling in this world a purpose, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 11:20
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write detailing what the reasons are that give struggling in this world a purpose, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 11:20
I Called My Wild
sorenbarrett said:
The reason we live for explored in this poem. Memories, love, good that others perceive, influence we have, the smiles we get. A wonderful poem
August 17th, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
The reason we live for explored in this poem. Memories, love, good that others perceive, influence we have, the smiles we get. A wonderful poem
August 17th, 2025 09:08
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