Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
Parable of Politics
Poetic Licence said:
As much as i dislike all politicians and forms of greed and power, i know that has ever really been achieved by sticking completely to the rules, Another enjoyable powerful read.
December 22nd, 2024 09:23
Poetic Licence said:
As much as i dislike all politicians and forms of greed and power, i know that has ever really been achieved by sticking completely to the rules, Another enjoyable powerful read.
December 22nd, 2024 09:23
Parable of Politics
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah my favorite people ever...politicians. Indeed, power perverts, no doubt about that. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 22nd, 2024 07:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah my favorite people ever...politicians. Indeed, power perverts, no doubt about that. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 22nd, 2024 07:41
Parable of Politics
sorenbarrett said:
Survival of the fittist is the rule but we prefer to break the rule with charity and generosity who is right? Thought provoking write that is powerful in its mesage.
December 22nd, 2024 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Survival of the fittist is the rule but we prefer to break the rule with charity and generosity who is right? Thought provoking write that is powerful in its mesage.
December 22nd, 2024 07:24
Requiem for Real
rhmn_7 said:
I truly hope AI takes us far as you said, interesting perspective!
December 21st, 2024 07:30
rhmn_7 said:
I truly hope AI takes us far as you said, interesting perspective!
December 21st, 2024 07:30
Finding the Right Words
Doggerel Dave said:
There is no option but to keep struggling though. And I\'d be the first to agree that the task isn\'t easy. Particularly here and on paper where contact is remote and devoid of all the signs and signals I receive with direct contact.
So I suppose for me the answer to your neat argument is \'occasionally\'......
December 20th, 2024 16:30
Doggerel Dave said:
There is no option but to keep struggling though. And I\'d be the first to agree that the task isn\'t easy. Particularly here and on paper where contact is remote and devoid of all the signs and signals I receive with direct contact.
So I suppose for me the answer to your neat argument is \'occasionally\'......
December 20th, 2024 16:30
Requiem for Real
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought provoking poem and note, my friend. I am not anti-tech or even anti-AI if used appropriately. To replace human presence, thinking, creativity and creative output...not at all! Oh...and that\'s a hell no on replacing parents! LOL! Though, it might do better than TVs and Smart Devices have! 🤣😭 All jokes aside, well done on this friend. 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 09:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought provoking poem and note, my friend. I am not anti-tech or even anti-AI if used appropriately. To replace human presence, thinking, creativity and creative output...not at all! Oh...and that\'s a hell no on replacing parents! LOL! Though, it might do better than TVs and Smart Devices have! 🤣😭 All jokes aside, well done on this friend. 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 09:22
Requiem for Real
Cassie58 said:
There is no place in literature for AI. It has its place but it can’t replace human emotion. I accept it has its uses, but the thought of AI parents is a nightmare scenario. We are all unique. The future looks cloned. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.
December 20th, 2024 06:57
Cassie58 said:
There is no place in literature for AI. It has its place but it can’t replace human emotion. I accept it has its uses, but the thought of AI parents is a nightmare scenario. We are all unique. The future looks cloned. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.
December 20th, 2024 06:57
Requiem for Real
cellinic said:
A very intelligent and sincere statement. Thank you very much for it. Best wishes,
December 20th, 2024 06:51
cellinic said:
A very intelligent and sincere statement. Thank you very much for it. Best wishes,
December 20th, 2024 06:51
Requiem for Real
Poetic Licence said:
I think some people already have artificial parents without the need for A1, the poem makes you think of what might become, enjoyed the read.
December 20th, 2024 06:26
Poetic Licence said:
I think some people already have artificial parents without the need for A1, the poem makes you think of what might become, enjoyed the read.
December 20th, 2024 06:26
Requiem for Real
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one ponder. What is real and what is not. All in the eye of the beholder
December 20th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one ponder. What is real and what is not. All in the eye of the beholder
December 20th, 2024 06:15
Finding the Right Words
Neville said:
I felt there is a sadness here .. a sign of the times methinks .. maybe 😎👍
December 19th, 2024 12:28
Neville said:
I felt there is a sadness here .. a sign of the times methinks .. maybe 😎👍
December 19th, 2024 12:28
Finding the Right Words
Poetic Licence said:
I found this quite sad and haunting, with an underlying feeling of emptiness, i could well be wrong. Very well written poem, Thank you
December 19th, 2024 10:35
Poetic Licence said:
I found this quite sad and haunting, with an underlying feeling of emptiness, i could well be wrong. Very well written poem, Thank you
December 19th, 2024 10:35
Finding the Right Words
sorenbarrett said:
The last line says it all. People don\'t listen, they don\'t hear, they don\'t trust. Words the greatest invention of all time have outlived their warrenty and there is no exchange possible anymore. A poignant piece and wonderful write
December 19th, 2024 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
The last line says it all. People don\'t listen, they don\'t hear, they don\'t trust. Words the greatest invention of all time have outlived their warrenty and there is no exchange possible anymore. A poignant piece and wonderful write
December 19th, 2024 10:10
LIFE IN REARVIEW MIRROR
Neville said:
I can see precisely where you are coming from .. this is far more cerebral than one might imagine .. tis but a matter of perspective and the direction of flow .. and your authors note I would have given my eye teeth to have coined first .. 😎👍👍
December 18th, 2024 01:33
Neville said:
I can see precisely where you are coming from .. this is far more cerebral than one might imagine .. tis but a matter of perspective and the direction of flow .. and your authors note I would have given my eye teeth to have coined first .. 😎👍👍
December 18th, 2024 01:33
LIFE IN REARVIEW MIRROR
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy yes the future is imagination and the past is seen in a rear view mirror. When taking driving lessons in school we had a substitude teacher for a couple of weeks that demanded that we be able to drive in reverse at 40 mph using the rear view mirror. Not so much when I was driving but when riding with the other student drivers
December 17th, 2024 03:51
sorenbarrett said:
A great analogy yes the future is imagination and the past is seen in a rear view mirror. When taking driving lessons in school we had a substitude teacher for a couple of weeks that demanded that we be able to drive in reverse at 40 mph using the rear view mirror. Not so much when I was driving but when riding with the other student drivers
December 17th, 2024 03:51
LIFE IN REARVIEW MIRROR
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly written poem about the questions we always beat ourselves up with about our lives, we usually ask them when it is already to late, Enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 00:41
Poetic Licence said:
Cleverly written poem about the questions we always beat ourselves up with about our lives, we usually ask them when it is already to late, Enjoyable read
December 17th, 2024 00:41
Ticking Clock of Doom
Doggerel Dave said:
Wanted to creep me out? You succeeded. Not one I intend to fave.... I want to forget....👍
December 15th, 2024 23:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Wanted to creep me out? You succeeded. Not one I intend to fave.... I want to forget....👍
December 15th, 2024 23:03
Ticking Clock of Doom
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This had THRILLER written all over it...and I am not speaking of the King of Pop\'s hit album or song! LOL! This seriously had me from beginning to end...and what happens? Left to the imagination to figure out. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 19:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This had THRILLER written all over it...and I am not speaking of the King of Pop\'s hit album or song! LOL! This seriously had me from beginning to end...and what happens? Left to the imagination to figure out. Wonderful job, my friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 19:07
Ticking Clock of Doom
sorenbarrett said:
Panic in the face of a threat a normal human response. Well described in vivid images in this poem grow and crescendo as they reach their climax.
December 15th, 2024 11:40
sorenbarrett said:
Panic in the face of a threat a normal human response. Well described in vivid images in this poem grow and crescendo as they reach their climax.
December 15th, 2024 11:40
Ticking Clock of Doom
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting read, i am not sure if sometimes it is both, well written
December 15th, 2024 11:34
Poetic Licence said:
A interesting read, i am not sure if sometimes it is both, well written
December 15th, 2024 11:34
Celestial Trading
Neville said:
It doesn\'t have to be this way .. but of course it is and I doubt it will ever go back to where it once ever was .. it has been increasingly around since forever .. damn good .. how much for the copywrite :)
December 15th, 2024 01:48
Neville said:
It doesn\'t have to be this way .. but of course it is and I doubt it will ever go back to where it once ever was .. it has been increasingly around since forever .. damn good .. how much for the copywrite :)
December 15th, 2024 01:48
Celestial Trading
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep the wormhole open wide. Let them all through with promises of unrestricted growth. Seal wormhole swiftly. Problem solved.
A piece of beautiful satire from you. Breakfast improved no end.
December 14th, 2024 16:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Keep the wormhole open wide. Let them all through with promises of unrestricted growth. Seal wormhole swiftly. Problem solved.
A piece of beautiful satire from you. Breakfast improved no end.
December 14th, 2024 16:47
Celestial Trading
Cassie58 said:
Marvelous metaphor here. The ugly and unforgiving side of capitalism on this planet. God forbid it travels further afield. What a thought. Enjoyed your stanzas.
December 14th, 2024 13:42
Cassie58 said:
Marvelous metaphor here. The ugly and unforgiving side of capitalism on this planet. God forbid it travels further afield. What a thought. Enjoyed your stanzas.
December 14th, 2024 13:42
Celestial Trading
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly those ants do own the world and control it`s future, and i fear the colony is only going to get bigger next year, Good Read
December 14th, 2024 12:14
Poetic Licence said:
Sadly those ants do own the world and control it`s future, and i fear the colony is only going to get bigger next year, Good Read
December 14th, 2024 12:14
Celestial Trading
sorenbarrett said:
So true capitalism based on greed has provided great comfort maybe too much. In our laziness we langour and dwindle
December 14th, 2024 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
So true capitalism based on greed has provided great comfort maybe too much. In our laziness we langour and dwindle
December 14th, 2024 11:12
Celestial Trading
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy, this is the truth. Love the ant metaphor and this poem is truly rich in imagery. Wonderful write my friend! 👏🌹
December 14th, 2024 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy, this is the truth. Love the ant metaphor and this poem is truly rich in imagery. Wonderful write my friend! 👏🌹
December 14th, 2024 11:04
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