Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
The Broken Mirror
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, my friend…I’ve felt that fracture, when memory and regret cut sharper than any glass. You’ve written it beautifully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 09:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes, my friend…I’ve felt that fracture, when memory and regret cut sharper than any glass. You’ve written it beautifully. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 09:17
The Broken Mirror
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful, and a stunning poem telling a poignant story. It\'s so beautifully done!
September 9th, 2025 19:46
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful, and a stunning poem telling a poignant story. It\'s so beautifully done!
September 9th, 2025 19:46
The Broken Mirror
Doggerel Dave said:
The pain of loss, the present pain. acceptance of blame and the hope for her future. That\'s the story isn\'t it? But this is why in the right hands poetry can do it so much better, as here.
Thanks - A write I felt perhaps too much.....
September 9th, 2025 16:40
Doggerel Dave said:
The pain of loss, the present pain. acceptance of blame and the hope for her future. That\'s the story isn\'t it? But this is why in the right hands poetry can do it so much better, as here.
Thanks - A write I felt perhaps too much.....
September 9th, 2025 16:40
The Broken Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel this one Rebellion it is painted well in images and metaphor but its true strong point is the feeling that comes through it is one of the icy cold wind of December that comes under the door and through the window cracks. Some very nice lines: You have an address, a house, but no home. It is the melding of the seasons with the mood that this poem excels a fave
September 9th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
I could feel this one Rebellion it is painted well in images and metaphor but its true strong point is the feeling that comes through it is one of the icy cold wind of December that comes under the door and through the window cracks. Some very nice lines: You have an address, a house, but no home. It is the melding of the seasons with the mood that this poem excels a fave
September 9th, 2025 09:19
Catatonia
Neville said:
An incredible array of contrasts and all strung out beautifully but leaning towards the darkest of noir .. 🖤🐈⬛😎👍
September 8th, 2025 05:37
Neville said:
An incredible array of contrasts and all strung out beautifully but leaning towards the darkest of noir .. 🖤🐈⬛😎👍
September 8th, 2025 05:37
Catatonia
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is searing. The way you set God, Devil, and life in collision...light, darkness, questions that stab...is super powerful. And that line about “collecting taxes in your tears” has stuck with me. Strong, powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this is searing. The way you set God, Devil, and life in collision...light, darkness, questions that stab...is super powerful. And that line about “collecting taxes in your tears” has stuck with me. Strong, powerful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 7th, 2025 18:28
Catatonia
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Powerful and haunting! The poem’s vivid imagery and dark questions about life, God, and suffering really make you reflect. I love how it challenges blind faith and forces the reader to confront harsh truths. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 09:35
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Powerful and haunting! The poem’s vivid imagery and dark questions about life, God, and suffering really make you reflect. I love how it challenges blind faith and forces the reader to confront harsh truths. Nicely written.
September 7th, 2025 09:35
Catatonia
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of Friedrich Nietzsche here. Years ago I wrote an essay tongue in cheek about the force of darkness. Toward the end of this poem I sense a bit of Dante as well. Nicely written
September 7th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
A bit of Friedrich Nietzsche here. Years ago I wrote an essay tongue in cheek about the force of darkness. Toward the end of this poem I sense a bit of Dante as well. Nicely written
September 7th, 2025 04:48
The Call of The Calling
Doggerel Dave said:
Some calls...... I find it hard to be specific, because for me the call itself felt abstract, while the feelings it evoked definitely did not.
I see it so well painted.
September 5th, 2025 15:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Some calls...... I find it hard to be specific, because for me the call itself felt abstract, while the feelings it evoked definitely did not.
I see it so well painted.
September 5th, 2025 15:46
The Call of The Calling
NinjaGirl said:
The call comes but will we ever be ready? Will we be ready for the next? I love this poem a lot.
September 5th, 2025 14:17
NinjaGirl said:
The call comes but will we ever be ready? Will we be ready for the next? I love this poem a lot.
September 5th, 2025 14:17
The Call of The Calling
Neville said:
There is a sadness here that seemed to linger for some time after my first read .. and then this was tempered with a sigh of resignation and relief .. it takes quite some poem to have that kind of impact on me these days (like a time lapse or delay) always a sure sign of quality .. write on brother .. Neville
September 5th, 2025 11:24
Neville said:
There is a sadness here that seemed to linger for some time after my first read .. and then this was tempered with a sigh of resignation and relief .. it takes quite some poem to have that kind of impact on me these days (like a time lapse or delay) always a sure sign of quality .. write on brother .. Neville
September 5th, 2025 11:24
The Call of The Calling
sorenbarrett said:
A most inspiring poem nicely written
September 5th, 2025 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
A most inspiring poem nicely written
September 5th, 2025 10:52
The Call of The Calling
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! My friend, this is moving. The call slipping in quietly, then echoing until “the call finally came”...that refrain hits hard, like a breath finally being released. Strong, and very beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay! First comment! My friend, this is moving. The call slipping in quietly, then echoing until “the call finally came”...that refrain hits hard, like a breath finally being released. Strong, and very beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 5th, 2025 10:18
Devil’s Medical Plan
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one hit sharp. Dark wit runs through every stanza...queues in death, cauldrons as democracy, even the Devil with acid reflux. That moment...“still burning fossil fuel!”...sealed it. Clever, haunting, and funny all at once…satire that bites hard and, of course, I love that! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one hit sharp. Dark wit runs through every stanza...queues in death, cauldrons as democracy, even the Devil with acid reflux. That moment...“still burning fossil fuel!”...sealed it. Clever, haunting, and funny all at once…satire that bites hard and, of course, I love that! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 4th, 2025 17:03
Devil’s Medical Plan
Doggerel Dave said:
I may have to abandon my stance as agnostic..... this could easily be....
September 4th, 2025 16:18
Doggerel Dave said:
I may have to abandon my stance as agnostic..... this could easily be....
September 4th, 2025 16:18
I Called My Wild
Keeter C said:
Tones of someone trying to reimagine themselves to move forward, nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:40
Keeter C said:
Tones of someone trying to reimagine themselves to move forward, nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:40
George Committed Suicide
Keeter C said:
You could actually use George as a metaphor for a nation? Very nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:31
Keeter C said:
You could actually use George as a metaphor for a nation? Very nice.
September 4th, 2025 11:31
Devil’s Medical Plan
sorenbarrett said:
Now most writes have just one hook this one should be illegal it had so many. So well done with one following another it could be the modern Divine Comedy. Daunting oh sorry that was Dante wasn\'t it. Very creative and the humor had me smiling all the way. Such a good fit for today you are quite the tailor, too bad all suits are mass produced today. Enough enough simply a fave
September 4th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
Now most writes have just one hook this one should be illegal it had so many. So well done with one following another it could be the modern Divine Comedy. Daunting oh sorry that was Dante wasn\'t it. Very creative and the humor had me smiling all the way. Such a good fit for today you are quite the tailor, too bad all suits are mass produced today. Enough enough simply a fave
September 4th, 2025 04:44
Devil’s Medical Plan
Neville said:
I was hooked write from the off .. captivating poetic entertainment throughout .. respect and much of it .. Good old God .. Don\'t ever try flying Ryan Air tho\' 😎👍Neville
September 4th, 2025 03:49
Neville said:
I was hooked write from the off .. captivating poetic entertainment throughout .. respect and much of it .. Good old God .. Don\'t ever try flying Ryan Air tho\' 😎👍Neville
September 4th, 2025 03:49
....and The Monkey Laughed
Doggerel Dave said:
No way I can add to that - it is its own justification.
August 29th, 2025 07:30
Doggerel Dave said:
No way I can add to that - it is its own justification.
August 29th, 2025 07:30
....and The Monkey Laughed
sorenbarrett said:
The message is strong and the answer is humans do not yet know the meaning of civilized. If you want to know you must ask the bees. Nicely written
August 29th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
The message is strong and the answer is humans do not yet know the meaning of civilized. If you want to know you must ask the bees. Nicely written
August 29th, 2025 04:14
....and The Monkey Laughed
Neville said:
This is a masterpiece .. maybe not everyone is going to get it or agree but that doesn\'t alter the fact .. wish I had poemed something similar .. neville (with a small n but x5 big stars) ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
August 29th, 2025 03:07
Neville said:
This is a masterpiece .. maybe not everyone is going to get it or agree but that doesn\'t alter the fact .. wish I had poemed something similar .. neville (with a small n but x5 big stars) ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
August 29th, 2025 03:07
WISH GRANTED
Doggerel Dave said:
Great yarn tinged with irony - enjoyed.
Thinks there may be something in this painting thing, a way forward...... joins an adult education art class......
August 26th, 2025 20:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Great yarn tinged with irony - enjoyed.
Thinks there may be something in this painting thing, a way forward...... joins an adult education art class......
August 26th, 2025 20:51
WISH GRANTED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is sharp and ironic…the wish flipped on its head, love turned into pursuit of a very different kind. Dark humor at its finest, my friend. Brilliant and thus a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 26th, 2025 14:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is sharp and ironic…the wish flipped on its head, love turned into pursuit of a very different kind. Dark humor at its finest, my friend. Brilliant and thus a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 26th, 2025 14:20
WISH GRANTED
Neville said:
You have incorporated much truth therein .. Take heed folks ..
August 26th, 2025 14:11
Neville said:
You have incorporated much truth therein .. Take heed folks ..
August 26th, 2025 14:11
WISH GRANTED
sorenbarrett said:
So true be careful what one wishes for the consequences may be more than one bargained for. A fun read
August 26th, 2025 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
So true be careful what one wishes for the consequences may be more than one bargained for. A fun read
August 26th, 2025 09:42
George Committed Suicide
Neville said:
Jeez .. I\'ve lost count of how many sad and sorry souls have gone down this very same route .. Say it like it so often is .. and keep saying it so well .. this is a topic that is not going to go away until values and society change .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
August 25th, 2025 10:35
Neville said:
Jeez .. I\'ve lost count of how many sad and sorry souls have gone down this very same route .. Say it like it so often is .. and keep saying it so well .. this is a topic that is not going to go away until values and society change .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
August 25th, 2025 10:35
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