Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
The Outsider\'s Flame
sorenbarrett said:
The fire of anger burns a firebreak preventing love to spread. Both are fire that fight each other leaving only ashes of what\'s dead. Such great metaphor that plays off of each other in this poem. Beneath the surface great truth and wisdom of emotions out of control that leave devastation for both the hater and the one loved. Burning down one\'s own house is not a good resolution. Very nice a fave
March 15th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
The fire of anger burns a firebreak preventing love to spread. Both are fire that fight each other leaving only ashes of what\'s dead. Such great metaphor that plays off of each other in this poem. Beneath the surface great truth and wisdom of emotions out of control that leave devastation for both the hater and the one loved. Burning down one\'s own house is not a good resolution. Very nice a fave
March 15th, 2025 07:20
The Outsider\'s Flame
Poetic Licence said:
A dangerous emotion anger if left to go unchecked, nicely expressed and written write
March 15th, 2025 06:49
Poetic Licence said:
A dangerous emotion anger if left to go unchecked, nicely expressed and written write
March 15th, 2025 06:49
The Rocking Chair
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful, my friend! Visceral imagery and there\'s a haunting poignancy to it. Well done! 🌹👏
March 10th, 2025 22:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful, my friend! Visceral imagery and there\'s a haunting poignancy to it. Well done! 🌹👏
March 10th, 2025 22:20
Liberation
Neville said:
It costs nothing does it, but it\'s priceless & not always the easiest thing to maintain .. thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:42
Neville said:
It costs nothing does it, but it\'s priceless & not always the easiest thing to maintain .. thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:42
The Rocking Chair
Neville said:
So very sad .. the sense of hopelessness and helplessness pervades the page on which these words sit purposefully .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:37
Neville said:
So very sad .. the sense of hopelessness and helplessness pervades the page on which these words sit purposefully .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:37
Liberation
Cassie58 said:
We develop our insecurities and demons over time. To be liberated from all and to experience life to the absolute maximum is a dream for most people. That freedom comes with confidence and strength and maybe prayer plays a significant part in it for those with a strong faith. We have one life, most wish to live it to the full. I hope you achieve your aims. I enjoyed your words.
March 9th, 2025 10:54
Cassie58 said:
We develop our insecurities and demons over time. To be liberated from all and to experience life to the absolute maximum is a dream for most people. That freedom comes with confidence and strength and maybe prayer plays a significant part in it for those with a strong faith. We have one life, most wish to live it to the full. I hope you achieve your aims. I enjoyed your words.
March 9th, 2025 10:54
The Rocking Chair
Cassie58 said:
Such sadness in this poem. It reminds me very much of my visits to the nursing home to see my aunt. Old ladies sitting in chairs, gazing out of the window , expressionless. No visits, no love in their lives, waiting to die. The end of the line. If it was me, I would pray for my heart to stop. Powerfully delivered, with such a sense of hopelessness. Well done RIS.
March 9th, 2025 07:30
Cassie58 said:
Such sadness in this poem. It reminds me very much of my visits to the nursing home to see my aunt. Old ladies sitting in chairs, gazing out of the window , expressionless. No visits, no love in their lives, waiting to die. The end of the line. If it was me, I would pray for my heart to stop. Powerfully delivered, with such a sense of hopelessness. Well done RIS.
March 9th, 2025 07:30
The Rocking Chair
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well written powerful and sad piece of writing, with a strong of having no hope
March 9th, 2025 05:53
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well written powerful and sad piece of writing, with a strong of having no hope
March 9th, 2025 05:53
The Rocking Chair
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of avoidance and the consequences and if life is all that is desired it works. This poem sets the mood and leaves a sense of hopelessness. Very well written
March 9th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of avoidance and the consequences and if life is all that is desired it works. This poem sets the mood and leaves a sense of hopelessness. Very well written
March 9th, 2025 03:42
Liberation
Poetic Licence said:
I want to be released from my demons and experience the world, you can feel the call in this write, nicely written
March 7th, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
I want to be released from my demons and experience the world, you can feel the call in this write, nicely written
March 7th, 2025 05:17
Liberation
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to be able to experience all. I too feel this urge to see what there is to see. Nicely written
March 7th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to be able to experience all. I too feel this urge to see what there is to see. Nicely written
March 7th, 2025 04:26
Resuscitate
Cassie58 said:
Sometimes we don’t know what we had until it’s gone. That is the feeling your beautiful poem gave me. I hope you can get back what you have lost. I enjoyed reading you RIS.
March 2nd, 2025 17:53
Cassie58 said:
Sometimes we don’t know what we had until it’s gone. That is the feeling your beautiful poem gave me. I hope you can get back what you have lost. I enjoyed reading you RIS.
March 2nd, 2025 17:53
Resuscitate
Poetic Licence said:
A desperation for a lost love to return, a very interesting and well expressed write
March 2nd, 2025 05:41
Poetic Licence said:
A desperation for a lost love to return, a very interesting and well expressed write
March 2nd, 2025 05:41
Resuscitate
sorenbarrett said:
This is a rather sad longing for a past life departed. A desire for its return from the dead. Resurrection is believed in by some. A thought provoking write.
March 2nd, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This is a rather sad longing for a past life departed. A desire for its return from the dead. Resurrection is believed in by some. A thought provoking write.
March 2nd, 2025 04:43
Lament for Life
sorenbarrett said:
A poem I can identify with and how true it is. Sad and regretful. A well written poem lovely
March 1st, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
A poem I can identify with and how true it is. Sad and regretful. A well written poem lovely
March 1st, 2025 11:29
Lament for Life
Poetic Licence said:
A lot of truth in this write, although sometimes painful tomorrow may never come, well written and expressed
March 1st, 2025 10:46
Poetic Licence said:
A lot of truth in this write, although sometimes painful tomorrow may never come, well written and expressed
March 1st, 2025 10:46
Lament for Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poem and your note convey much wisdom and truth. Sad it is, for be tomorrow there may not. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
March 1st, 2025 10:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Your poem and your note convey much wisdom and truth. Sad it is, for be tomorrow there may not. Well done, friend! 🌹👏
March 1st, 2025 10:15
Past Tells No Lies
sorenbarrett said:
Such great metaphor in this poem it fits so well the rhyme and images. Well done
February 22nd, 2025 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
Such great metaphor in this poem it fits so well the rhyme and images. Well done
February 22nd, 2025 13:16
Dust and Joy
NafisaSB said:
liked the message - yes we shall return to dust, but let\'s make the most of life, while alive
January 29th, 2025 07:38
NafisaSB said:
liked the message - yes we shall return to dust, but let\'s make the most of life, while alive
January 29th, 2025 07:38
Dust and Joy
RSM0812 said:
Great message. We should kill each other with kindness.
January 25th, 2025 07:39
RSM0812 said:
Great message. We should kill each other with kindness.
January 25th, 2025 07:39
Dust and Joy
Poetic Licence said:
Well written positive piece of poetry, really enjoyed it
January 22nd, 2025 12:34
Poetic Licence said:
Well written positive piece of poetry, really enjoyed it
January 22nd, 2025 12:34
Dust and Joy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wonderfully positive message! Much needed and an easy fave! Well done! ❤️🙏
January 21st, 2025 21:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What a wonderfully positive message! Much needed and an easy fave! Well done! ❤️🙏
January 21st, 2025 21:10
Dust and Joy
Cassie58 said:
Such a beautiful message of positivity in a world which can often be harsh. Love is everything. Much enjoyed RIS.
January 21st, 2025 17:09
Cassie58 said:
Such a beautiful message of positivity in a world which can often be harsh. Love is everything. Much enjoyed RIS.
January 21st, 2025 17:09
Dust and Joy
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write and the message deserves the Fave
January 21st, 2025 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write and the message deserves the Fave
January 21st, 2025 09:15
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