Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
The Music of Twilight
sorenbarrett said:
Dark but there is a warmth with it as well. A sense of loneliness and an unfinished feeling to life. Sad
January 4th, 2025 15:17
sorenbarrett said:
Dark but there is a warmth with it as well. A sense of loneliness and an unfinished feeling to life. Sad
January 4th, 2025 15:17
The Music of Twilight
Poetic Licence said:
Music has the ability to fit the mood and situation at that time, and each person interprets it a different way, which is what makes it so magical, enjoyed the read. have a great weekend
January 4th, 2025 12:39
Poetic Licence said:
Music has the ability to fit the mood and situation at that time, and each person interprets it a different way, which is what makes it so magical, enjoyed the read. have a great weekend
January 4th, 2025 12:39
Invisible Man
arqios said:
Nice! In poetry’s process our words may be the grey, solidly blanketing the poetic canvas that is like a white noise of articulation disguising and blurring the poet themselves. And because poems tend to live lives of their own and traverse life and consciousness with their unique personas can and do leave the poet invisible. Some say that tis is as it should be but it can be perceived as a mixed blessing. But that’s just me. Thoroughly enjoyed.
January 3rd, 2025 16:05
arqios said:
Nice! In poetry’s process our words may be the grey, solidly blanketing the poetic canvas that is like a white noise of articulation disguising and blurring the poet themselves. And because poems tend to live lives of their own and traverse life and consciousness with their unique personas can and do leave the poet invisible. Some say that tis is as it should be but it can be perceived as a mixed blessing. But that’s just me. Thoroughly enjoyed.
January 3rd, 2025 16:05
Invisible Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Love the metaphor and how evocative this is. Wonderful write! 👏🌹
January 3rd, 2025 13:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Love the metaphor and how evocative this is. Wonderful write! 👏🌹
January 3rd, 2025 13:39
Invisible Man
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor that leaves questions. There are many emotions presented here in contrast to the mundane and gray
January 3rd, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor that leaves questions. There are many emotions presented here in contrast to the mundane and gray
January 3rd, 2025 10:02
Invisible Man
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and poignant piece of poetry, well written
January 3rd, 2025 08:54
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful and poignant piece of poetry, well written
January 3rd, 2025 08:54
Prayer
Poetic Licence said:
The search for inner strength is a constant, some have to dig deeper than others but once found we should use it, Well written piece. Happy New Year To You and All
January 1st, 2025 17:01
Poetic Licence said:
The search for inner strength is a constant, some have to dig deeper than others but once found we should use it, Well written piece. Happy New Year To You and All
January 1st, 2025 17:01
Prayer
Cassie58 said:
When the wind of change comes and knocks us completely sideways, we need to harvest any strength we can in order to deal with our fall from grace. The sun will always rise and the sun too will continue to set. A prayer can go a long way. Happy new year ris.
January 1st, 2025 15:02
Cassie58 said:
When the wind of change comes and knocks us completely sideways, we need to harvest any strength we can in order to deal with our fall from grace. The sun will always rise and the sun too will continue to set. A prayer can go a long way. Happy new year ris.
January 1st, 2025 15:02
Prayer
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed all we need is the strength to arise from our falls. Good write Rebellion
January 1st, 2025 13:23
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed all we need is the strength to arise from our falls. Good write Rebellion
January 1st, 2025 13:23
Fairytale of Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes true love endures all things, which is a spiritual truth for sure, but the body does not! And a dead body cannot love. “Sadness in God\'s eyes”. Indeed. Anger even! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 23rd, 2024 09:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes true love endures all things, which is a spiritual truth for sure, but the body does not! And a dead body cannot love. “Sadness in God\'s eyes”. Indeed. Anger even! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 23rd, 2024 09:52
Fairytale of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Romance is always played up but in practicality love dies of starvation. A sobering darker poem of love
December 23rd, 2024 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
Romance is always played up but in practicality love dies of starvation. A sobering darker poem of love
December 23rd, 2024 03:58
Fairytale of Love
Poetic Licence said:
A very different and interesting take on the Christmas story, enjoyed the read
December 23rd, 2024 02:39
Poetic Licence said:
A very different and interesting take on the Christmas story, enjoyed the read
December 23rd, 2024 02:39
Parable of Politics
Poetic Licence said:
As much as i dislike all politicians and forms of greed and power, i know that has ever really been achieved by sticking completely to the rules, Another enjoyable powerful read.
December 22nd, 2024 09:23
Poetic Licence said:
As much as i dislike all politicians and forms of greed and power, i know that has ever really been achieved by sticking completely to the rules, Another enjoyable powerful read.
December 22nd, 2024 09:23
Parable of Politics
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah my favorite people ever...politicians. Indeed, power perverts, no doubt about that. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 22nd, 2024 07:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ah my favorite people ever...politicians. Indeed, power perverts, no doubt about that. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
December 22nd, 2024 07:41
Parable of Politics
sorenbarrett said:
Survival of the fittist is the rule but we prefer to break the rule with charity and generosity who is right? Thought provoking write that is powerful in its mesage.
December 22nd, 2024 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Survival of the fittist is the rule but we prefer to break the rule with charity and generosity who is right? Thought provoking write that is powerful in its mesage.
December 22nd, 2024 07:24
Requiem for Real
rhmn_7 said:
I truly hope AI takes us far as you said, interesting perspective!
December 21st, 2024 07:30
rhmn_7 said:
I truly hope AI takes us far as you said, interesting perspective!
December 21st, 2024 07:30
Finding the Right Words
Doggerel Dave said:
There is no option but to keep struggling though. And I\'d be the first to agree that the task isn\'t easy. Particularly here and on paper where contact is remote and devoid of all the signs and signals I receive with direct contact.
So I suppose for me the answer to your neat argument is \'occasionally\'......
December 20th, 2024 16:30
Doggerel Dave said:
There is no option but to keep struggling though. And I\'d be the first to agree that the task isn\'t easy. Particularly here and on paper where contact is remote and devoid of all the signs and signals I receive with direct contact.
So I suppose for me the answer to your neat argument is \'occasionally\'......
December 20th, 2024 16:30
Requiem for Real
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought provoking poem and note, my friend. I am not anti-tech or even anti-AI if used appropriately. To replace human presence, thinking, creativity and creative output...not at all! Oh...and that\'s a hell no on replacing parents! LOL! Though, it might do better than TVs and Smart Devices have! 🤣😭 All jokes aside, well done on this friend. 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 09:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very thought provoking poem and note, my friend. I am not anti-tech or even anti-AI if used appropriately. To replace human presence, thinking, creativity and creative output...not at all! Oh...and that\'s a hell no on replacing parents! LOL! Though, it might do better than TVs and Smart Devices have! 🤣😭 All jokes aside, well done on this friend. 🌹👏
December 20th, 2024 09:22
Requiem for Real
Cassie58 said:
There is no place in literature for AI. It has its place but it can’t replace human emotion. I accept it has its uses, but the thought of AI parents is a nightmare scenario. We are all unique. The future looks cloned. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.
December 20th, 2024 06:57
Cassie58 said:
There is no place in literature for AI. It has its place but it can’t replace human emotion. I accept it has its uses, but the thought of AI parents is a nightmare scenario. We are all unique. The future looks cloned. Enjoyed the read. Thank you.
December 20th, 2024 06:57
Requiem for Real
cellinic said:
A very intelligent and sincere statement. Thank you very much for it. Best wishes,
December 20th, 2024 06:51
cellinic said:
A very intelligent and sincere statement. Thank you very much for it. Best wishes,
December 20th, 2024 06:51
Requiem for Real
Poetic Licence said:
I think some people already have artificial parents without the need for A1, the poem makes you think of what might become, enjoyed the read.
December 20th, 2024 06:26
Poetic Licence said:
I think some people already have artificial parents without the need for A1, the poem makes you think of what might become, enjoyed the read.
December 20th, 2024 06:26
Requiem for Real
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one ponder. What is real and what is not. All in the eye of the beholder
December 20th, 2024 06:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that makes one ponder. What is real and what is not. All in the eye of the beholder
December 20th, 2024 06:15
Finding the Right Words
Neville said:
I felt there is a sadness here .. a sign of the times methinks .. maybe 😎👍
December 19th, 2024 12:28
Neville said:
I felt there is a sadness here .. a sign of the times methinks .. maybe 😎👍
December 19th, 2024 12:28
Finding the Right Words
Poetic Licence said:
I found this quite sad and haunting, with an underlying feeling of emptiness, i could well be wrong. Very well written poem, Thank you
December 19th, 2024 10:35
Poetic Licence said:
I found this quite sad and haunting, with an underlying feeling of emptiness, i could well be wrong. Very well written poem, Thank you
December 19th, 2024 10:35
Finding the Right Words
sorenbarrett said:
The last line says it all. People don\'t listen, they don\'t hear, they don\'t trust. Words the greatest invention of all time have outlived their warrenty and there is no exchange possible anymore. A poignant piece and wonderful write
December 19th, 2024 10:10
sorenbarrett said:
The last line says it all. People don\'t listen, they don\'t hear, they don\'t trust. Words the greatest invention of all time have outlived their warrenty and there is no exchange possible anymore. A poignant piece and wonderful write
December 19th, 2024 10:10
LIFE IN REARVIEW MIRROR
Neville said:
I can see precisely where you are coming from .. this is far more cerebral than one might imagine .. tis but a matter of perspective and the direction of flow .. and your authors note I would have given my eye teeth to have coined first .. 😎👍👍
December 18th, 2024 01:33
Neville said:
I can see precisely where you are coming from .. this is far more cerebral than one might imagine .. tis but a matter of perspective and the direction of flow .. and your authors note I would have given my eye teeth to have coined first .. 😎👍👍
December 18th, 2024 01:33
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