Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
Impermanence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Life is a fleeting whisp of air that blows by in the breeze. Here suddenly then gone...and yes, it is glorious, among other things. Well expressed, my dear friend. This was beautiful! A fave from me.
April 6th, 2025 07:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Life is a fleeting whisp of air that blows by in the breeze. Here suddenly then gone...and yes, it is glorious, among other things. Well expressed, my dear friend. This was beautiful! A fave from me.
April 6th, 2025 07:59
Impermanence
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant!!! The last line of the poem (Life is glorious for being momentary) Psychologically, philosophically, spiritually naturally and scientifically a perfect vector of truth. The timing also set up just right poetically. As if a beacon of light on a stormy sea this one guides the reader home and home to a rocky shore. The realization that there is meaning in the end. One only need ask themselves what would this world be if everything that ever lived was immortal. What would an eternal roll coaster ride be like or eternal pain. For that it is a fave
April 6th, 2025 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant!!! The last line of the poem (Life is glorious for being momentary) Psychologically, philosophically, spiritually naturally and scientifically a perfect vector of truth. The timing also set up just right poetically. As if a beacon of light on a stormy sea this one guides the reader home and home to a rocky shore. The realization that there is meaning in the end. One only need ask themselves what would this world be if everything that ever lived was immortal. What would an eternal roll coaster ride be like or eternal pain. For that it is a fave
April 6th, 2025 06:04
Impermanence
Poetic Licence said:
A very well written and beautiful write, loved it
April 6th, 2025 04:42
Poetic Licence said:
A very well written and beautiful write, loved it
April 6th, 2025 04:42
Sailing on The Flying Dutchman
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am familiar with the Flying Dutchman legend. This, my friend, makes for an excellent poem! Well done!!!
March 30th, 2025 20:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am familiar with the Flying Dutchman legend. This, my friend, makes for an excellent poem! Well done!!!
March 30th, 2025 20:08
Sailing on The Flying Dutchman
Poetic Licence said:
We all try to be and do better, but to much ambition can be a dangerous thing and have devastating effects to those around you and yourself, really nicely written write
March 30th, 2025 11:39
Poetic Licence said:
We all try to be and do better, but to much ambition can be a dangerous thing and have devastating effects to those around you and yourself, really nicely written write
March 30th, 2025 11:39
Sailing on The Flying Dutchman
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of the movie Pirates of the Caribbean the metaphor for ambition works well as pirates are most ambitious in their seeking of treasure and in that quest more die in battle, lost at sea or by hanging than ever achieve their goal. A wonderful write.
March 30th, 2025 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of the movie Pirates of the Caribbean the metaphor for ambition works well as pirates are most ambitious in their seeking of treasure and in that quest more die in battle, lost at sea or by hanging than ever achieve their goal. A wonderful write.
March 30th, 2025 10:39
Fleeting Hope in the Eternal Wave
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Even read literally...friend, this poem is profound! That said, there is much here in way of metaphor to. Just brilliant! 🌹👏 A must fave!
March 29th, 2025 11:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Even read literally...friend, this poem is profound! That said, there is much here in way of metaphor to. Just brilliant! 🌹👏 A must fave!
March 29th, 2025 11:32
Fleeting Hope in the Eternal Wave
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and a mixed feeling of sadness and hope the thrill of being touched and the lingering feeling of being discarded. An eternal cycle is presented in this metaphor of life itself and its perennial ups and downs yet being touched seems enough in a journey of finding one that will give value to what one is. Touching and profound.
March 29th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and a mixed feeling of sadness and hope the thrill of being touched and the lingering feeling of being discarded. An eternal cycle is presented in this metaphor of life itself and its perennial ups and downs yet being touched seems enough in a journey of finding one that will give value to what one is. Touching and profound.
March 29th, 2025 05:23
Fleeting Hope in the Eternal Wave
Poetic Licence said:
Although this has a touch of sadness to it, it is also very positive in its outlook on finding that special person, keeping hope going, nicely written and expressed
March 29th, 2025 04:55
Poetic Licence said:
Although this has a touch of sadness to it, it is also very positive in its outlook on finding that special person, keeping hope going, nicely written and expressed
March 29th, 2025 04:55
In Love You Thrive
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen to this! This is quite a wonderful poem that asks the important questions. And I concur. It often stems from us not love ourselves enough. And when that is the case, we have the damndest time finding love for others too. Well done on this. Profound! 🌹👏
March 28th, 2025 08:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen to this! This is quite a wonderful poem that asks the important questions. And I concur. It often stems from us not love ourselves enough. And when that is the case, we have the damndest time finding love for others too. Well done on this. Profound! 🌹👏
March 28th, 2025 08:05
In Love You Thrive
sorenbarrett said:
The message in this poem is vastly deep and meaningful and it is put in such nice verse and rhyme that it just has to be a fave
March 28th, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
The message in this poem is vastly deep and meaningful and it is put in such nice verse and rhyme that it just has to be a fave
March 28th, 2025 05:08
In Love You Thrive
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write asking a serious question of how much we do love ourselves and is that enough, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 05:08
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write asking a serious question of how much we do love ourselves and is that enough, enjoyed the read
March 28th, 2025 05:08
In Search of You
orchidee said:
I\'ve maybe not grieved enough over someone, yet they were not physically with us in the home for their last month or so, and so we were prepared for whatever was to happen.
March 28th, 2025 03:51
orchidee said:
I\'ve maybe not grieved enough over someone, yet they were not physically with us in the home for their last month or so, and so we were prepared for whatever was to happen.
March 28th, 2025 03:51
In Search of You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The search for perfection is long and windy and, truthfully, and the destination is elusive as all hell. What a beautiful metaphor, beautifully penned, my friend! 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
March 27th, 2025 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The search for perfection is long and windy and, truthfully, and the destination is elusive as all hell. What a beautiful metaphor, beautifully penned, my friend! 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
March 27th, 2025 07:49
In Search of You
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write on the continued search we undertake to find perfection, nicely expressed and written
March 27th, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write on the continued search we undertake to find perfection, nicely expressed and written
March 27th, 2025 04:13
In Search of You
sorenbarrett said:
Trial and error in search of perfection is a long road with many bumps and holes. The quest for the holy grail comes to mind somehow. I too look for buried treasure and once in a while find a penny or two on the road. Great write my friend.
March 27th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Trial and error in search of perfection is a long road with many bumps and holes. The quest for the holy grail comes to mind somehow. I too look for buried treasure and once in a while find a penny or two on the road. Great write my friend.
March 27th, 2025 04:01
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
NafisaSB said:
a truly poignant poem of words left unsaid, and emotions that has scarred the soul. very touching
March 26th, 2025 23:40
NafisaSB said:
a truly poignant poem of words left unsaid, and emotions that has scarred the soul. very touching
March 26th, 2025 23:40
The Outsider\'s Flame
NafisaSB said:
wonderful emotional poem - makes one sit up and think it out for self too
March 23rd, 2025 23:54
NafisaSB said:
wonderful emotional poem - makes one sit up and think it out for self too
March 23rd, 2025 23:54
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
Neville said:
So very dreadfully sad and far too frequently true .. Neville
March 22nd, 2025 04:47
Neville said:
So very dreadfully sad and far too frequently true .. Neville
March 22nd, 2025 04:47
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
whats write for me said:
A truly moving piece, thank you for sharing.
March 20th, 2025 18:46
whats write for me said:
A truly moving piece, thank you for sharing.
March 20th, 2025 18:46
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very heartfelt and, the answer to your question in your comment, no. They don\'t. Well put, and your note asks a great rhetorical question to drive the point home. Well done! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 13:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very heartfelt and, the answer to your question in your comment, no. They don\'t. Well put, and your note asks a great rhetorical question to drive the point home. Well done! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 13:25
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
Poetic Licence said:
Touching and heartfelt write for something that sadly is all to common, for them the battle is just transferred to their head when they return,well written and expressed
March 20th, 2025 13:22
Poetic Licence said:
Touching and heartfelt write for something that sadly is all to common, for them the battle is just transferred to their head when they return,well written and expressed
March 20th, 2025 13:22
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
sorenbarrett said:
Casualties of war are not only bodies but minds and they are not buried or given a funeral but have to be lived with. A powerful write
March 20th, 2025 12:03
sorenbarrett said:
Casualties of war are not only bodies but minds and they are not buried or given a funeral but have to be lived with. A powerful write
March 20th, 2025 12:03
The Outsider\'s Flame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Profound. Those last lines really drive it all home. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Profound. Those last lines really drive it all home. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:35
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