Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
WISH GRANTED
Doggerel Dave said:
Great yarn tinged with irony - enjoyed.
Thinks there may be something in this painting thing, a way forward...... joins an adult education art class......
August 26th, 2025 20:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Great yarn tinged with irony - enjoyed.
Thinks there may be something in this painting thing, a way forward...... joins an adult education art class......
August 26th, 2025 20:51
WISH GRANTED
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is sharp and ironic…the wish flipped on its head, love turned into pursuit of a very different kind. Dark humor at its finest, my friend. Brilliant and thus a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 26th, 2025 14:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is sharp and ironic…the wish flipped on its head, love turned into pursuit of a very different kind. Dark humor at its finest, my friend. Brilliant and thus a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 26th, 2025 14:20
WISH GRANTED
Neville said:
You have incorporated much truth therein .. Take heed folks ..
August 26th, 2025 14:11
Neville said:
You have incorporated much truth therein .. Take heed folks ..
August 26th, 2025 14:11
WISH GRANTED
sorenbarrett said:
So true be careful what one wishes for the consequences may be more than one bargained for. A fun read
August 26th, 2025 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
So true be careful what one wishes for the consequences may be more than one bargained for. A fun read
August 26th, 2025 09:42
George Committed Suicide
Neville said:
Jeez .. I\'ve lost count of how many sad and sorry souls have gone down this very same route .. Say it like it so often is .. and keep saying it so well .. this is a topic that is not going to go away until values and society change .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
August 25th, 2025 10:35
Neville said:
Jeez .. I\'ve lost count of how many sad and sorry souls have gone down this very same route .. Say it like it so often is .. and keep saying it so well .. this is a topic that is not going to go away until values and society change .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
August 25th, 2025 10:35
George Committed Suicide
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment where debt is called “a blessing of the country and not a bane” struck me hard. It’s biting commentary...society preaching survival through ruin. You captured it raw. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my friend!
August 24th, 2025 18:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That moment where debt is called “a blessing of the country and not a bane” struck me hard. It’s biting commentary...society preaching survival through ruin. You captured it raw. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave, my friend!
August 24th, 2025 18:33
George Committed Suicide
Doggerel Dave said:
Great yarn. Made me think - something he should have done better.
August 24th, 2025 16:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Great yarn. Made me think - something he should have done better.
August 24th, 2025 16:35
George Committed Suicide
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem paints a dark picture. It is poignant and troubling in a capitalistic society built on greed and appearance where pressure to excel beyond others is a mark of masculinity, virility and power. Two lines struck me in this poem.
And God said everyone is allocated a quota of happiness.
One should choose how to spend—
Well written and it gives one thought
August 24th, 2025 12:09
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem paints a dark picture. It is poignant and troubling in a capitalistic society built on greed and appearance where pressure to excel beyond others is a mark of masculinity, virility and power. Two lines struck me in this poem.
And God said everyone is allocated a quota of happiness.
One should choose how to spend—
Well written and it gives one thought
August 24th, 2025 12:09
The Mirror Says Aye
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That title grabbed me right away, my friend…and the poem more than lived up to it. Raw, unflinching, and honest to the bone. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That title grabbed me right away, my friend…and the poem more than lived up to it. Raw, unflinching, and honest to the bone. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:06
The Mirror Says Aye
Neville said:
The world, or so much of it these days is just so unjust, its unreal but real if you get my drift like I hope I caught the tail end of yours .. Neville
August 20th, 2025 13:33
Neville said:
The world, or so much of it these days is just so unjust, its unreal but real if you get my drift like I hope I caught the tail end of yours .. Neville
August 20th, 2025 13:33
The Mirror Says Aye
sorenbarrett said:
The only safe designation is one\'s name (if it is a popular one) mine does not count. A not so fun read for the poor but one that I\'m sure the wealthy can find some humor in at our expense. Nicely done
August 20th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
The only safe designation is one\'s name (if it is a popular one) mine does not count. A not so fun read for the poor but one that I\'m sure the wealthy can find some humor in at our expense. Nicely done
August 20th, 2025 10:44
Dead-man\'s Chest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Brilliant, my friend. That image of white cranes flying…that’s the one that lingers for me. It’s a release after all the heaviness, like air filling lungs again. A striking close to a striking poem, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Brilliant, my friend. That image of white cranes flying…that’s the one that lingers for me. It’s a release after all the heaviness, like air filling lungs again. A striking close to a striking poem, my friend. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:10
Dead-man\'s Chest
Neville said:
The main body of your poem conjures up so very many images & these titillate and elsewise play with this readers senses .. You ask a very interesting question within your authors footnote .. I\'m not sure I know either .. I guess it depends on the situation at any given time .. Neville
August 18th, 2025 11:03
Neville said:
The main body of your poem conjures up so very many images & these titillate and elsewise play with this readers senses .. You ask a very interesting question within your authors footnote .. I\'m not sure I know either .. I guess it depends on the situation at any given time .. Neville
August 18th, 2025 11:03
Dead-man\'s Chest
Poetic Licence said:
Cynicism a leathal weapon, that causes untold and sometimes unrepairable damage, maybe a kind word to the heart might heal, but not always, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 09:41
Poetic Licence said:
Cynicism a leathal weapon, that causes untold and sometimes unrepairable damage, maybe a kind word to the heart might heal, but not always, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 09:41
Dead-man\'s Chest
sorenbarrett said:
Cynicism a cutting knife that can leave wounds and scars. A most questioning poem
August 18th, 2025 09:19
sorenbarrett said:
Cynicism a cutting knife that can leave wounds and scars. A most questioning poem
August 18th, 2025 09:19
I Called My Wild
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one feels heavy with shadow, yet it carries a flicker at the end that refuses to die out…your wild falling silent, anger stepping in, and then that final remembrance of belief keeping the spark alive. This is both dark and raw, yet still with a glint hope...like the cracking of sunlight in the early dawn. Strongly written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 19:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This one feels heavy with shadow, yet it carries a flicker at the end that refuses to die out…your wild falling silent, anger stepping in, and then that final remembrance of belief keeping the spark alive. This is both dark and raw, yet still with a glint hope...like the cracking of sunlight in the early dawn. Strongly written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 19:06
I Called My Wild
Tony Grannell said:
A journey through the emotional struggle of a life lived in the heartfelt efforts to understand the self in a superlative passage of poetry. At that moment, \'someone believed in me\', grasps the reader with a beautiful truth and faith to go on living with a smile. This poem is deserving of much praise as is its author. Very well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 17:00
Tony Grannell said:
A journey through the emotional struggle of a life lived in the heartfelt efforts to understand the self in a superlative passage of poetry. At that moment, \'someone believed in me\', grasps the reader with a beautiful truth and faith to go on living with a smile. This poem is deserving of much praise as is its author. Very well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 17:00
I Called My Wild
Neville said:
To remain young for always is of course impossible but oh to be forever free .. now that\'s something else entirely .. You got me thinking Reb .. thank you
August 17th, 2025 12:02
Neville said:
To remain young for always is of course impossible but oh to be forever free .. now that\'s something else entirely .. You got me thinking Reb .. thank you
August 17th, 2025 12:02
I Called My Wild
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write detailing what the reasons are that give struggling in this world a purpose, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 11:20
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write detailing what the reasons are that give struggling in this world a purpose, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 11:20
I Called My Wild
sorenbarrett said:
The reason we live for explored in this poem. Memories, love, good that others perceive, influence we have, the smiles we get. A wonderful poem
August 17th, 2025 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
The reason we live for explored in this poem. Memories, love, good that others perceive, influence we have, the smiles we get. A wonderful poem
August 17th, 2025 09:08
Do You Belong?
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This felt to me like a drifting meditation between belonging and release…earth, rain, and stars all folding into the question of place. The quiet turns of thought make the ending feel like a deep breath. Very beautifully done, my friend. A fave from me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2025 10:14
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This felt to me like a drifting meditation between belonging and release…earth, rain, and stars all folding into the question of place. The quiet turns of thought make the ending feel like a deep breath. Very beautifully done, my friend. A fave from me. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 15th, 2025 10:14
Do You Belong?
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you portray the \"essence of being\" in this poem. Your musings are beautifully rendered and quite profound. Thank you for sharing this gem!
August 15th, 2025 08:09
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you portray the \"essence of being\" in this poem. Your musings are beautifully rendered and quite profound. Thank you for sharing this gem!
August 15th, 2025 08:09
Do You Belong?
Poetic Licence said:
A mind on the move, constantly thinking and pondering its existence and your own existence, nicely expressed and written
August 15th, 2025 07:55
Poetic Licence said:
A mind on the move, constantly thinking and pondering its existence and your own existence, nicely expressed and written
August 15th, 2025 07:55
Do You Belong?
Neville said:
I sense you knew exactly where you were heading .. maybe not write from the off but shortly thereafter .. I could read this over again and listen to relics or obscured by clouds any day of the week .. Neville 😎👍
August 15th, 2025 07:30
Neville said:
I sense you knew exactly where you were heading .. maybe not write from the off but shortly thereafter .. I could read this over again and listen to relics or obscured by clouds any day of the week .. Neville 😎👍
August 15th, 2025 07:30
Do You Belong?
sorenbarrett said:
A question that lurks in the back of the mind fluttering in and out of the shadows. A haunting and otherworldly feel to this poem
August 15th, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
A question that lurks in the back of the mind fluttering in and out of the shadows. A haunting and otherworldly feel to this poem
August 15th, 2025 06:47
The Best Sparrow Is a Dead Sparrow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A political fable sharpened to a blade…dark, unflinching, and unwilling to let silence be mistaken for peace. The sparrow imagery makes the critique both vivid and haunting. Really srong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 12:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A political fable sharpened to a blade…dark, unflinching, and unwilling to let silence be mistaken for peace. The sparrow imagery makes the critique both vivid and haunting. Really srong work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 14th, 2025 12:15
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