Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
In Search of You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The search for perfection is long and windy and, truthfully, and the destination is elusive as all hell. What a beautiful metaphor, beautifully penned, my friend! 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
March 27th, 2025 07:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
The search for perfection is long and windy and, truthfully, and the destination is elusive as all hell. What a beautiful metaphor, beautifully penned, my friend! 🌹👏 A fave for sure.
March 27th, 2025 07:49
In Search of You
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write on the continued search we undertake to find perfection, nicely expressed and written
March 27th, 2025 04:13
Poetic Licence said:
A lovely write on the continued search we undertake to find perfection, nicely expressed and written
March 27th, 2025 04:13
In Search of You
sorenbarrett said:
Trial and error in search of perfection is a long road with many bumps and holes. The quest for the holy grail comes to mind somehow. I too look for buried treasure and once in a while find a penny or two on the road. Great write my friend.
March 27th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Trial and error in search of perfection is a long road with many bumps and holes. The quest for the holy grail comes to mind somehow. I too look for buried treasure and once in a while find a penny or two on the road. Great write my friend.
March 27th, 2025 04:01
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
NafisaSB said:
a truly poignant poem of words left unsaid, and emotions that has scarred the soul. very touching
March 26th, 2025 23:40
NafisaSB said:
a truly poignant poem of words left unsaid, and emotions that has scarred the soul. very touching
March 26th, 2025 23:40
The Outsider\'s Flame
NafisaSB said:
wonderful emotional poem - makes one sit up and think it out for self too
March 23rd, 2025 23:54
NafisaSB said:
wonderful emotional poem - makes one sit up and think it out for self too
March 23rd, 2025 23:54
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
Neville said:
So very dreadfully sad and far too frequently true .. Neville
March 22nd, 2025 04:47
Neville said:
So very dreadfully sad and far too frequently true .. Neville
March 22nd, 2025 04:47
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
whats write for me said:
A truly moving piece, thank you for sharing.
March 20th, 2025 18:46
whats write for me said:
A truly moving piece, thank you for sharing.
March 20th, 2025 18:46
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very heartfelt and, the answer to your question in your comment, no. They don\'t. Well put, and your note asks a great rhetorical question to drive the point home. Well done! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 13:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Very heartfelt and, the answer to your question in your comment, no. They don\'t. Well put, and your note asks a great rhetorical question to drive the point home. Well done! 🌹👏
March 20th, 2025 13:25
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
Poetic Licence said:
Touching and heartfelt write for something that sadly is all to common, for them the battle is just transferred to their head when they return,well written and expressed
March 20th, 2025 13:22
Poetic Licence said:
Touching and heartfelt write for something that sadly is all to common, for them the battle is just transferred to their head when they return,well written and expressed
March 20th, 2025 13:22
The Ghost in the Dog Tag
sorenbarrett said:
Casualties of war are not only bodies but minds and they are not buried or given a funeral but have to be lived with. A powerful write
March 20th, 2025 12:03
sorenbarrett said:
Casualties of war are not only bodies but minds and they are not buried or given a funeral but have to be lived with. A powerful write
March 20th, 2025 12:03
The Outsider\'s Flame
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Profound. Those last lines really drive it all home. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:35
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Profound. Those last lines really drive it all home. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
March 15th, 2025 14:35
The Outsider\'s Flame
sorenbarrett said:
The fire of anger burns a firebreak preventing love to spread. Both are fire that fight each other leaving only ashes of what\'s dead. Such great metaphor that plays off of each other in this poem. Beneath the surface great truth and wisdom of emotions out of control that leave devastation for both the hater and the one loved. Burning down one\'s own house is not a good resolution. Very nice a fave
March 15th, 2025 07:20
sorenbarrett said:
The fire of anger burns a firebreak preventing love to spread. Both are fire that fight each other leaving only ashes of what\'s dead. Such great metaphor that plays off of each other in this poem. Beneath the surface great truth and wisdom of emotions out of control that leave devastation for both the hater and the one loved. Burning down one\'s own house is not a good resolution. Very nice a fave
March 15th, 2025 07:20
The Outsider\'s Flame
Poetic Licence said:
A dangerous emotion anger if left to go unchecked, nicely expressed and written write
March 15th, 2025 06:49
Poetic Licence said:
A dangerous emotion anger if left to go unchecked, nicely expressed and written write
March 15th, 2025 06:49
The Rocking Chair
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful, my friend! Visceral imagery and there\'s a haunting poignancy to it. Well done! 🌹👏
March 10th, 2025 22:20
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful, my friend! Visceral imagery and there\'s a haunting poignancy to it. Well done! 🌹👏
March 10th, 2025 22:20
Liberation
Neville said:
It costs nothing does it, but it\'s priceless & not always the easiest thing to maintain .. thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:42
Neville said:
It costs nothing does it, but it\'s priceless & not always the easiest thing to maintain .. thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:42
The Rocking Chair
Neville said:
So very sad .. the sense of hopelessness and helplessness pervades the page on which these words sit purposefully .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:37
Neville said:
So very sad .. the sense of hopelessness and helplessness pervades the page on which these words sit purposefully .. Neville
March 9th, 2025 13:37
Liberation
Cassie58 said:
We develop our insecurities and demons over time. To be liberated from all and to experience life to the absolute maximum is a dream for most people. That freedom comes with confidence and strength and maybe prayer plays a significant part in it for those with a strong faith. We have one life, most wish to live it to the full. I hope you achieve your aims. I enjoyed your words.
March 9th, 2025 10:54
Cassie58 said:
We develop our insecurities and demons over time. To be liberated from all and to experience life to the absolute maximum is a dream for most people. That freedom comes with confidence and strength and maybe prayer plays a significant part in it for those with a strong faith. We have one life, most wish to live it to the full. I hope you achieve your aims. I enjoyed your words.
March 9th, 2025 10:54
The Rocking Chair
Cassie58 said:
Such sadness in this poem. It reminds me very much of my visits to the nursing home to see my aunt. Old ladies sitting in chairs, gazing out of the window , expressionless. No visits, no love in their lives, waiting to die. The end of the line. If it was me, I would pray for my heart to stop. Powerfully delivered, with such a sense of hopelessness. Well done RIS.
March 9th, 2025 07:30
Cassie58 said:
Such sadness in this poem. It reminds me very much of my visits to the nursing home to see my aunt. Old ladies sitting in chairs, gazing out of the window , expressionless. No visits, no love in their lives, waiting to die. The end of the line. If it was me, I would pray for my heart to stop. Powerfully delivered, with such a sense of hopelessness. Well done RIS.
March 9th, 2025 07:30
The Rocking Chair
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well written powerful and sad piece of writing, with a strong of having no hope
March 9th, 2025 05:53
Poetic Licence said:
That is a very well written powerful and sad piece of writing, with a strong of having no hope
March 9th, 2025 05:53
The Rocking Chair
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of avoidance and the consequences and if life is all that is desired it works. This poem sets the mood and leaves a sense of hopelessness. Very well written
March 9th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of avoidance and the consequences and if life is all that is desired it works. This poem sets the mood and leaves a sense of hopelessness. Very well written
March 9th, 2025 03:42
Liberation
Poetic Licence said:
I want to be released from my demons and experience the world, you can feel the call in this write, nicely written
March 7th, 2025 05:17
Poetic Licence said:
I want to be released from my demons and experience the world, you can feel the call in this write, nicely written
March 7th, 2025 05:17
Liberation
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to be able to experience all. I too feel this urge to see what there is to see. Nicely written
March 7th, 2025 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
A plea to be able to experience all. I too feel this urge to see what there is to see. Nicely written
March 7th, 2025 04:26
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