Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
In Search of the Real Me
Doggerel Dave said:
Change is hard but that\'s no reason to be too hard on yourself. You lashed yourself with style and strength, I think.
November 20th, 2024 08:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Change is hard but that\'s no reason to be too hard on yourself. You lashed yourself with style and strength, I think.
November 20th, 2024 08:42
In Search of the Real Me
sorenbarrett said:
Deep self reflection is evidenced in this poem. A haunting questioning of the past and where it has led beautifully worded.
November 20th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
Deep self reflection is evidenced in this poem. A haunting questioning of the past and where it has led beautifully worded.
November 20th, 2024 05:41
The Wrongs - They Were Right
sorenbarrett said:
A most splendid concept that I hold as well that all choices take us to the same mountain top some by pain and others by joy there is no wrong choice only ones that take longer and hurt more.
November 5th, 2024 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
A most splendid concept that I hold as well that all choices take us to the same mountain top some by pain and others by joy there is no wrong choice only ones that take longer and hurt more.
November 5th, 2024 05:03
SWIMMING IN MORONIC DREAMS
sorenbarrett said:
An so were named the seas and moon anciently, the moon a she the sun a he it makes total sense to me. Great poem my friend
October 29th, 2024 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
An so were named the seas and moon anciently, the moon a she the sun a he it makes total sense to me. Great poem my friend
October 29th, 2024 08:14
THE SNAKES INTERWINE
Doggerel Dave said:
Right – so here’s my take (I think it parallels yours, but if not, you know where to find me):
Truth is contingent upon time and place. No such thing as ultimate truth (and I’m not talking about truths swimming around in a thought disordered mind). Truth inevitably changes as more knowledge and insight is accrued over “the passage of time”. Don’t know why I started this…you had it there from the start.
October 28th, 2024 00:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Right – so here’s my take (I think it parallels yours, but if not, you know where to find me):
Truth is contingent upon time and place. No such thing as ultimate truth (and I’m not talking about truths swimming around in a thought disordered mind). Truth inevitably changes as more knowledge and insight is accrued over “the passage of time”. Don’t know why I started this…you had it there from the start.
October 28th, 2024 00:39
We Say We Don\'t But We Love Wars
Doggerel Dave said:
\"War was and always will be
Fought for power, dominance
And MONEY above all\" Yes, double Yes. A truth summed up without bullshit.
October 27th, 2024 06:36
Doggerel Dave said:
\"War was and always will be
Fought for power, dominance
And MONEY above all\" Yes, double Yes. A truth summed up without bullshit.
October 27th, 2024 06:36
THE SNAKES INTERWINE
sorenbarrett said:
I love this topic so phiosophical it is ripe for poetic expression and metaphor. Love your metaphor of shadows and the one of snakes and how you relate them. Snakes related to evil can on the other hand be not only beguilers but good in eating vermin. Their sedding of skin is like the changing of truth to a lie or vice versa truth changes over time indeed. Very nicely done my friend
October 27th, 2024 05:41
sorenbarrett said:
I love this topic so phiosophical it is ripe for poetic expression and metaphor. Love your metaphor of shadows and the one of snakes and how you relate them. Snakes related to evil can on the other hand be not only beguilers but good in eating vermin. Their sedding of skin is like the changing of truth to a lie or vice versa truth changes over time indeed. Very nicely done my friend
October 27th, 2024 05:41
XENOPHOBIC PATRIOT
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this! Excellent write on the consequences of nationalism and xenophobia. Thank you for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 22:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this! Excellent write on the consequences of nationalism and xenophobia. Thank you for sharing.
October 26th, 2024 22:15
XENOPHOBIC PATRIOT
Doggerel Dave said:
On the subject of Patriotism I can only concur. But with care - there are folks here.......
October 26th, 2024 22:06
Doggerel Dave said:
On the subject of Patriotism I can only concur. But with care - there are folks here.......
October 26th, 2024 22:06
XENOPHOBIC PATRIOT
sorenbarrett said:
Glad to see this Rebellion it takes courage to post controversial writes and this tells the story of prejudice in a satirical manner. Here the absurdity of how people believe their their God condones the killing of others. A great challenge of peoples beliefs where art\'s aim is to raise awareness of inequities, injustices and the absurdity of commonly accepted conventions. Great job
October 26th, 2024 09:22
sorenbarrett said:
Glad to see this Rebellion it takes courage to post controversial writes and this tells the story of prejudice in a satirical manner. Here the absurdity of how people believe their their God condones the killing of others. A great challenge of peoples beliefs where art\'s aim is to raise awareness of inequities, injustices and the absurdity of commonly accepted conventions. Great job
October 26th, 2024 09:22
EMPTY RHYTHM
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t know whether to take this as a comment on the media or religion. Nicely said my friend
October 23rd, 2024 12:45
sorenbarrett said:
Don\'t know whether to take this as a comment on the media or religion. Nicely said my friend
October 23rd, 2024 12:45
TRUE FRIEND
sorenbarrett said:
Love yourself then you can love someone else. Know yourself then you can know someone else. Great write
October 22nd, 2024 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
Love yourself then you can love someone else. Know yourself then you can know someone else. Great write
October 22nd, 2024 09:18
GUILTY AS SIN
sorenbarrett said:
A new New Testament written on a dollar bill and prophesized by Jeff Bezos have Amazon send me a copy. Truth that gives meaning to the phrase In God We Trust.
October 21st, 2024 10:21
sorenbarrett said:
A new New Testament written on a dollar bill and prophesized by Jeff Bezos have Amazon send me a copy. Truth that gives meaning to the phrase In God We Trust.
October 21st, 2024 10:21
SLAVE MASTER OF SLAVES
Bobby O said:
It needs more cause in effect. And this is just my opinion but slave/ slavers is a real downer as a topic so I’m guessing people will see the title and skip it. Plus yiu font real create a string image ifca Skave and you just state things instead of offering examples of event that led there. Judy dump it and oick a better topic
October 18th, 2024 03:40
Bobby O said:
It needs more cause in effect. And this is just my opinion but slave/ slavers is a real downer as a topic so I’m guessing people will see the title and skip it. Plus yiu font real create a string image ifca Skave and you just state things instead of offering examples of event that led there. Judy dump it and oick a better topic
October 18th, 2024 03:40
SLAVE MASTER OF SLAVES
sorenbarrett said:
I guess we are all in the same boat setting the course and beating the drum while rowing to the lash of our own hand
October 16th, 2024 10:35
sorenbarrett said:
I guess we are all in the same boat setting the course and beating the drum while rowing to the lash of our own hand
October 16th, 2024 10:35
A STROLL WITH FATE
Bobby O said:
I get it. But maybe those really aren’t questions but rather a disquiet for futile realizations ?
October 16th, 2024 04:19
Bobby O said:
I get it. But maybe those really aren’t questions but rather a disquiet for futile realizations ?
October 16th, 2024 04:19
A STROLL WITH FATE
sorenbarrett said:
To those that believe in God it is hard to understand why prayers are not answered the way they want.Eitherhe has greater wisdom or isn\'t listening
October 15th, 2024 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
To those that believe in God it is hard to understand why prayers are not answered the way they want.Eitherhe has greater wisdom or isn\'t listening
October 15th, 2024 14:24
A STROLL WITH FATE
peet said:
Life is one of the biggest mysteries and cannot be understood in one lifetime. Sounds funny ? Great lines there.
October 15th, 2024 13:19
peet said:
Life is one of the biggest mysteries and cannot be understood in one lifetime. Sounds funny ? Great lines there.
October 15th, 2024 13:19
LONE WOLF ON THE PROWL
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor cast in a dark skin covered in creepy raiment. Great for the season. Surreal indeed.
October 14th, 2024 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor cast in a dark skin covered in creepy raiment. Great for the season. Surreal indeed.
October 14th, 2024 05:11
WIND OF FATE
sorenbarrett said:
As a young person I had lucid dreams of flying and there was nothing better I could hear it in this poem. I know the metaphor is more but found this impressive
October 13th, 2024 15:31
sorenbarrett said:
As a young person I had lucid dreams of flying and there was nothing better I could hear it in this poem. I know the metaphor is more but found this impressive
October 13th, 2024 15:31
THE MASTER\'S GOLD
sorenbarrett said:
Oppression by wealth is what we suffer today. Marx madhis plea but as you can see it didn\'t work out his way. For a start you must change the heart of the people before the rulers. Greed is the seed that comes before the foolers. A powerful write that tells it as it is in metaphor and history.
October 12th, 2024 13:57
sorenbarrett said:
Oppression by wealth is what we suffer today. Marx madhis plea but as you can see it didn\'t work out his way. For a start you must change the heart of the people before the rulers. Greed is the seed that comes before the foolers. A powerful write that tells it as it is in metaphor and history.
October 12th, 2024 13:57
THE MASTER\'S GOLD
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, this poem is a powerful indictment of systemic oppression and the complex relationship between faith and economic power. Your vivid imagery is haunting, especially the line \"Rivulets running on crisscrossed riverbeds.\" The alliteration here is masterful, driving home the brutality of the whip lash. I can almost see, hear, and feel it – truly visceral writing. Also, the progression from hope in divine intervention to the realization of wealth\'s corrupting influence is expertly crafted, and tragically true. Your final stanza\'s action call transforms the piece from a lament to a rallying cry. In my humble opinion, this really leaves a lasting impact. This is thought-provoking poetry at its finest. Well done. I am so happy I stumbled upon it.
October 12th, 2024 10:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, this poem is a powerful indictment of systemic oppression and the complex relationship between faith and economic power. Your vivid imagery is haunting, especially the line \"Rivulets running on crisscrossed riverbeds.\" The alliteration here is masterful, driving home the brutality of the whip lash. I can almost see, hear, and feel it – truly visceral writing. Also, the progression from hope in divine intervention to the realization of wealth\'s corrupting influence is expertly crafted, and tragically true. Your final stanza\'s action call transforms the piece from a lament to a rallying cry. In my humble opinion, this really leaves a lasting impact. This is thought-provoking poetry at its finest. Well done. I am so happy I stumbled upon it.
October 12th, 2024 10:52
Eternal Journey
sorenbarrett said:
You have captured in this poem manyof my feelings might I say beleifs and put them into a personal story that winds its way through nature\'s beauty finding its resting place in rebirth through the nature that it descibes. Masterful!!
October 11th, 2024 07:48
sorenbarrett said:
You have captured in this poem manyof my feelings might I say beleifs and put them into a personal story that winds its way through nature\'s beauty finding its resting place in rebirth through the nature that it descibes. Masterful!!
October 11th, 2024 07:48
In Love With The Party Flag
sorenbarrett said:
Too many follow the crowd. Too many look to be a hero without knowing what they fight for. To know oneself and be able to stand up for what you are is the hero. A beautiful poem crafted with care to apply to all. Carefully chosen words make this poem what it is.
October 11th, 2024 07:36
sorenbarrett said:
Too many follow the crowd. Too many look to be a hero without knowing what they fight for. To know oneself and be able to stand up for what you are is the hero. A beautiful poem crafted with care to apply to all. Carefully chosen words make this poem what it is.
October 11th, 2024 07:36
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