Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
Societal Morality
NafisaSB said:
now that is a very loaded question - and a person like me who tries to say it as it is - but in the nicest way, without hurting, this is a real poser
October 29th, 2025 07:38
NafisaSB said:
now that is a very loaded question - and a person like me who tries to say it as it is - but in the nicest way, without hurting, this is a real poser
October 29th, 2025 07:38
Shine of Overdraft
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve felt that same manufactured rhythm…doing everything right, only to have the rug pulled anyway. You name the numbness perfectly. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2025 07:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve felt that same manufactured rhythm…doing everything right, only to have the rug pulled anyway. You name the numbness perfectly. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2025 07:45
Shine of Overdraft
sorenbarrett said:
Insecurity has always been in the wind. No game today to fill the pot, crop failure, war brewing, plundered, failing economy, replaced by younger workers. Now it is AI another form or machinery that has replaced the worker since the industrial revolution.
October 28th, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Insecurity has always been in the wind. No game today to fill the pot, crop failure, war brewing, plundered, failing economy, replaced by younger workers. Now it is AI another form or machinery that has replaced the worker since the industrial revolution.
October 28th, 2025 05:27
Shine of Overdraft
Doggerel Dave said:
An introduction to the life of a wage slave.
The rest of the day too demoralizing to relate?
Not a good position perfectly related.
October 28th, 2025 05:06
Doggerel Dave said:
An introduction to the life of a wage slave.
The rest of the day too demoralizing to relate?
Not a good position perfectly related.
October 28th, 2025 05:06
Societal Morality
Neville said:
I was not expecting the ending .. but I think this might well be your finest post to date .. of those I have visited anyway .. Neville 😎👍
October 25th, 2025 03:56
Neville said:
I was not expecting the ending .. but I think this might well be your finest post to date .. of those I have visited anyway .. Neville 😎👍
October 25th, 2025 03:56
Societal Morality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve wrestled with that same conflict…truth or performance, courage or comfort. You caught the human struggle perfectly. Very well-written! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 20:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve wrestled with that same conflict…truth or performance, courage or comfort. You caught the human struggle perfectly. Very well-written! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 20:04
Societal Morality
Doggerel Dave said:
I see this in very concrete terms; a meeting I’m compelled to attend monthly. An item with some moral overtones (or perhaps undertones) up for discussion. Two participants with very different politics work at it hard, while the rest of the meeting paint themselves into the wall as wallpaper…..Your piece is extremely real for me but know that your position, as configured there is the majority.
October 24th, 2025 19:54
Doggerel Dave said:
I see this in very concrete terms; a meeting I’m compelled to attend monthly. An item with some moral overtones (or perhaps undertones) up for discussion. Two participants with very different politics work at it hard, while the rest of the meeting paint themselves into the wall as wallpaper…..Your piece is extremely real for me but know that your position, as configured there is the majority.
October 24th, 2025 19:54
Societal Morality
Poetic Licence said:
You\'re writing is a real pleasure to read these day, very nicely written
October 24th, 2025 13:48
Poetic Licence said:
You\'re writing is a real pleasure to read these day, very nicely written
October 24th, 2025 13:48
Societal Morality
sorenbarrett said:
This freestyle poem has a deep message to all. An angel coated rot of hypocrisy vs a devil through and through, now there\'s a choice for ya. I would rather let the public see my worm eaten flaws than cover them up and let them fester. Nicely written and a fave
October 24th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
This freestyle poem has a deep message to all. An angel coated rot of hypocrisy vs a devil through and through, now there\'s a choice for ya. I would rather let the public see my worm eaten flaws than cover them up and let them fester. Nicely written and a fave
October 24th, 2025 10:54
Another Birth Passage Conquered
Poetic Licence said:
Very well thought out write addressing the horrifying and sickening issue of rape. I have no tolerance or understanding why any person inflicts this on anyone, to me there are excuses, contributing factors etc, there is no justification. Very well written
October 16th, 2025 18:40
Poetic Licence said:
Very well thought out write addressing the horrifying and sickening issue of rape. I have no tolerance or understanding why any person inflicts this on anyone, to me there are excuses, contributing factors etc, there is no justification. Very well written
October 16th, 2025 18:40
Another Birth Passage Conquered
Neville said:
It is as clear to see as the nose on my face, you are not only a wordsmith 10th dan but also in incredibly empathic, astute and honourable man .. & o kidding .. Neville 👍😎👍+ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
October 13th, 2025 02:13
Neville said:
It is as clear to see as the nose on my face, you are not only a wordsmith 10th dan but also in incredibly empathic, astute and honourable man .. & o kidding .. Neville 👍😎👍+ ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
October 13th, 2025 02:13
Another Birth Passage Conquered
Doggerel Dave said:
Cannot fault your revulsion to rape in all the forms you’ve listed here – nor the hypocrisy, greed and dissemblance which helps perpetuate it. The edgy cynicism which rounds it off provides a necessary critique of apathy.
Great write.
October 12th, 2025 16:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Cannot fault your revulsion to rape in all the forms you’ve listed here – nor the hypocrisy, greed and dissemblance which helps perpetuate it. The edgy cynicism which rounds it off provides a necessary critique of apathy.
Great write.
October 12th, 2025 16:54
Another Birth Passage Conquered
Paul Bell said:
Ye, raped, and in some cases, re-raped in court.
For years, monsters have been getting away with it.
If it was your sister or girlfriend, most of the time, you would make sure it never happened again.
October 12th, 2025 14:45
Paul Bell said:
Ye, raped, and in some cases, re-raped in court.
For years, monsters have been getting away with it.
If it was your sister or girlfriend, most of the time, you would make sure it never happened again.
October 12th, 2025 14:45
Another Birth Passage Conquered
sorenbarrett said:
I love the mix and blend of different types of rape in this poem. The use of word play (phalanx for phallus is master level) The use of sexually equated words (discharged) The individual is raped, the economy, the justice system all of society with meager excuses and justification by the perpetrator and observer. A well thought out poetic write. A fave
October 12th, 2025 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
I love the mix and blend of different types of rape in this poem. The use of word play (phalanx for phallus is master level) The use of sexually equated words (discharged) The individual is raped, the economy, the justice system all of society with meager excuses and justification by the perpetrator and observer. A well thought out poetic write. A fave
October 12th, 2025 06:42
TV Dinner with Chilled Beer
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang. Nicely put. Unfortunately it\'s such the existence of so many people nowadays. People try running from the big question WHY AM I HERE, and instead live brain mush day to day unhappy convinced life is great
October 10th, 2025 11:29
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang. Nicely put. Unfortunately it\'s such the existence of so many people nowadays. People try running from the big question WHY AM I HERE, and instead live brain mush day to day unhappy convinced life is great
October 10th, 2025 11:29
I Remained Unplugged
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rebellion, this is sharp and playful. Beneath the humor and wordplay, you caught the Moravia thread...consumerism, sexuality, and the absence of patience in a shallow age. Strong, witty piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 21:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rebellion, this is sharp and playful. Beneath the humor and wordplay, you caught the Moravia thread...consumerism, sexuality, and the absence of patience in a shallow age. Strong, witty piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 3rd, 2025 21:10
I Remained Unplugged
Doggerel Dave said:
They were doing the best they could...... I suppose.....
October 3rd, 2025 17:23
Doggerel Dave said:
They were doing the best they could...... I suppose.....
October 3rd, 2025 17:23
I Remained Unplugged
sorenbarrett said:
Love wordplay and the idiosyncrasies of language and this is a stone cold example. A fave
October 3rd, 2025 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
Love wordplay and the idiosyncrasies of language and this is a stone cold example. A fave
October 3rd, 2025 08:47
The One Who Questioned
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is satirical, and deeply reflective. Nicely written.
September 19th, 2025 15:41
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is satirical, and deeply reflective. Nicely written.
September 19th, 2025 15:41
The One Who Questioned
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Just 🤯! My friend, this is searing…a relentless build from the boy’s quiet conviction to the mob’s brutal silencing. That repeated “What is freedom?” echoes long after the close. And the irony at the end stings…powerful, fearless work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I’m in awe!
September 19th, 2025 15:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow. Just 🤯! My friend, this is searing…a relentless build from the boy’s quiet conviction to the mob’s brutal silencing. That repeated “What is freedom?” echoes long after the close. And the irony at the end stings…powerful, fearless work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ I’m in awe!
September 19th, 2025 15:28
The One Who Questioned
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet, this brought a lump to my throat and a profound sadness, for its unnerving truth. All too often, freedom is looked upon as something that satisfies personl desires, but is not extended to those who think differently. This poem lands a punch, right in the middle of the conscience, well done!!
September 19th, 2025 08:47
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet, this brought a lump to my throat and a profound sadness, for its unnerving truth. All too often, freedom is looked upon as something that satisfies personl desires, but is not extended to those who think differently. This poem lands a punch, right in the middle of the conscience, well done!!
September 19th, 2025 08:47
The One Who Questioned
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic parable where in freedom we suffer the consequences of others the do now believe in it. Conformity is the formula of society whether bee, ant, or human variation from social norms results in expulsion, banishment or even death. It is in that choice that freedom resides. Lovely
September 19th, 2025 03:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic parable where in freedom we suffer the consequences of others the do now believe in it. Conformity is the formula of society whether bee, ant, or human variation from social norms results in expulsion, banishment or even death. It is in that choice that freedom resides. Lovely
September 19th, 2025 03:42
Cuboid Face and The Mom
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is powerful, my friend. The fear you paint...cuboid face, snake uncoiled, neon city drowning reality...it all presses like a nightmare, chaotic and relentless. But the turn is everything. That single kick in her belly collapses the dread, pulling her back to what matters. A mother’s priorities don’t erase fear, but they anchor her against it, stronger than the illusions around her. You captured that shift so profoundly, my friend. Love this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is powerful, my friend. The fear you paint...cuboid face, snake uncoiled, neon city drowning reality...it all presses like a nightmare, chaotic and relentless. But the turn is everything. That single kick in her belly collapses the dread, pulling her back to what matters. A mother’s priorities don’t erase fear, but they anchor her against it, stronger than the illusions around her. You captured that shift so profoundly, my friend. Love this! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 18th, 2025 18:22
Cuboid Face and The Mom
sorenbarrett said:
The poem picks at the brain with its symbolism. The snake a pregnancy and child. Is the snake phalic or satanic or does it portend wisdom is the question. Was the bite impregnation or am I digging too deep. Does stepping out of the picture symbolize stepping out of reality or into it after a vision? Questions the tumble in the mind.
September 18th, 2025 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
The poem picks at the brain with its symbolism. The snake a pregnancy and child. Is the snake phalic or satanic or does it portend wisdom is the question. Was the bite impregnation or am I digging too deep. Does stepping out of the picture symbolize stepping out of reality or into it after a vision? Questions the tumble in the mind.
September 18th, 2025 10:51
Cuboid Face and The Mom
Fred1794 said:
Intriguing. Allowing your unborn child to ground you into reality, having to be strong for them. What are your thoughts whilst writing this if you do not mind my asking?
September 18th, 2025 10:29
Fred1794 said:
Intriguing. Allowing your unborn child to ground you into reality, having to be strong for them. What are your thoughts whilst writing this if you do not mind my asking?
September 18th, 2025 10:29
Pompous....F
Fred1794 said:
Humorous. Reminds me of reading or hearing bad reviews about yourself and snarkily shutting them down behind the screen, or perhaps their back.
September 17th, 2025 20:50
Fred1794 said:
Humorous. Reminds me of reading or hearing bad reviews about yourself and snarkily shutting them down behind the screen, or perhaps their back.
September 17th, 2025 20:50
Pompous....F
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Clever, satirical, and richly self-aware. It humorously critiques the sometimes arbitrary and contradictory judgments of literary experts. Lovely written poetry. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:05
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Clever, satirical, and richly self-aware. It humorously critiques the sometimes arbitrary and contradictory judgments of literary experts. Lovely written poetry. ✨
September 17th, 2025 14:05
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