Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
Taxation of Credulity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rebellion… this hits hard. The bite, the satire, the way you peel every system back to the same empty core… it lands. The ending question keeps echoing… because you’re right to ask it. Very, very well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 27th, 2025 07:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rebellion… this hits hard. The bite, the satire, the way you peel every system back to the same empty core… it lands. The ending question keeps echoing… because you’re right to ask it. Very, very well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 27th, 2025 07:39
Taxation of Credulity
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems the main theme here would be Taxation.... So one has to ask _ who taxes how much to whom, when why and to what effect...?
Answer: Do not tax wealth, but tax the most vulnerable.
If you detect some anger here, you may well be right.
November 27th, 2025 05:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems the main theme here would be Taxation.... So one has to ask _ who taxes how much to whom, when why and to what effect...?
Answer: Do not tax wealth, but tax the most vulnerable.
If you detect some anger here, you may well be right.
November 27th, 2025 05:39
Taxation of Credulity
sorenbarrett said:
I hold the same sentiments and am wholly behind you on this one. if I could figure out how to get along without government I would and as for God well Nature works just as well.
November 27th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
I hold the same sentiments and am wholly behind you on this one. if I could figure out how to get along without government I would and as for God well Nature works just as well.
November 27th, 2025 04:42
True Civilisation
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend… the way you move from celebration to the cold streets… from headlines to morgue drawers… it’s spare and brutally human. You hold a mirror up without preaching.Very strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 25th, 2025 23:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend… the way you move from celebration to the cold streets… from headlines to morgue drawers… it’s spare and brutally human. You hold a mirror up without preaching.Very strong piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 25th, 2025 23:04
True Civilisation
Doggerel Dave said:
Could be resolved overnight. but is the result of political inaction. Or as a very well known poet here would have it, \"Politicians kill more people per year than than drugs, alcohol, malaria and great white sharks\"
The redefinition of \'civilisation\' really nailed it Many thanks
November 25th, 2025 17:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Could be resolved overnight. but is the result of political inaction. Or as a very well known poet here would have it, \"Politicians kill more people per year than than drugs, alcohol, malaria and great white sharks\"
The redefinition of \'civilisation\' really nailed it Many thanks
November 25th, 2025 17:34
True Civilisation
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hardhitting poem with lots to ponder. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 11:23
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hardhitting poem with lots to ponder. Kudos!!
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 11:23
True Civilisation
arqios said:
Penalised not by criminal justice but by omission of justice. Powerful.
November 25th, 2025 05:50
arqios said:
Penalised not by criminal justice but by omission of justice. Powerful.
November 25th, 2025 05:50
True Civilisation
sorenbarrett said:
Ah we hide behind definitions but our morals are self evident. The life we value is that that affects ours. A most thought provoking poem and for that a fave
November 25th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
Ah we hide behind definitions but our morals are self evident. The life we value is that that affects ours. A most thought provoking poem and for that a fave
November 25th, 2025 04:02
The Smell of Absence
NafisaSB said:
wondering whether it was just her memory, or the start of a new and maybe beautiful relationship - your choice...
November 19th, 2025 08:26
NafisaSB said:
wondering whether it was just her memory, or the start of a new and maybe beautiful relationship - your choice...
November 19th, 2025 08:26
Continuance of Submission
Doggerel Dave said:
Wifeless, I can with relief claim to know nothing of this........
From the distance I am definitely able to tell you it was a fun read.
November 15th, 2025 10:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Wifeless, I can with relief claim to know nothing of this........
From the distance I am definitely able to tell you it was a fun read.
November 15th, 2025 10:29
Continuance of Submission
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen to your comment! 🤣 My friend, this carries the weight of loss and the eerie tenderness of presence-in-absence…you wrote the shape of grief without ever naming it. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 15th, 2025 07:48
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen to your comment! 🤣 My friend, this carries the weight of loss and the eerie tenderness of presence-in-absence…you wrote the shape of grief without ever naming it. Beautiful work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 15th, 2025 07:48
Continuance of Submission
sorenbarrett said:
It is the paradox of time eternal where masculinity bows to femininity behind closed doors. It has happened from pauper to king and from the cave to the present. Some hide it better than others but it is not the presidents that rule but their wives. Well done
November 15th, 2025 03:23
sorenbarrett said:
It is the paradox of time eternal where masculinity bows to femininity behind closed doors. It has happened from pauper to king and from the cave to the present. Some hide it better than others but it is not the presidents that rule but their wives. Well done
November 15th, 2025 03:23
The Smell of Absence
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. You bring this to vivid life.
November 13th, 2025 09:38
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. You bring this to vivid life.
November 13th, 2025 09:38
The Smell of Absence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, I felt that familiar ache…how loss can make silence louder than sound, and how memory walks right beside us in the dark. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 12th, 2025 21:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, I felt that familiar ache…how loss can make silence louder than sound, and how memory walks right beside us in the dark. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
November 12th, 2025 21:08
The Smell of Absence
NinjaGirl said:
Now I\'ve heard of the sound of silence, but the smell of it is a whole new level! Well done!
November 12th, 2025 16:15
NinjaGirl said:
Now I\'ve heard of the sound of silence, but the smell of it is a whole new level! Well done!
November 12th, 2025 16:15
The Smell of Absence
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has a film noir quality that evokes the sense of loss quite vividly. It has a wonderful structure, as if it is being played out in real time before the reader. Beautifully done!
November 12th, 2025 10:12
Bella Shepard said:
This poem has a film noir quality that evokes the sense of loss quite vividly. It has a wonderful structure, as if it is being played out in real time before the reader. Beautifully done!
November 12th, 2025 10:12
The Smell of Absence
Neville said:
Absolutely lovely .. I swear I just caught the scent of green apples as I opened the page .. 😎💛💛🍏🍏🍏💛👍
November 12th, 2025 08:02
Neville said:
Absolutely lovely .. I swear I just caught the scent of green apples as I opened the page .. 😎💛💛🍏🍏🍏💛👍
November 12th, 2025 08:02
The Smell of Absence
sorenbarrett said:
Now this can be taken two ways and I love that. Either it is one\'s lost love found or a siren seductively using the old smell to attract a new relationship. Well done
November 12th, 2025 04:42
sorenbarrett said:
Now this can be taken two ways and I love that. Either it is one\'s lost love found or a siren seductively using the old smell to attract a new relationship. Well done
November 12th, 2025 04:42
Societal Morality
NafisaSB said:
now that is a very loaded question - and a person like me who tries to say it as it is - but in the nicest way, without hurting, this is a real poser
October 29th, 2025 07:38
NafisaSB said:
now that is a very loaded question - and a person like me who tries to say it as it is - but in the nicest way, without hurting, this is a real poser
October 29th, 2025 07:38
Shine of Overdraft
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve felt that same manufactured rhythm…doing everything right, only to have the rug pulled anyway. You name the numbness perfectly. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2025 07:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve felt that same manufactured rhythm…doing everything right, only to have the rug pulled anyway. You name the numbness perfectly. A fave. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 28th, 2025 07:45
Shine of Overdraft
sorenbarrett said:
Insecurity has always been in the wind. No game today to fill the pot, crop failure, war brewing, plundered, failing economy, replaced by younger workers. Now it is AI another form or machinery that has replaced the worker since the industrial revolution.
October 28th, 2025 05:27
sorenbarrett said:
Insecurity has always been in the wind. No game today to fill the pot, crop failure, war brewing, plundered, failing economy, replaced by younger workers. Now it is AI another form or machinery that has replaced the worker since the industrial revolution.
October 28th, 2025 05:27
Shine of Overdraft
Doggerel Dave said:
An introduction to the life of a wage slave.
The rest of the day too demoralizing to relate?
Not a good position perfectly related.
October 28th, 2025 05:06
Doggerel Dave said:
An introduction to the life of a wage slave.
The rest of the day too demoralizing to relate?
Not a good position perfectly related.
October 28th, 2025 05:06
Societal Morality
Neville said:
I was not expecting the ending .. but I think this might well be your finest post to date .. of those I have visited anyway .. Neville 😎👍
October 25th, 2025 03:56
Neville said:
I was not expecting the ending .. but I think this might well be your finest post to date .. of those I have visited anyway .. Neville 😎👍
October 25th, 2025 03:56
Societal Morality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve wrestled with that same conflict…truth or performance, courage or comfort. You caught the human struggle perfectly. Very well-written! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 20:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I’ve wrestled with that same conflict…truth or performance, courage or comfort. You caught the human struggle perfectly. Very well-written! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 24th, 2025 20:04
Societal Morality
Doggerel Dave said:
I see this in very concrete terms; a meeting I’m compelled to attend monthly. An item with some moral overtones (or perhaps undertones) up for discussion. Two participants with very different politics work at it hard, while the rest of the meeting paint themselves into the wall as wallpaper…..Your piece is extremely real for me but know that your position, as configured there is the majority.
October 24th, 2025 19:54
Doggerel Dave said:
I see this in very concrete terms; a meeting I’m compelled to attend monthly. An item with some moral overtones (or perhaps undertones) up for discussion. Two participants with very different politics work at it hard, while the rest of the meeting paint themselves into the wall as wallpaper…..Your piece is extremely real for me but know that your position, as configured there is the majority.
October 24th, 2025 19:54
Societal Morality
Poetic Licence said:
You\'re writing is a real pleasure to read these day, very nicely written
October 24th, 2025 13:48
Poetic Licence said:
You\'re writing is a real pleasure to read these day, very nicely written
October 24th, 2025 13:48
Societal Morality
sorenbarrett said:
This freestyle poem has a deep message to all. An angel coated rot of hypocrisy vs a devil through and through, now there\'s a choice for ya. I would rather let the public see my worm eaten flaws than cover them up and let them fester. Nicely written and a fave
October 24th, 2025 10:54
sorenbarrett said:
This freestyle poem has a deep message to all. An angel coated rot of hypocrisy vs a devil through and through, now there\'s a choice for ya. I would rather let the public see my worm eaten flaws than cover them up and let them fester. Nicely written and a fave
October 24th, 2025 10:54
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