Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity



Past Tells No Lies
sorenbarrett said:

Such great metaphor in this poem it fits so well the rhyme and images. Well done

February 22nd, 2025 13:16

Dust and Joy
NafisaSB said:

liked the message - yes we shall return to dust, but let\'s make the most of life, while alive

January 29th, 2025 07:38

Freedom in Debt
Avi said:

Hi

January 25th, 2025 19:10

Dust and Joy
RSM0812 said:

Great message. We should kill each other with kindness.

January 25th, 2025 07:39

Dust and Joy
Poetic Licence said:

Well written positive piece of poetry, really enjoyed it

January 22nd, 2025 12:34

Dust and Joy
Tristan Robert Lange said:

What a wonderfully positive message! Much needed and an easy fave! Well done! โค๏ธ๐Ÿ™

January 21st, 2025 21:10

Dust and Joy
Cassie58 said:

Such a beautiful message of positivity in a world which can often be harsh. Love is everything. Much enjoyed RIS.

January 21st, 2025 17:09

Dust and Joy
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful write and the message deserves the Fave

January 21st, 2025 09:15

Claustrophobic Indifference
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

January 7th, 2025 14:45

Claustrophobic Indifference
Poetic Licence said:

A very Poignant poem of the only person who really knows what you are feeling and you are is you, Very well written

January 7th, 2025 13:46

Claustrophobic Indifference
sorenbarrett said:

The only person that knows and cares is yourself. So true it is. A poignant write and well done my friend

January 7th, 2025 13:34

An Ode to the Day
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Hope is born on the wings of tomorrow. That said, who knows what it holds, who knows what doesn\'t, but for now...let\'s just enjoy the moment. I love the message. A wonderful write, my friend!

January 6th, 2025 10:40

An Ode to the Day
Poetic Licence said:

Being grated for the day that just passed and hoping tomorrow is even better, enjoyed the read.

January 6th, 2025 09:30

An Ode to the Day
arqios said:

So soothing specially at the end of a long dayโ€™s toil! Much enjoyed ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

January 6th, 2025 09:04

An Ode to the Day
Cassie58 said:

Very nicely composed stanzas. Beautiful images of the natural world created and a sense of poignant mystery added to keep the reader guessing on those bittersweet memories. Much enjoyed ris.

January 6th, 2025 08:58

An Ode to the Day
sorenbarrett said:

There is always tomorrow and its promise. A most romantic poem with ending hope

January 6th, 2025 08:35

The Music of Twilight
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Ah, yes. Music is medicine for the soul and so much more. Indeed, a hard thing to describe, but you did well, methinks. Love the last line because, truly, that is when we first started to hear music. There is something magical about music that truly does bring us back to our nascent stage in life...perhaps more than any other thing. Well done, my friend! ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŒน

January 5th, 2025 07:05

The Music of Twilight
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 4th, 2025 20:42

The Music of Twilight
sorenbarrett said:

Dark but there is a warmth with it as well. A sense of loneliness and an unfinished feeling to life. Sad

January 4th, 2025 15:17

The Music of Twilight
Poetic Licence said:

Music has the ability to fit the mood and situation at that time, and each person interprets it a different way, which is what makes it so magical, enjoyed the read. have a great weekend

January 4th, 2025 12:39

Invisible Man
arqios said:

Nice! In poetryโ€™s process our words may be the grey, solidly blanketing the poetic canvas that is like a white noise of articulation disguising and blurring the poet themselves. And because poems tend to live lives of their own and traverse life and consciousness with their unique personas can and do leave the poet invisible. Some say that tis is as it should be but it can be perceived as a mixed blessing. But thatโ€™s just me. Thoroughly enjoyed.

January 3rd, 2025 16:05

Invisible Man
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wow! Love the metaphor and how evocative this is. Wonderful write! ๐Ÿ‘๐ŸŒน

January 3rd, 2025 13:39

Invisible Man
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 3rd, 2025 13:26

Invisible Man
sorenbarrett said:

Metaphor that leaves questions. There are many emotions presented here in contrast to the mundane and gray

January 3rd, 2025 10:02

Invisible Man
Poetic Licence said:

A powerful and poignant piece of poetry, well written

January 3rd, 2025 08:54

Prayer
Poetic Licence said:

The search for inner strength is a constant, some have to dig deeper than others but once found we should use it, Well written piece. Happy New Year To You and All

January 1st, 2025 17:01

Prayer
Cassie58 said:

When the wind of change comes and knocks us completely sideways, we need to harvest any strength we can in order to deal with our fall from grace. The sun will always rise and the sun too will continue to set. A prayer can go a long way. Happy new year ris.

January 1st, 2025 15:02

Prayer
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed all we need is the strength to arise from our falls. Good write Rebellion

January 1st, 2025 13:23

Fairytale of Love
Tony36 said:

Great write

December 23rd, 2024 13:24

Fairytale of Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Yes true love endures all things, which is a spiritual truth for sure, but the body does not! And a dead body cannot love. โ€œSadness in God\'s eyesโ€. Indeed. Anger even! Well done, friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

December 23rd, 2024 09:52

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