Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
But of the Butts
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed, how could you - that small \'t\' lost you a chance that could have been yours for the taking....
February 24th, 2026 00:41
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed, how could you - that small \'t\' lost you a chance that could have been yours for the taking....
February 24th, 2026 00:41
Rationality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rebellion, the progression from “(I received claps)” to “(thunderous applause)” is brilliantly staged. Each escalation exposes more moral fracture. And when you close with “all of them had purchased bungalows on lifelong loans,” it seals the hypocrisy cleanly. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 14:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rebellion, the progression from “(I received claps)” to “(thunderous applause)” is brilliantly staged. Each escalation exposes more moral fracture. And when you close with “all of them had purchased bungalows on lifelong loans,” it seals the hypocrisy cleanly. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 19th, 2026 14:53
Rationality
Neville said:
There doesn\'t seem to be that much of it about these days .. Maybe they\'ve re-introduced rationing .. perhaps .. Very muchly enjoyed R.I.S 😎👍
February 19th, 2026 13:50
Neville said:
There doesn\'t seem to be that much of it about these days .. Maybe they\'ve re-introduced rationing .. perhaps .. Very muchly enjoyed R.I.S 😎👍
February 19th, 2026 13:50
Rationality
sorenbarrett said:
Were those bungalows on waterfront property in Florida where an irrigation ditch counts under the law as waterfront? Well done Rebellion
February 19th, 2026 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Were those bungalows on waterfront property in Florida where an irrigation ditch counts under the law as waterfront? Well done Rebellion
February 19th, 2026 03:53
Rationality
Doggerel Dave said:
And as you so darkly point out, rationality can only take me so far.....
February 19th, 2026 01:43
Doggerel Dave said:
And as you so darkly point out, rationality can only take me so far.....
February 19th, 2026 01:43
Poetic Lesson
Doggerel Dave said:
I really need to add to this. However I feel you quite possibly know where I stand on this matter... so \'nuff said. 👍
Except..... Well writ, Sir.
February 18th, 2026 23:53
Doggerel Dave said:
I really need to add to this. However I feel you quite possibly know where I stand on this matter... so \'nuff said. 👍
Except..... Well writ, Sir.
February 18th, 2026 23:53
Poetic Lesson
Neville said:
To put it in the most succinct but accurate of terms .. You have both posted a blinder and have more than excelled sir .. I also now feel compelled to award x5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐& a thumbs up from me .. 👍
February 18th, 2026 13:02
Neville said:
To put it in the most succinct but accurate of terms .. You have both posted a blinder and have more than excelled sir .. I also now feel compelled to award x5 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐& a thumbs up from me .. 👍
February 18th, 2026 13:02
Poetic Lesson
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rebellion, this balances wit and critique beautifully. The flower without a plant image opens it with wonder, then the bacteria line injects satire. The cane landing reframes everything as commentary on power and suppression. Humor laced with sting…exactly how it should be. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 18th, 2026 11:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Rebellion, this balances wit and critique beautifully. The flower without a plant image opens it with wonder, then the bacteria line injects satire. The cane landing reframes everything as commentary on power and suppression. Humor laced with sting…exactly how it should be. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 18th, 2026 11:43
Poetic Lesson
sorenbarrett said:
It is the difficulty in mining and the rarity of the mineral that gives it value whether words or diamonds. A most lovely write that feels so real and like a parable tells its story
February 18th, 2026 09:06
sorenbarrett said:
It is the difficulty in mining and the rarity of the mineral that gives it value whether words or diamonds. A most lovely write that feels so real and like a parable tells its story
February 18th, 2026 09:06
But of the Butts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest friend, I’ve seen that exact kind of overconfident reasoning implode before. The way you frame it as intellectual gravity meeting romantic miscalculation feels painfully relatable. The humor lands because the ego feels real, and hat’s what makes it work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest friend, I’ve seen that exact kind of overconfident reasoning implode before. The way you frame it as intellectual gravity meeting romantic miscalculation feels painfully relatable. The humor lands because the ego feels real, and hat’s what makes it work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 17th, 2026 10:49
But of the Butts
Thomas W Case said:
Hey, my friend, this hits with sly teeth and humor, sharp and unapologetic.
I love how you twist wit and desire into a punch that leaves the ribs aching.
February 17th, 2026 07:40
Thomas W Case said:
Hey, my friend, this hits with sly teeth and humor, sharp and unapologetic.
I love how you twist wit and desire into a punch that leaves the ribs aching.
February 17th, 2026 07:40
But of the Butts
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem about misunderstanding in the complexities of life and language. Over a t a tiff but (pun intended) for the want of a nail the shoe was lost and so forth. Loved it
February 17th, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem about misunderstanding in the complexities of life and language. Over a t a tiff but (pun intended) for the want of a nail the shoe was lost and so forth. Loved it
February 17th, 2026 04:58
Blind Man\'s Light
Friendship said:
What a beautifully written poem. Your poem revolves around the profound connection between music and understanding life’s essence. Yet the poet explores the transformative power of sound and rhythm, illustrating how music can evoke deep feelings and insights comparable to a blind man\'s realization of light. and touches on perception, awareness, and the innate understanding of existence that transcends physical sight.
February 15th, 2026 18:08
Friendship said:
What a beautifully written poem. Your poem revolves around the profound connection between music and understanding life’s essence. Yet the poet explores the transformative power of sound and rhythm, illustrating how music can evoke deep feelings and insights comparable to a blind man\'s realization of light. and touches on perception, awareness, and the innate understanding of existence that transcends physical sight.
February 15th, 2026 18:08
Blind Man\'s Light
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t see where bad or ugly could possibly come from. Got it from the first stanza and was off... Came back for the rest later.
Needless to say.....
February 15th, 2026 16:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Can\'t see where bad or ugly could possibly come from. Got it from the first stanza and was off... Came back for the rest later.
Needless to say.....
February 15th, 2026 16:03
Blind Man\'s Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the instrumentation imagery grounds the piece, but the inward turn is what elevates it. From sax and cymbals to womb memory and pre-verbal language…that arc feels intentional. In my humble opinion, you didn’t fail to find the words…you showed how music lives beyond them. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 15th, 2026 09:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the instrumentation imagery grounds the piece, but the inward turn is what elevates it. From sax and cymbals to womb memory and pre-verbal language…that arc feels intentional. In my humble opinion, you didn’t fail to find the words…you showed how music lives beyond them. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 15th, 2026 09:38
Blind Man\'s Light
Paul Bell said:
They do say the baby can feel the rhythm of music in the womb.
I suppose through the decades, baby\'s have been having a great time musically.
Maybe the 60s babies had the best time of all.
February 15th, 2026 09:36
Paul Bell said:
They do say the baby can feel the rhythm of music in the womb.
I suppose through the decades, baby\'s have been having a great time musically.
Maybe the 60s babies had the best time of all.
February 15th, 2026 09:36
Blind Man\'s Light
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of music which I love and feel enough to bring tears even when being watched. That beat in the womb of a mother\'s heart and the sound of passing air to the lungs was transferred to wood and stone long before words. It lives inside us from countless generations across all cultures a universal language that touches far deeper than poetry. When combined the two become celestial exciting armies and taming the wildest beast. The last stanza struck home my friend.
February 15th, 2026 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of music which I love and feel enough to bring tears even when being watched. That beat in the womb of a mother\'s heart and the sound of passing air to the lungs was transferred to wood and stone long before words. It lives inside us from countless generations across all cultures a universal language that touches far deeper than poetry. When combined the two become celestial exciting armies and taming the wildest beast. The last stanza struck home my friend.
February 15th, 2026 09:16
Crazy
Thomas W Case said:
He’s chasing shadows and memories,
but the laughter makes it feel like home.
February 10th, 2026 07:11
Thomas W Case said:
He’s chasing shadows and memories,
but the laughter makes it feel like home.
February 10th, 2026 07:11
Crazy
NafisaSB said:
innocent question so wisely answered - very mature interpretation
February 10th, 2026 00:17
NafisaSB said:
innocent question so wisely answered - very mature interpretation
February 10th, 2026 00:17
Crazy
Thomas W Case said:
This circles tenderness without ever naming it, lets love show itself sideways and human.
That last echo of the sea feels earned—quiet, sad, and devastating in the best way.
February 8th, 2026 07:33
Thomas W Case said:
This circles tenderness without ever naming it, lets love show itself sideways and human.
That last echo of the sea feels earned—quiet, sad, and devastating in the best way.
February 8th, 2026 07:33
Crazy
Soman Ragavan said:
One thing we notice that we don\'t mind when children make us go round in circles but we lose temper when adults do so...
February 7th, 2026 11:14
Soman Ragavan said:
One thing we notice that we don\'t mind when children make us go round in circles but we lose temper when adults do so...
February 7th, 2026 11:14
Crazy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This felt familiar in a human way. How often care is misunderstood until someone names it for what it is. You captured that quiet truth with real compassion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 6th, 2026 15:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This felt familiar in a human way. How often care is misunderstood until someone names it for what it is. You captured that quiet truth with real compassion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 6th, 2026 15:05
Crazy
Paul Bell said:
Five minutes on the beach, all the kids start to look the same.
You can see why adults go around in circles going crazy when they can\'t see them.
This is why I connect them to a thirty-foot chain.
February 6th, 2026 13:28
Paul Bell said:
Five minutes on the beach, all the kids start to look the same.
You can see why adults go around in circles going crazy when they can\'t see them.
This is why I connect them to a thirty-foot chain.
February 6th, 2026 13:28
Crazy
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be taken in various ways by the child whose steppes he is following sees his behavior as crazy, an adult sees his behavior as theirs having done themselves, the man himself gets lost in his own behavior only recognizing its futility after a while, the reader that sees meaning in it all. Are we not all the same it the development of the vision of our behaviors having to grow and step back from them to see their meaning. A fave
February 6th, 2026 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
This poem can be taken in various ways by the child whose steppes he is following sees his behavior as crazy, an adult sees his behavior as theirs having done themselves, the man himself gets lost in his own behavior only recognizing its futility after a while, the reader that sees meaning in it all. Are we not all the same it the development of the vision of our behaviors having to grow and step back from them to see their meaning. A fave
February 6th, 2026 09:20
Crazy
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem depicts a moment at the beach, focusing on the interactions between a mother and her child as they observe a man retracing a child\'s footsteps in the sand. It contrasts the carefree spirit of childhood with the adult\'s interpretation of that freedom.
February 6th, 2026 08:52
Friendship said:
Nicely done. Your poem depicts a moment at the beach, focusing on the interactions between a mother and her child as they observe a man retracing a child\'s footsteps in the sand. It contrasts the carefree spirit of childhood with the adult\'s interpretation of that freedom.
February 6th, 2026 08:52
The Obscurity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, I felt that familiar sickness that comes when accountability dissolves into procedure. The way you hold space for the victims while naming the machinery that moves on regardless feels honest and necessary. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Reading this, I felt that familiar sickness that comes when accountability dissolves into procedure. The way you hold space for the victims while naming the machinery that moves on regardless feels honest and necessary. Well done, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
February 5th, 2026 18:29
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