Comments received on poems by rebellion_in_sanity
Design Flaw
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First. Wow! I say these were very serious. Very profound and deep, righteous truth is in here. What you have done is held up God\'s mirror to us! To answer the final question. Yes they were/are. Which is why hate can never be the answer. BUT, sadly, some children go really really wayward. This is not a religious truth...per se...but it is SPIRITUAL and PRACTICAL one. In fact, religion houses the faithful and the wayward alike. There\'s grace in that. But it can also be hell! Ah...the complexities. Behind every question\'s answer lies more questions. And I will stop rambling and just say what is obvious: BRAVO! This is a fave! 🌹👏 Oh...and yes, the humor is what made this and got its point so eloquently across. Again. Bravo.
July 2nd, 2025 11:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First. Wow! I say these were very serious. Very profound and deep, righteous truth is in here. What you have done is held up God\'s mirror to us! To answer the final question. Yes they were/are. Which is why hate can never be the answer. BUT, sadly, some children go really really wayward. This is not a religious truth...per se...but it is SPIRITUAL and PRACTICAL one. In fact, religion houses the faithful and the wayward alike. There\'s grace in that. But it can also be hell! Ah...the complexities. Behind every question\'s answer lies more questions. And I will stop rambling and just say what is obvious: BRAVO! This is a fave! 🌹👏 Oh...and yes, the humor is what made this and got its point so eloquently across. Again. Bravo.
July 2nd, 2025 11:39
Design Flaw
Poetic Licence said:
A very well written write with a lovely sense of humour, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 00:57
Poetic Licence said:
A very well written write with a lovely sense of humour, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 00:57
Past Tells No Lies
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write and I like the metaphor in the write, very enjoyable read
July 1st, 2025 11:44
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write and I like the metaphor in the write, very enjoyable read
July 1st, 2025 11:44
Design Flaw
sorenbarrett said:
Only if he played the milkman. It is a poem that reminds me of the story of Lord Krishna as an avatar and the kings advisor spoke to him as a friend advising him on battle. Women not allowed, no weapons. A fun read that seems at the same time mythical with a celestial sense of humor.
July 1st, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Only if he played the milkman. It is a poem that reminds me of the story of Lord Krishna as an avatar and the kings advisor spoke to him as a friend advising him on battle. Women not allowed, no weapons. A fun read that seems at the same time mythical with a celestial sense of humor.
July 1st, 2025 10:45
An Apology To My Poems
Poetic Licence said:
This is such a valid write, many try to beautify their writes loosing the message they want to pervey. I am of limited education and i write from the heart, it may not be pretty, but it is honest, enjoyed the read, nicely expressed and written
May 26th, 2025 01:00
Poetic Licence said:
This is such a valid write, many try to beautify their writes loosing the message they want to pervey. I am of limited education and i write from the heart, it may not be pretty, but it is honest, enjoyed the read, nicely expressed and written
May 26th, 2025 01:00
Penance for Imaginary
Poetic Licence said:
That last paragraph is so relatable to me, often i ask am I to blame. Wonderful write the effects of misunderstanding and blame have on any relationship, nicely expressed and written
May 24th, 2025 06:43
Poetic Licence said:
That last paragraph is so relatable to me, often i ask am I to blame. Wonderful write the effects of misunderstanding and blame have on any relationship, nicely expressed and written
May 24th, 2025 06:43
An Apology To My Poems
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem and the metaphor here. Vanity is one of the greatest foes of poetry. I has a false ring to its sound and does not live but is dead to the reader. Nicely said.
May 24th, 2025 06:43
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this poem and the metaphor here. Vanity is one of the greatest foes of poetry. I has a false ring to its sound and does not live but is dead to the reader. Nicely said.
May 24th, 2025 06:43
EDGE DOCTRINE
Poetic Licence said:
Prejudice comes in many forms and across many subjects, I feel it occurs by our inability to take our time to understand people different to ourselves, hereditary prejudice passed on by family beliefs and ignorance, by not fitting in to what we consider the norm and lastly notting having empathy for other human beings and there circumstances, it is easy for them to hate than understand. Great write highlighting many deep thinking issues, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 12:20
Poetic Licence said:
Prejudice comes in many forms and across many subjects, I feel it occurs by our inability to take our time to understand people different to ourselves, hereditary prejudice passed on by family beliefs and ignorance, by not fitting in to what we consider the norm and lastly notting having empathy for other human beings and there circumstances, it is easy for them to hate than understand. Great write highlighting many deep thinking issues, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 12:20
EDGE DOCTRINE
sorenbarrett said:
Prejudice is pervasive not only about race, religion, politics and immigration status but anyone that is not considered family. We should all consider that we are all immigrants
May 20th, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
Prejudice is pervasive not only about race, religion, politics and immigration status but anyone that is not considered family. We should all consider that we are all immigrants
May 20th, 2025 10:49
The Gospel of The Modern God
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write from the heart,many justify there selfish actions as a benifit to the many, but it is at the cost of the many that the few get richer and more powerful, nicely expressed and written
May 17th, 2025 04:07
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write from the heart,many justify there selfish actions as a benifit to the many, but it is at the cost of the many that the few get richer and more powerful, nicely expressed and written
May 17th, 2025 04:07
The Gospel of The Modern God
2781 said:
And saith unto him, All these things I will give thee, if thou will fall down and worship me.
May 17th, 2025 03:42
2781 said:
And saith unto him, All these things I will give thee, if thou will fall down and worship me.
May 17th, 2025 03:42
And .... I Seek
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...men loved darkness rather than light because their deeds were evil--\" and, \"...seek ye the LORD while He may be found, call ye upon Him while He is near--\" \"...for in Him we live, and move, and have our being, for we are also His offspring--\" [see Acts 17; Is. 55:6; Jn 3:19-21, etc.] Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, this is gorgeous with a resonating, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 10:17
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...men loved darkness rather than light because their deeds were evil--\" and, \"...seek ye the LORD while He may be found, call ye upon Him while He is near--\" \"...for in Him we live, and move, and have our being, for we are also His offspring--\" [see Acts 17; Is. 55:6; Jn 3:19-21, etc.] Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery, this is gorgeous with a resonating, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 12th, 2025 10:17
And .... I Seek
Doggerel Dave said:
Now a search for God (and please no offence) has always seemed to me to be a pretty futile exercise. However if in your search, you produce such poetry then please keep looking and don’t forget to keep me apprised of your findings.
May 12th, 2025 08:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Now a search for God (and please no offence) has always seemed to me to be a pretty futile exercise. However if in your search, you produce such poetry then please keep looking and don’t forget to keep me apprised of your findings.
May 12th, 2025 08:00
And .... I Seek
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write in the search of faith after overcoming many obstacles along the way, very well written and expressed
May 11th, 2025 13:27
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write in the search of faith after overcoming many obstacles along the way, very well written and expressed
May 11th, 2025 13:27
And .... I Seek
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem that points a child\'s finger at the emperor with no cloths. Oh the shame. A fave
May 11th, 2025 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem that points a child\'s finger at the emperor with no cloths. Oh the shame. A fave
May 11th, 2025 13:19
Penance for Imaginary
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have felt this. That last stanza, something I have literally wrestled with inside. Do I just take the blame? Powerful write, my friend. A fave. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I have felt this. That last stanza, something I have literally wrestled with inside. Do I just take the blame? Powerful write, my friend. A fave. 🌹👏
May 4th, 2025 18:24
Penance for Imaginary
sorenbarrett said:
Misunderstanding and blame powerful tools to wrack havoc in any relationship and drive a wedge of mistrust, not just by the viewer but into the very heart of the innocent. Lovely
May 4th, 2025 05:04
sorenbarrett said:
Misunderstanding and blame powerful tools to wrack havoc in any relationship and drive a wedge of mistrust, not just by the viewer but into the very heart of the innocent. Lovely
May 4th, 2025 05:04
River of Time
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of an evolving nature. A lovely write.
May 2nd, 2025 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem of an evolving nature. A lovely write.
May 2nd, 2025 12:31
Silencing the Dissonance
sorenbarrett said:
Once again full of metaphor this poem speaks to me of control and quieting those who speak for liberty. The Cuckoo the noisy one who calls out. I found it interesting that you also used the word mocking ( As in mocking bird). A wonderful poem full of symbolic meaning.
May 1st, 2025 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
Once again full of metaphor this poem speaks to me of control and quieting those who speak for liberty. The Cuckoo the noisy one who calls out. I found it interesting that you also used the word mocking ( As in mocking bird). A wonderful poem full of symbolic meaning.
May 1st, 2025 10:40
Impermanence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Life is a fleeting whisp of air that blows by in the breeze. Here suddenly then gone...and yes, it is glorious, among other things. Well expressed, my dear friend. This was beautiful! A fave from me.
April 6th, 2025 07:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Life is a fleeting whisp of air that blows by in the breeze. Here suddenly then gone...and yes, it is glorious, among other things. Well expressed, my dear friend. This was beautiful! A fave from me.
April 6th, 2025 07:59
Impermanence
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant!!! The last line of the poem (Life is glorious for being momentary) Psychologically, philosophically, spiritually naturally and scientifically a perfect vector of truth. The timing also set up just right poetically. As if a beacon of light on a stormy sea this one guides the reader home and home to a rocky shore. The realization that there is meaning in the end. One only need ask themselves what would this world be if everything that ever lived was immortal. What would an eternal roll coaster ride be like or eternal pain. For that it is a fave
April 6th, 2025 06:04
sorenbarrett said:
Brilliant!!! The last line of the poem (Life is glorious for being momentary) Psychologically, philosophically, spiritually naturally and scientifically a perfect vector of truth. The timing also set up just right poetically. As if a beacon of light on a stormy sea this one guides the reader home and home to a rocky shore. The realization that there is meaning in the end. One only need ask themselves what would this world be if everything that ever lived was immortal. What would an eternal roll coaster ride be like or eternal pain. For that it is a fave
April 6th, 2025 06:04
Impermanence
Poetic Licence said:
A very well written and beautiful write, loved it
April 6th, 2025 04:42
Poetic Licence said:
A very well written and beautiful write, loved it
April 6th, 2025 04:42
Sailing on The Flying Dutchman
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am familiar with the Flying Dutchman legend. This, my friend, makes for an excellent poem! Well done!!!
March 30th, 2025 20:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I am familiar with the Flying Dutchman legend. This, my friend, makes for an excellent poem! Well done!!!
March 30th, 2025 20:08
Sailing on The Flying Dutchman
Poetic Licence said:
We all try to be and do better, but to much ambition can be a dangerous thing and have devastating effects to those around you and yourself, really nicely written write
March 30th, 2025 11:39
Poetic Licence said:
We all try to be and do better, but to much ambition can be a dangerous thing and have devastating effects to those around you and yourself, really nicely written write
March 30th, 2025 11:39
Sailing on The Flying Dutchman
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of the movie Pirates of the Caribbean the metaphor for ambition works well as pirates are most ambitious in their seeking of treasure and in that quest more die in battle, lost at sea or by hanging than ever achieve their goal. A wonderful write.
March 30th, 2025 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of the movie Pirates of the Caribbean the metaphor for ambition works well as pirates are most ambitious in their seeking of treasure and in that quest more die in battle, lost at sea or by hanging than ever achieve their goal. A wonderful write.
March 30th, 2025 10:39
Fleeting Hope in the Eternal Wave
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Even read literally...friend, this poem is profound! That said, there is much here in way of metaphor to. Just brilliant! 🌹👏 A must fave!
March 29th, 2025 11:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Even read literally...friend, this poem is profound! That said, there is much here in way of metaphor to. Just brilliant! 🌹👏 A must fave!
March 29th, 2025 11:32
Fleeting Hope in the Eternal Wave
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and a mixed feeling of sadness and hope the thrill of being touched and the lingering feeling of being discarded. An eternal cycle is presented in this metaphor of life itself and its perennial ups and downs yet being touched seems enough in a journey of finding one that will give value to what one is. Touching and profound.
March 29th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
Touching and a mixed feeling of sadness and hope the thrill of being touched and the lingering feeling of being discarded. An eternal cycle is presented in this metaphor of life itself and its perennial ups and downs yet being touched seems enough in a journey of finding one that will give value to what one is. Touching and profound.
March 29th, 2025 05:23
Fleeting Hope in the Eternal Wave
Poetic Licence said:
Although this has a touch of sadness to it, it is also very positive in its outlook on finding that special person, keeping hope going, nicely written and expressed
March 29th, 2025 04:55
Poetic Licence said:
Although this has a touch of sadness to it, it is also very positive in its outlook on finding that special person, keeping hope going, nicely written and expressed
March 29th, 2025 04:55
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