Comments received on poems by Salvia.S
Transient Duality
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Transient duality”
The poem says that, by and large, two choices are offered to us. In life, hold the rose or the thorns. With the rose, there are bloom and fragrance. With the thorns there are pain and bleeding. It’s up to us what we choose. The last line points out the short life of the rose. Thus,if we waste time we will lose the chances of our life. Soman Ragavan.
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December 21st, 2024 08:53
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Transient duality”
The poem says that, by and large, two choices are offered to us. In life, hold the rose or the thorns. With the rose, there are bloom and fragrance. With the thorns there are pain and bleeding. It’s up to us what we choose. The last line points out the short life of the rose. Thus,if we waste time we will lose the chances of our life. Soman Ragavan.
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December 21st, 2024 08:53
Where Lies The Beauty Of Life?
cellinic said:
Very nice and meaningful! Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 07:21
cellinic said:
Very nice and meaningful! Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 07:21
Where Lies The Beauty Of Life?
Poetic Licence said:
Probably between the last option, a poem that makes you ask a question of yourself, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 21st, 2024 02:33
Poetic Licence said:
Probably between the last option, a poem that makes you ask a question of yourself, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 21st, 2024 02:33
Tarnished Trust
Poetic Licence said:
If proper trust is broken it can never be fully repaired, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 14th, 2024 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
If proper trust is broken it can never be fully repaired, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 14th, 2024 05:59
Tarnished Trust
rin said:
I don\'t feel anything special when someone I don\'t trust betrays me.
December 14th, 2024 04:34
rin said:
I don\'t feel anything special when someone I don\'t trust betrays me.
December 14th, 2024 04:34
Bouquet of Lessons
sorenbarrett said:
A type of ten commandments to live by. So perfectly stated in poetic form. Simply lovely
December 8th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
A type of ten commandments to live by. So perfectly stated in poetic form. Simply lovely
December 8th, 2024 05:44
Bouquet of Lessons
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for all the hard work in writing this, a very enjoyable read
December 1st, 2024 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for all the hard work in writing this, a very enjoyable read
December 1st, 2024 05:36
Stellar Harmony
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Stellar harmony” by Salvia S
The poem speaks of the sincerity of stars. Poets see hidden or deep sights from what is around them. The poetess sees the sincerity of stars, for they do not seem to hate each other or fight with each other. Even if the laws of physics cause them to collide sometimes.
“Together, forming constellations
Unity in diversity…” We should learn from the lessons of the stars : instead of fighting with each other, we should live in peace with one another. Otherwise put, there is future for each one of us. Therefore, it is pointless to try to exterminate others. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:42
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Stellar harmony” by Salvia S
The poem speaks of the sincerity of stars. Poets see hidden or deep sights from what is around them. The poetess sees the sincerity of stars, for they do not seem to hate each other or fight with each other. Even if the laws of physics cause them to collide sometimes.
“Together, forming constellations
Unity in diversity…” We should learn from the lessons of the stars : instead of fighting with each other, we should live in peace with one another. Otherwise put, there is future for each one of us. Therefore, it is pointless to try to exterminate others. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:42
Love Letter from Waterlily to her beloved Moon
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Love letter from waterlily to her beloved moon” by Salvia S
“Still you\'re lonely,
Lonelier than me.
(…)
For you know me well,
My beloved
For my loneliness…”
The poem speaks of the loneliness of both the moon and the poetess. Though the moon is surrounded by myriads of stars, it is still lonely. Just as humans are surrounded by millions like them but are still lonely. Solitude and loneliness often form the tapestry on which poets write to express their deep thoughts. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:35
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Love letter from waterlily to her beloved moon” by Salvia S
“Still you\'re lonely,
Lonelier than me.
(…)
For you know me well,
My beloved
For my loneliness…”
The poem speaks of the loneliness of both the moon and the poetess. Though the moon is surrounded by myriads of stars, it is still lonely. Just as humans are surrounded by millions like them but are still lonely. Solitude and loneliness often form the tapestry on which poets write to express their deep thoughts. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:35
Colourful Cloudy Reflections
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Cloudy reflections” by Salvia S
The poetess has managed to find words to describe each type of cloud. There are both romance and philosophy in the words of the poem. We will note that clouds are ruled by the winds : they have to go where the wind wants them to go. The reign on the cloud is a short one. The cloud displays the colours decided by the sun. The poem “I wandered lonely as a cloud by Wordsworth (1770-1850) speaks about the loneliness of clouds. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:28
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Cloudy reflections” by Salvia S
The poetess has managed to find words to describe each type of cloud. There are both romance and philosophy in the words of the poem. We will note that clouds are ruled by the winds : they have to go where the wind wants them to go. The reign on the cloud is a short one. The cloud displays the colours decided by the sun. The poem “I wandered lonely as a cloud by Wordsworth (1770-1850) speaks about the loneliness of clouds. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:28
Solitude Reminiscence
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Solitude reminiscence” by Salvia S
Life is strange, indeed. We are condemned to meet others, but the relations might not work. We are left with bitter memories with which to live. Break-ups are difficult to handle. But, differences between individuals are such that the day comes when the break-up is inevitable. Soman Ragavan.
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November 24th, 2024 03:19
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Solitude reminiscence” by Salvia S
Life is strange, indeed. We are condemned to meet others, but the relations might not work. We are left with bitter memories with which to live. Break-ups are difficult to handle. But, differences between individuals are such that the day comes when the break-up is inevitable. Soman Ragavan.
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November 24th, 2024 03:19
Colourful Cloudy Reflections
Caring dove said:
That’s beautiful , and a interesting writing .. nicely written
November 22nd, 2024 03:29
Caring dove said:
That’s beautiful , and a interesting writing .. nicely written
November 22nd, 2024 03:29
Myself, My Enemy
orchidee said:
Now your next poem \'Myself, My Friend!\' heehee.
September 19th, 2024 01:44
orchidee said:
Now your next poem \'Myself, My Friend!\' heehee.
September 19th, 2024 01:44
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