Comments received on poems by Salvia.S
Magical Melody, Melancholic Remedy
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about the dream state absolutely wonderful encapsulating dreams at their best. Worth a Fave
January 21st, 2025 20:53
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful poem about the dream state absolutely wonderful encapsulating dreams at their best. Worth a Fave
January 21st, 2025 20:53
Colourful Cloudy Reflections
sorenbarrett said:
Creative in its use of color and emotion this poem reads smoothly and in its anthropomorphization we become one with nature. A most lovely write
January 20th, 2025 06:11
sorenbarrett said:
Creative in its use of color and emotion this poem reads smoothly and in its anthropomorphization we become one with nature. A most lovely write
January 20th, 2025 06:11
Magical Melody, Melancholic Remedy
sorenbarrett said:
Much joy is derived from our thoughts, wishes, fantasies and dreams. Very nicely stated.
January 19th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
Much joy is derived from our thoughts, wishes, fantasies and dreams. Very nicely stated.
January 19th, 2025 10:44
Wisdom Within Water
sorenbarrett said:
Change and adaptability should not be under rated. Very nicely written
January 17th, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
Change and adaptability should not be under rated. Very nicely written
January 17th, 2025 12:57
Time\'s Sweetest Tales
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds a sweetness to it and reads well. Nicely crafted
January 17th, 2025 05:59
sorenbarrett said:
This poem holds a sweetness to it and reads well. Nicely crafted
January 17th, 2025 05:59
Moonsomnia
sorenbarrett said:
One must relax to sleep and the moon looks down on those in anguish who can not close their eyes for their pain. A most interesting and sensitive write
January 1st, 2025 20:51
sorenbarrett said:
One must relax to sleep and the moon looks down on those in anguish who can not close their eyes for their pain. A most interesting and sensitive write
January 1st, 2025 20:51
Moonsomnia
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Moonsomnia” by Salvia S
The moon is personified, it is given a personality and a life, like a human. Like a human, it needs sleep, and like a human sometimes it can’t sleep. Its secrets include hidden wishes confided to it in silence by humans on earth, eg by lovers. It also hears murmurs of the stars. Like humans, it knows solitude and rewinds thoughts of solitude.
I have chalked up hundreds of analyses made for me by Artificial Intelligence platforms about my poems. I suggest that you submit your poems one by one to an AI, eg ChatGPT, Claude3, Perplexity AI. It will do a comprehensive analysis. You will be amazed by the depth of things it finds in your writings. You can publish these analyses on sites like My Poetic Side. I do so myself. Prepare a standard file in Microsoft WORD, insert paragraphs for yourself and for the AI. As you proceed through the chat, type your own prompts and copy the remarks by the AI and paste into your WORD file. When done, publish your file. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 26 December, 2024.
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December 26th, 2024 03:19
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Moonsomnia” by Salvia S
The moon is personified, it is given a personality and a life, like a human. Like a human, it needs sleep, and like a human sometimes it can’t sleep. Its secrets include hidden wishes confided to it in silence by humans on earth, eg by lovers. It also hears murmurs of the stars. Like humans, it knows solitude and rewinds thoughts of solitude.
I have chalked up hundreds of analyses made for me by Artificial Intelligence platforms about my poems. I suggest that you submit your poems one by one to an AI, eg ChatGPT, Claude3, Perplexity AI. It will do a comprehensive analysis. You will be amazed by the depth of things it finds in your writings. You can publish these analyses on sites like My Poetic Side. I do so myself. Prepare a standard file in Microsoft WORD, insert paragraphs for yourself and for the AI. As you proceed through the chat, type your own prompts and copy the remarks by the AI and paste into your WORD file. When done, publish your file. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 26 December, 2024.
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December 26th, 2024 03:19
Moonsomnia
Poetic Licence said:
A few words that encapsulating all the areas of our emotions and the secrets and troubles we have to travel on with. Very good read
December 26th, 2024 02:14
Poetic Licence said:
A few words that encapsulating all the areas of our emotions and the secrets and troubles we have to travel on with. Very good read
December 26th, 2024 02:14
Christmas Bliss For You
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and timely. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
December 24th, 2024 22:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and timely. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
December 24th, 2024 22:11
Christmas Bliss For You
Poetic Licence said:
beautiful seasonal poem, very well written
December 24th, 2024 14:14
Poetic Licence said:
beautiful seasonal poem, very well written
December 24th, 2024 14:14
Christmas Bliss For You
orchidee said:
Good write S. Happy Christmas to you too!
December 24th, 2024 13:54
orchidee said:
Good write S. Happy Christmas to you too!
December 24th, 2024 13:54
Christmas Bliss For You
sorenbarrett said:
A Great seasonal poem about the brightness of the Christmas time. Well written
December 24th, 2024 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
A Great seasonal poem about the brightness of the Christmas time. Well written
December 24th, 2024 12:52
Love Tonight, in the Moonlight
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Love tonight, in the moonlight”
This poem is mind-blowing ! It contains passions of a level that can exist only in a girl. Girls feel passionately about love. Words that conjure up ideas or feelings of romance in the poem : moonlight, gentle breeze, murmurs of the heart, twinkling stars, soaring clouds, glittering skies, nightingale, heartbeats, flower blossoms, fragrance of flowers, eternal time, infinite universe, spirit of love, molding of hearts. These words are not only thought up by the poetess but worked into a poetic composition. Excellent work ! Soman Ragavan
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December 21st, 2024 09:03
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Love tonight, in the moonlight”
This poem is mind-blowing ! It contains passions of a level that can exist only in a girl. Girls feel passionately about love. Words that conjure up ideas or feelings of romance in the poem : moonlight, gentle breeze, murmurs of the heart, twinkling stars, soaring clouds, glittering skies, nightingale, heartbeats, flower blossoms, fragrance of flowers, eternal time, infinite universe, spirit of love, molding of hearts. These words are not only thought up by the poetess but worked into a poetic composition. Excellent work ! Soman Ragavan
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December 21st, 2024 09:03
Transient Duality
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Transient duality”
The poem says that, by and large, two choices are offered to us. In life, hold the rose or the thorns. With the rose, there are bloom and fragrance. With the thorns there are pain and bleeding. It’s up to us what we choose. The last line points out the short life of the rose. Thus,if we waste time we will lose the chances of our life. Soman Ragavan.
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December 21st, 2024 08:53
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Transient duality”
The poem says that, by and large, two choices are offered to us. In life, hold the rose or the thorns. With the rose, there are bloom and fragrance. With the thorns there are pain and bleeding. It’s up to us what we choose. The last line points out the short life of the rose. Thus,if we waste time we will lose the chances of our life. Soman Ragavan.
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December 21st, 2024 08:53
Where Lies The Beauty Of Life?
cellinic said:
Very nice and meaningful! Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 07:21
cellinic said:
Very nice and meaningful! Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 07:21
Where Lies The Beauty Of Life?
Poetic Licence said:
Probably between the last option, a poem that makes you ask a question of yourself, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 21st, 2024 02:33
Poetic Licence said:
Probably between the last option, a poem that makes you ask a question of yourself, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 21st, 2024 02:33
Tarnished Trust
Poetic Licence said:
If proper trust is broken it can never be fully repaired, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 14th, 2024 05:59
Poetic Licence said:
If proper trust is broken it can never be fully repaired, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 14th, 2024 05:59
Tarnished Trust
rin said:
I don\'t feel anything special when someone I don\'t trust betrays me.
December 14th, 2024 04:34
rin said:
I don\'t feel anything special when someone I don\'t trust betrays me.
December 14th, 2024 04:34
Bouquet of Lessons
sorenbarrett said:
A type of ten commandments to live by. So perfectly stated in poetic form. Simply lovely
December 8th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
A type of ten commandments to live by. So perfectly stated in poetic form. Simply lovely
December 8th, 2024 05:44
Bouquet of Lessons
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for all the hard work in writing this, a very enjoyable read
December 1st, 2024 05:36
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for all the hard work in writing this, a very enjoyable read
December 1st, 2024 05:36
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