Comments received on poems by Salvia.S
They÷You
cellinic said:
Very nicely and very sincerely written. I agree with you, my dear!
July 2nd, 2026 23:45
cellinic said:
Very nicely and very sincerely written. I agree with you, my dear!
July 2nd, 2026 23:45
They÷You
Paul Bell said:
Punches home when yoiu realise you\'re second best.
You can see why people walk away.
July 2nd, 2026 11:46
Paul Bell said:
Punches home when yoiu realise you\'re second best.
You can see why people walk away.
July 2nd, 2026 11:46
They÷You
sorenbarrett said:
The imbalance of power expressed in this short write it contains feelings of injustice and general sadness. Love unrequited always a powerful theme. Well done Salvia and a fave
July 2nd, 2026 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
The imbalance of power expressed in this short write it contains feelings of injustice and general sadness. Love unrequited always a powerful theme. Well done Salvia and a fave
July 2nd, 2026 08:57
They÷You
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First comment! Yay! Salvia, what a poignant piece. The simplicity gives it its strength...there\'s nowhere for the emotion to hide. That final contrast between being \"nothing\" to someone who is \"everything\" to you lands with heartbreaking honesty. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 2nd, 2026 07:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First comment! Yay! Salvia, what a poignant piece. The simplicity gives it its strength...there\'s nowhere for the emotion to hide. That final contrast between being \"nothing\" to someone who is \"everything\" to you lands with heartbreaking honesty. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 2nd, 2026 07:44
The Lost Soul in the Still Silence
Cini Dasan said:
Happy for you that you found your lost heart. Congratulations. Beautiful poem
June 29th, 2026 13:09
Cini Dasan said:
Happy for you that you found your lost heart. Congratulations. Beautiful poem
June 29th, 2026 13:09
The Note to Burn at Midnight
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Salvia, what a powerful little gut punch. The brevity makes it land even harder...because beneath those few words sits a truth many of us have witnessed firsthand. Sometimes the deepest wounds come from the places where love once lived. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 21st, 2026 23:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Salvia, what a powerful little gut punch. The brevity makes it land even harder...because beneath those few words sits a truth many of us have witnessed firsthand. Sometimes the deepest wounds come from the places where love once lived. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 21st, 2026 23:08
The Note to Burn at Midnight
sorenbarrett said:
So short and so powerful we do hate people for the same reasons that we love them. Nicely stated
June 21st, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
So short and so powerful we do hate people for the same reasons that we love them. Nicely stated
June 21st, 2026 04:14
The Note to Burn at Midnight
orchidee said:
Yes, we can say \'I hate to love you\'. Could be the same as \'I love to hate you\'. That\'s my 3 brain cells used up for today, in that bit of a tongue twister. lol.
And what you doing burning things at midnight? Put that fire out before you go to bed. lol.
June 21st, 2026 02:13
orchidee said:
Yes, we can say \'I hate to love you\'. Could be the same as \'I love to hate you\'. That\'s my 3 brain cells used up for today, in that bit of a tongue twister. lol.
And what you doing burning things at midnight? Put that fire out before you go to bed. lol.
June 21st, 2026 02:13
The Note to Burn at Midnight
Alex Arnot said:
And sometimes it becomes difficult to distinguish the two. Great write!
June 21st, 2026 00:39
Alex Arnot said:
And sometimes it becomes difficult to distinguish the two. Great write!
June 21st, 2026 00:39
Beyond the Rain
arqios said:
Rain is a funny thing, sometimes soothing and at other times reminds us of tears. Good stuff, Salvia 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:45
arqios said:
Rain is a funny thing, sometimes soothing and at other times reminds us of tears. Good stuff, Salvia 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:45
Beyond the Rain
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know if you make a habit of 5-7-5s, but this one is certainly worth the trouble.
May 8th, 2026 18:43
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know if you make a habit of 5-7-5s, but this one is certainly worth the trouble.
May 8th, 2026 18:43
Beyond the Rain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Salvia, this senryu is beautiful in its simplicity. The connection between tears, rain, and release feels so natural...nothing forced, nothing overstated. I especially love how the final line shifts the poem from sadness into quiet healing. Gentle, graceful work, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 16:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Salvia, this senryu is beautiful in its simplicity. The connection between tears, rain, and release feels so natural...nothing forced, nothing overstated. I especially love how the final line shifts the poem from sadness into quiet healing. Gentle, graceful work, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 16:11
Beyond the Rain
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem Salvia where rain associated with tears washes away worries. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 15:38
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem Salvia where rain associated with tears washes away worries. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 15:38
An Asymmetrical Truth
Doggerel Dave said:
I cannot advise never to move to a new place. However for the longest time ...
Simple statement which describes a situation which has been very familiar.
Thanks for that.
May 7th, 2026 19:06
Doggerel Dave said:
I cannot advise never to move to a new place. However for the longest time ...
Simple statement which describes a situation which has been very familiar.
Thanks for that.
May 7th, 2026 19:06
An Asymmetrical Truth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think most of us have stood in this feeling at some point…realizing someone holds a different weight in our lives than we do in theirs. Quietly devastating write, dearest Salvia. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think most of us have stood in this feeling at some point…realizing someone holds a different weight in our lives than we do in theirs. Quietly devastating write, dearest Salvia. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:58
An Asymmetrical Truth
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent to another. Well said Salvia
May 6th, 2026 20:27
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent to another. Well said Salvia
May 6th, 2026 20:27
An Asymmetrical Truth
David Wakeling said:
Umm an interesting question of logic. It made me think
May 6th, 2026 16:37
David Wakeling said:
Umm an interesting question of logic. It made me think
May 6th, 2026 16:37
The Lost Soul in the Still Silence
Paul Bell said:
I think that\'s why they always say, get outside to nature, breathe her in.
Once you\'ve realised this, only then will your true self be found.
May 6th, 2026 10:24
Paul Bell said:
I think that\'s why they always say, get outside to nature, breathe her in.
Once you\'ve realised this, only then will your true self be found.
May 6th, 2026 10:24
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