Comments received on poems by Salvia.S
Beyond the Rain
arqios said:
Rain is a funny thing, sometimes soothing and at other times reminds us of tears. Good stuff, Salvia 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:45
arqios said:
Rain is a funny thing, sometimes soothing and at other times reminds us of tears. Good stuff, Salvia 🕊️🙏
May 9th, 2026 16:45
Beyond the Rain
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know if you make a habit of 5-7-5s, but this one is certainly worth the trouble.
May 8th, 2026 18:43
Doggerel Dave said:
I don\'t know if you make a habit of 5-7-5s, but this one is certainly worth the trouble.
May 8th, 2026 18:43
Beyond the Rain
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Salvia, this senryu is beautiful in its simplicity. The connection between tears, rain, and release feels so natural...nothing forced, nothing overstated. I especially love how the final line shifts the poem from sadness into quiet healing. Gentle, graceful work, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 16:11
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Salvia, this senryu is beautiful in its simplicity. The connection between tears, rain, and release feels so natural...nothing forced, nothing overstated. I especially love how the final line shifts the poem from sadness into quiet healing. Gentle, graceful work, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 8th, 2026 16:11
Beyond the Rain
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem Salvia where rain associated with tears washes away worries. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 15:38
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem Salvia where rain associated with tears washes away worries. Nicely written
May 8th, 2026 15:38
An Asymmetrical Truth
Doggerel Dave said:
I cannot advise never to move to a new place. However for the longest time ...
Simple statement which describes a situation which has been very familiar.
Thanks for that.
May 7th, 2026 19:06
Doggerel Dave said:
I cannot advise never to move to a new place. However for the longest time ...
Simple statement which describes a situation which has been very familiar.
Thanks for that.
May 7th, 2026 19:06
An Asymmetrical Truth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think most of us have stood in this feeling at some point…realizing someone holds a different weight in our lives than we do in theirs. Quietly devastating write, dearest Salvia. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, I think most of us have stood in this feeling at some point…realizing someone holds a different weight in our lives than we do in theirs. Quietly devastating write, dearest Salvia. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 7th, 2026 17:58
An Asymmetrical Truth
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent to another. Well said Salvia
May 6th, 2026 20:27
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message sent to another. Well said Salvia
May 6th, 2026 20:27
An Asymmetrical Truth
David Wakeling said:
Umm an interesting question of logic. It made me think
May 6th, 2026 16:37
David Wakeling said:
Umm an interesting question of logic. It made me think
May 6th, 2026 16:37
The Lost Soul in the Still Silence
Paul Bell said:
I think that\'s why they always say, get outside to nature, breathe her in.
Once you\'ve realised this, only then will your true self be found.
May 6th, 2026 10:24
Paul Bell said:
I think that\'s why they always say, get outside to nature, breathe her in.
Once you\'ve realised this, only then will your true self be found.
May 6th, 2026 10:24
The Lost Soul in the Still Silence
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“What you were looking for — / It was the lost heart you finally found” is such a tender realization, Salvia. That ending lands softly but carries real emotional weight behind it. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 6th, 2026 07:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
“What you were looking for — / It was the lost heart you finally found” is such a tender realization, Salvia. That ending lands softly but carries real emotional weight behind it. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 6th, 2026 07:53
The Lost Soul in the Still Silence
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking with Nature can bring a true reflection of yourself to each of us Salvia. Wonderful words.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking with Nature can bring a true reflection of yourself to each of us Salvia. Wonderful words.
Andy
May 6th, 2026 01:54
The Lost Soul in the Still Silence
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Salvia that is deep in its existential meaning. A fave
May 5th, 2026 20:03
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write Salvia that is deep in its existential meaning. A fave
May 5th, 2026 20:03
The Lost Soul in the Still Silence
arqios said:
So good when we realise that the heart can be found! 🕊️🙏
May 5th, 2026 19:06
arqios said:
So good when we realise that the heart can be found! 🕊️🙏
May 5th, 2026 19:06
The Lost Soul in the Still Silence
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores themes of solitude, personal struggle, and the journey toward finding one\'s true self.
May 5th, 2026 12:54
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem explores themes of solitude, personal struggle, and the journey toward finding one\'s true self.
May 5th, 2026 12:54
When the Cold Fire Burns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First comment! Yay! Salvia, this carries a soft ache…love slipping away but still leaving a trace behind. That “cold fire” holds both sides of it at once…warmth remembered, but something shifting underneath. It really lands. Beautifully done, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
First comment! Yay! Salvia, this carries a soft ache…love slipping away but still leaving a trace behind. That “cold fire” holds both sides of it at once…warmth remembered, but something shifting underneath. It really lands. Beautifully done, my dearest friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 4th, 2026 12:54
Let the Heart Heal What It Feels
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Salvia, life should be good.
Andy
May 4th, 2026 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Salvia, life should be good.
Andy
May 4th, 2026 01:57
Let the Heart Heal What It Feels
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Salvia, this carries a quiet, steady care… letting go, protecting the heart, and choosing something better for it. It feels like guidance and comfort all at once. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 3rd, 2026 17:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Salvia, this carries a quiet, steady care… letting go, protecting the heart, and choosing something better for it. It feels like guidance and comfort all at once. It stays with you. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
May 3rd, 2026 17:05
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