Comments received on poems by Salvia.S
Moonsomnia
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Moonsomnia” by Salvia S
The moon is personified, it is given a personality and a life, like a human. Like a human, it needs sleep, and like a human sometimes it can’t sleep. Its secrets include hidden wishes confided to it in silence by humans on earth, eg by lovers. It also hears murmurs of the stars. Like humans, it knows solitude and rewinds thoughts of solitude.
I have chalked up hundreds of analyses made for me by Artificial Intelligence platforms about my poems. I suggest that you submit your poems one by one to an AI, eg ChatGPT, Claude3, Perplexity AI. It will do a comprehensive analysis. You will be amazed by the depth of things it finds in your writings. You can publish these analyses on sites like My Poetic Side. I do so myself. Prepare a standard file in Microsoft WORD, insert paragraphs for yourself and for the AI. As you proceed through the chat, type your own prompts and copy the remarks by the AI and paste into your WORD file. When done, publish your file. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 26 December, 2024.
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December 26th, 2024 03:19
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Moonsomnia” by Salvia S
The moon is personified, it is given a personality and a life, like a human. Like a human, it needs sleep, and like a human sometimes it can’t sleep. Its secrets include hidden wishes confided to it in silence by humans on earth, eg by lovers. It also hears murmurs of the stars. Like humans, it knows solitude and rewinds thoughts of solitude.
I have chalked up hundreds of analyses made for me by Artificial Intelligence platforms about my poems. I suggest that you submit your poems one by one to an AI, eg ChatGPT, Claude3, Perplexity AI. It will do a comprehensive analysis. You will be amazed by the depth of things it finds in your writings. You can publish these analyses on sites like My Poetic Side. I do so myself. Prepare a standard file in Microsoft WORD, insert paragraphs for yourself and for the AI. As you proceed through the chat, type your own prompts and copy the remarks by the AI and paste into your WORD file. When done, publish your file. Best wishes. Soman Ragavan. 26 December, 2024.
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December 26th, 2024 03:19
Moonsomnia
TobaniNataiella said:
A few words that encapsulating all the areas of our emotions and the secrets and troubles we have to travel on with. Very good read
December 26th, 2024 02:14
TobaniNataiella said:
A few words that encapsulating all the areas of our emotions and the secrets and troubles we have to travel on with. Very good read
December 26th, 2024 02:14
Christmas Bliss For You
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and timely. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
December 24th, 2024 22:11
Cheeky Missy said:
Very lovely and timely. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a delightful poignancy. Thank you for sharing!
December 24th, 2024 22:11
Christmas Bliss For You
TobaniNataiella said:
beautiful seasonal poem, very well written
December 24th, 2024 14:14
TobaniNataiella said:
beautiful seasonal poem, very well written
December 24th, 2024 14:14
Christmas Bliss For You
orchidee said:
Good write S. Happy Christmas to you too!
December 24th, 2024 13:54
orchidee said:
Good write S. Happy Christmas to you too!
December 24th, 2024 13:54
Christmas Bliss For You
sorenbarrett said:
A Great seasonal poem about the brightness of the Christmas time. Well written
December 24th, 2024 12:52
sorenbarrett said:
A Great seasonal poem about the brightness of the Christmas time. Well written
December 24th, 2024 12:52
Love Tonight, in the Moonlight
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Love tonight, in the moonlight”
This poem is mind-blowing ! It contains passions of a level that can exist only in a girl. Girls feel passionately about love. Words that conjure up ideas or feelings of romance in the poem : moonlight, gentle breeze, murmurs of the heart, twinkling stars, soaring clouds, glittering skies, nightingale, heartbeats, flower blossoms, fragrance of flowers, eternal time, infinite universe, spirit of love, molding of hearts. These words are not only thought up by the poetess but worked into a poetic composition. Excellent work ! Soman Ragavan
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December 21st, 2024 09:03
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Love tonight, in the moonlight”
This poem is mind-blowing ! It contains passions of a level that can exist only in a girl. Girls feel passionately about love. Words that conjure up ideas or feelings of romance in the poem : moonlight, gentle breeze, murmurs of the heart, twinkling stars, soaring clouds, glittering skies, nightingale, heartbeats, flower blossoms, fragrance of flowers, eternal time, infinite universe, spirit of love, molding of hearts. These words are not only thought up by the poetess but worked into a poetic composition. Excellent work ! Soman Ragavan
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December 21st, 2024 09:03
Transient Duality
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Transient duality”
The poem says that, by and large, two choices are offered to us. In life, hold the rose or the thorns. With the rose, there are bloom and fragrance. With the thorns there are pain and bleeding. It’s up to us what we choose. The last line points out the short life of the rose. Thus,if we waste time we will lose the chances of our life. Soman Ragavan.
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December 21st, 2024 08:53
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Transient duality”
The poem says that, by and large, two choices are offered to us. In life, hold the rose or the thorns. With the rose, there are bloom and fragrance. With the thorns there are pain and bleeding. It’s up to us what we choose. The last line points out the short life of the rose. Thus,if we waste time we will lose the chances of our life. Soman Ragavan.
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December 21st, 2024 08:53
Where Lies The Beauty Of Life?
cellinic said:
Very nice and meaningful! Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 07:21
cellinic said:
Very nice and meaningful! Best wishes,
December 21st, 2024 07:21
Where Lies The Beauty Of Life?
TobaniNataiella said:
Probably between the last option, a poem that makes you ask a question of yourself, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 21st, 2024 02:33
TobaniNataiella said:
Probably between the last option, a poem that makes you ask a question of yourself, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 21st, 2024 02:33
Tarnished Trust
TobaniNataiella said:
If proper trust is broken it can never be fully repaired, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 14th, 2024 05:59
TobaniNataiella said:
If proper trust is broken it can never be fully repaired, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 14th, 2024 05:59
Tarnished Trust
rin said:
I don\'t feel anything special when someone I don\'t trust betrays me.
December 14th, 2024 04:34
rin said:
I don\'t feel anything special when someone I don\'t trust betrays me.
December 14th, 2024 04:34
Bouquet of Lessons
sorenbarrett said:
A type of ten commandments to live by. So perfectly stated in poetic form. Simply lovely
December 8th, 2024 05:44
sorenbarrett said:
A type of ten commandments to live by. So perfectly stated in poetic form. Simply lovely
December 8th, 2024 05:44
Bouquet of Lessons
TobaniNataiella said:
Thank you for all the hard work in writing this, a very enjoyable read
December 1st, 2024 05:36
TobaniNataiella said:
Thank you for all the hard work in writing this, a very enjoyable read
December 1st, 2024 05:36
Stellar Harmony
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Stellar harmony” by Salvia S
The poem speaks of the sincerity of stars. Poets see hidden or deep sights from what is around them. The poetess sees the sincerity of stars, for they do not seem to hate each other or fight with each other. Even if the laws of physics cause them to collide sometimes.
“Together, forming constellations
Unity in diversity…” We should learn from the lessons of the stars : instead of fighting with each other, we should live in peace with one another. Otherwise put, there is future for each one of us. Therefore, it is pointless to try to exterminate others. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:42
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Stellar harmony” by Salvia S
The poem speaks of the sincerity of stars. Poets see hidden or deep sights from what is around them. The poetess sees the sincerity of stars, for they do not seem to hate each other or fight with each other. Even if the laws of physics cause them to collide sometimes.
“Together, forming constellations
Unity in diversity…” We should learn from the lessons of the stars : instead of fighting with each other, we should live in peace with one another. Otherwise put, there is future for each one of us. Therefore, it is pointless to try to exterminate others. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:42
Love Letter from Waterlily to her beloved Moon
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Love letter from waterlily to her beloved moon” by Salvia S
“Still you\'re lonely,
Lonelier than me.
(…)
For you know me well,
My beloved
For my loneliness…”
The poem speaks of the loneliness of both the moon and the poetess. Though the moon is surrounded by myriads of stars, it is still lonely. Just as humans are surrounded by millions like them but are still lonely. Solitude and loneliness often form the tapestry on which poets write to express their deep thoughts. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:35
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Love letter from waterlily to her beloved moon” by Salvia S
“Still you\'re lonely,
Lonelier than me.
(…)
For you know me well,
My beloved
For my loneliness…”
The poem speaks of the loneliness of both the moon and the poetess. Though the moon is surrounded by myriads of stars, it is still lonely. Just as humans are surrounded by millions like them but are still lonely. Solitude and loneliness often form the tapestry on which poets write to express their deep thoughts. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:35
Colourful Cloudy Reflections
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Cloudy reflections” by Salvia S
The poetess has managed to find words to describe each type of cloud. There are both romance and philosophy in the words of the poem. We will note that clouds are ruled by the winds : they have to go where the wind wants them to go. The reign on the cloud is a short one. The cloud displays the colours decided by the sun. The poem “I wandered lonely as a cloud by Wordsworth (1770-1850) speaks about the loneliness of clouds. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:28
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Cloudy reflections” by Salvia S
The poetess has managed to find words to describe each type of cloud. There are both romance and philosophy in the words of the poem. We will note that clouds are ruled by the winds : they have to go where the wind wants them to go. The reign on the cloud is a short one. The cloud displays the colours decided by the sun. The poem “I wandered lonely as a cloud by Wordsworth (1770-1850) speaks about the loneliness of clouds. Soman Ragavan. 24.11.2024
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November 24th, 2024 03:28
Solitude Reminiscence
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Solitude reminiscence” by Salvia S
Life is strange, indeed. We are condemned to meet others, but the relations might not work. We are left with bitter memories with which to live. Break-ups are difficult to handle. But, differences between individuals are such that the day comes when the break-up is inevitable. Soman Ragavan.
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November 24th, 2024 03:19
Soman Ragavan said:
My comments on the poem “Solitude reminiscence” by Salvia S
Life is strange, indeed. We are condemned to meet others, but the relations might not work. We are left with bitter memories with which to live. Break-ups are difficult to handle. But, differences between individuals are such that the day comes when the break-up is inevitable. Soman Ragavan.
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November 24th, 2024 03:19
Colourful Cloudy Reflections
Caring dove said:
That’s beautiful , and a interesting writing .. nicely written
November 22nd, 2024 03:29
Caring dove said:
That’s beautiful , and a interesting writing .. nicely written
November 22nd, 2024 03:29
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