Comments received on poems by Salvia.S
Let It Fade
Poetic Licence said:
Very positive advice, nicely written, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 07:56
Poetic Licence said:
Very positive advice, nicely written, enjoyed the read
May 27th, 2025 07:56
Let It Fade
orchidee said:
Good write S. I left me shopping behind, I know that.... lol.
May 27th, 2025 07:52
orchidee said:
Good write S. I left me shopping behind, I know that.... lol.
May 27th, 2025 07:52
Let It Fade
sorenbarrett said:
So many layers of meaning in this simple poem it dives deep into morality and what a person should listen to. A fave
May 27th, 2025 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
So many layers of meaning in this simple poem it dives deep into morality and what a person should listen to. A fave
May 27th, 2025 07:05
Scent of Secrets
Goldfinch60 said:
Secrets are within us all Salvia. Fine words.
Andy
May 24th, 2025 01:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Secrets are within us all Salvia. Fine words.
Andy
May 24th, 2025 01:20
Scent of Secrets
Poetic Licence said:
The longer the secret the bigger the guilt gets until it is to much, nicely written and expressed
May 23rd, 2025 09:24
Poetic Licence said:
The longer the secret the bigger the guilt gets until it is to much, nicely written and expressed
May 23rd, 2025 09:24
Scent of Secrets
sorenbarrett said:
Secrets promote guilt and guilt can be resurrected by any reminder. Nicely written Salvia
May 23rd, 2025 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Secrets promote guilt and guilt can be resurrected by any reminder. Nicely written Salvia
May 23rd, 2025 05:40
Scent of Secrets
arqios said:
A tantalising short poem with so many implications! 🕊️🙏🏻
May 23rd, 2025 05:32
arqios said:
A tantalising short poem with so many implications! 🕊️🙏🏻
May 23rd, 2025 05:32
To Be Continued
David Wakeling said:
A lovely poem. I like the rhyme very much.Well done
May 21st, 2025 18:24
David Wakeling said:
A lovely poem. I like the rhyme very much.Well done
May 21st, 2025 18:24
To Be Continued
Poetic Licence said:
Out of the darkness will come light, and here it is, beautiful write
May 21st, 2025 08:50
Poetic Licence said:
Out of the darkness will come light, and here it is, beautiful write
May 21st, 2025 08:50
To Be Continued
sorenbarrett said:
Like a shining diamond in the sand this poem brings a glint of sunshine to the eye of the reader. Lovely
May 21st, 2025 05:47
sorenbarrett said:
Like a shining diamond in the sand this poem brings a glint of sunshine to the eye of the reader. Lovely
May 21st, 2025 05:47
The Moon is a Reality
Goldfinch60 said:
True Salvia, the moon is for us all to admire at all times.
Andy
May 21st, 2025 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
True Salvia, the moon is for us all to admire at all times.
Andy
May 21st, 2025 00:58
Fading Like the Rain
NinjaGirl said:
Rain cleanses my soul in a way I didn\'t know possible. It\'s such a beautiful thing thank you for writing about it.
May 20th, 2025 22:49
NinjaGirl said:
Rain cleanses my soul in a way I didn\'t know possible. It\'s such a beautiful thing thank you for writing about it.
May 20th, 2025 22:49
The Moon is a Reality
David Wakeling said:
I see the moon here is a metaphor for owning the impossible dream.Some wisdom is sprinkled on the argument by saying even if you were to possess the impossible you would have to share it. This made me think
May 20th, 2025 16:22
David Wakeling said:
I see the moon here is a metaphor for owning the impossible dream.Some wisdom is sprinkled on the argument by saying even if you were to possess the impossible you would have to share it. This made me think
May 20th, 2025 16:22
The Moon is a Reality
Poetic Licence said:
In todays world of greed I have no doubt there are those who would want it all for themselves, what would we do without it, a difficult question, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 08:40
Poetic Licence said:
In todays world of greed I have no doubt there are those who would want it all for themselves, what would we do without it, a difficult question, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 08:40
The Moon is a Reality
arqios said:
Imagine if our world was designed to have two moons or even more- what an exponential reality in many, many facets🕊️🙏🏻
May 20th, 2025 07:22
arqios said:
Imagine if our world was designed to have two moons or even more- what an exponential reality in many, many facets🕊️🙏🏻
May 20th, 2025 07:22
The Moon is a Reality
Canticle said:
A lovely read, the moon is one of my favorite things to write about.
May 20th, 2025 06:41
Canticle said:
A lovely read, the moon is one of my favorite things to write about.
May 20th, 2025 06:41
The Moon is a Reality
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful thought and yet such a poignant question in a world full of greed and illusion of ownership. We own nothing ownership such a strange thought where once people thought they owned other people as slaves, now no longer accepted. Where people thought they owned land that belongs to no one. Today people rob, connive, and murder for wealth that belongs to no one. Even love that is free people lie, impersonate and kill over. No one owns a heart, a soul, a grain of sand it is there if we share but no one takes it with them when they are gone. A fave
May 20th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful thought and yet such a poignant question in a world full of greed and illusion of ownership. We own nothing ownership such a strange thought where once people thought they owned other people as slaves, now no longer accepted. Where people thought they owned land that belongs to no one. Today people rob, connive, and murder for wealth that belongs to no one. Even love that is free people lie, impersonate and kill over. No one owns a heart, a soul, a grain of sand it is there if we share but no one takes it with them when they are gone. A fave
May 20th, 2025 06:21
Only the Heart Knows the Soul
NafisaSB said:
you have definitely nailed it in these few lines.. people often pass comments without knowing the truth - so just ignore them as only you know what\'s happening
May 20th, 2025 01:35
NafisaSB said:
you have definitely nailed it in these few lines.. people often pass comments without knowing the truth - so just ignore them as only you know what\'s happening
May 20th, 2025 01:35
Fading Like the Rain
Soman Ragavan said:
It is strange. We feel that our heart and mind are different from us. Indeed, our heart questions us. Even more, it DRIVES us... It rules us. It overrules the mind. It can and does lead us to our destruction, sometimes... The greatest and most impressive achievements were made from the heart, not the mind. Refer to the poem \"If tomorrow starts without me\" by David Romano. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xx9zE1g9Io4&pp=ygUqaWYgdG9tb3Jyb3cgc3RhcnRzIHdpdGhvdXQgbWUgZGF2aWQgcm9tYW5v
Soman Ragavan
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May 18th, 2025 20:29
Soman Ragavan said:
It is strange. We feel that our heart and mind are different from us. Indeed, our heart questions us. Even more, it DRIVES us... It rules us. It overrules the mind. It can and does lead us to our destruction, sometimes... The greatest and most impressive achievements were made from the heart, not the mind. Refer to the poem \"If tomorrow starts without me\" by David Romano. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xx9zE1g9Io4&pp=ygUqaWYgdG9tb3Jyb3cgc3RhcnRzIHdpdGhvdXQgbWUgZGF2aWQgcm9tYW5v
Soman Ragavan
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May 18th, 2025 20:29
Love Letter from Waterlily to her beloved Moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully written, Salvia, This was clearly posted before I \"bumped\" into you, but this is brilliant. A powerful metaphor for beauty in the darkness and resilience, despite all of the loneliness, depression, etc. that would consume the water lily were it not for the moon. Powerful and a fave! 🌹👏
May 18th, 2025 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully written, Salvia, This was clearly posted before I \"bumped\" into you, but this is brilliant. A powerful metaphor for beauty in the darkness and resilience, despite all of the loneliness, depression, etc. that would consume the water lily were it not for the moon. Powerful and a fave! 🌹👏
May 18th, 2025 09:40
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