Comments received on poems by Salvia.S 🌹
The Moon is a Reality
David Wakeling said:
I see the moon here is a metaphor for owning the impossible dream.Some wisdom is sprinkled on the argument by saying even if you were to possess the impossible you would have to share it. This made me think
May 20th, 2025 16:22
David Wakeling said:
I see the moon here is a metaphor for owning the impossible dream.Some wisdom is sprinkled on the argument by saying even if you were to possess the impossible you would have to share it. This made me think
May 20th, 2025 16:22
The Moon is a Reality
Poetic Licence said:
In todays world of greed I have no doubt there are those who would want it all for themselves, what would we do without it, a difficult question, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 08:40
Poetic Licence said:
In todays world of greed I have no doubt there are those who would want it all for themselves, what would we do without it, a difficult question, enjoyed the read
May 20th, 2025 08:40
The Moon is a Reality
arqios said:
Imagine if our world was designed to have two moons or even more- what an exponential reality in many, many facets🕊️🙏🏻
May 20th, 2025 07:22
arqios said:
Imagine if our world was designed to have two moons or even more- what an exponential reality in many, many facets🕊️🙏🏻
May 20th, 2025 07:22
The Moon is a Reality
Canticle said:
A lovely read, the moon is one of my favorite things to write about.
May 20th, 2025 06:41
Canticle said:
A lovely read, the moon is one of my favorite things to write about.
May 20th, 2025 06:41
The Moon is a Reality
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful thought and yet such a poignant question in a world full of greed and illusion of ownership. We own nothing ownership such a strange thought where once people thought they owned other people as slaves, now no longer accepted. Where people thought they owned land that belongs to no one. Today people rob, connive, and murder for wealth that belongs to no one. Even love that is free people lie, impersonate and kill over. No one owns a heart, a soul, a grain of sand it is there if we share but no one takes it with them when they are gone. A fave
May 20th, 2025 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful thought and yet such a poignant question in a world full of greed and illusion of ownership. We own nothing ownership such a strange thought where once people thought they owned other people as slaves, now no longer accepted. Where people thought they owned land that belongs to no one. Today people rob, connive, and murder for wealth that belongs to no one. Even love that is free people lie, impersonate and kill over. No one owns a heart, a soul, a grain of sand it is there if we share but no one takes it with them when they are gone. A fave
May 20th, 2025 06:21
Only the Heart Knows the Soul
NafisaSB said:
you have definitely nailed it in these few lines.. people often pass comments without knowing the truth - so just ignore them as only you know what\'s happening
May 20th, 2025 01:35
NafisaSB said:
you have definitely nailed it in these few lines.. people often pass comments without knowing the truth - so just ignore them as only you know what\'s happening
May 20th, 2025 01:35
Fading Like the Rain
Soman Ragavan said:
It is strange. We feel that our heart and mind are different from us. Indeed, our heart questions us. Even more, it DRIVES us... It rules us. It overrules the mind. It can and does lead us to our destruction, sometimes... The greatest and most impressive achievements were made from the heart, not the mind. Refer to the poem \"If tomorrow starts without me\" by David Romano. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xx9zE1g9Io4&pp=ygUqaWYgdG9tb3Jyb3cgc3RhcnRzIHdpdGhvdXQgbWUgZGF2aWQgcm9tYW5v
Soman Ragavan
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May 18th, 2025 20:29
Soman Ragavan said:
It is strange. We feel that our heart and mind are different from us. Indeed, our heart questions us. Even more, it DRIVES us... It rules us. It overrules the mind. It can and does lead us to our destruction, sometimes... The greatest and most impressive achievements were made from the heart, not the mind. Refer to the poem \"If tomorrow starts without me\" by David Romano. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xx9zE1g9Io4&pp=ygUqaWYgdG9tb3Jyb3cgc3RhcnRzIHdpdGhvdXQgbWUgZGF2aWQgcm9tYW5v
Soman Ragavan
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May 18th, 2025 20:29
Love Letter from Waterlily to her beloved Moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully written, Salvia, This was clearly posted before I \"bumped\" into you, but this is brilliant. A powerful metaphor for beauty in the darkness and resilience, despite all of the loneliness, depression, etc. that would consume the water lily were it not for the moon. Powerful and a fave! 🌹👏
May 18th, 2025 09:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully written, Salvia, This was clearly posted before I \"bumped\" into you, but this is brilliant. A powerful metaphor for beauty in the darkness and resilience, despite all of the loneliness, depression, etc. that would consume the water lily were it not for the moon. Powerful and a fave! 🌹👏
May 18th, 2025 09:40
Fading Like the Rain
Poetic Licence said:
And may that peace find the right souls, lovely read
May 18th, 2025 08:12
Poetic Licence said:
And may that peace find the right souls, lovely read
May 18th, 2025 08:12
Fading Like the Rain
arqios said:
And higher still they soar lifting our peace to touch other planes of conscious being! 🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
And higher still they soar lifting our peace to touch other planes of conscious being! 🙏🏻🕊️
May 18th, 2025 05:24
Fading Like the Rain
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely quatrain Salvia the meaning comes through clearly.
May 18th, 2025 05:23
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely quatrain Salvia the meaning comes through clearly.
May 18th, 2025 05:23
Only the Heart Knows the Soul
Soman Ragavan said:
Both the heart and the soul are mysteries. While the heart can be seen in some circumstances, the soul remains totally elusive. But it is still there and remains powerful. It exerts its powers in the shadow.
May 15th, 2025 20:44
Soman Ragavan said:
Both the heart and the soul are mysteries. While the heart can be seen in some circumstances, the soul remains totally elusive. But it is still there and remains powerful. It exerts its powers in the shadow.
May 15th, 2025 20:44
Only the Heart Knows the Soul
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine true words Salvia.
Andy
May 15th, 2025 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Such fine true words Salvia.
Andy
May 15th, 2025 01:25
When Falling isn\'t Final
Soman Ragavan said:
Falling should not be final. What matters is that we should try to rise after each fall. If we don\'t succeed in that, it\'s truly bad for us. By the way we always speak of falling DOWN. Yet, some people can fall UP. They rise to become infamous.
May 14th, 2025 21:27
Soman Ragavan said:
Falling should not be final. What matters is that we should try to rise after each fall. If we don\'t succeed in that, it\'s truly bad for us. By the way we always speak of falling DOWN. Yet, some people can fall UP. They rise to become infamous.
May 14th, 2025 21:27
Only the Heart Knows the Soul
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It is true. Only we can truly know what we\'ve been through. Advice may come, but only we can determine if it is relevant to follow. Well done on this insightful piece. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
It is true. Only we can truly know what we\'ve been through. Advice may come, but only we can determine if it is relevant to follow. Well done on this insightful piece. 🌹👏
May 14th, 2025 11:30
Only the Heart Knows the Soul
cellinic said:
Quite a wise and intelligent statement, powerfully and beautifully versed... Best wishes, dear!
May 14th, 2025 10:55
cellinic said:
Quite a wise and intelligent statement, powerfully and beautifully versed... Best wishes, dear!
May 14th, 2025 10:55
Only the Heart Knows the Soul
arqios said:
Whether elixir or poison has been brewed for no one else🙏🏻🕊
May 14th, 2025 10:49
arqios said:
Whether elixir or poison has been brewed for no one else🙏🏻🕊
May 14th, 2025 10:49
Only the Heart Knows the Soul
sorenbarrett said:
It is true that no one can ever know what you feel even if they have gone through the same things. A lovely poem with the meaning of don\'t judge and don\'t assume you know. Well done
May 14th, 2025 10:23
sorenbarrett said:
It is true that no one can ever know what you feel even if they have gone through the same things. A lovely poem with the meaning of don\'t judge and don\'t assume you know. Well done
May 14th, 2025 10:23
What Are Memories?
arqios said:
It’s reverberations are the rhythm of the heart🙏🏻🕊
May 14th, 2025 05:56
arqios said:
It’s reverberations are the rhythm of the heart🙏🏻🕊
May 14th, 2025 05:56
A Craze, Not a Dream
cellinic said:
Very impressive, deep with reserved emotional overtones. Like and fave, dear
May 12th, 2025 09:35
cellinic said:
Very impressive, deep with reserved emotional overtones. Like and fave, dear
May 12th, 2025 09:35
A Craze, Not a Dream
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Salvia, dearest poet and friend, have I told you how brilliant you are? I am not 😗💨. I am serious. This poem is another example of your poetic prowess and your ability to speak deeply through profound metaphor. Brava, sister. 🌹👏
May 11th, 2025 07:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Salvia, dearest poet and friend, have I told you how brilliant you are? I am not 😗💨. I am serious. This poem is another example of your poetic prowess and your ability to speak deeply through profound metaphor. Brava, sister. 🌹👏
May 11th, 2025 07:46
A Craze, Not a Dream
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor in this poem is so deep. It reflects wishes beyond our reach yet calls to us in dreams that we know can\'t be fulfilled but are still yearned for and in that craze we live our lives. A definite fave
May 11th, 2025 06:34
sorenbarrett said:
The metaphor in this poem is so deep. It reflects wishes beyond our reach yet calls to us in dreams that we know can\'t be fulfilled but are still yearned for and in that craze we live our lives. A definite fave
May 11th, 2025 06:34
A Craze, Not a Dream
arqios said:
A dream without a name is like a land without borders. Good one 🙏🏻🕊️
May 11th, 2025 05:39
arqios said:
A dream without a name is like a land without borders. Good one 🙏🏻🕊️
May 11th, 2025 05:39
When Falling isn\'t Final
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, rain that falls will eventually reach the sea through rivers and from there evaporate to form clouds that will bring in further rain. Even from lakes and reservoirs, water evaporates, leading to rain. It\'s a cycle. We will also notice that freshly fallen snow looks perfect but it will soon melt into muddy water. From the sea, it will rise to form clouds which will be blown partially towards the poles. There, snow will fall again.
\"But pleasures are like poppies spread ---
You seize the flower, the bloom is shed;
Or like snow falls in the river ---
A moment white, then melts forever.\"
--Robert Burns (1749-1796)
--Soman Ragavan
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May 8th, 2025 05:46
Soman Ragavan said:
Indeed, rain that falls will eventually reach the sea through rivers and from there evaporate to form clouds that will bring in further rain. Even from lakes and reservoirs, water evaporates, leading to rain. It\'s a cycle. We will also notice that freshly fallen snow looks perfect but it will soon melt into muddy water. From the sea, it will rise to form clouds which will be blown partially towards the poles. There, snow will fall again.
\"But pleasures are like poppies spread ---
You seize the flower, the bloom is shed;
Or like snow falls in the river ---
A moment white, then melts forever.\"
--Robert Burns (1749-1796)
--Soman Ragavan
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May 8th, 2025 05:46
When Falling isn\'t Final
Poetic Licence said:
So few words yet so much meaning, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 10:10
Poetic Licence said:
So few words yet so much meaning, enjoyed the read
May 7th, 2025 10:10
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