Comments received on poems by Salvia.S
The River of Thought
Soman Ragavan said:
We will note that the destiny of rivers is to end up in the sea. They may roar along, cause rampage, break their banks, etc., but they enter the sea quietly. That is the point where the river becomes the sea. The neutral water of the river becomes salty. Soman Ragavan.
March 2nd, 2025 06:56
Soman Ragavan said:
We will note that the destiny of rivers is to end up in the sea. They may roar along, cause rampage, break their banks, etc., but they enter the sea quietly. That is the point where the river becomes the sea. The neutral water of the river becomes salty. Soman Ragavan.
March 2nd, 2025 06:56
The River of Thought
sorenbarrett said:
This seems simple at first glance but becomes deeper as one ponders. It has many elements here and metaphor is always rich in its meaning. Lovely
March 2nd, 2025 04:39
sorenbarrett said:
This seems simple at first glance but becomes deeper as one ponders. It has many elements here and metaphor is always rich in its meaning. Lovely
March 2nd, 2025 04:39
The River of Thought
arqios said:
Presently and swiftly, adverbs of time and manner that bring us there; so timely and comforting. ππ»π
March 2nd, 2025 04:36
arqios said:
Presently and swiftly, adverbs of time and manner that bring us there; so timely and comforting. ππ»π
March 2nd, 2025 04:36
Luminous Lunar
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about the beauty of night Salvia.
Andy
March 2nd, 2025 03:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about the beauty of night Salvia.
Andy
March 2nd, 2025 03:02
Brevity\'s Paradox
Soman Ragavan said:
You can see my poem \"The confirmation of brevity\" :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17024408-Poem--The-confirmation-of-brevity.-26-February--2023.-by-Soman-Ragavan
Soman Ragavan. 2 March 2025
March 2nd, 2025 02:54
Soman Ragavan said:
You can see my poem \"The confirmation of brevity\" :
https://allpoetry.com/poem/17024408-Poem--The-confirmation-of-brevity.-26-February--2023.-by-Soman-Ragavan
Soman Ragavan. 2 March 2025
March 2nd, 2025 02:54
Luminous Lunar
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Faved. I love the luminous moon (well I love the moon regardless), so this title dragged me in. The poem shines as brightly! Well done, Salvia! πΉπ
March 1st, 2025 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Faved. I love the luminous moon (well I love the moon regardless), so this title dragged me in. The poem shines as brightly! Well done, Salvia! πΉπ
March 1st, 2025 08:37
Lament of the Last Leaf
arqios said:
How amazing when nature represents each otherβs experiencesππ»π
March 1st, 2025 07:57
arqios said:
How amazing when nature represents each otherβs experiencesππ»π
March 1st, 2025 07:57
Luminous Lunar
arqios said:
Such a stellar canopy to crown us always ππ»π
March 1st, 2025 07:10
arqios said:
Such a stellar canopy to crown us always ππ»π
March 1st, 2025 07:10
Luminous Lunar
sorenbarrett said:
So short yet so beautiful like a single star. Lovely
March 1st, 2025 07:01
sorenbarrett said:
So short yet so beautiful like a single star. Lovely
March 1st, 2025 07:01
Universe\'s Love Offered in Celestial Beauty
Reynaldo Casison said:
Very Pretty And Moonlit Sweet Salvia
Nice One
March 1st, 2025 05:48
Reynaldo Casison said:
Very Pretty And Moonlit Sweet Salvia
Nice One
March 1st, 2025 05:48
Rainbows in a Dew Drop
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Salvia
Sweet And Vibrant
March 1st, 2025 04:52
Reynaldo Casison said:
Nice One Salvia
Sweet And Vibrant
March 1st, 2025 04:52
Lament of the Last Leaf
Soman Ragavan said:
My poem on you :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-198153
February 28th, 2025 11:15
Soman Ragavan said:
My poem on you :
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-198153
February 28th, 2025 11:15
Lament of the Last Leaf
Soman Ragavan said:
\"Fleeting time lost in eternity\" : thus, time is fleeting and disappears from sight, but goes into eternity.
\"Beauty\'s an ephemeral serenity\" : the nature of beauty is ephemeral, but there is serenity about it.
The poem does not say if the last leaf is blown away. If it does get blown away, there will be a picture of emptiness.
Soman Ragavan. 28 February 2025.
February 28th, 2025 11:12
Soman Ragavan said:
\"Fleeting time lost in eternity\" : thus, time is fleeting and disappears from sight, but goes into eternity.
\"Beauty\'s an ephemeral serenity\" : the nature of beauty is ephemeral, but there is serenity about it.
The poem does not say if the last leaf is blown away. If it does get blown away, there will be a picture of emptiness.
Soman Ragavan. 28 February 2025.
February 28th, 2025 11:12
Lament of the Last Leaf
Poetic Licence said:
The determination to cling on,even thou you know the end is coming, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 10:36
Poetic Licence said:
The determination to cling on,even thou you know the end is coming, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 10:36
Lament of the Last Leaf
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is tightly woven. Memories, echoes, time, beauty are all ephemeral and measured in the eye of the of the beholder. Very nicely done a fave
February 28th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is tightly woven. Memories, echoes, time, beauty are all ephemeral and measured in the eye of the of the beholder. Very nicely done a fave
February 28th, 2025 08:21
Lament of the Last Leaf
Distant View said:
An enjoyable poem to read! The mental image of the last leaf clinging to the bough, despite high winds, is an inspirational one, in a way. We know deep down the leaf must perish in the end, but life is precious and every new day is a gift!
February 28th, 2025 07:56
Distant View said:
An enjoyable poem to read! The mental image of the last leaf clinging to the bough, despite high winds, is an inspirational one, in a way. We know deep down the leaf must perish in the end, but life is precious and every new day is a gift!
February 28th, 2025 07:56
Lament of the Last Leaf
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful use of the leaf and nature as a metaphor. Well done. Loved this. πΉπ
February 28th, 2025 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Powerful use of the leaf and nature as a metaphor. Well done. Loved this. πΉπ
February 28th, 2025 07:29
Stars in a Tear Drop
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful little write, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:40
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful little write, enjoyed the read
February 25th, 2025 05:40
Stars in a Tear Drop
arqios said:
Yes! This makes perfect senseππ»π
February 25th, 2025 05:36
arqios said:
Yes! This makes perfect senseππ»π
February 25th, 2025 05:36
Stars in a Tear Drop
sorenbarrett said:
Another short that is powerful and with its strength carries the heart away.
February 24th, 2025 22:13
sorenbarrett said:
Another short that is powerful and with its strength carries the heart away.
February 24th, 2025 22:13
Equations of Love
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of numbers in place of words to pull together the desynchronies of spelling in the English language to form meaning. Short and masterfully done.
February 21st, 2025 05:31
sorenbarrett said:
Clever the use of numbers in place of words to pull together the desynchronies of spelling in the English language to form meaning. Short and masterfully done.
February 21st, 2025 05:31
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