Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
HOT AIR BALLOONS - AN ACROSTIC
MsMermaid said:
If I knew how to make the first letter of each line bold, it would make the acrostic better.
March 22nd, 2016 08:03
MsMermaid said:
If I knew how to make the first letter of each line bold, it would make the acrostic better.
March 22nd, 2016 08:03
HOT AIR BALLOONS - AN ACROSTIC
MsMermaid said:
Here is your acrostic...
Hot air acts like Helium
Over the landscape they rise
Touch the clouds with fingertips
Alive is the feeling inside.
I'd love to ride in one daily
Rising so very high
But brought back to earth too soon
Awesome, wonderful ride.
Loving the sense of freedom
Looking at landscape below.
Oh, what a wonderful feeling.
Oh, what a wonderful show.
Nothing else in the world like it!
So why doesn't everyone try it?
March 22nd, 2016 07:59
MsMermaid said:
Here is your acrostic...
Hot air acts like Helium
Over the landscape they rise
Touch the clouds with fingertips
Alive is the feeling inside.
I'd love to ride in one daily
Rising so very high
But brought back to earth too soon
Awesome, wonderful ride.
Loving the sense of freedom
Looking at landscape below.
Oh, what a wonderful feeling.
Oh, what a wonderful show.
Nothing else in the world like it!
So why doesn't everyone try it?
March 22nd, 2016 07:59
HOT AIR BALLOONS - AN ACROSTIC
MsMermaid said:
Here is an Acrostic I did, so you know what an Acrostic is:
Ponies prancing
Acrobats perform
Riding the back of a Unicorn.
All sorts of clowns. Elephants too
Doing their best to dazzle you.
Enchantment for children. I love a parade.
Notice that the first letter of each line, when read vertically, spells "Parade". That's what makes it an acrostic.
March 22nd, 2016 07:43
MsMermaid said:
Here is an Acrostic I did, so you know what an Acrostic is:
Ponies prancing
Acrobats perform
Riding the back of a Unicorn.
All sorts of clowns. Elephants too
Doing their best to dazzle you.
Enchantment for children. I love a parade.
Notice that the first letter of each line, when read vertically, spells "Parade". That's what makes it an acrostic.
March 22nd, 2016 07:43
HOT AIR BALLOONS - AN ACROSTIC
MsMermaid said:
Hmmm, this poem says it's an Acrostic, but it's really not. However, I enjoyed the read.
March 22nd, 2016 07:06
MsMermaid said:
Hmmm, this poem says it's an Acrostic, but it's really not. However, I enjoyed the read.
March 22nd, 2016 07:06
SEASONS HAIKU
b r johnson said:
if only it wouldn't snow during spring in new england.....
March 21st, 2016 16:07
b r johnson said:
if only it wouldn't snow during spring in new england.....
March 21st, 2016 16:07
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