Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
LOVELY LONELY LOST LAGOON !
lysistrata said:
It has touches from Poe's World.
And don't be surprised about diving in lakes.
I am not easily scared....
June 1st, 2016 09:09
lysistrata said:
It has touches from Poe's World.
And don't be surprised about diving in lakes.
I am not easily scared....
June 1st, 2016 09:09
LOVELY LONELY LOST LAGOON !
lysistrata said:
There you go Brian.Now you are talking!!
I am ready for a swim...
May 31st, 2016 10:49
lysistrata said:
There you go Brian.Now you are talking!!
I am ready for a swim...
May 31st, 2016 10:49
WINDMILLS OF MY MIND
DubbleDhee said:
Thanks for sharing Brian! I'm all for Wind Turbine technology. Anything that produces energy without ravaging the earth. Green energy! The earth offers plenty of opportunities to produce clean energy if we take advantage.
May 31st, 2016 08:48
DubbleDhee said:
Thanks for sharing Brian! I'm all for Wind Turbine technology. Anything that produces energy without ravaging the earth. Green energy! The earth offers plenty of opportunities to produce clean energy if we take advantage.
May 31st, 2016 08:48
LOVELY LONELY LOST LAGOON !
ola89 said:
Incandescent thrills.... Hmmm amazing
Good wordplay
May 31st, 2016 08:42
ola89 said:
Incandescent thrills.... Hmmm amazing
Good wordplay
May 31st, 2016 08:42
HOUR GLASS FIGURES
lysistrata said:
I like the shape,but the content needs more stirring...
But very interesting comments. Here is some Poe for inspiration, with his " Sonnet to Science":
"Science! true daughter of Old Time thou art!
Who alterest all things with thy peering eyes.
Why preyest thou thus upon the poet's heart,
Vulture, whose wings are dull realities?"
May 30th, 2016 09:49
lysistrata said:
I like the shape,but the content needs more stirring...
But very interesting comments. Here is some Poe for inspiration, with his " Sonnet to Science":
"Science! true daughter of Old Time thou art!
Who alterest all things with thy peering eyes.
Why preyest thou thus upon the poet's heart,
Vulture, whose wings are dull realities?"
May 30th, 2016 09:49
WINDMILLS OF MY MIND
lysistrata said:
I am pretty sure that I saw Windmills yesterday in Rotterdam.
And the funny thing is that a couple from New Zealand/ Australia chose to make Rotterdam their new Homeland,with the guy studying "Urban Development" at the local Uni.
Your theme is very interesting and there are some nice 'touches' in it.
Lovely photo.
May 29th, 2016 05:12
lysistrata said:
I am pretty sure that I saw Windmills yesterday in Rotterdam.
And the funny thing is that a couple from New Zealand/ Australia chose to make Rotterdam their new Homeland,with the guy studying "Urban Development" at the local Uni.
Your theme is very interesting and there are some nice 'touches' in it.
Lovely photo.
May 29th, 2016 05:12
I LOVE MIRANDA !
paulamcnealy said:
Woah...Miranda?
I see you are from United Kingdom. That's where all the beautiful people live. 😊
May 28th, 2016 19:11
paulamcnealy said:
Woah...Miranda?
I see you are from United Kingdom. That's where all the beautiful people live. 😊
May 28th, 2016 19:11
WHY BOTHER TO PRAY ?
honeytreescoconutleaves said:
Blessings. beautifully written
May 28th, 2016 09:53
honeytreescoconutleaves said:
Blessings. beautifully written
May 28th, 2016 09:53
GATEWAY TO PARADISE - An Acrostic
paulamcnealy said:
Loved it.. I shared your poem to my facebook. I hope thats ok
May 28th, 2016 09:18
paulamcnealy said:
Loved it.. I shared your poem to my facebook. I hope thats ok
May 28th, 2016 09:18
COASTAL EROSION UK - A Sonnet
paulamcnealy said:
Wow. I totally agree and it is one of my biggest fears. Question for you. Do you work for this sight and Im new at this how do I add you as a friend? Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
May 28th, 2016 09:15
paulamcnealy said:
Wow. I totally agree and it is one of my biggest fears. Question for you. Do you work for this sight and Im new at this how do I add you as a friend? Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
May 28th, 2016 09:15
SPHERE OF LOVE
Samabama2324 said:
I love the flow of this poem, and I really enjoyed the literal shape of the poem. Awesome poetry and the message it provides!
May 21st, 2016 11:49
Samabama2324 said:
I love the flow of this poem, and I really enjoyed the literal shape of the poem. Awesome poetry and the message it provides!
May 21st, 2016 11:49
TOGETHERNESS - A rhyming Acrostic
IAmJaz said:
This conveys the message of togetherness perfectly. Sometimes one can feel completely alone (i.e. me) and to have someone there for you is a beautiful feeling that should deeply appreciated.
May 20th, 2016 12:55
IAmJaz said:
This conveys the message of togetherness perfectly. Sometimes one can feel completely alone (i.e. me) and to have someone there for you is a beautiful feeling that should deeply appreciated.
May 20th, 2016 12:55
PENTECOST - An Acrostic
AMPLIFIED HEAT said:
I knew his divinity was true when he was asked by one of the Apostles if he would add or do anything different to the ten commandments and he said " Yes, it is this, Love God My Father above all else and Love your fellow man as you Love yourself" How perfect a solution in a corrupt world. Well done!
May 19th, 2016 19:50
AMPLIFIED HEAT said:
I knew his divinity was true when he was asked by one of the Apostles if he would add or do anything different to the ten commandments and he said " Yes, it is this, Love God My Father above all else and Love your fellow man as you Love yourself" How perfect a solution in a corrupt world. Well done!
May 19th, 2016 19:50
SYNTHETIC - PATHETIC !
AMPLIFIED HEAT said:
Your contrast over time delivers an exacting message that our reality has thinned to transparent and the hope of turning back borders on insanity. For me there seems to be a slight suggestion that "then" had some strained realities as well, but "now" is the result of trying to better what wasn't completely real then. Maybe I've gone to far but that's why I like your poem so much, There's room for me to join in. I think this is excellent - Thank you
May 19th, 2016 01:43
AMPLIFIED HEAT said:
Your contrast over time delivers an exacting message that our reality has thinned to transparent and the hope of turning back borders on insanity. For me there seems to be a slight suggestion that "then" had some strained realities as well, but "now" is the result of trying to better what wasn't completely real then. Maybe I've gone to far but that's why I like your poem so much, There's room for me to join in. I think this is excellent - Thank you
May 19th, 2016 01:43
READY - WILLING - ABLE !
Marianne333 said:
Really cute poem. I liked it a lot and I like the rhythm of it it would sound really great if you read it outloud.
May 12th, 2016 17:05
Marianne333 said:
Really cute poem. I liked it a lot and I like the rhythm of it it would sound really great if you read it outloud.
May 12th, 2016 17:05
SUMMER - An Acrostic
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
Its sounds like summer out in the uk is the business
May 10th, 2016 22:46
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
Its sounds like summer out in the uk is the business
May 10th, 2016 22:46
MY POETIC SIDE
The Poet said:
Love the poem. I like how you explained that we sometimes just write, not about a certain topic or person, but just write. Very thoughtful!
May 10th, 2016 15:28
The Poet said:
Love the poem. I like how you explained that we sometimes just write, not about a certain topic or person, but just write. Very thoughtful!
May 10th, 2016 15:28
FROGS - GOD\'S SENSE OF HUMOR ! A Sonnet
Marianne333 said:
The message of this poem is so true. Where I am it's squirrels not frogs:)
May 2nd, 2016 18:18
Marianne333 said:
The message of this poem is so true. Where I am it's squirrels not frogs:)
May 2nd, 2016 18:18
WHY WORRY ? A calming Sonnet !
Marianne333 said:
A really nice and thoughtful poem and it is so true we need to trust God more.
May 2nd, 2016 18:15
Marianne333 said:
A really nice and thoughtful poem and it is so true we need to trust God more.
May 2nd, 2016 18:15
WHAT IS A SEED ? Rogation Sunday 2016
kaychee said:
This is such a brilliant poem. For me, each seed is like hope and every time one is planted it gives more hope for new life to spring.
May 2nd, 2016 00:21
kaychee said:
This is such a brilliant poem. For me, each seed is like hope and every time one is planted it gives more hope for new life to spring.
May 2nd, 2016 00:21
WHAT IS A SEED ? Rogation Sunday 2016
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
I like how u started ur sentaces out with each letter of the title u were thinkin of seeds as vegies an i think of them as life words can be the start of a seed in some ones heart the dna for change in some ones life wat is a seed well it can be many things
May 1st, 2016 23:17
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
I like how u started ur sentaces out with each letter of the title u were thinkin of seeds as vegies an i think of them as life words can be the start of a seed in some ones heart the dna for change in some ones life wat is a seed well it can be many things
May 1st, 2016 23:17
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