Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
THERESA MAY ~ ANGELA MAY NOT !
willyweed said:
God save the Queen! Congrats on victory & this poem! ww
July 12th, 2016 07:13
willyweed said:
God save the Queen! Congrats on victory & this poem! ww
July 12th, 2016 07:13
IF EVER YOU SHOULD LEAVE ME
willyweed said:
Your not leaving much room in the schedule for her to go! Good fun write as usual. Thanks for sharing! ww
July 11th, 2016 12:33
willyweed said:
Your not leaving much room in the schedule for her to go! Good fun write as usual. Thanks for sharing! ww
July 11th, 2016 12:33
GUNS \'N ROSES !
Tony36 said:
Great poem, and states much truth , though when I read the title it made me think of the Rock band
July 10th, 2016 08:44
Tony36 said:
Great poem, and states much truth , though when I read the title it made me think of the Rock band
July 10th, 2016 08:44
GUNS \'N ROSES !
Reivax Camlost said:
I agree. When I saw the title of the poem, I thought of the book The Dark Tower, the seventh book in the Dark Tower series by Stephan King. For any of those King fans out there, you'll know... A gun is not a thing to be handled with carelessness. That's a recipe to be sent west, for you "have forgotten the face of your father".
anyway.
I was thinking of Stephan King, and his proficiency at writing horror. Sometimes the world is like a Stephan King novel. We just have to find in that maelstrom some modicum of hope, else all is surely lost.
Sorry for the long comment.
July 9th, 2016 14:07
Reivax Camlost said:
I agree. When I saw the title of the poem, I thought of the book The Dark Tower, the seventh book in the Dark Tower series by Stephan King. For any of those King fans out there, you'll know... A gun is not a thing to be handled with carelessness. That's a recipe to be sent west, for you "have forgotten the face of your father".
anyway.
I was thinking of Stephan King, and his proficiency at writing horror. Sometimes the world is like a Stephan King novel. We just have to find in that maelstrom some modicum of hope, else all is surely lost.
Sorry for the long comment.
July 9th, 2016 14:07
GUNS \'N ROSES !
willyweed said:
I agree guns should be banned all together, but that ain't going to happen anytime soon. But a liar is no better than a con-man just ask the FBI. nice piece Brian
July 9th, 2016 07:57
willyweed said:
I agree guns should be banned all together, but that ain't going to happen anytime soon. But a liar is no better than a con-man just ask the FBI. nice piece Brian
July 9th, 2016 07:57
GUNS \'N ROSES !
Daniel said:
Great message, There is no need for anyone to carry guns! Violence begets violence. Hopefully now people will start to wake up
July 9th, 2016 04:07
Daniel said:
Great message, There is no need for anyone to carry guns! Violence begets violence. Hopefully now people will start to wake up
July 9th, 2016 04:07
GUNS \'N ROSES !
lysistrata said:
We are getting our water pistols and we are off to start a war....Which side are you on?
July 9th, 2016 03:55
lysistrata said:
We are getting our water pistols and we are off to start a war....Which side are you on?
July 9th, 2016 03:55
VENUS RULES ~ MARS SERVES ~ HILLARYOUS !
Tony36 said:
Wonderful write, A great tribute to women everywhere
July 8th, 2016 12:48
Tony36 said:
Wonderful write, A great tribute to women everywhere
July 8th, 2016 12:48
VENUS RULES ~ MARS SERVES ~ HILLARYOUS !
lysistrata said:
Mars,
I need an ice cream.I feel so hot!
Venus
July 8th, 2016 09:00
lysistrata said:
Mars,
I need an ice cream.I feel so hot!
Venus
July 8th, 2016 09:00
VENUS RULES ~ MARS SERVES ~ HILLARYOUS !
willyweed said:
Brian, another well done piece!
The ladies in waiting won't wait any more, enjoyed this poetic current event poem. ww
July 8th, 2016 08:03
willyweed said:
Brian, another well done piece!
The ladies in waiting won't wait any more, enjoyed this poetic current event poem. ww
July 8th, 2016 08:03
50 SHADES OF AMERICAN LADIES !
willyweed said:
you didn't list the state I'm in.
the state of confusion.
fun read my friend. ww
July 6th, 2016 08:54
willyweed said:
you didn't list the state I'm in.
the state of confusion.
fun read my friend. ww
July 6th, 2016 08:54
THE FUTURE\'S BRIGHTER !
willyweed said:
very uplifting piece Brian, I'm sure the old geezers have a future too!
nice one. ww!
July 5th, 2016 14:47
willyweed said:
very uplifting piece Brian, I'm sure the old geezers have a future too!
nice one. ww!
July 5th, 2016 14:47
WAKE UP & SHAKE UP !
camillerosecastillo said:
'Wake up and shake up'.... my sentiments exactly. Fantastic expression, Brian. Keep penning!
Cheers,
Camille
July 5th, 2016 13:49
camillerosecastillo said:
'Wake up and shake up'.... my sentiments exactly. Fantastic expression, Brian. Keep penning!
Cheers,
Camille
July 5th, 2016 13:49
WAKE UP & SHAKE UP !
Inspiredartist3 said:
Enjoyed the style of this one good stuff man
July 2nd, 2016 15:32
Inspiredartist3 said:
Enjoyed the style of this one good stuff man
July 2nd, 2016 15:32
WAKE UP & SHAKE UP !
Daniel said:
I agree with Dee Brian, great poem! Life is too short for silly gripes!
July 2nd, 2016 06:49
Daniel said:
I agree with Dee Brian, great poem! Life is too short for silly gripes!
July 2nd, 2016 06:49
WAKE UP & SHAKE UP !
Dee said:
Love the style of this poem Brian and the content made me smile. This is my outlook on life also.. We have so much to be grateful for and what with Wales win, I am elated as is all of Wales...The picture is perfect to content and I love the Happy yappy, the winning and grinning and the sharing and carin' phrases...I hope many come to read this work, it is so inspirational and truly uplifting... Wonderful... Smiles to you...Dee
July 2nd, 2016 05:49
Dee said:
Love the style of this poem Brian and the content made me smile. This is my outlook on life also.. We have so much to be grateful for and what with Wales win, I am elated as is all of Wales...The picture is perfect to content and I love the Happy yappy, the winning and grinning and the sharing and carin' phrases...I hope many come to read this work, it is so inspirational and truly uplifting... Wonderful... Smiles to you...Dee
July 2nd, 2016 05:49
POLITICAL INCORRECTNESS !
willyweed said:
oh this sounds familiar!
greeting from USA
good rant Brian
July 1st, 2016 11:47
willyweed said:
oh this sounds familiar!
greeting from USA
good rant Brian
July 1st, 2016 11:47
TREES ~ HAIKU
Dee said:
Wonderful Haiku Brian, Each one a different tree and each one beautifully portrayed...I am blessed to live near a forest and spend a lot of time walking it at weekends....The tree's are so beautiful and the scents divine.. last Haiku 5/9/5 is this another form of the Haiku and can we use either form when writing one ? Love them all...Smiles and blessings...Dee.
June 30th, 2016 16:21
Dee said:
Wonderful Haiku Brian, Each one a different tree and each one beautifully portrayed...I am blessed to live near a forest and spend a lot of time walking it at weekends....The tree's are so beautiful and the scents divine.. last Haiku 5/9/5 is this another form of the Haiku and can we use either form when writing one ? Love them all...Smiles and blessings...Dee.
June 30th, 2016 16:21
STREAMS & WATERFALLS OF LIFE & LOVE
willyweed said:
Brian, you have story telling talent.
your experience and imagination
blend well in this over the top of the falls tale you weave. good work! ww
June 29th, 2016 13:49
willyweed said:
Brian, you have story telling talent.
your experience and imagination
blend well in this over the top of the falls tale you weave. good work! ww
June 29th, 2016 13:49
STREAMS & WATERFALLS OF LIFE & LOVE
lysistrata said:
This is one of your best, still young and carefree Brian(33).
My experience? I have fallen with my bike inside the London canal.
Not an experience that I would like to be reminded of....😏😂
June 29th, 2016 12:05
lysistrata said:
This is one of your best, still young and carefree Brian(33).
My experience? I have fallen with my bike inside the London canal.
Not an experience that I would like to be reminded of....😏😂
June 29th, 2016 12:05
STREAMS & WATERFALLS OF LIFE & LOVE
Daniel said:
This poem of the problem s of finding love in the modern age, speaks to many people out there.Well written
June 29th, 2016 08:23
Daniel said:
This poem of the problem s of finding love in the modern age, speaks to many people out there.Well written
June 29th, 2016 08:23
ENGLAND ~ LOST IN FRANCE !
Daniel said:
It certainly wasn't our finest moment, nicely written Brian
June 28th, 2016 08:14
Daniel said:
It certainly wasn't our finest moment, nicely written Brian
June 28th, 2016 08:14
ENGLAND ~ LOST IN FRANCE !
lysistrata said:
C' est fini,mon ami....🙋😭😭😭
FINITO la musica,
Passato la FIESTA.🎇🎇😭😭😭
June 28th, 2016 07:21
lysistrata said:
C' est fini,mon ami....🙋😭😭😭
FINITO la musica,
Passato la FIESTA.🎇🎇😭😭😭
June 28th, 2016 07:21
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