Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
SPHERE OF LOVE
Samabama2324 said:
I love the flow of this poem, and I really enjoyed the literal shape of the poem. Awesome poetry and the message it provides!
May 21st, 2016 11:49
Samabama2324 said:
I love the flow of this poem, and I really enjoyed the literal shape of the poem. Awesome poetry and the message it provides!
May 21st, 2016 11:49
TOGETHERNESS - A rhyming Acrostic
IAmJaz said:
This conveys the message of togetherness perfectly. Sometimes one can feel completely alone (i.e. me) and to have someone there for you is a beautiful feeling that should deeply appreciated.
May 20th, 2016 12:55
IAmJaz said:
This conveys the message of togetherness perfectly. Sometimes one can feel completely alone (i.e. me) and to have someone there for you is a beautiful feeling that should deeply appreciated.
May 20th, 2016 12:55
PENTECOST - An Acrostic
AMPLIFIED HEAT said:
I knew his divinity was true when he was asked by one of the Apostles if he would add or do anything different to the ten commandments and he said " Yes, it is this, Love God My Father above all else and Love your fellow man as you Love yourself" How perfect a solution in a corrupt world. Well done!
May 19th, 2016 19:50
AMPLIFIED HEAT said:
I knew his divinity was true when he was asked by one of the Apostles if he would add or do anything different to the ten commandments and he said " Yes, it is this, Love God My Father above all else and Love your fellow man as you Love yourself" How perfect a solution in a corrupt world. Well done!
May 19th, 2016 19:50
SYNTHETIC - PATHETIC !
AMPLIFIED HEAT said:
Your contrast over time delivers an exacting message that our reality has thinned to transparent and the hope of turning back borders on insanity. For me there seems to be a slight suggestion that "then" had some strained realities as well, but "now" is the result of trying to better what wasn't completely real then. Maybe I've gone to far but that's why I like your poem so much, There's room for me to join in. I think this is excellent - Thank you
May 19th, 2016 01:43
AMPLIFIED HEAT said:
Your contrast over time delivers an exacting message that our reality has thinned to transparent and the hope of turning back borders on insanity. For me there seems to be a slight suggestion that "then" had some strained realities as well, but "now" is the result of trying to better what wasn't completely real then. Maybe I've gone to far but that's why I like your poem so much, There's room for me to join in. I think this is excellent - Thank you
May 19th, 2016 01:43
READY - WILLING - ABLE !
Marianne333 said:
Really cute poem. I liked it a lot and I like the rhythm of it it would sound really great if you read it outloud.
May 12th, 2016 17:05
Marianne333 said:
Really cute poem. I liked it a lot and I like the rhythm of it it would sound really great if you read it outloud.
May 12th, 2016 17:05
SUMMER - An Acrostic
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
Its sounds like summer out in the uk is the business
May 10th, 2016 22:46
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
Its sounds like summer out in the uk is the business
May 10th, 2016 22:46
MY POETIC SIDE
The Poet said:
Love the poem. I like how you explained that we sometimes just write, not about a certain topic or person, but just write. Very thoughtful!
May 10th, 2016 15:28
The Poet said:
Love the poem. I like how you explained that we sometimes just write, not about a certain topic or person, but just write. Very thoughtful!
May 10th, 2016 15:28
FROGS - GOD\'S SENSE OF HUMOR ! A Sonnet
Marianne333 said:
The message of this poem is so true. Where I am it's squirrels not frogs:)
May 2nd, 2016 18:18
Marianne333 said:
The message of this poem is so true. Where I am it's squirrels not frogs:)
May 2nd, 2016 18:18
WHY WORRY ? A calming Sonnet !
Marianne333 said:
A really nice and thoughtful poem and it is so true we need to trust God more.
May 2nd, 2016 18:15
Marianne333 said:
A really nice and thoughtful poem and it is so true we need to trust God more.
May 2nd, 2016 18:15
WHAT IS A SEED ? Rogation Sunday 2016
kaychee said:
This is such a brilliant poem. For me, each seed is like hope and every time one is planted it gives more hope for new life to spring.
May 2nd, 2016 00:21
kaychee said:
This is such a brilliant poem. For me, each seed is like hope and every time one is planted it gives more hope for new life to spring.
May 2nd, 2016 00:21
WHAT IS A SEED ? Rogation Sunday 2016
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
I like how u started ur sentaces out with each letter of the title u were thinkin of seeds as vegies an i think of them as life words can be the start of a seed in some ones heart the dna for change in some ones life wat is a seed well it can be many things
May 1st, 2016 23:17
laurenloveme4lifegodknowsall said:
I like how u started ur sentaces out with each letter of the title u were thinkin of seeds as vegies an i think of them as life words can be the start of a seed in some ones heart the dna for change in some ones life wat is a seed well it can be many things
May 1st, 2016 23:17
SEVEN DAILY EMOTIONS !
snowball said:
love your style keep them coming
Snowball
April 28th, 2016 14:38
snowball said:
love your style keep them coming
Snowball
April 28th, 2016 14:38
I WISH ...................... ?
moontigerntn said:
i love it! rhymes well, nicely written. i often wonder what my cats would say, if they could talk.
April 27th, 2016 14:43
moontigerntn said:
i love it! rhymes well, nicely written. i often wonder what my cats would say, if they could talk.
April 27th, 2016 14:43
I WISH ...................... ?
kaychee said:
Oh wow! This is filled with so much humor. There's so many things I wanted to be. Wanted to be a bird at some point. An eagle to be precise. And I love your rhymes by the way.
April 27th, 2016 04:48
kaychee said:
Oh wow! This is filled with so much humor. There's so many things I wanted to be. Wanted to be a bird at some point. An eagle to be precise. And I love your rhymes by the way.
April 27th, 2016 04:48
SEARCH ME O GOD !
joelabowmansr said:
What beautiful verse, Brian! This piece obviously flows out of your quiet time with God. I find my best poetry is the same way. Keep writing!
April 26th, 2016 11:29
joelabowmansr said:
What beautiful verse, Brian! This piece obviously flows out of your quiet time with God. I find my best poetry is the same way. Keep writing!
April 26th, 2016 11:29
SEARCH ME O GOD !
Magali Aguilar Solorza said:
Beautiful prayer to created. As you read the sentiment it is released and leaves the heart and soul in total peace. A great inspiration.
April 25th, 2016 21:49
Magali Aguilar Solorza said:
Beautiful prayer to created. As you read the sentiment it is released and leaves the heart and soul in total peace. A great inspiration.
April 25th, 2016 21:49
WATER OF LIFE - A SONNET
Wordsandpictures said:
I enjoyed your sonnet on water. It is the very source of life from which we came.
April 25th, 2016 04:41
Wordsandpictures said:
I enjoyed your sonnet on water. It is the very source of life from which we came.
April 25th, 2016 04:41
THE SCENT OF LOVE - SENSUOUS
Nubianpoet said:
Brian, I enjoyed reading this piece.
It makes me envision everything
you wrote about. True art.
April 23rd, 2016 16:50
Nubianpoet said:
Brian, I enjoyed reading this piece.
It makes me envision everything
you wrote about. True art.
April 23rd, 2016 16:50
CHOCOLATE - YUMMY - AN ACROSTIC SONNET
Rose Flower said:
Excellent acrostic. Chocolate is my favorite candy.
April 21st, 2016 12:10
Rose Flower said:
Excellent acrostic. Chocolate is my favorite candy.
April 21st, 2016 12:10
WATER OF LIFE - A SONNET
Sophie said:
I have long admired those who write in classic structure. A challenge I am not brave enough to take on. This is a wonderful piece that serves as a reminder of our responsibility toward earth - the beauty and value of water is taken for granted - much as some of us take life for granted - you highlight this an much more in your sonnet. Congratulations!
April 19th, 2016 18:03
Sophie said:
I have long admired those who write in classic structure. A challenge I am not brave enough to take on. This is a wonderful piece that serves as a reminder of our responsibility toward earth - the beauty and value of water is taken for granted - much as some of us take life for granted - you highlight this an much more in your sonnet. Congratulations!
April 19th, 2016 18:03
WATER OF LIFE - A SONNET
W. G. Simms said:
There's something magical about a simplistic sonnet, such lovely pace.
-W. G. Simms
April 19th, 2016 17:34
W. G. Simms said:
There's something magical about a simplistic sonnet, such lovely pace.
-W. G. Simms
April 19th, 2016 17:34
SEARCH ME O GOD !
GREENMAN42UK said:
Beautifully written and an inspirational work. As a fellow Christian there is much within which resonates....
April 18th, 2016 15:17
GREENMAN42UK said:
Beautifully written and an inspirational work. As a fellow Christian there is much within which resonates....
April 18th, 2016 15:17
TRUE LOVE IS DIVINE ! A SONNETT
monipoeta29 said:
I'm one of those that enjoys writing about love,and how it makes us humans feel . Great poem gives us all hope in love !
April 15th, 2016 19:45
monipoeta29 said:
I'm one of those that enjoys writing about love,and how it makes us humans feel . Great poem gives us all hope in love !
April 15th, 2016 19:45
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