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PrincessPie89 said:

So beautifully written and passionate! You put these words in a way that expresses my feelings exactly! Thanks for writing!

--Princess

August 27th, 2016 15:20

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Mads said:

I loved it and I love that you feel that way because in my city...rape is a joke.

August 27th, 2016 10:09

I N N O C E N C E
Tony36 said:

Awesome, Awesome write

August 27th, 2016 07:18

E B O N Y G I R L ~ BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL
willyweed said:

Yes Brian this is a winner, I like to think there is only one race the humane race with many flavors,
all are beautiful! peace ww

August 26th, 2016 17:11

E B O N Y G I R L ~ BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL
Tony36 said:

Great write, I to have dated women from around the world.

August 26th, 2016 07:35

E B O N Y G I R L ~ BLACK IS BEAUTIFUL
daniel dawes said:

Really enjoyed it Brian and the message your showing. I agree there is no difference in people due to colour or race......the differnce in all of us is closer to home...in our minds. Thanks for sharing :)

August 26th, 2016 06:20

THE SECRET OF HAPPINESS
anastasia_snow said:

I love this, Brian! The Sermon on the Mount is one of my favorite Bible stories. (Of course, I have a lot of favorite scripture stories...)
I especially liked the first part, where you said that you are happy when you reach the end of your rope, because them God can take over. I never thought of it that way, but it is so true.
Thanks for sharing this thoughtful and truthful poem, Brian!

August 23rd, 2016 14:54

ME ~ SLAM POET
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MADS pleased you liked it> Poetry is infinite but Slam Poetry is WICKED> Thanks for commenting ~ Thanks for adding me as a Friend ~ Yours BRIAN

August 23rd, 2016 13:55

ME ~ SLAM POET
Mads said:

I like this poem a lot. It is very simple and straight to the point. Marisa Green is a very good poet, I love reading her poems too.

August 23rd, 2016 11:57

LOVE FOR ALL SEASONS ~ A SONNET
willyweed said:

a love for all seasons, nice one Brian ww

August 22nd, 2016 19:07

BRITISH GIRLS RULE ~ UK
ron parrish aka wordman said:

know a few from poetry sites,but they seem to be awesome

August 21st, 2016 17:09

TRUST IN THE LORD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks TONY ~ I knew it would ring your bell ! You would look good in a SA Uniform and serving soup and hot dogs to the homeless from your van ! Blessings BRIAN

August 21st, 2016 09:33

BRITISH GIRLS RULE ~ UK
Tony36 said:

Great write, yes The girls from GB are awesome.

August 20th, 2016 07:24

P A N C A K E S ~ Y U M M Y
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 18th, 2016 08:07

THE SECRET OF HAPPINESS
rrodriguez said:

I'm here with my Literature book opened studying about poetry. I found that the didactic poem is a poem written to state a message or teach a body of knowledge. I believe your poem The Secret of Happiness fits this category.

August 17th, 2016 08:42