Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
LOVE ALPHBETICALLY !
Dee said:
Hi Brian,
This poem made me smile from some of the cute lines, I like the style and may well have a go at writing one. Does each line have to begin with the chosen theme as in yours it's 'LOVE IS' or can it be a straight poem but containing each letter of the alphabet...
You mentioned many of the emotions love brings for sure.. but still I'm smiling from ' Perky and Quirky but Ropey (some days !)
Great choice words and clear imagery :) Love it...Smiles and Regards to you...Dee
June 28th, 2016 05:39
Dee said:
Hi Brian,
This poem made me smile from some of the cute lines, I like the style and may well have a go at writing one. Does each line have to begin with the chosen theme as in yours it's 'LOVE IS' or can it be a straight poem but containing each letter of the alphabet...
You mentioned many of the emotions love brings for sure.. but still I'm smiling from ' Perky and Quirky but Ropey (some days !)
Great choice words and clear imagery :) Love it...Smiles and Regards to you...Dee
June 28th, 2016 05:39
LOVE ALPHBETICALLY !
lysistrata said:
So if you want to describe Love,you open up a DICTIONARY,Brian?
Innocent 33 year old Boy!!💑💏
June 27th, 2016 07:42
lysistrata said:
So if you want to describe Love,you open up a DICTIONARY,Brian?
Innocent 33 year old Boy!!💑💏
June 27th, 2016 07:42
PARROTS HAIKOO ~ OOKIAH STORRAP
Daniel said:
When we are caged it's called punishment, yet we still cage animals for our own entertainment! A very witty way of conveying the message, really enjoyed it!
June 26th, 2016 19:07
Daniel said:
When we are caged it's called punishment, yet we still cage animals for our own entertainment! A very witty way of conveying the message, really enjoyed it!
June 26th, 2016 19:07
I BELIEVE ~ Elvis Presley
Dee said:
Took my breath away Brian. Simply stunning visuals and the voice of Elvis, none like it and so perfect for the content of the song....I love the words, and got teary again, .After watching it twice, I'm now an emotional mess lol... So very beautiful.. .........Dee
June 26th, 2016 16:36
Dee said:
Took my breath away Brian. Simply stunning visuals and the voice of Elvis, none like it and so perfect for the content of the song....I love the words, and got teary again, .After watching it twice, I'm now an emotional mess lol... So very beautiful.. .........Dee
June 26th, 2016 16:36
PRAISE THE LORD ~ A Sonnet
Dee said:
Wonderful Sonnet Brian....
Gave me warm tears, always happens when I read of such deep love for the lord.. He has given so much and still giving, yet there are some that still doubt His love ..
Bravo... love your message in this gem of a sonnet.................Dee
June 26th, 2016 14:37
Dee said:
Wonderful Sonnet Brian....
Gave me warm tears, always happens when I read of such deep love for the lord.. He has given so much and still giving, yet there are some that still doubt His love ..
Bravo... love your message in this gem of a sonnet.................Dee
June 26th, 2016 14:37
PARROTS HAIKOO ~ OOKIAH STORRAP
Dee said:
I so agree Brian, It breaks my heart to see beautiful parrots or any bird caged, and some with hardly enough room to move, truly disgusting.....Your voice came strong in the reading and there is no mistaking your feelings on the subject , the clear imagery of your words and the pic set me off to thinking of all other beautiful creatures that suffer too.. Bravo for making your stand on this one my friend.......Dee
June 26th, 2016 06:10
Dee said:
I so agree Brian, It breaks my heart to see beautiful parrots or any bird caged, and some with hardly enough room to move, truly disgusting.....Your voice came strong in the reading and there is no mistaking your feelings on the subject , the clear imagery of your words and the pic set me off to thinking of all other beautiful creatures that suffer too.. Bravo for making your stand on this one my friend.......Dee
June 26th, 2016 06:10
O NIGHTINGALE ~ A Love Sonnet
Dee said:
Beautiful Brian. Reads perfect with clear imagery and wonderful choice words. I write Sonnets but with the a.b.a.b. rhyme scheme.
My two favourite subjects to write about Love and Nature.. how could it not be beautiful.. Pleasure to read and review such fine work..... ...Dee
June 25th, 2016 15:37
Dee said:
Beautiful Brian. Reads perfect with clear imagery and wonderful choice words. I write Sonnets but with the a.b.a.b. rhyme scheme.
My two favourite subjects to write about Love and Nature.. how could it not be beautiful.. Pleasure to read and review such fine work..... ...Dee
June 25th, 2016 15:37
PRAISE THE LORD ~ A Sonnet
lysistrata said:
We praise the Lord on Sundays.
On Saturdays we praise the Sea,the Sun,Life itself .....
Have fun Brian🙋
June 25th, 2016 03:47
lysistrata said:
We praise the Lord on Sundays.
On Saturdays we praise the Sea,the Sun,Life itself .....
Have fun Brian🙋
June 25th, 2016 03:47
END OF A LOVE AFFAIR !
DubbleDhee said:
Stunning events! The markets were decimated. Who knows for how much longer? Other than the US, I wonder what this does in terms of Great Britain's military allies. Trump is grinning like the Cheshire Cat. He thinks this is his springboard into the White House. God help us! Anyway, thanks for sharing Brian.
June 24th, 2016 18:24
DubbleDhee said:
Stunning events! The markets were decimated. Who knows for how much longer? Other than the US, I wonder what this does in terms of Great Britain's military allies. Trump is grinning like the Cheshire Cat. He thinks this is his springboard into the White House. God help us! Anyway, thanks for sharing Brian.
June 24th, 2016 18:24
END OF A LOVE AFFAIR !
lysistrata said:
- Don't leave me...😥
- If only you knew how much good it's done to me...😏
- However,I'll be always expecting you to come back...😞😭
Je suis européenne....
June 24th, 2016 11:24
lysistrata said:
- Don't leave me...😥
- If only you knew how much good it's done to me...😏
- However,I'll be always expecting you to come back...😞😭
Je suis européenne....
June 24th, 2016 11:24
O NIGHTINGALE ~ A Love Sonnet
lysistrata said:
John Milton forgives you,Immortal Poet.
The voice (yours) I hear this passing night was heard
In ancient days by a princess (me) and a monkey 🐵🐒
June 23rd, 2016 16:18
lysistrata said:
John Milton forgives you,Immortal Poet.
The voice (yours) I hear this passing night was heard
In ancient days by a princess (me) and a monkey 🐵🐒
June 23rd, 2016 16:18
O NIGHTINGALE ~ A Love Sonnet
camille said:
The power of nature to lift ones heart and offer renewed hope ?
June 23rd, 2016 14:52
camille said:
The power of nature to lift ones heart and offer renewed hope ?
June 23rd, 2016 14:52
STRANGER ON THE SHORE ~ An Acrostic
camille said:
Haunting and melancholic .. Fabulous ...
June 23rd, 2016 11:28
camille said:
Haunting and melancholic .. Fabulous ...
June 23rd, 2016 11:28
WHY ?
IAmJaz said:
I deeply appreciate how your poem provides viewers with the everyday life questions. It also really makes one think. this was beautifully written. Much love - jaz 💘
June 18th, 2016 22:25
IAmJaz said:
I deeply appreciate how your poem provides viewers with the everyday life questions. It also really makes one think. this was beautifully written. Much love - jaz 💘
June 18th, 2016 22:25
JUST A TOUCH !
Tropicana said:
Brian, this is sweet and simple, I agree every touch connects human beings!
June 16th, 2016 15:58
Tropicana said:
Brian, this is sweet and simple, I agree every touch connects human beings!
June 16th, 2016 15:58
STRANGER ON THE SHORE ~ An Acrostic
amosj said:
Very clever layout. I like the rhetorical questioning a lot as it provokes so much thought- Great concept!
June 16th, 2016 13:17
amosj said:
Very clever layout. I like the rhetorical questioning a lot as it provokes so much thought- Great concept!
June 16th, 2016 13:17
STRANGER ON THE SHORE ~ An Acrostic
DubbleDhee said:
Wow! An Ode to crushing loneliness. How beautiful and sad all at once. Haven't heard a clarinet solo in a while - very nice. The woman looking longingly at the sea is a nice touch (very effective, but she really needs to move on). Kinda hoped for a miracle ending for the lady but I guess that wouldn't be realistic. Ha! Thx Brian!
June 16th, 2016 04:46
DubbleDhee said:
Wow! An Ode to crushing loneliness. How beautiful and sad all at once. Haven't heard a clarinet solo in a while - very nice. The woman looking longingly at the sea is a nice touch (very effective, but she really needs to move on). Kinda hoped for a miracle ending for the lady but I guess that wouldn't be realistic. Ha! Thx Brian!
June 16th, 2016 04:46
UMBRELLA GIRL - An Acrostic
JustABird said:
I'm curious, were you inspired by the picture? Or did you just find the perfect image to go with your work? I'm often inspired by images or (more often) songs so it's always interesting to see what inspires other people. It's lovely. Thank you for sharing.
June 15th, 2016 15:35
JustABird said:
I'm curious, were you inspired by the picture? Or did you just find the perfect image to go with your work? I'm often inspired by images or (more often) songs so it's always interesting to see what inspires other people. It's lovely. Thank you for sharing.
June 15th, 2016 15:35
WINDMILLS OF MY MIND
JustABird said:
I especially like the comparison to 'three armed aliens marching in from the sea.
June 15th, 2016 15:30
JustABird said:
I especially like the comparison to 'three armed aliens marching in from the sea.
June 15th, 2016 15:30
JUST A TOUCH !
samishere said:
A touch is what separates real from virtual, a thought to an action, a dream to a reality
June 15th, 2016 12:17
samishere said:
A touch is what separates real from virtual, a thought to an action, a dream to a reality
June 15th, 2016 12:17
JUST A TOUCH !
DubbleDhee said:
Nice, Brian! Just like a picture, a touch is worth a thousand words too. A well placed touch at the right time can make all the difference. Especially if you're not a big talker. Of course, timing is everything when touching a woman's hair. Touch her hair at the wrong time and you may draw back a nub. LOL! But it's all good. Thanks for sharing!
June 15th, 2016 11:34
DubbleDhee said:
Nice, Brian! Just like a picture, a touch is worth a thousand words too. A well placed touch at the right time can make all the difference. Especially if you're not a big talker. Of course, timing is everything when touching a woman's hair. Touch her hair at the wrong time and you may draw back a nub. LOL! But it's all good. Thanks for sharing!
June 15th, 2016 11:34
SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW ?
MoonJem1989 said:
First of all, I am sorry for your loss!
Secondly, I think you did a very nice job putting this poem together. It flows very nicely and the words are in good harmony :)
June 15th, 2016 00:32
MoonJem1989 said:
First of all, I am sorry for your loss!
Secondly, I think you did a very nice job putting this poem together. It flows very nicely and the words are in good harmony :)
June 15th, 2016 00:32
GENTLENESS - An Acrostic
Survivor48 said:
this is the first acrostics poem that I read that rhymes. you did an excellent job!
June 13th, 2016 21:37
Survivor48 said:
this is the first acrostics poem that I read that rhymes. you did an excellent job!
June 13th, 2016 21:37
ALIENS TO SAVE PLANET EARTH ! (Close Encounters III) A Rhyming Sonnet
DubbleDhee said:
New Installment Brian? Funny how we always assume aliens are more advanced that us. LOL! We can't even get along with humans. I'm not sure how we can get along with people from other worlds. But it would be interesting to see what happens. I agree our planet is in crisis, but we can't put the genie back in the bottle. Nukes will always be with us. Thx for sharing! DD
June 13th, 2016 10:14
DubbleDhee said:
New Installment Brian? Funny how we always assume aliens are more advanced that us. LOL! We can't even get along with humans. I'm not sure how we can get along with people from other worlds. But it would be interesting to see what happens. I agree our planet is in crisis, but we can't put the genie back in the bottle. Nukes will always be with us. Thx for sharing! DD
June 13th, 2016 10:14
SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW ?
williammae said:
I enjoyed the write very much, so much is possible over the rainbow while reality plays out below it.
June 12th, 2016 12:45
williammae said:
I enjoyed the write very much, so much is possible over the rainbow while reality plays out below it.
June 12th, 2016 12:45
SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW ?
lysistrata said:
Why don't you take a look at planet Venus?It is the most similar planet in our solar system in terms of size and structure to EARTH,but it is the hottest, with the Sun rising in the west and setting in the east.
Whatever caused this,send the population to different planets around the Solar System....
But let's focus in the lives of 2 people...(The rest en prive)
June 12th, 2016 12:29
lysistrata said:
Why don't you take a look at planet Venus?It is the most similar planet in our solar system in terms of size and structure to EARTH,but it is the hottest, with the Sun rising in the west and setting in the east.
Whatever caused this,send the population to different planets around the Solar System....
But let's focus in the lives of 2 people...(The rest en prive)
June 12th, 2016 12:29
SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW ?
lysistrata said:
"Better (i always say !) to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all!"
Brian,
You always repeat this, because it was Lord Tennyson who wrote it first in his
"In Memoriam A.H.H."( I love this poem) and I like yours,too.
June 12th, 2016 04:51
lysistrata said:
"Better (i always say !) to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all!"
Brian,
You always repeat this, because it was Lord Tennyson who wrote it first in his
"In Memoriam A.H.H."( I love this poem) and I like yours,too.
June 12th, 2016 04:51
ALIENS ARE AMONG US ! (Close Encounters II) A Sonnet
DubbleDhee said:
I always had questions about where Putin came from. Now we know. I wouldn't be the least bit upset if he went back and took people like Trump with him. Thanks for sharing Brian!
June 11th, 2016 17:21
DubbleDhee said:
I always had questions about where Putin came from. Now we know. I wouldn't be the least bit upset if he went back and took people like Trump with him. Thanks for sharing Brian!
June 11th, 2016 17:21
ALIENS ARE AMONG US ! (Close Encounters II) A Sonnet
Berthold Lippel said:
One of them is running for President of the USA.................
June 11th, 2016 12:37
Berthold Lippel said:
One of them is running for President of the USA.................
June 11th, 2016 12:37
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