Comments received on poems by BRIAN & ANGELA
STRANGER ON THE SHORE ~ An Acrostic
amosj said:
Very clever layout. I like the rhetorical questioning a lot as it provokes so much thought- Great concept!
June 16th, 2016 13:17
amosj said:
Very clever layout. I like the rhetorical questioning a lot as it provokes so much thought- Great concept!
June 16th, 2016 13:17
STRANGER ON THE SHORE ~ An Acrostic
DubbleDhee said:
Wow! An Ode to crushing loneliness. How beautiful and sad all at once. Haven't heard a clarinet solo in a while - very nice. The woman looking longingly at the sea is a nice touch (very effective, but she really needs to move on). Kinda hoped for a miracle ending for the lady but I guess that wouldn't be realistic. Ha! Thx Brian!
June 16th, 2016 04:46
DubbleDhee said:
Wow! An Ode to crushing loneliness. How beautiful and sad all at once. Haven't heard a clarinet solo in a while - very nice. The woman looking longingly at the sea is a nice touch (very effective, but she really needs to move on). Kinda hoped for a miracle ending for the lady but I guess that wouldn't be realistic. Ha! Thx Brian!
June 16th, 2016 04:46
UMBRELLA GIRL - An Acrostic
JustABird said:
I'm curious, were you inspired by the picture? Or did you just find the perfect image to go with your work? I'm often inspired by images or (more often) songs so it's always interesting to see what inspires other people. It's lovely. Thank you for sharing.
June 15th, 2016 15:35
JustABird said:
I'm curious, were you inspired by the picture? Or did you just find the perfect image to go with your work? I'm often inspired by images or (more often) songs so it's always interesting to see what inspires other people. It's lovely. Thank you for sharing.
June 15th, 2016 15:35
WINDMILLS OF MY MIND
JustABird said:
I especially like the comparison to 'three armed aliens marching in from the sea.
June 15th, 2016 15:30
JustABird said:
I especially like the comparison to 'three armed aliens marching in from the sea.
June 15th, 2016 15:30
JUST A TOUCH !
samishere said:
A touch is what separates real from virtual, a thought to an action, a dream to a reality
June 15th, 2016 12:17
samishere said:
A touch is what separates real from virtual, a thought to an action, a dream to a reality
June 15th, 2016 12:17
JUST A TOUCH !
DubbleDhee said:
Nice, Brian! Just like a picture, a touch is worth a thousand words too. A well placed touch at the right time can make all the difference. Especially if you're not a big talker. Of course, timing is everything when touching a woman's hair. Touch her hair at the wrong time and you may draw back a nub. LOL! But it's all good. Thanks for sharing!
June 15th, 2016 11:34
DubbleDhee said:
Nice, Brian! Just like a picture, a touch is worth a thousand words too. A well placed touch at the right time can make all the difference. Especially if you're not a big talker. Of course, timing is everything when touching a woman's hair. Touch her hair at the wrong time and you may draw back a nub. LOL! But it's all good. Thanks for sharing!
June 15th, 2016 11:34
SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW ?
MoonJem1989 said:
First of all, I am sorry for your loss!
Secondly, I think you did a very nice job putting this poem together. It flows very nicely and the words are in good harmony :)
June 15th, 2016 00:32
MoonJem1989 said:
First of all, I am sorry for your loss!
Secondly, I think you did a very nice job putting this poem together. It flows very nicely and the words are in good harmony :)
June 15th, 2016 00:32
GENTLENESS - An Acrostic
Survivor48 said:
this is the first acrostics poem that I read that rhymes. you did an excellent job!
June 13th, 2016 21:37
Survivor48 said:
this is the first acrostics poem that I read that rhymes. you did an excellent job!
June 13th, 2016 21:37
ALIENS TO SAVE PLANET EARTH ! (Close Encounters III) A Rhyming Sonnet
DubbleDhee said:
New Installment Brian? Funny how we always assume aliens are more advanced that us. LOL! We can't even get along with humans. I'm not sure how we can get along with people from other worlds. But it would be interesting to see what happens. I agree our planet is in crisis, but we can't put the genie back in the bottle. Nukes will always be with us. Thx for sharing! DD
June 13th, 2016 10:14
DubbleDhee said:
New Installment Brian? Funny how we always assume aliens are more advanced that us. LOL! We can't even get along with humans. I'm not sure how we can get along with people from other worlds. But it would be interesting to see what happens. I agree our planet is in crisis, but we can't put the genie back in the bottle. Nukes will always be with us. Thx for sharing! DD
June 13th, 2016 10:14
SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW ?
williammae said:
I enjoyed the write very much, so much is possible over the rainbow while reality plays out below it.
June 12th, 2016 12:45
williammae said:
I enjoyed the write very much, so much is possible over the rainbow while reality plays out below it.
June 12th, 2016 12:45
SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW ?
lysistrata said:
Why don't you take a look at planet Venus?It is the most similar planet in our solar system in terms of size and structure to EARTH,but it is the hottest, with the Sun rising in the west and setting in the east.
Whatever caused this,send the population to different planets around the Solar System....
But let's focus in the lives of 2 people...(The rest en prive)
June 12th, 2016 12:29
lysistrata said:
Why don't you take a look at planet Venus?It is the most similar planet in our solar system in terms of size and structure to EARTH,but it is the hottest, with the Sun rising in the west and setting in the east.
Whatever caused this,send the population to different planets around the Solar System....
But let's focus in the lives of 2 people...(The rest en prive)
June 12th, 2016 12:29
SOMEWHERE OVER THE RAINBOW ?
lysistrata said:
"Better (i always say !) to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all!"
Brian,
You always repeat this, because it was Lord Tennyson who wrote it first in his
"In Memoriam A.H.H."( I love this poem) and I like yours,too.
June 12th, 2016 04:51
lysistrata said:
"Better (i always say !) to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all!"
Brian,
You always repeat this, because it was Lord Tennyson who wrote it first in his
"In Memoriam A.H.H."( I love this poem) and I like yours,too.
June 12th, 2016 04:51
ALIENS ARE AMONG US ! (Close Encounters II) A Sonnet
DubbleDhee said:
I always had questions about where Putin came from. Now we know. I wouldn't be the least bit upset if he went back and took people like Trump with him. Thanks for sharing Brian!
June 11th, 2016 17:21
DubbleDhee said:
I always had questions about where Putin came from. Now we know. I wouldn't be the least bit upset if he went back and took people like Trump with him. Thanks for sharing Brian!
June 11th, 2016 17:21
ALIENS ARE AMONG US ! (Close Encounters II) A Sonnet
Berthold Lippel said:
One of them is running for President of the USA.................
June 11th, 2016 12:37
Berthold Lippel said:
One of them is running for President of the USA.................
June 11th, 2016 12:37
ALIENS ARE AMONG US ! (Close Encounters II) A Sonnet
lysistrata said:
Brian,
Monday that Begins on Saturday seems an idea to look at?! MAYBE...😉
June 11th, 2016 12:22
lysistrata said:
Brian,
Monday that Begins on Saturday seems an idea to look at?! MAYBE...😉
June 11th, 2016 12:22
TIME FOR EVERYTHING ?
lysistrata said:
Brian,
Don't you think that it's time to finish what you started earlier within the week?
About the Russian Scientists?
I want to get the WHOLE Picture of it....and then make a comment.
But I do like this one,
Lysi.
June 11th, 2016 02:58
lysistrata said:
Brian,
Don't you think that it's time to finish what you started earlier within the week?
About the Russian Scientists?
I want to get the WHOLE Picture of it....and then make a comment.
But I do like this one,
Lysi.
June 11th, 2016 02:58
WATER LILLY GIRL - A Sonnet
ShanikiSmith said:
This poem was very interesting! It was outstanding. Keep up the good work!
From Shaniki Smith
June 10th, 2016 15:07
ShanikiSmith said:
This poem was very interesting! It was outstanding. Keep up the good work!
From Shaniki Smith
June 10th, 2016 15:07
TIME IS PRECIOUS ! A Sonnet
Despina Nicole Cambosos said:
Positive and Energizing Writing. I must admit, my time is split so many ways. However, a major focus is on health and wellness. What inspired this topic for ya?
June 9th, 2016 22:32
Despina Nicole Cambosos said:
Positive and Energizing Writing. I must admit, my time is split so many ways. However, a major focus is on health and wellness. What inspired this topic for ya?
June 9th, 2016 22:32
CLOSE ENCOUNTERS ..... ? A Sonnet
DubbleDhee said:
I assume they weren't spies? The accents would be a dead giveaway. But they sound like something out of the movie "Men In Black." Did you work with Will Smith & Tommie Lee Jones? LOL! Thanks for sharing Brian!
June 9th, 2016 06:23
DubbleDhee said:
I assume they weren't spies? The accents would be a dead giveaway. But they sound like something out of the movie "Men In Black." Did you work with Will Smith & Tommie Lee Jones? LOL! Thanks for sharing Brian!
June 9th, 2016 06:23
WATER LILLY GIRL - A Sonnet
DubbleDhee said:
I don't normally go in for love poems, but I must say this one is quite beautiful. Just curious: Does Petulia represent the girl that got away......?
June 8th, 2016 09:39
DubbleDhee said:
I don't normally go in for love poems, but I must say this one is quite beautiful. Just curious: Does Petulia represent the girl that got away......?
June 8th, 2016 09:39
UMBRELLA GIRL - An Acrostic
Summersounds68 said:
Lovely and sensitive acrostic. Also written cleverly. ~ Sonia
June 7th, 2016 21:48
Summersounds68 said:
Lovely and sensitive acrostic. Also written cleverly. ~ Sonia
June 7th, 2016 21:48
TIME IS PRECIOUS ! A Sonnet
lysistrata said:
Brian,
The visual is a bag inspired by SALVADOR DALI'S CLOCKS?!
Timeless theme and inspiring execution.
Times flies over us,but leaves its shadow behind. I might explore this theme one day...
Thanks.
June 5th, 2016 05:07
lysistrata said:
Brian,
The visual is a bag inspired by SALVADOR DALI'S CLOCKS?!
Timeless theme and inspiring execution.
Times flies over us,but leaves its shadow behind. I might explore this theme one day...
Thanks.
June 5th, 2016 05:07
MUHAMMAD ALI - 1942 - 2016 - A Tribute
DubbleDhee said:
Beautiful tribute to the champ! Appreciate the time you took to break down and define every letter in his name. We hate to lose him, but God has called the champ home.
June 4th, 2016 07:28
DubbleDhee said:
Beautiful tribute to the champ! Appreciate the time you took to break down and define every letter in his name. We hate to lose him, but God has called the champ home.
June 4th, 2016 07:28
26 SHADES OF PURPLE - An ABCDarian Poem
paulamcnealy said:
Always look forward to reading your poems. Bravo. Love men that can wear purple or pink. Sexy...
June 3rd, 2016 20:52
paulamcnealy said:
Always look forward to reading your poems. Bravo. Love men that can wear purple or pink. Sexy...
June 3rd, 2016 20:52
26 SHADES OF PURPLE - An ABCDarian Poem
lysistrata said:
"Real Men love to wear purple"
You are a Real Man,right?! Oh,Brian,you did a good job on a great idea.
I have an eyeshadow palette with only 6 shades of Purple & a similar top with the photo you posted.
Do I need to say more? I like all shades of purple and even more your ABCDarian poem.
June 3rd, 2016 10:27
lysistrata said:
"Real Men love to wear purple"
You are a Real Man,right?! Oh,Brian,you did a good job on a great idea.
I have an eyeshadow palette with only 6 shades of Purple & a similar top with the photo you posted.
Do I need to say more? I like all shades of purple and even more your ABCDarian poem.
June 3rd, 2016 10:27
KITTENS ARE LOVELY - An Acrostic
lysistrata said:
From the village girls to the kittens,Brian.
Friday tomorrow.
What about a sweet lollipop of Art?!
Thanks for your comments,too.
June 2nd, 2016 15:23
lysistrata said:
From the village girls to the kittens,Brian.
Friday tomorrow.
What about a sweet lollipop of Art?!
Thanks for your comments,too.
June 2nd, 2016 15:23
KITTENS ARE LOVELY - An Acrostic
tedious said:
This is such a lovely poem. I adore animals!
June 2nd, 2016 13:56
tedious said:
This is such a lovely poem. I adore animals!
June 2nd, 2016 13:56
HOUR GLASS FIGURES
DubbleDhee said:
Great topic Brian! Love the hourglass format and the contrast between the polar bears up top and the people underneath. We definitely need to focus more on green energy. Fracking has become big in the US, but I'm afraid we will find out later (and maybe too late) what the environmental impact is. Thanks for sharing!
June 2nd, 2016 11:53
DubbleDhee said:
Great topic Brian! Love the hourglass format and the contrast between the polar bears up top and the people underneath. We definitely need to focus more on green energy. Fracking has become big in the US, but I'm afraid we will find out later (and maybe too late) what the environmental impact is. Thanks for sharing!
June 2nd, 2016 11:53
THE SCENT OF A LADY !
lysistrata said:
"In my experience CITY GIRLS & VILLAGE GIRLS react in much the same way in love."
Brian,
You need more experience....
June 1st, 2016 14:42
lysistrata said:
"In my experience CITY GIRLS & VILLAGE GIRLS react in much the same way in love."
Brian,
You need more experience....
June 1st, 2016 14:42
THE SCENT OF A LADY !
paulamcnealy said:
One of your best in my opinion. Thanks for sharing 💜💜💜
June 1st, 2016 14:08
paulamcnealy said:
One of your best in my opinion. Thanks for sharing 💜💜💜
June 1st, 2016 14:08
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