Comments received on poems by Reivax Camlost



In the dark and silent hours
Reivax Camlost said:

This is a little different than what I wrote before. I’m a little different. It’s been a while. Something inside me cracked. I’m still here. I can see… past the world now. Hopefully I can share what I’ve seen coherently.

October 26th, 2023 01:30

Too tired to write (well enough)
orchidee said:

Well, ya stayed awake enough to write this, to explain it all to us! lol
Go have 40 winks. You may be re-inspired after them. If not, make it 50 winks! Dunno how long that is exactly. I talk some rot sometimes. lol.

February 26th, 2022 03:44

Teardrops
Caring dove said:

Really well expressed . Sad but beautiful words

September 17th, 2021 00:34

Too late?
Trenz Pruca said:

Thank you. I enjoyed reading it.

September 26th, 2020 15:25

Pet names
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Ah a pet names for a person yayy those sound cute and cool the ones you mentioned. Super poem, cute and lovely. Thumbs up.

Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!

February 26th, 2020 01:50

Pet names
orchidee said:

A fine write R. And as is said; \'Yes, love\' or \'dear\' or \'hun\' (honey), or whatever pet-names we use!

February 5th, 2020 02:51

Pet names
Nicholas Browning said:

This is quite nice. I enjoyed it.

February 4th, 2020 22:17

Teardrops
dusk arising said:

Sometimes i wonder what my teardrops are for, what has motivated them to appear. Reading you today gives me food for thought,

January 23rd, 2020 11:54

Closeness
orchidee said:

A fine write Rievax.

December 29th, 2019 02:24

Cold and Comfort
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A lovely poem of warmth in the cold, poetic love expressed and depicted. I like the word tincture and its effects as to your muse
.Kudos.

December 3rd, 2019 16:15

First light
Goldfinch60 said:

Walking out into first light is so very wonderful, the glory of nature\'s canvas above you and the sound of natures symphony around you.

November 20th, 2019 01:35

Don\'t Regret
Goldfinch60 said:

Friends and lovers are so important in our lives at all times.

November 19th, 2019 01:49

In bocca al lupo
Reivax Camlost said:

Points to anyone who can recognize the metrical allusion here...

October 30th, 2019 13:00

In bocca al lupo
Lamar Cole said:

Very Nice Poem.

October 30th, 2019 11:28

In bocca al lupo
AlitaOpal said:

Bellissima! Nicely put together ..

October 30th, 2019 11:16

In bocca al lupo
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow a very interesting superb imagery poem in a fine forest setting wow! What does Boccaccio Lupa mean I\'m curious to know. Kudos for a super poem.

October 30th, 2019 10:24

As Knowing is To Be
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow a superb poem on love in admirable classic style and awesome rhyme scheme . Kudos n keep writing like this.


Would you pls pleez give your thoughts/ comments on my newest poem too.

July 18th, 2019 02:57

Names and Faces
SerenWise said:

Nicely written complex piece, very emotive

April 12th, 2019 12:04

When you are lost
chana said:

The raw emotion was captivating

August 2nd, 2018 23:07

9 April 2018 / We offer what is only ours
Nicholas Browning said:

I like this a lot.

April 10th, 2018 00:21

30 November 2017
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

November 30th, 2017 11:25

19 November 2017
b-LAH-que said:

The beautiful simplicity in this (as noted by the previous commenter) is something I hope to be able to incorporate into my own writings, and this is a lovely well-written reminder to try to do so. Well done, and thanks for posting.

November 19th, 2017 22:28

19 November 2017
mariellewrites said:

beautifully simple

November 19th, 2017 19:06

Contrition
FredPeyer said:

Reivax, I like your poem a lot. Very well written. Sounds a bit like the feeling one would have after confession.

September 29th, 2017 22:30

14 September 2017
Reivax Camlost said:

This poem has been reconstructed, after I lost it because the UI is crappy.

September 14th, 2017 13:23

23 August 2017
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 23rd, 2017 11:16

7 June 2017
Tris Eaton said:

This is awesome. Nice job

June 8th, 2017 21:46

7 June 2017
Augustus said:

I am reminded of what a college classroom of today many of whom demand a safe space when their ideas are challenged , what would be their reaction to watching real live footage of the landing at Normandy including the thousands of brave young men who gave their lives for the freedom they enjoy today. Enjoyed.

June 7th, 2017 18:15

22 May 2017
Augustus said:

Some of us see the beauty of the world even in dim light and in spite of our afflictions. Thanks for sharing.

May 22nd, 2017 22:12

7 May 2017
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

May 8th, 2017 00:22

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