Comments received on poems by Reivax Camlost
29 February 2017
orchidee said:
A good write, but a non-existent day - the title!
March 1st, 2017 11:08
orchidee said:
A good write, but a non-existent day - the title!
March 1st, 2017 11:08
28 February 2017
Augustus said:
I can just picture entranced in your dance. Well done.
February 28th, 2017 21:37
Augustus said:
I can just picture entranced in your dance. Well done.
February 28th, 2017 21:37
25 February 2017
Augustus said:
Tightly woven. I have the image of a young Viking biding his time ashore hoping one day to command a ship.
You are a word scholar
February 25th, 2017 16:51
Augustus said:
Tightly woven. I have the image of a young Viking biding his time ashore hoping one day to command a ship.
You are a word scholar
February 25th, 2017 16:51
25 February 2017
Fay Slimm. said:
Terse but so meaningful - you master the less very well in this short and commendable piece of work which has a slight feel of Kahlil in some of the phrasing. Fine read.
February 25th, 2017 14:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Terse but so meaningful - you master the less very well in this short and commendable piece of work which has a slight feel of Kahlil in some of the phrasing. Fine read.
February 25th, 2017 14:06
24 February 2017
Augustus said:
Im with damaged soul on this one, but could also be the hereafter. Great thought food.
February 24th, 2017 21:51
Augustus said:
Im with damaged soul on this one, but could also be the hereafter. Great thought food.
February 24th, 2017 21:51
24 February 2017
Goldfinch60 said:
Always move ahead into the unknown, it may surprise you.
February 24th, 2017 08:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Always move ahead into the unknown, it may surprise you.
February 24th, 2017 08:42
23 February 2017
Severus Alexander said:
I usually spent the five minutes or so after I write a poem unintentionally writing all of my sentences in the same rhyme scheme that I used. \"Why the did this now I cannot say ~ I cannot say ~ This describes a moment I experienced yesterday ~\"
February 23rd, 2017 11:20
Severus Alexander said:
I usually spent the five minutes or so after I write a poem unintentionally writing all of my sentences in the same rhyme scheme that I used. \"Why the did this now I cannot say ~ I cannot say ~ This describes a moment I experienced yesterday ~\"
February 23rd, 2017 11:20
22 February 2017
Augustus said:
For some it is really hard to know and understand the self, it\'s needs and wants, what path to take.
February 22nd, 2017 15:25
Augustus said:
For some it is really hard to know and understand the self, it\'s needs and wants, what path to take.
February 22nd, 2017 15:25
21 February 2017
Augustus said:
Perhaps I have your life in my hands. Provocative.
February 21st, 2017 14:56
Augustus said:
Perhaps I have your life in my hands. Provocative.
February 21st, 2017 14:56
21 February 2017
Michael Edwards said:
Small message with big impact - good one.
February 21st, 2017 11:41
Michael Edwards said:
Small message with big impact - good one.
February 21st, 2017 11:41
18 February 2017
Augustus said:
Oh Saturday wanderer,
You\'ve brightened my day.
In Epson salts and water
Your sore feet may play.
Nicely done.
February 18th, 2017 16:55
Augustus said:
Oh Saturday wanderer,
You\'ve brightened my day.
In Epson salts and water
Your sore feet may play.
Nicely done.
February 18th, 2017 16:55
River stone
Augustus said:
What it says to me is that hope is the rock upon which we can go on when the going is tough. I love the rhyme between silence and defiance. Enjoyed.
February 17th, 2017 22:05
Augustus said:
What it says to me is that hope is the rock upon which we can go on when the going is tough. I love the rhyme between silence and defiance. Enjoyed.
February 17th, 2017 22:05
River stone
MendedFences27 said:
Loved it. A great image expressed cleverly and clearly. Every word matters. Great write.- Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 17:11
MendedFences27 said:
Loved it. A great image expressed cleverly and clearly. Every word matters. Great write.- Phil A.
February 17th, 2017 17:11
11 February 2017
Augustus said:
Reminds me of The Movie Frozen, in which a person finds their strength. Well done.
February 12th, 2017 11:38
Augustus said:
Reminds me of The Movie Frozen, in which a person finds their strength. Well done.
February 12th, 2017 11:38
February
MendedFences27 said:
I see the morning frost, the snow falling, the surface of the snow glistening. Beautiful wording, excellent poem. - Phil A.
February 9th, 2017 17:38
MendedFences27 said:
I see the morning frost, the snow falling, the surface of the snow glistening. Beautiful wording, excellent poem. - Phil A.
February 9th, 2017 17:38
Winter / Had remembered Autumn days
Augustus said:
Chilling. Heh, heh. Teasing in a way but I could actually feel emotionally The contrast of seasons. Nice.
January 24th, 2017 12:06
Augustus said:
Chilling. Heh, heh. Teasing in a way but I could actually feel emotionally The contrast of seasons. Nice.
January 24th, 2017 12:06
Death\'s door / Repentance Dear
Reivax Camlost said:
Thanks for the feedback, and you\'re absolutely right about the interpretations. I never limit my poems to one, or two, or really any number of interpretations.
My poems often have two titles, for the two easiest to grasp interpretations of that poem- however, this is not to say that there are not more.
January 20th, 2017 08:07
Reivax Camlost said:
Thanks for the feedback, and you\'re absolutely right about the interpretations. I never limit my poems to one, or two, or really any number of interpretations.
My poems often have two titles, for the two easiest to grasp interpretations of that poem- however, this is not to say that there are not more.
January 20th, 2017 08:07
Death\'s door / Repentance Dear
Michael Edwards said:
Beguiling - super stanza which allows your own interpretation
January 20th, 2017 01:05
Michael Edwards said:
Beguiling - super stanza which allows your own interpretation
January 20th, 2017 01:05
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