Comments received on poems by Reivax Camlost
Dreaming of mercy
Augustus said:
Life is a struggle to stay afloat. Just before we fall asleep we meditate, worry over our mistakes and hope to find redemption. Our mind struggles to solve these issues. I enjoyed it.
September 12th, 2016 17:48
Augustus said:
Life is a struggle to stay afloat. Just before we fall asleep we meditate, worry over our mistakes and hope to find redemption. Our mind struggles to solve these issues. I enjoyed it.
September 12th, 2016 17:48
When We Met / Saying goodbye
Augustus said:
I guess it was the moment you look into someone's eyes and see devotion toward you. That is a very special moment. But all things fade despite our best efforts.
September 12th, 2016 15:53
Augustus said:
I guess it was the moment you look into someone's eyes and see devotion toward you. That is a very special moment. But all things fade despite our best efforts.
September 12th, 2016 15:53
Autumn traveler\'s friend
lysistrata said:
I guess I now need to check your Inspiration "La Campanella", because I enjoyed reading your Poem very much..
Explain to me Why you do this: "trav'ler"....
Have you listened Shostakovich - Jazz Suite No2 - Waltz No.2...
September 9th, 2016 13:33
lysistrata said:
I guess I now need to check your Inspiration "La Campanella", because I enjoyed reading your Poem very much..
Explain to me Why you do this: "trav'ler"....
Have you listened Shostakovich - Jazz Suite No2 - Waltz No.2...
September 9th, 2016 13:33
The little fire
lovedud said:
A short and sweet poem with a delicate poet's touch!
September 8th, 2016 21:02
lovedud said:
A short and sweet poem with a delicate poet's touch!
September 8th, 2016 21:02
Inspiration
lysistrata said:
You don't need to 'defend' Severus.
Your buddy,neighbor,bro or alter ego could speaks for Himself.
Whether he wears a Black/White hat or not ,and whether he poses upside Down,I could Still see the ironing board ...And it makes me 😁😂👅👎
September 4th, 2016 10:25
lysistrata said:
You don't need to 'defend' Severus.
Your buddy,neighbor,bro or alter ego could speaks for Himself.
Whether he wears a Black/White hat or not ,and whether he poses upside Down,I could Still see the ironing board ...And it makes me 😁😂👅👎
September 4th, 2016 10:25
A lark among the pines
lysistrata said:
If I tell you that I have a painting in my bedroom where a couple shares an umbrella and walks through a path surrounded with pines!! Amazing.
I'd check OUT Rachmaninov.
I like Stravisky. Write more....🍁🍀🍂🍃
September 2nd, 2016 12:56
lysistrata said:
If I tell you that I have a painting in my bedroom where a couple shares an umbrella and walks through a path surrounded with pines!! Amazing.
I'd check OUT Rachmaninov.
I like Stravisky. Write more....🍁🍀🍂🍃
September 2nd, 2016 12:56
A lark among the pines
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very nice write..where do u get your pics ;
September 2nd, 2016 02:52
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very nice write..where do u get your pics ;
September 2nd, 2016 02:52
Angel\'s eye
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL POEM REIVAX ~ It captures the essence of Angels and as you know I am an ANGELOPHILE ! All the elements of their excellence are included ! Eyes ~ wings ~ songs ~ sword ~ the harp an the sounds of Heaven. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 29th, 2016 16:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL POEM REIVAX ~ It captures the essence of Angels and as you know I am an ANGELOPHILE ! All the elements of their excellence are included ! Eyes ~ wings ~ songs ~ sword ~ the harp an the sounds of Heaven. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 29th, 2016 16:23
Firelight, Fire night
lysistrata said:
1. Check OUT this:
"Slam the door in the cold and the frost out of sight
Run down the street all but lost in the night"
Maybe?
"Slam the door to the darkness and the frost of the mind
Run down the street and set a firelight"
2. "The fire fell as we reveled in the night / the raindrops bow to the firelight": Is there a typo ⁉
August 25th, 2016 10:54
lysistrata said:
1. Check OUT this:
"Slam the door in the cold and the frost out of sight
Run down the street all but lost in the night"
Maybe?
"Slam the door to the darkness and the frost of the mind
Run down the street and set a firelight"
2. "The fire fell as we reveled in the night / the raindrops bow to the firelight": Is there a typo ⁉
August 25th, 2016 10:54
On the Battlefield
daniel dawes said:
Liked this one as well...good imagery. The flows good. I really enjoyed the read.
August 24th, 2016 12:04
daniel dawes said:
Liked this one as well...good imagery. The flows good. I really enjoyed the read.
August 24th, 2016 12:04
On the Battlefield
Severus Alexander said:
Inspiring.. your words evoke a vivid image.
August 24th, 2016 11:12
Severus Alexander said:
Inspiring.. your words evoke a vivid image.
August 24th, 2016 11:12
Fever Dream
Reivax Camlost said:
There were some mistakes in the second verse of part the first... Violet replaces Violate, and lift replaces life.
July 9th, 2016 21:54
Reivax Camlost said:
There were some mistakes in the second verse of part the first... Violet replaces Violate, and lift replaces life.
July 9th, 2016 21:54
Oasis in the desert of the heart
Celliehwyn89 said:
I love the last few lines! Thanks for a happier ending, I liked the wording too. :)
July 6th, 2016 16:32
Celliehwyn89 said:
I love the last few lines! Thanks for a happier ending, I liked the wording too. :)
July 6th, 2016 16:32
Oasis in the desert of the heart
willyweed said:
yes in this life we have to stay the course even through the most violent storms. good piece you pen. ww
July 6th, 2016 15:34
willyweed said:
yes in this life we have to stay the course even through the most violent storms. good piece you pen. ww
July 6th, 2016 15:34
Forgive me, reader
Seeker said:
Very, very good writing Reivax. I like your Poesque style.
June 18th, 2016 16:48
Seeker said:
Very, very good writing Reivax. I like your Poesque style.
June 18th, 2016 16:48
Dark Day
Seeker said:
Fascinating Reivax. I'll have to give this one some thought. I'm not very used to thinking but you have got me doing so. Excellent work!!
June 18th, 2016 16:44
Seeker said:
Fascinating Reivax. I'll have to give this one some thought. I'm not very used to thinking but you have got me doing so. Excellent work!!
June 18th, 2016 16:44
Forgive me, reader
Tropicana said:
Sounds great! i'd love to know the deeper meaning!!
June 16th, 2016 15:27
Tropicana said:
Sounds great! i'd love to know the deeper meaning!!
June 16th, 2016 15:27
A sleep of saving grace
lysistrata said:
You obviously are a special case and dreams hold an important part of your everyday life.
There is nothing wrong with expressing them.... I belong to the other side that can't fall asleep,because reality is better than the dreams. So Keep Writing...
June 15th, 2016 09:50
lysistrata said:
You obviously are a special case and dreams hold an important part of your everyday life.
There is nothing wrong with expressing them.... I belong to the other side that can't fall asleep,because reality is better than the dreams. So Keep Writing...
June 15th, 2016 09:50
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