Comments received on poems by Reivax Camlost
Death\'s door / Repentance Dear
Augustus said:
Ah, this could have a number of interpretations. At first I read it without reading the title. I believe the title is the clue. Nicely done.
January 19th, 2017 22:09
Augustus said:
Ah, this could have a number of interpretations. At first I read it without reading the title. I believe the title is the clue. Nicely done.
January 19th, 2017 22:09
Leave not the robin in the road
Reivax Camlost said:
Thanks for your praise, to which I will humbly give my thanks, and thank you for the valued feedback.
January 18th, 2017 08:22
Reivax Camlost said:
Thanks for your praise, to which I will humbly give my thanks, and thank you for the valued feedback.
January 18th, 2017 08:22
Leave not the robin in the road
Fay Slimm. said:
Enjoyed the archaic form and strong message in this short fable - the final line holds a haunt of a punch. Great stuff.
January 18th, 2017 00:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Enjoyed the archaic form and strong message in this short fable - the final line holds a haunt of a punch. Great stuff.
January 18th, 2017 00:23
Leave not the robin in the road
Augustus said:
We all cry out in despair in times of grave need. Salvation is another matter. Enjoyed.
January 17th, 2017 20:26
Augustus said:
We all cry out in despair in times of grave need. Salvation is another matter. Enjoyed.
January 17th, 2017 20:26
The little things in life / The secret heart
WriteBeLight said:
You certainly have a vivid way with words. Beautiful.
December 29th, 2016 14:52
WriteBeLight said:
You certainly have a vivid way with words. Beautiful.
December 29th, 2016 14:52
The little things in life / The secret heart
Tony36 said:
The little things in life, is what makes it such a joy to live. Great write
December 29th, 2016 14:25
Tony36 said:
The little things in life, is what makes it such a joy to live. Great write
December 29th, 2016 14:25
Christmas Eve
willyweed said:
Good Christmas piece. Ho Ho Ho!
I like it! seasons greetings! ww
December 25th, 2016 08:24
willyweed said:
Good Christmas piece. Ho Ho Ho!
I like it! seasons greetings! ww
December 25th, 2016 08:24
White Christmas
WriteBeLight said:
I re-read, and I feel the same, really. Although, alone on a bench, he is comforted by memories. That can apply to all of us, whether with family, or thinking about a past Christmas when someone special was there. I still think it is a sweet message.
December 23rd, 2016 05:40
WriteBeLight said:
I re-read, and I feel the same, really. Although, alone on a bench, he is comforted by memories. That can apply to all of us, whether with family, or thinking about a past Christmas when someone special was there. I still think it is a sweet message.
December 23rd, 2016 05:40
I\'d love to spend a christmas with you
Augustus said:
Nice message to a sweetheart.
December 19th, 2016 21:05
Augustus said:
Nice message to a sweetheart.
December 19th, 2016 21:05
Winter World Weary
Quemis said:
Very, very well written. Great word choice, great rhymes. Perfect structure. Awesome.
December 13th, 2016 13:11
Quemis said:
Very, very well written. Great word choice, great rhymes. Perfect structure. Awesome.
December 13th, 2016 13:11
Mercy is my one lifeline (Mercy is a friend of mine)
Augustus said:
Mercy comes in many shades. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2016 23:54
Augustus said:
Mercy comes in many shades. Nicely done.
December 10th, 2016 23:54
Mercy is my one lifeline (Mercy is a friend of mine)
Tony36 said:
Great write
December 10th, 2016 18:57
Tony36 said:
Great write
December 10th, 2016 18:57
About life, about love
Augustus said:
With common easily understood words in short compact lines you impact a profound whallop that has much depth.
December 4th, 2016 18:54
Augustus said:
With common easily understood words in short compact lines you impact a profound whallop that has much depth.
December 4th, 2016 18:54
Dead man\'s hand
Augustus said:
Just how do we all deal with death? The scythe eventually catches us all. Thanks for sharing.
November 29th, 2016 19:38
Augustus said:
Just how do we all deal with death? The scythe eventually catches us all. Thanks for sharing.
November 29th, 2016 19:38
Friends
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Of gold , roses and friends wow a lovely funtastic rhyming poem. Super cool epic, I like epics.
Nice to read from u again young blossoming poet budding.
November 4th, 2016 13:42
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Of gold , roses and friends wow a lovely funtastic rhyming poem. Super cool epic, I like epics.
Nice to read from u again young blossoming poet budding.
November 4th, 2016 13:42
A candle lit alone at night has pride
Augustus said:
Could be a metaphor for a simple life well lived. Nicely done.
September 27th, 2016 21:10
Augustus said:
Could be a metaphor for a simple life well lived. Nicely done.
September 27th, 2016 21:10
The dawning of the day
Augustus said:
Light, darkness and color. Nicely done.
September 23rd, 2016 08:24
Augustus said:
Light, darkness and color. Nicely done.
September 23rd, 2016 08:24
A candle in the night, a warming fire
Augustus said:
You are lighting more than candles with this excellent poem.
September 22nd, 2016 21:38
Augustus said:
You are lighting more than candles with this excellent poem.
September 22nd, 2016 21:38
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