Comments received on poems by Yasu Na
Immortal Poetry
Michael Edwards said:
A fine work - elegance in simplicity.
December 15th, 2018 01:44
Michael Edwards said:
A fine work - elegance in simplicity.
December 15th, 2018 01:44
Immortal Poetry
Yasu Na said:
I wrote this poem while reading Japanese traditional poetry. So I probably lean toward classicism.
December 14th, 2018 16:25
Yasu Na said:
I wrote this poem while reading Japanese traditional poetry. So I probably lean toward classicism.
December 14th, 2018 16:25
A Lane
Neville said:
I thought perhaps there was a rainbow in the making.. maybe there was but it was far too cold to see clearly.. I kinda liked these words.. thank you
December 11th, 2018 09:06
Neville said:
I thought perhaps there was a rainbow in the making.. maybe there was but it was far too cold to see clearly.. I kinda liked these words.. thank you
December 11th, 2018 09:06
A Lane
Lorna said:
What a beautiful image and so forlorn..... I read over and over - thank you.
December 11th, 2018 07:59
Lorna said:
What a beautiful image and so forlorn..... I read over and over - thank you.
December 11th, 2018 07:59
A SMALL BUTTERFLY
IsraaD said:
I really love this. Not understanding some things is very difficult but you made it sound so lighthearted.
December 10th, 2018 23:09
IsraaD said:
I really love this. Not understanding some things is very difficult but you made it sound so lighthearted.
December 10th, 2018 23:09
Kumiko\'s Words
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I like your writing style...u are like myself..u write about your life experiences...nice work..I will look forward to reading more from u...xxxooo
December 9th, 2018 03:50
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I like your writing style...u are like myself..u write about your life experiences...nice work..I will look forward to reading more from u...xxxooo
December 9th, 2018 03:50
A SMALL BUTTERFLY
Fay Slimm. said:
A forceful reminder that we as humans know almost nothing about the wonderful inhabitants of worlds around us - that butterfly is just being itself but oh what magic that is. Thank you for sharing this beautiful creature along with its mysteries dear Yasu - - a fine read.
December 4th, 2018 14:00
Fay Slimm. said:
A forceful reminder that we as humans know almost nothing about the wonderful inhabitants of worlds around us - that butterfly is just being itself but oh what magic that is. Thank you for sharing this beautiful creature along with its mysteries dear Yasu - - a fine read.
December 4th, 2018 14:00
THE MIRROR
Yasu Na said:
Mirrors reflect heat as well as light. They reflect our backs as well as our faces. They reflect what happens as well as what happened. They reflect our dreams as well as actuality. And......
I also like mirrors.
Thank you.
April 12th, 2018 23:30
Yasu Na said:
Mirrors reflect heat as well as light. They reflect our backs as well as our faces. They reflect what happens as well as what happened. They reflect our dreams as well as actuality. And......
I also like mirrors.
Thank you.
April 12th, 2018 23:30
LEAVES
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is such lovely language
The emotion comes through in this
April 11th, 2018 13:55
Aislinn Wilson said:
This is such lovely language
The emotion comes through in this
April 11th, 2018 13:55
A SEED
Eugene S. said:
Your view of the world, expressed through your poems, is intriguing. Thanks.
April 10th, 2018 08:41
Eugene S. said:
Your view of the world, expressed through your poems, is intriguing. Thanks.
April 10th, 2018 08:41
A LIMIT
Lorna said:
Good one......... it\'s true....... \"feelings repeat themselves\"..........
April 7th, 2018 04:44
Lorna said:
Good one......... it\'s true....... \"feelings repeat themselves\"..........
April 7th, 2018 04:44
STRANGERS
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we are all one family, it is a pity that more love does not pervade our family.
May 11th, 2017 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, we are all one family, it is a pity that more love does not pervade our family.
May 11th, 2017 01:25
STRANGERS
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your poem reminds me of how I feel in a restaurant sometimes Yahsuharu; but delighted rather than sad. I look around, notice the diversity in the patrons, notice the individual table conversations but still feel as if we were one big happy and connected family eating our dinner together. We all seem to be so at home - so very close to one another - enjoying our meals together....
May 10th, 2017 22:56
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your poem reminds me of how I feel in a restaurant sometimes Yahsuharu; but delighted rather than sad. I look around, notice the diversity in the patrons, notice the individual table conversations but still feel as if we were one big happy and connected family eating our dinner together. We all seem to be so at home - so very close to one another - enjoying our meals together....
May 10th, 2017 22:56
A SEED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks YASU - an enigmatic poem ! I love seeds because they contain the blueprint of life DNA ! In my perfect World every seed would germinate and bear "fruit". Your seed is ready willing and able to come to fruition all it needs is soil - sun - shower and then it will burst into life. Sometimes we are like a "dry seed" blown and lost just looking for the right place to bloom & blossom - but - "Spring is almost gone !" - BRIAN
May 7th, 2016 08:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks YASU - an enigmatic poem ! I love seeds because they contain the blueprint of life DNA ! In my perfect World every seed would germinate and bear "fruit". Your seed is ready willing and able to come to fruition all it needs is soil - sun - shower and then it will burst into life. Sometimes we are like a "dry seed" blown and lost just looking for the right place to bloom & blossom - but - "Spring is almost gone !" - BRIAN
May 7th, 2016 08:59
THE OCCASIONAL WAY
W. G. Simms said:
A soft and steady awakening to the little things in life we miss. I am hooked by the serenity and calm pace set throughout which really assists in creating that mood. Very lovely piece of work!
-W. G. Simms
April 18th, 2016 14:33
W. G. Simms said:
A soft and steady awakening to the little things in life we miss. I am hooked by the serenity and calm pace set throughout which really assists in creating that mood. Very lovely piece of work!
-W. G. Simms
April 18th, 2016 14:33
A DOLL AND THE STAIRS
recoverypoetry9 said:
Wow. excellant poem. It's really well written. I love the metaphor of the dolls house you have used. Could you check out my latest poem? Thank you Soph
April 16th, 2016 07:57
recoverypoetry9 said:
Wow. excellant poem. It's really well written. I love the metaphor of the dolls house you have used. Could you check out my latest poem? Thank you Soph
April 16th, 2016 07:57
A DOLL AND THE STAIRS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW YASU - Awesome fantasy poem which can be interpreted in many ways. In our dreams and fantasies we often morph into parrots and puppets and the paranormal and then they morph into each other evoking "Memories of a particular name !" Thanks for sharing - please check my poems - BRIAN
April 16th, 2016 06:01
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW YASU - Awesome fantasy poem which can be interpreted in many ways. In our dreams and fantasies we often morph into parrots and puppets and the paranormal and then they morph into each other evoking "Memories of a particular name !" Thanks for sharing - please check my poems - BRIAN
April 16th, 2016 06:01
TIME IN THE SALON
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LOVELY LOVE POEM YASUHARU - Like you I will never fully understand Ladies. However I believe they want to make themselves even more beautiful to please US. I like my Ladies eyelashes (irrespective of length) but in the 21st C SIZE MATTERS ! So like her (and you) we are all happy and we all smile at the outcome ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
April 13th, 2016 03:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LOVELY LOVE POEM YASUHARU - Like you I will never fully understand Ladies. However I believe they want to make themselves even more beautiful to please US. I like my Ladies eyelashes (irrespective of length) but in the 21st C SIZE MATTERS ! So like her (and you) we are all happy and we all smile at the outcome ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN
April 13th, 2016 03:23
WHAT IS CALLED TEMPTATION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YASUHARU - THANKS FOR SHARING ! Awesome FREE VERSE Poem - Temptation has many faces. I'm often tempted "To get up and go" somewhere anywhere, But like you I don't always know where I got or why I was there ! However when I get home again I always fell better for having gone SOMEWHERE ! BRIAN
April 12th, 2016 10:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
YASUHARU - THANKS FOR SHARING ! Awesome FREE VERSE Poem - Temptation has many faces. I'm often tempted "To get up and go" somewhere anywhere, But like you I don't always know where I got or why I was there ! However when I get home again I always fell better for having gone SOMEWHERE ! BRIAN
April 12th, 2016 10:32
AT ANY TIME IN THE LIFE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring and sharing. There is an awesome beauty in our Youthful Years. Everything is new and the things we experience and the people we meet - IN OUR YOUTH - are much more real and lasting than at any other time in our life ! The Prophet prayed "O God restore unto me thte days of my Youthfulness". We can never go back again and be young so we have to treasure forever the joys and memories of our Youth - they will never ever grow dim ! Please visit my poems - thanks - BRIAN
April 11th, 2016 05:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for caring and sharing. There is an awesome beauty in our Youthful Years. Everything is new and the things we experience and the people we meet - IN OUR YOUTH - are much more real and lasting than at any other time in our life ! The Prophet prayed "O God restore unto me thte days of my Youthfulness". We can never go back again and be young so we have to treasure forever the joys and memories of our Youth - they will never ever grow dim ! Please visit my poems - thanks - BRIAN
April 11th, 2016 05:18
THE HOT ROAD
PerpetualFlowers said:
I really love the way you write. It's smooth, and forms an amazing story in just the small amount of writing. You're really good! I can't wait to read more poems by you! I wish I could put words together in such fashion as you do. But, alas, we can't all be great writers can we?
April 9th, 2016 10:07
PerpetualFlowers said:
I really love the way you write. It's smooth, and forms an amazing story in just the small amount of writing. You're really good! I can't wait to read more poems by you! I wish I could put words together in such fashion as you do. But, alas, we can't all be great writers can we?
April 9th, 2016 10:07
