Comments received on poems by Funmiwrites
I write to heavens for thy nation (X)
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a poem in pain that bleeds on the reader\'s ears. Well written
June 11th, 2026 12:05
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a poem in pain that bleeds on the reader\'s ears. Well written
June 11th, 2026 12:05
I write to heavens for thy nation (ix)
sorenbarrett said:
It is for the message and the raw yet controlled metaphoric speech that the fave is given. It is a voice speaking from the earth. Well done
June 10th, 2026 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
It is for the message and the raw yet controlled metaphoric speech that the fave is given. It is a voice speaking from the earth. Well done
June 10th, 2026 05:42
I write to heavens for thy nation (viii)
sorenbarrett said:
A call for peace in this poem of people forced to leave their native land for safety sake. Well done
June 9th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A call for peace in this poem of people forced to leave their native land for safety sake. Well done
June 9th, 2026 03:59
I write to heavens for thy nation (vii)
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of desperation with some really good lines. Well done and a fave
June 7th, 2026 18:24
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of desperation with some really good lines. Well done and a fave
June 7th, 2026 18:24
I write to heavens for thy nation(vi)
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful hope and wish for peace and the remembering of those that suffered and fought for it. Lovely
June 6th, 2026 15:32
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful hope and wish for peace and the remembering of those that suffered and fought for it. Lovely
June 6th, 2026 15:32
I write to heavens for thy nation (v)
sorenbarrett said:
There are some wonderful and powerful lines in this poem
\"Because retirement
has become the second coming\"
\"How long shall power be worn
as a crown, instead of carried
as a responsibility?\"
A fave
June 5th, 2026 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
There are some wonderful and powerful lines in this poem
\"Because retirement
has become the second coming\"
\"How long shall power be worn
as a crown, instead of carried
as a responsibility?\"
A fave
June 5th, 2026 03:31
I write to heavens for thy nation(Iv)
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war repeated in this poem
June 4th, 2026 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
The horrors of war repeated in this poem
June 4th, 2026 12:59
I WRITE TO HEAVENS FOR THY NATION (iii)
sorenbarrett said:
This poem hits hard pairing innocence with death and pain painting a picture of war where children are soldiers long before their time cannon fodder where parents are left to search for their bones. A graphic and dark image for a dark time. Well done and a fave.
June 3rd, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
This poem hits hard pairing innocence with death and pain painting a picture of war where children are soldiers long before their time cannon fodder where parents are left to search for their bones. A graphic and dark image for a dark time. Well done and a fave.
June 3rd, 2026 04:43
I write to heavens for thy nation (ii)
syeda said:
this is profound. thank you for writing this.
June 2nd, 2026 21:34
syeda said:
this is profound. thank you for writing this.
June 2nd, 2026 21:34
I write to heavens for thy nation (ii)
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic lament for a nation and a people that suffer in the face of abundance. Well written
June 2nd, 2026 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic lament for a nation and a people that suffer in the face of abundance. Well written
June 2nd, 2026 05:13
I write to heavens for thy nation
sorenbarrett said:
A personification of the land sounding almost Native American in its view of the land as a mother figure. Nicely written
June 1st, 2026 03:56
sorenbarrett said:
A personification of the land sounding almost Native American in its view of the land as a mother figure. Nicely written
June 1st, 2026 03:56
I should be celebrated
sorenbarrett said:
To celebrate oneself is a noble effort and remember one\'s brother as well. Nicely done Happy Birthday
March 5th, 2026 19:35
sorenbarrett said:
To celebrate oneself is a noble effort and remember one\'s brother as well. Nicely done Happy Birthday
March 5th, 2026 19:35
I should be celebrated
Friendship said:
Nicely written.happy birthday 🎊🎊🎊
March 5th, 2026 18:16
Friendship said:
Nicely written.happy birthday 🎊🎊🎊
March 5th, 2026 18:16
Oh thou cold touch
sorenbarrett said:
Hopes, desires, expectations of fantasy revealed in reality in this poem. Very nicely penned
February 11th, 2026 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
Hopes, desires, expectations of fantasy revealed in reality in this poem. Very nicely penned
February 11th, 2026 04:40
A year of Basket
sorenbarrett said:
The hardest thing a parent can experience is the loss of a child and yet this one carries on. In metaphor time has lost a child the past year and yet it carries on. Nicely done
December 31st, 2025 19:22
sorenbarrett said:
The hardest thing a parent can experience is the loss of a child and yet this one carries on. In metaphor time has lost a child the past year and yet it carries on. Nicely done
December 31st, 2025 19:22
It has come
sorenbarrett said:
I love this use of anonymity in this poem it takes some time to understand its meaning. Well done
December 26th, 2025 15:45
sorenbarrett said:
I love this use of anonymity in this poem it takes some time to understand its meaning. Well done
December 26th, 2025 15:45
Sweet cherry
sorenbarrett said:
Passion in a seductive, sensual, erotic, sexual set of verse.
November 25th, 2025 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Passion in a seductive, sensual, erotic, sexual set of verse.
November 25th, 2025 13:20
My bottle
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric this poem may be taken as sexual but may not be intended that way. Surrealistic it tells its story. Well done
November 22nd, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphoric this poem may be taken as sexual but may not be intended that way. Surrealistic it tells its story. Well done
November 22nd, 2025 03:53
Thousand chaos in one.
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with so many mixed emotions and contradictions. It seems like life itself each statement a paradox. Nicely done.
November 7th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem with so many mixed emotions and contradictions. It seems like life itself each statement a paradox. Nicely done.
November 7th, 2025 03:45
Save me, save my tears
sorenbarrett said:
I hear distance in a relationship in this poem and a desire for clarification and taking one side of the other. Nicely done
August 21st, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
I hear distance in a relationship in this poem and a desire for clarification and taking one side of the other. Nicely done
August 21st, 2025 04:40
Rebuilt by My will
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write and even lovelier message of charity and the art of giving in the true sense where nothing is expected in return. Commendable and a lovely write a fave
August 18th, 2025 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write and even lovelier message of charity and the art of giving in the true sense where nothing is expected in return. Commendable and a lovely write a fave
August 18th, 2025 14:52
Rebuilt by My will
Poetic Licence said:
Not just a giver but a very strong determined person, always enjoy your writes, they have so much depth to them, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 13:12
Poetic Licence said:
Not just a giver but a very strong determined person, always enjoy your writes, they have so much depth to them, nicely expressed and written
August 18th, 2025 13:12
Farewell papa
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt and beautifully written write to their beloved Grandfather, fond memories, written with love and care, nicely expressed
August 8th, 2025 22:41
Poetic Licence said:
A heartfelt and beautifully written write to their beloved Grandfather, fond memories, written with love and care, nicely expressed
August 8th, 2025 22:41
Farewell papa
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a grandfather past and the memories he left behind. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 18:53
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful tribute to a grandfather past and the memories he left behind. Nicely written
August 8th, 2025 18:53
Farewell papa
Kevin Hulme said:
I feel your words so much. I still look at my own Father\'s chair and miss him so much . His Caps still hang on the Peg. Fine Poem.
August 8th, 2025 18:18
Kevin Hulme said:
I feel your words so much. I still look at my own Father\'s chair and miss him so much . His Caps still hang on the Peg. Fine Poem.
August 8th, 2025 18:18
I will write to heavens your story (vi)
Poetic Licence said:
This part had me thinking, is the changing of colour due to the embarrassment felt because his family had already returned to their normal lives, nicely expressed and written
July 7th, 2025 00:03
Poetic Licence said:
This part had me thinking, is the changing of colour due to the embarrassment felt because his family had already returned to their normal lives, nicely expressed and written
July 7th, 2025 00:03
I will write to heavens your story (vi)
sorenbarrett said:
The meaning of this poem is enigmatic and could be anything from embarrassment to being dead.. A cold and dark write on the one hand and a puzzling on on the other. A roll coaster of a ride of a poem. Well done
July 6th, 2025 17:43
sorenbarrett said:
The meaning of this poem is enigmatic and could be anything from embarrassment to being dead.. A cold and dark write on the one hand and a puzzling on on the other. A roll coaster of a ride of a poem. Well done
July 6th, 2025 17:43
I will write to heavens your story (v)
Poetic Licence said:
You actually feel the pain and sadness in the write of the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 12:17
Poetic Licence said:
You actually feel the pain and sadness in the write of the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 12:17
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