Comments received on poems by Funmiwrites
I will write to heavens your story (vi)
Poetic Licence said:
This part had me thinking, is the changing of colour due to the embarrassment felt because his family had already returned to their normal lives, nicely expressed and written
July 7th, 2025 00:03
Poetic Licence said:
This part had me thinking, is the changing of colour due to the embarrassment felt because his family had already returned to their normal lives, nicely expressed and written
July 7th, 2025 00:03
I will write to heavens your story (vi)
sorenbarrett said:
The meaning of this poem is enigmatic and could be anything from embarrassment to being dead.. A cold and dark write on the one hand and a puzzling on on the other. A roll coaster of a ride of a poem. Well done
July 6th, 2025 17:43
sorenbarrett said:
The meaning of this poem is enigmatic and could be anything from embarrassment to being dead.. A cold and dark write on the one hand and a puzzling on on the other. A roll coaster of a ride of a poem. Well done
July 6th, 2025 17:43
I will write to heavens your story (v)
Poetic Licence said:
You actually feel the pain and sadness in the write of the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 12:17
Poetic Licence said:
You actually feel the pain and sadness in the write of the passing of a loved one, nicely expressed and written
July 5th, 2025 12:17
I will write to heavens your story (v)
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad a poem of loss and death. Nicely done
July 5th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad a poem of loss and death. Nicely done
July 5th, 2025 11:12
I will write to heavens your story (iv)
sorenbarrett said:
Very dark this poem takes one through the departure phase of life from the eyes of another. Sad is the feeling left behind. Nicely written
July 4th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Very dark this poem takes one through the departure phase of life from the eyes of another. Sad is the feeling left behind. Nicely written
July 4th, 2025 04:33
I will write to heavens your story
2781 said:
Yes, we are soon forgotten by the world.
July 3rd, 2025 06:35
2781 said:
Yes, we are soon forgotten by the world.
July 3rd, 2025 06:35
I will write to heavens your story
Poetic Licence said:
Another lovely well written write, at how we are totally self absorbed, and barely give the time of day to our past. I really enjoy reading your work, a very talented young writer, thank you
July 3rd, 2025 05:57
Poetic Licence said:
Another lovely well written write, at how we are totally self absorbed, and barely give the time of day to our past. I really enjoy reading your work, a very talented young writer, thank you
July 3rd, 2025 05:57
I will write to heavens your story
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great representation of a shift in attention and the memory of a special time and person dropped for immediate gratification of another sort. A life of living in the moment and disregard for the past totally self absorbed. Well written
July 3rd, 2025 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great representation of a shift in attention and the memory of a special time and person dropped for immediate gratification of another sort. A life of living in the moment and disregard for the past totally self absorbed. Well written
July 3rd, 2025 05:46
I am nobody\'s Funmi
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very good write , that no one has a claim on us and we belong to no one, everyone has the write to be free and themselves, nicely expressed and written
July 2nd, 2025 08:43
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very good write , that no one has a claim on us and we belong to no one, everyone has the write to be free and themselves, nicely expressed and written
July 2nd, 2025 08:43
I am nobody\'s Funmi
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this topic is close to heart. No one belongs to anyone else, slavery is an ugly word a defunct concept that should not be endured. Well stated in this poem we continue to call ourselves as somebodies or them as ours but this is just a privative holdover from the past.
July 2nd, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this topic is close to heart. No one belongs to anyone else, slavery is an ugly word a defunct concept that should not be endured. Well stated in this poem we continue to call ourselves as somebodies or them as ours but this is just a privative holdover from the past.
July 2nd, 2025 04:36
I will write to heavens your story (ii)
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written farewell to a loved one, sad but touching write
July 2nd, 2025 04:18
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written farewell to a loved one, sad but touching write
July 2nd, 2025 04:18
I will write to heavens your story (ii)
sorenbarrett said:
A sad farewell and well written with good rhyme and flow. Nicely done in its darkness
July 2nd, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A sad farewell and well written with good rhyme and flow. Nicely done in its darkness
July 2nd, 2025 03:55
I will write to heavens your story
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a beautiful write of faith and belief, hope the answer is forthcoming, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 01:40
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a beautiful write of faith and belief, hope the answer is forthcoming, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 01:40
I will write to heavens your story
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious belief and question that begs an answer. Nicely written.
June 30th, 2025 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious belief and question that begs an answer. Nicely written.
June 30th, 2025 20:42
I hate it when you\'re hot
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is about someone\'s character and temperament, which changes at times not for the better, nicely expressed and written
May 8th, 2025 11:14
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is about someone\'s character and temperament, which changes at times not for the better, nicely expressed and written
May 8th, 2025 11:14
I hate it when you\'re hot
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem speaks to me of the temperament some people have. Nicely done
May 8th, 2025 10:11
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem speaks to me of the temperament some people have. Nicely done
May 8th, 2025 10:11
~~~Life Is Unfair~~~
Poetic Licence said:
Life can appear to be extremely unfair and unbalanced, but we have to keep plugging away, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 10:09
Poetic Licence said:
Life can appear to be extremely unfair and unbalanced, but we have to keep plugging away, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 10:09
I SAY
sorenbarrett said:
There is a process to go through from the timid to survival. Very nicely written
May 1st, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
There is a process to go through from the timid to survival. Very nicely written
May 1st, 2025 04:03
The holy sugar
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept of sugar being holy I guess it is far more holy than artificial sweeteners. Or is the reference to a person? A most interesting poem that keeps the mind working. Very nice
April 24th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept of sugar being holy I guess it is far more holy than artificial sweeteners. Or is the reference to a person? A most interesting poem that keeps the mind working. Very nice
April 24th, 2025 05:00
If I were to make you
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought of what others wish we were. How they would remake us if they could. A reason that many relationships do not work and breakdown. A lovely write
April 15th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought of what others wish we were. How they would remake us if they could. A reason that many relationships do not work and breakdown. A lovely write
April 15th, 2025 17:40
We Plead oh Lord
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of praise to God for all that he does and that we have an acknowledgement of greatness. Nicely stated
April 14th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of praise to God for all that he does and that we have an acknowledgement of greatness. Nicely stated
April 14th, 2025 05:02
I bleed holy
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of emotions rocking backwards and forwards, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 07:45
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of emotions rocking backwards and forwards, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 07:45
I bleed holy
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions and sensations flow like waves on the sea in this poem. Building, building only to return each time. Nicely done
March 12th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions and sensations flow like waves on the sea in this poem. Building, building only to return each time. Nicely done
March 12th, 2025 04:10
Mute
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting soliloquy with questions of a most rhetoric nature. Well written
March 10th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting soliloquy with questions of a most rhetoric nature. Well written
March 10th, 2025 04:40
Grain of faith
Poetic Licence said:
As they say if we have the belief to believe we will succeed, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 03:16
Poetic Licence said:
As they say if we have the belief to believe we will succeed, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 03:16
Grain of faith
sorenbarrett said:
The mind is powerful and belief is the key element in success. A lovely poem
March 3rd, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
The mind is powerful and belief is the key element in success. A lovely poem
March 3rd, 2025 16:29
New month new hope
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful caring write, may i wish the same for you, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:29
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful caring write, may i wish the same for you, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:29
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