Comments received on poems by Funmiwrites
I hate it when you\'re hot
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is about someone\'s character and temperament, which changes at times not for the better, nicely expressed and written
May 8th, 2025 11:14
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is about someone\'s character and temperament, which changes at times not for the better, nicely expressed and written
May 8th, 2025 11:14
I hate it when you\'re hot
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem speaks to me of the temperament some people have. Nicely done
May 8th, 2025 10:11
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem speaks to me of the temperament some people have. Nicely done
May 8th, 2025 10:11
~~~Life Is Unfair~~~
Poetic Licence said:
Life can appear to be extremely unfair and unbalanced, but we have to keep plugging away, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 10:09
Poetic Licence said:
Life can appear to be extremely unfair and unbalanced, but we have to keep plugging away, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 10:09
I SAY
sorenbarrett said:
There is a process to go through from the timid to survival. Very nicely written
May 1st, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
There is a process to go through from the timid to survival. Very nicely written
May 1st, 2025 04:03
The holy sugar
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept of sugar being holy I guess it is far more holy than artificial sweeteners. Or is the reference to a person? A most interesting poem that keeps the mind working. Very nice
April 24th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept of sugar being holy I guess it is far more holy than artificial sweeteners. Or is the reference to a person? A most interesting poem that keeps the mind working. Very nice
April 24th, 2025 05:00
If I were to make you
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought of what others wish we were. How they would remake us if they could. A reason that many relationships do not work and breakdown. A lovely write
April 15th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought of what others wish we were. How they would remake us if they could. A reason that many relationships do not work and breakdown. A lovely write
April 15th, 2025 17:40
We Plead oh Lord
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of praise to God for all that he does and that we have an acknowledgement of greatness. Nicely stated
April 14th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of praise to God for all that he does and that we have an acknowledgement of greatness. Nicely stated
April 14th, 2025 05:02
I bleed holy
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of emotions rocking backwards and forwards, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 07:45
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of emotions rocking backwards and forwards, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 07:45
I bleed holy
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions and sensations flow like waves on the sea in this poem. Building, building only to return each time. Nicely done
March 12th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions and sensations flow like waves on the sea in this poem. Building, building only to return each time. Nicely done
March 12th, 2025 04:10
Mute
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting soliloquy with questions of a most rhetoric nature. Well written
March 10th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting soliloquy with questions of a most rhetoric nature. Well written
March 10th, 2025 04:40
Grain of faith
Poetic Licence said:
As they say if we have the belief to believe we will succeed, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 03:16
Poetic Licence said:
As they say if we have the belief to believe we will succeed, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 03:16
Grain of faith
sorenbarrett said:
The mind is powerful and belief is the key element in success. A lovely poem
March 3rd, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
The mind is powerful and belief is the key element in success. A lovely poem
March 3rd, 2025 16:29
New month new hope
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful caring write, may i wish the same for you, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:29
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful caring write, may i wish the same for you, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:29
New month new hope
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful wish for all revealed in this poem. Nicely done
March 1st, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful wish for all revealed in this poem. Nicely done
March 1st, 2025 05:29
Rule morning
Poetic Licence said:
I get the of make the most of every day, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:28
Poetic Licence said:
I get the of make the most of every day, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:28
Rule morning
sorenbarrett said:
It is early morning here and the sun is just starting to brighten the horizon. I read this poem as a wake up call and greet it with pleasure. A lovely write
February 28th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
It is early morning here and the sun is just starting to brighten the horizon. I read this poem as a wake up call and greet it with pleasure. A lovely write
February 28th, 2025 04:04
Non see thee
sorenbarrett said:
Much emotion in this write. A most interesting wording that causes the reader to reflect on the message. Nicely done
February 26th, 2025 06:32
sorenbarrett said:
Much emotion in this write. A most interesting wording that causes the reader to reflect on the message. Nicely done
February 26th, 2025 06:32
Oh virgin dew
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that had not occurred to me before. Well put and written. A very good read
February 25th, 2025 03:57
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept that had not occurred to me before. Well put and written. A very good read
February 25th, 2025 03:57
Glimpse of yesterday
Poetic Licence said:
The only benefit of getting older is we become wiser supposedly but it would nice to go back to the start and try again, enjoyed the read
February 24th, 2025 06:03
Poetic Licence said:
The only benefit of getting older is we become wiser supposedly but it would nice to go back to the start and try again, enjoyed the read
February 24th, 2025 06:03
Glimpse of yesterday
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed if I knew what I knew now when I was a young child how would things be different? A fun read that provokes the thoughts.
February 24th, 2025 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed if I knew what I knew now when I was a young child how would things be different? A fun read that provokes the thoughts.
February 24th, 2025 04:14
Unseen ease with thee
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoy your style of writing, enjoyed the read
February 23rd, 2025 03:47
Poetic Licence said:
I enjoy your style of writing, enjoyed the read
February 23rd, 2025 03:47
Here comes my old memories
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting,sad and touching write,very well written and expressed
February 22nd, 2025 06:14
Poetic Licence said:
A haunting,sad and touching write,very well written and expressed
February 22nd, 2025 06:14
Here comes my old memories
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem that feels familiar but they show no sign of recognizing me, those memories. A wonderful and well written poem that in its vagueness feels so familiar.
February 22nd, 2025 05:16
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting poem that feels familiar but they show no sign of recognizing me, those memories. A wonderful and well written poem that in its vagueness feels so familiar.
February 22nd, 2025 05:16
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