Comments received on poems by Funmiwrites
I will write to heavens your story (v)
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad a poem of loss and death. Nicely done
July 5th, 2025 11:12
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad a poem of loss and death. Nicely done
July 5th, 2025 11:12
I will write to heavens your story (iv)
sorenbarrett said:
Very dark this poem takes one through the departure phase of life from the eyes of another. Sad is the feeling left behind. Nicely written
July 4th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Very dark this poem takes one through the departure phase of life from the eyes of another. Sad is the feeling left behind. Nicely written
July 4th, 2025 04:33
I will write to heavens your story
2781 said:
Yes, we are soon forgotten by the world.
July 3rd, 2025 06:35
2781 said:
Yes, we are soon forgotten by the world.
July 3rd, 2025 06:35
I will write to heavens your story
Poetic Licence said:
Another lovely well written write, at how we are totally self absorbed, and barely give the time of day to our past. I really enjoy reading your work, a very talented young writer, thank you
July 3rd, 2025 05:57
Poetic Licence said:
Another lovely well written write, at how we are totally self absorbed, and barely give the time of day to our past. I really enjoy reading your work, a very talented young writer, thank you
July 3rd, 2025 05:57
I will write to heavens your story
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great representation of a shift in attention and the memory of a special time and person dropped for immediate gratification of another sort. A life of living in the moment and disregard for the past totally self absorbed. Well written
July 3rd, 2025 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great representation of a shift in attention and the memory of a special time and person dropped for immediate gratification of another sort. A life of living in the moment and disregard for the past totally self absorbed. Well written
July 3rd, 2025 05:46
I am nobody\'s Funmi
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very good write , that no one has a claim on us and we belong to no one, everyone has the write to be free and themselves, nicely expressed and written
July 2nd, 2025 08:43
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very good write , that no one has a claim on us and we belong to no one, everyone has the write to be free and themselves, nicely expressed and written
July 2nd, 2025 08:43
I am nobody\'s Funmi
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this topic is close to heart. No one belongs to anyone else, slavery is an ugly word a defunct concept that should not be endured. Well stated in this poem we continue to call ourselves as somebodies or them as ours but this is just a privative holdover from the past.
July 2nd, 2025 04:36
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written this topic is close to heart. No one belongs to anyone else, slavery is an ugly word a defunct concept that should not be endured. Well stated in this poem we continue to call ourselves as somebodies or them as ours but this is just a privative holdover from the past.
July 2nd, 2025 04:36
I will write to heavens your story (ii)
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written farewell to a loved one, sad but touching write
July 2nd, 2025 04:18
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written farewell to a loved one, sad but touching write
July 2nd, 2025 04:18
I will write to heavens your story (ii)
sorenbarrett said:
A sad farewell and well written with good rhyme and flow. Nicely done in its darkness
July 2nd, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A sad farewell and well written with good rhyme and flow. Nicely done in its darkness
July 2nd, 2025 03:55
I will write to heavens your story
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a beautiful write of faith and belief, hope the answer is forthcoming, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 01:40
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a beautiful write of faith and belief, hope the answer is forthcoming, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 01:40
I will write to heavens your story
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious belief and question that begs an answer. Nicely written.
June 30th, 2025 20:42
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious belief and question that begs an answer. Nicely written.
June 30th, 2025 20:42
I hate it when you\'re hot
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is about someone\'s character and temperament, which changes at times not for the better, nicely expressed and written
May 8th, 2025 11:14
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is about someone\'s character and temperament, which changes at times not for the better, nicely expressed and written
May 8th, 2025 11:14
I hate it when you\'re hot
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem speaks to me of the temperament some people have. Nicely done
May 8th, 2025 10:11
sorenbarrett said:
Well written this poem speaks to me of the temperament some people have. Nicely done
May 8th, 2025 10:11
~~~Life Is Unfair~~~
Poetic Licence said:
Life can appear to be extremely unfair and unbalanced, but we have to keep plugging away, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 10:09
Poetic Licence said:
Life can appear to be extremely unfair and unbalanced, but we have to keep plugging away, nicely written and expressed
May 7th, 2025 10:09
I SAY
sorenbarrett said:
There is a process to go through from the timid to survival. Very nicely written
May 1st, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
There is a process to go through from the timid to survival. Very nicely written
May 1st, 2025 04:03
The holy sugar
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept of sugar being holy I guess it is far more holy than artificial sweeteners. Or is the reference to a person? A most interesting poem that keeps the mind working. Very nice
April 24th, 2025 05:00
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept of sugar being holy I guess it is far more holy than artificial sweeteners. Or is the reference to a person? A most interesting poem that keeps the mind working. Very nice
April 24th, 2025 05:00
If I were to make you
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought of what others wish we were. How they would remake us if they could. A reason that many relationships do not work and breakdown. A lovely write
April 15th, 2025 17:40
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting thought of what others wish we were. How they would remake us if they could. A reason that many relationships do not work and breakdown. A lovely write
April 15th, 2025 17:40
We Plead oh Lord
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of praise to God for all that he does and that we have an acknowledgement of greatness. Nicely stated
April 14th, 2025 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of praise to God for all that he does and that we have an acknowledgement of greatness. Nicely stated
April 14th, 2025 05:02
I bleed holy
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of emotions rocking backwards and forwards, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 07:45
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write of emotions rocking backwards and forwards, enjoyed the read
March 12th, 2025 07:45
I bleed holy
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions and sensations flow like waves on the sea in this poem. Building, building only to return each time. Nicely done
March 12th, 2025 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Emotions and sensations flow like waves on the sea in this poem. Building, building only to return each time. Nicely done
March 12th, 2025 04:10
Mute
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting soliloquy with questions of a most rhetoric nature. Well written
March 10th, 2025 04:40
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting soliloquy with questions of a most rhetoric nature. Well written
March 10th, 2025 04:40
Grain of faith
Poetic Licence said:
As they say if we have the belief to believe we will succeed, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 03:16
Poetic Licence said:
As they say if we have the belief to believe we will succeed, enjoyed the read
March 4th, 2025 03:16
Grain of faith
sorenbarrett said:
The mind is powerful and belief is the key element in success. A lovely poem
March 3rd, 2025 16:29
sorenbarrett said:
The mind is powerful and belief is the key element in success. A lovely poem
March 3rd, 2025 16:29
New month new hope
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful caring write, may i wish the same for you, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:29
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a wonderful caring write, may i wish the same for you, enjoyed the read
March 1st, 2025 06:29
New month new hope
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful wish for all revealed in this poem. Nicely done
March 1st, 2025 05:29
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful wish for all revealed in this poem. Nicely done
March 1st, 2025 05:29
Rule morning
Poetic Licence said:
I get the of make the most of every day, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:28
Poetic Licence said:
I get the of make the most of every day, enjoyed the read
February 28th, 2025 07:28
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