Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Babylon
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem addresses themes of temptation, excess, and the psychological toll of modern life, emphasizing how easy access to indulgent distractions can lead to a deterioration of mental and spiritual well-being.
May 3rd, 2026 06:11
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem addresses themes of temptation, excess, and the psychological toll of modern life, emphasizing how easy access to indulgent distractions can lead to a deterioration of mental and spiritual well-being.
May 3rd, 2026 06:11
Babylon
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed and metered this poem has an old biblical feel to values
May 3rd, 2026 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely rhymed and metered this poem has an old biblical feel to values
May 3rd, 2026 04:12
Babylon
Poetic Dan said:
Ooo that\'s good and definitely worth a read. One more click is sometimes all I didn\'t need
May 3rd, 2026 01:08
Poetic Dan said:
Ooo that\'s good and definitely worth a read. One more click is sometimes all I didn\'t need
May 3rd, 2026 01:08
Carnality
Durdica Porobija said:
I agree that this duality, the ambivalence of the human being is a source of frustration and an unfinished battle. A well-written poem.
May 2nd, 2026 09:50
Durdica Porobija said:
I agree that this duality, the ambivalence of the human being is a source of frustration and an unfinished battle. A well-written poem.
May 2nd, 2026 09:50
Witness
sorenbarrett said:
The news a transmitter of tragedy leaves all shocked and broken. Nicely written
May 1st, 2026 16:36
sorenbarrett said:
The news a transmitter of tragedy leaves all shocked and broken. Nicely written
May 1st, 2026 16:36
Violins
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and seductive. This poem is a sirens call. Nicely written.
April 30th, 2026 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
Romantic and seductive. This poem is a sirens call. Nicely written.
April 30th, 2026 09:16
Violins
Friendship said:
Beautifully said. Your poem focuses on a shared experience between lovers, capturing a moment of reunion and affection following a shower. You emphasize physical and emotional closeness, suggesting that love can be felt in the smallest details.
April 30th, 2026 09:10
Friendship said:
Beautifully said. Your poem focuses on a shared experience between lovers, capturing a moment of reunion and affection following a shower. You emphasize physical and emotional closeness, suggesting that love can be felt in the smallest details.
April 30th, 2026 09:10
Oklahoma
sorenbarrett said:
I love the flow and rhyme of this poem but more so the message given a fave and by the way I lived in Oklahoma for four years and there is not much to see there.
April 29th, 2026 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
I love the flow and rhyme of this poem but more so the message given a fave and by the way I lived in Oklahoma for four years and there is not much to see there.
April 29th, 2026 04:43
Atonement
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor of our means of transferring blame in scapegoating and what better method that poetic. Well written
April 26th, 2026 00:32
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful metaphor of our means of transferring blame in scapegoating and what better method that poetic. Well written
April 26th, 2026 00:32
Transformation
RSM0812 said:
Tbis could be about transformation in the natural world. From wood to a human being. Everything changes with time into something else. Hopefully for the better. Nicely written.
April 25th, 2026 04:14
RSM0812 said:
Tbis could be about transformation in the natural world. From wood to a human being. Everything changes with time into something else. Hopefully for the better. Nicely written.
April 25th, 2026 04:14
Transformation
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor that takes us to two extremes of life. Nicely written
April 24th, 2026 18:38
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor that takes us to two extremes of life. Nicely written
April 24th, 2026 18:38
Tempis Fugit
sorenbarrett said:
No that had not occurred to me but I have thought what would the last thing I see be. A most interesting image painted in this short few lines.
April 23rd, 2026 13:43
sorenbarrett said:
No that had not occurred to me but I have thought what would the last thing I see be. A most interesting image painted in this short few lines.
April 23rd, 2026 13:43
Frost
RSM0812 said:
This envokes a natural beauty of life as we know it. Nicely done.
April 22nd, 2026 07:58
RSM0812 said:
This envokes a natural beauty of life as we know it. Nicely done.
April 22nd, 2026 07:58
Frost
sorenbarrett said:
I love this metaphor that works in regard to what we see of reality. Well done and a fave
April 21st, 2026 11:28
sorenbarrett said:
I love this metaphor that works in regard to what we see of reality. Well done and a fave
April 21st, 2026 11:28
Lessons
Doggerel Dave said:
The culminative result, it seems, is insight.
A confessional in good order.
April 20th, 2026 17:54
Doggerel Dave said:
The culminative result, it seems, is insight.
A confessional in good order.
April 20th, 2026 17:54
Lessons
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they are all part but none the whole of it all and many would say that any one by itself is not a good thing. It is its opposite that has more value
April 20th, 2026 12:22
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed they are all part but none the whole of it all and many would say that any one by itself is not a good thing. It is its opposite that has more value
April 20th, 2026 12:22
Infidel
sorenbarrett said:
Why should one be ashamed and hide what God gave us. Well written
April 19th, 2026 15:14
sorenbarrett said:
Why should one be ashamed and hide what God gave us. Well written
April 19th, 2026 15:14
Grains of Sand
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful and lovely poem that is in some way mournful
April 18th, 2026 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
A most peaceful and lovely poem that is in some way mournful
April 18th, 2026 14:06
Carnality
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration and poetic words of human insight make this poem a fave
April 17th, 2026 20:22
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration and poetic words of human insight make this poem a fave
April 17th, 2026 20:22
Consequences
sorenbarrett said:
One must be most careful in what one says and does for it affects many. Well done
April 16th, 2026 21:24
sorenbarrett said:
One must be most careful in what one says and does for it affects many. Well done
April 16th, 2026 21:24
Shadowboxing
Friendship said:
Well written . Your poem delves into the psychological landscape of fear and paranoia, illustrating how these feelings can disrupt a person\'s peace of mind and manifest metaphorically as creeping shadows.
April 15th, 2026 18:34
Friendship said:
Well written . Your poem delves into the psychological landscape of fear and paranoia, illustrating how these feelings can disrupt a person\'s peace of mind and manifest metaphorically as creeping shadows.
April 15th, 2026 18:34
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