Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Bruises
sorenbarrett said:
Here sensitivity approaches paranoia or maybe post traumatic stress. A sad poem of present reaction to past treatment
June 4th, 2026 02:51
sorenbarrett said:
Here sensitivity approaches paranoia or maybe post traumatic stress. A sad poem of present reaction to past treatment
June 4th, 2026 02:51
Chasm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard. The struggle here feels painfully human...knowing where you want to go while feeling uncertain how to get there. There’s an honesty in this that lands immediately. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 20:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard. The struggle here feels painfully human...knowing where you want to go while feeling uncertain how to get there. There’s an honesty in this that lands immediately. Powerful poem, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 2nd, 2026 20:24
A Humble Request
Tristan Robert Lange said:
RIght!?!?! Totally agreed...and a fave for such a poetically put, simple request. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
RIght!?!?! Totally agreed...and a fave for such a poetically put, simple request. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 30th, 2026 10:19
Shadowboxing
Durdica Porobija said:
You based the approximation of doubt on the gradation of shadows very successfully.
May 30th, 2026 07:16
Durdica Porobija said:
You based the approximation of doubt on the gradation of shadows very successfully.
May 30th, 2026 07:16
A Humble Request
sorenbarrett said:
Well said and written. I think I have been there before
May 29th, 2026 13:52
sorenbarrett said:
Well said and written. I think I have been there before
May 29th, 2026 13:52
Humanity
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is sharp, angry, and unflinching. I like how the poem broadens the idea of violence beyond physical harm and points toward the quieter ways people can be diminished and consumed. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is sharp, angry, and unflinching. I like how the poem broadens the idea of violence beyond physical harm and points toward the quieter ways people can be diminished and consumed. Powerful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 28th, 2026 20:53
Humanity
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem of metaphor that speaks of our hollowness. Well done
May 28th, 2026 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
A surreal poem of metaphor that speaks of our hollowness. Well done
May 28th, 2026 15:59
Humanity
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
such a true and observant write on social injustice
May 28th, 2026 11:23
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
such a true and observant write on social injustice
May 28th, 2026 11:23
Phantasm
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this carries such a quiet loneliness to it. The feeling of standing present in the world while somehow remaining unseen comes through with painful clarity. The restraint of the piece makes the isolation feel even heavier. Beautiful and haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this carries such a quiet loneliness to it. The feeling of standing present in the world while somehow remaining unseen comes through with painful clarity. The restraint of the piece makes the isolation feel even heavier. Beautiful and haunting work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 22:03
Phantasm
sorenbarrett said:
This poem puts oneself and a monster seen by the world as a phantasm. There is a feeling of alienation here. Well written
May 27th, 2026 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
This poem puts oneself and a monster seen by the world as a phantasm. There is a feeling of alienation here. Well written
May 27th, 2026 14:01
Correction
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is bold, direct, and unapologetic in its argument. I appreciate how plainly the piece separates nakedness itself from the idea of moral failure, grounding the thought in Scripture rather than shock value. There’s a real sense of conviction throughout. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is bold, direct, and unapologetic in its argument. I appreciate how plainly the piece separates nakedness itself from the idea of moral failure, grounding the thought in Scripture rather than shock value. There’s a real sense of conviction throughout. Strong write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 27th, 2026 10:25
Freewheelin’
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful little poem, Fränz. This says so much with so few words. The shift from physical mileage to spiritual exhaustion lands immediately…and hard. “puts the miles on my soul / not just on my car” is one heck of a close. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 26th, 2026 20:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, powerful little poem, Fränz. This says so much with so few words. The shift from physical mileage to spiritual exhaustion lands immediately…and hard. “puts the miles on my soul / not just on my car” is one heck of a close. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 26th, 2026 20:05
Correction
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic rationalization of sin itself that is a matter of perspective. ,Well written and one must ask why being naked ever was considered a sin.
May 26th, 2026 18:25
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic rationalization of sin itself that is a matter of perspective. ,Well written and one must ask why being naked ever was considered a sin.
May 26th, 2026 18:25
Tongues of Fire
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this feels like the perfect Pentecost poem, my friend. A reminder that the same tongue can either bless or wound is about as timely and Spirit-filled as it gets. There’s such warmth and wisdom in the simplicity of this. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 14:58
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this feels like the perfect Pentecost poem, my friend. A reminder that the same tongue can either bless or wound is about as timely and Spirit-filled as it gets. There’s such warmth and wisdom in the simplicity of this. Wonderful write. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 25th, 2026 14:58
Tongues of Fire
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem advocates for kindness and the conscious choice to use gentle words to positively impact others, aligning with the biblical teaching from the Book of James about the importance of controlling one\'s speech.
May 24th, 2026 16:41
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem advocates for kindness and the conscious choice to use gentle words to positively impact others, aligning with the biblical teaching from the Book of James about the importance of controlling one\'s speech.
May 24th, 2026 16:41
Tongues of Fire
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message contained in this write well said.
May 24th, 2026 15:54
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful message contained in this write well said.
May 24th, 2026 15:54
The Burning Bones
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz…this burns with a sharp, compact intensity. The progression from “Desire” to “Passion” to “Sin” to “Id” feels almost like descending levels of the psyche, each stanza stripping away another layer of restraint. “drives sense right off the rails” lands perfectly at the end. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz…this burns with a sharp, compact intensity. The progression from “Desire” to “Passion” to “Sin” to “Id” feels almost like descending levels of the psyche, each stanza stripping away another layer of restraint. “drives sense right off the rails” lands perfectly at the end. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 24th, 2026 12:09
The Burning Bones
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful description of how primal urges take over. With Id driving the bus ego takes a back seat and superego is never picked up. Well done Franz
May 24th, 2026 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful description of how primal urges take over. With Id driving the bus ego takes a back seat and superego is never picked up. Well done Franz
May 24th, 2026 03:54
Compassion
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard because of how quietly true it feels. The poem starts almost conversationally, then slowly reveals the emotional cost of self-protection underneath it all. That final image of the spirit becoming “cold and pure” lands with real sadness. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard because of how quietly true it feels. The poem starts almost conversationally, then slowly reveals the emotional cost of self-protection underneath it all. That final image of the spirit becoming “cold and pure” lands with real sadness. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 23rd, 2026 10:32
Mile Marker
arqios said:
Best drives are on asphalt roads. But that\'s just a personal preference. And melting asphalt, now there\'s the limit. Very engaging read. 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:02
arqios said:
Best drives are on asphalt roads. But that\'s just a personal preference. And melting asphalt, now there\'s the limit. Very engaging read. 🙏🕊️
May 23rd, 2026 08:02
Compassion
sorenbarrett said:
Well written a poem of conflict between the is and the desired. Well done
May 22nd, 2026 19:27
sorenbarrett said:
Well written a poem of conflict between the is and the desired. Well done
May 22nd, 2026 19:27
Compassion
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the tension between authenticity and the desire to maintain appearances: that being true to oneself can lead to emotional exhaustion, while putting up emotional barriers might protect the ego at the cost of genuine connection and warmth.
May 22nd, 2026 18:37
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the tension between authenticity and the desire to maintain appearances: that being true to oneself can lead to emotional exhaustion, while putting up emotional barriers might protect the ego at the cost of genuine connection and warmth.
May 22nd, 2026 18:37
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