Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Divine Retribution
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a beautiful piece. I love how it moves from the stripping away of the old life to the quiet hope of becoming something new. The final image of thoughts as pure as a newborn leaves the poem resting in grace. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a beautiful piece. I love how it moves from the stripping away of the old life to the quiet hope of becoming something new. The final image of thoughts as pure as a newborn leaves the poem resting in grace. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 3rd, 2026 08:41
Divine Retribution
sorenbarrett said:
This reads almost scriptural. It is an announcement of cleansing. Well written and a fave
July 3rd, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
This reads almost scriptural. It is an announcement of cleansing. Well written and a fave
July 3rd, 2026 03:55
Divine Retribution
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful, reflective poem. Spiritual transformation with quiet grace.
July 3rd, 2026 01:22
soheil khodaparasti said:
A beautiful, reflective poem. Spiritual transformation with quiet grace.
July 3rd, 2026 01:22
Tarnished
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the image of \"joints frozen, machine seized\" really caught me. It\'s such a vivid way of expressing what prolonged pain and struggle can do, which makes the closing image of the machine coming alive all the more satisfying. Wonderfully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, the image of \"joints frozen, machine seized\" really caught me. It\'s such a vivid way of expressing what prolonged pain and struggle can do, which makes the closing image of the machine coming alive all the more satisfying. Wonderfully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 1st, 2026 23:17
Perilous Beauty
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now...this has me howling! Love it my friend! 🌕🐺
July 1st, 2026 22:43
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Now...this has me howling! Love it my friend! 🌕🐺
July 1st, 2026 22:43
Tarnished
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor that takes through life and its damages. Well written
July 1st, 2026 14:52
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely metaphor that takes through life and its damages. Well written
July 1st, 2026 14:52
American Autopsy
Dan Williams said:
So sad and so true. I disregard warnings about how we need to change before it is too late; it is already too late. I\'m glad I\'m an old man, worry for my daughter. Arrogance and greed have destroyed us. Oh well?
July 1st, 2026 03:08
Dan Williams said:
So sad and so true. I disregard warnings about how we need to change before it is too late; it is already too late. I\'m glad I\'m an old man, worry for my daughter. Arrogance and greed have destroyed us. Oh well?
July 1st, 2026 03:08
Perilous Beauty
sorenbarrett said:
An image that shakes the foundation of archetypal fears. Well written
June 30th, 2026 14:13
sorenbarrett said:
An image that shakes the foundation of archetypal fears. Well written
June 30th, 2026 14:13
Metamorphosis In Two Acts
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really moved me. The invitation to begin again each morning carries such quiet hope, reminding us that change remains possible for as long as life does. A thoughtful and encouraging piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 17:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really moved me. The invitation to begin again each morning carries such quiet hope, reminding us that change remains possible for as long as life does. A thoughtful and encouraging piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 29th, 2026 17:10
Metamorphosis In Two Acts
Friendship said:
A strong write, your poem addresses the daily routine of waking up and the habitual tendency to revert to our previous identities. It encourages the reader to seize the opportunity for self-improvement and to embrace change, highlighting the urgency of this transformation, which is only limited by the inevitability of time.
June 29th, 2026 14:42
Friendship said:
A strong write, your poem addresses the daily routine of waking up and the habitual tendency to revert to our previous identities. It encourages the reader to seize the opportunity for self-improvement and to embrace change, highlighting the urgency of this transformation, which is only limited by the inevitability of time.
June 29th, 2026 14:42
Metamorphosis In Two Acts
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement for changing for the better. Well done
June 29th, 2026 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of encouragement for changing for the better. Well done
June 29th, 2026 14:23
American Autopsy
Kevin Hulme said:
Powerful Piece. Here in the U.K. Free Speech is coughing up Blood. Good Write.
June 29th, 2026 07:28
Kevin Hulme said:
Powerful Piece. Here in the U.K. Free Speech is coughing up Blood. Good Write.
June 29th, 2026 07:28
American Autopsy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a vivid political allegory. The recurring image of the autopsy carries the poem from beginning to end, while the final question adds a touch of dark irony that lingers after the last line. Whether read as warning, lament, or both, it certainly leaves the reader with something to think about. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a vivid political allegory. The recurring image of the autopsy carries the poem from beginning to end, while the final question adds a touch of dark irony that lingers after the last line. Whether read as warning, lament, or both, it certainly leaves the reader with something to think about. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:15
Skin for Skin
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a thoughtful reflection. The poem acknowledges the subtle ways temptation works while ultimately reminding us that our deepest identity isn\'t found in our failures but in what God continues to refine within us. That hopeful ending ties everything together beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a thoughtful reflection. The poem acknowledges the subtle ways temptation works while ultimately reminding us that our deepest identity isn\'t found in our failures but in what God continues to refine within us. That hopeful ending ties everything together beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 28th, 2026 20:00
American Autopsy
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, deep and dark this poem a political criticism falls within the border of truth and is well rhymed and metered. Even Jefferson thought that democracy was nothing more than two wolves and a sheep voting on what to have for dinner but there seem no better options. Well written and a fave
June 28th, 2026 12:14
sorenbarrett said:
Clever, deep and dark this poem a political criticism falls within the border of truth and is well rhymed and metered. Even Jefferson thought that democracy was nothing more than two wolves and a sheep voting on what to have for dinner but there seem no better options. Well written and a fave
June 28th, 2026 12:14
Skin for Skin
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the battle between good and bad well written
June 27th, 2026 21:02
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of the battle between good and bad well written
June 27th, 2026 21:02
Bagels and Bricks
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this gave me a good chuckle! 😂 Witty, playful, and just the right amount of bite. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this gave me a good chuckle! 😂 Witty, playful, and just the right amount of bite. Really enjoyed this one, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 26th, 2026 09:24
Bagels and Bricks
sorenbarrett said:
This has been the U.S, policy in the past and it usually got results. Not sure how ethical it was but that was never the point it was effective. Love the rhyme scheme in this one Franz
June 26th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
This has been the U.S, policy in the past and it usually got results. Not sure how ethical it was but that was never the point it was effective. Love the rhyme scheme in this one Franz
June 26th, 2026 04:05
Flytrap
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of overcoming adversity and finding hope in difficult situations. It presents a metaphor for struggle and the idea of breaking free from confines that seem inescapable.
June 24th, 2026 19:50
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of overcoming adversity and finding hope in difficult situations. It presents a metaphor for struggle and the idea of breaking free from confines that seem inescapable.
June 24th, 2026 19:50
Flytrap
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what struck me most is how you turn a scientific reality into a human metaphor. The crushing pull of gravity becomes the weight of life\'s difficult moments, while the rockets become determination, hope, or ingenuity. The emergence into \"a morning quite fair\" makes for a wonderfully uplifting landing. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 13:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what struck me most is how you turn a scientific reality into a human metaphor. The crushing pull of gravity becomes the weight of life\'s difficult moments, while the rockets become determination, hope, or ingenuity. The emergence into \"a morning quite fair\" makes for a wonderfully uplifting landing. Great job on this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 24th, 2026 13:34
Flytrap
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and uplifting it is a most positive and encouraging write Franz
June 24th, 2026 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and uplifting it is a most positive and encouraging write Franz
June 24th, 2026 09:13
Fog
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me right away. Three lines, and the atmosphere is instantly there. That feeling of waking into a gray world and carrying a bit of that grayness inside yourself comes through beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me right away. Three lines, and the atmosphere is instantly there. That feeling of waking into a gray world and carrying a bit of that grayness inside yourself comes through beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:38
Control the Narrative
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, “And not a drop of ink?” made me smile. The whole poem builds so naturally toward that moment before charging right back into the creative solution. Really enjoyed this one, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 23rd, 2026 22:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, “And not a drop of ink?” made me smile. The whole poem builds so naturally toward that moment before charging right back into the creative solution. Really enjoyed this one, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 23rd, 2026 22:12
Fog
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely hybrid haiku senryu that may be taken literally or metaphorically. Nicely done my friend
June 23rd, 2026 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely hybrid haiku senryu that may be taken literally or metaphorically. Nicely done my friend
June 23rd, 2026 08:19
Control the Narrative
RSM0812 said:
This is really well written and quite enjoyable to read. Perfect rhyme scheme as well. Great job.
June 23rd, 2026 07:03
RSM0812 said:
This is really well written and quite enjoyable to read. Perfect rhyme scheme as well. Great job.
June 23rd, 2026 07:03
Control the Narrative
sorenbarrett said:
How true this poem is poetry can be a therapist, a minister, rabbi or priest, a friend, a healer. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 21:08
sorenbarrett said:
How true this poem is poetry can be a therapist, a minister, rabbi or priest, a friend, a healer. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 21:08
Patience
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice in poetic form about a subject that seems more and more common with a constantly growing population. Well done
June 20th, 2026 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice in poetic form about a subject that seems more and more common with a constantly growing population. Well done
June 20th, 2026 14:28
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