Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Fetch the Inspectors
sorenbarrett said:
Catching the perpetrators does nothing for the victim. A most interesting poem that is quite mind provoking. Nicely written a fave
September 28th, 2025 18:29
sorenbarrett said:
Catching the perpetrators does nothing for the victim. A most interesting poem that is quite mind provoking. Nicely written a fave
September 28th, 2025 18:29
Existence in Four Lines
sorenbarrett said:
Contrasts make for such good poetry. A lovely piece
September 28th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
Contrasts make for such good poetry. A lovely piece
September 28th, 2025 03:47
Passage
Friendship said:
The poem \"Passage\" explores themes of chaos, loss, and the inevitability of fate, particularly in the context of a traumatic event, likely a car accident. The imagery suggests a moment frozen in time, marked by despair and the stark reality of mortality.
September 23rd, 2025 11:13
Friendship said:
The poem \"Passage\" explores themes of chaos, loss, and the inevitability of fate, particularly in the context of a traumatic event, likely a car accident. The imagery suggests a moment frozen in time, marked by despair and the stark reality of mortality.
September 23rd, 2025 11:13
Passage
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that progresses with style from light and color to elements. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 20:05
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem that progresses with style from light and color to elements. Well done
September 22nd, 2025 20:05
Ushered Into Clay
sorenbarrett said:
I can not put my finger on what specifically enthralls me about this poem but something does and will not let go. I\'m going with my gut that is the core of poetry for me and it gets a fave
September 16th, 2025 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
I can not put my finger on what specifically enthralls me about this poem but something does and will not let go. I\'m going with my gut that is the core of poetry for me and it gets a fave
September 16th, 2025 18:17
Repentance
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem is mind provoking and with its poetic flare challenges the reader to call bull shit but none will dare because despite wanting it to otherwise we know its true. A fave
September 16th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this poem is mind provoking and with its poetic flare challenges the reader to call bull shit but none will dare because despite wanting it to otherwise we know its true. A fave
September 16th, 2025 04:13
Kibrothhattaavah
sorenbarrett said:
What a splendid senryu this is. A fave
September 14th, 2025 12:06
sorenbarrett said:
What a splendid senryu this is. A fave
September 14th, 2025 12:06
Villains
sorenbarrett said:
Paradoxical by conventional thought reality is a hard task master. A poem of wisdom that few wish to believe and fewer still accept. A poignant write that earns a fave
September 13th, 2025 10:24
sorenbarrett said:
Paradoxical by conventional thought reality is a hard task master. A poem of wisdom that few wish to believe and fewer still accept. A poignant write that earns a fave
September 13th, 2025 10:24
Affliction
NinjaGirl said:
This is really well-written, I like the haunting message
September 12th, 2025 13:00
NinjaGirl said:
This is really well-written, I like the haunting message
September 12th, 2025 13:00
Affliction
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Literary devices: Imagery “purple shroud of country dark,” “crumbling teeth,” “blackened bones.”
Alliteration “bleating sheep,” “fiends their feasting-dead,” “shambling horde.”
Symbolism - zombies -recurring fears or past traumas; fire & burial - final purification and closure.
Tone -Dark, eerie, then triumphant as the villagers overcome the horror. Well written.
September 12th, 2025 11:40
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
Literary devices: Imagery “purple shroud of country dark,” “crumbling teeth,” “blackened bones.”
Alliteration “bleating sheep,” “fiends their feasting-dead,” “shambling horde.”
Symbolism - zombies -recurring fears or past traumas; fire & burial - final purification and closure.
Tone -Dark, eerie, then triumphant as the villagers overcome the horror. Well written.
September 12th, 2025 11:40
Affliction
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of spooky and dark images well written
September 12th, 2025 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of spooky and dark images well written
September 12th, 2025 10:15
Target (Haiku)
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful senryu that I just love a fave
September 9th, 2025 19:03
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderful senryu that I just love a fave
September 9th, 2025 19:03
Target (Haiku)
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems to be a story here I think. About someone?
Good Haiku.
September 9th, 2025 18:53
Kevin Hulme said:
Seems to be a story here I think. About someone?
Good Haiku.
September 9th, 2025 18:53
Out
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor that chills the bones. It to me speaks of alienation. Nicely done with great imagery
September 9th, 2025 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
A metaphor that chills the bones. It to me speaks of alienation. Nicely done with great imagery
September 9th, 2025 04:03
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
Love the metaphor and image created in this poem that leaves both a feeling of trepidation and anticipation. Very nicely penned a fave
September 8th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Love the metaphor and image created in this poem that leaves both a feeling of trepidation and anticipation. Very nicely penned a fave
September 8th, 2025 04:33
Dead Stars
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This one merited three reads. Fantastic
September 7th, 2025 02:18
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This one merited three reads. Fantastic
September 7th, 2025 02:18
Un Reve de Misère
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem full of great images and wording nice rhyme as well and a haunting question
September 6th, 2025 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem full of great images and wording nice rhyme as well and a haunting question
September 6th, 2025 20:23
Bare Witness
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Mighty powerful because what it says is true. The line about the suite is an arresting metaphore of the chameleon character that we have to play. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 09:59
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Mighty powerful because what it says is true. The line about the suite is an arresting metaphore of the chameleon character that we have to play. Nicely done
September 5th, 2025 09:59
The Invader
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read that had a great ending. Humor in poetry is the best
September 4th, 2025 15:18
sorenbarrett said:
A most fun read that had a great ending. Humor in poetry is the best
September 4th, 2025 15:18
The Highwayman
sorenbarrett said:
Someone did not want to let go of their treasure. A grizzly and raw poem of theft. Well done
September 3rd, 2025 19:50
sorenbarrett said:
Someone did not want to let go of their treasure. A grizzly and raw poem of theft. Well done
September 3rd, 2025 19:50
Drawbridge
sorenbarrett said:
With a ship as a metaphor this poem sails over human experience. Nicely done
September 1st, 2025 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
With a ship as a metaphor this poem sails over human experience. Nicely done
September 1st, 2025 11:24
Not So Broken
sorenbarrett said:
We all break things from time to time but that does not mean that we are broken. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 18:16
sorenbarrett said:
We all break things from time to time but that does not mean that we are broken. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 18:16
Down
sorenbarrett said:
Grim and tragic this poem conveys a feeling of hopelessness and resignation as well as horror. Nicely done
August 17th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Grim and tragic this poem conveys a feeling of hopelessness and resignation as well as horror. Nicely done
August 17th, 2025 04:20
Down
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang, what a well painted poem. I totally felt present, and with it being such a short piece, that is impressive indeed.
August 16th, 2025 22:30
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang, what a well painted poem. I totally felt present, and with it being such a short piece, that is impressive indeed.
August 16th, 2025 22:30
Baggage
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a child who wants to be in a different world to the one they are living in, they want to see the light and dance for real, nicely expressed and written
August 15th, 2025 16:22
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a child who wants to be in a different world to the one they are living in, they want to see the light and dance for real, nicely expressed and written
August 15th, 2025 16:22
Baggage
sorenbarrett said:
Tiny worlds where in reality size makes no difference. A lovely write
August 15th, 2025 15:56
sorenbarrett said:
Tiny worlds where in reality size makes no difference. A lovely write
August 15th, 2025 15:56
Traces
Poetic Licence said:
The image clearly set in this very poetic write of the impending tradegy, very nicely written
August 14th, 2025 14:28
Poetic Licence said:
The image clearly set in this very poetic write of the impending tradegy, very nicely written
August 14th, 2025 14:28
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