Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Snared
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of complete helplessness crying out for some help, nicely expressed and written
June 25th, 2025 13:25
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of complete helplessness crying out for some help, nicely expressed and written
June 25th, 2025 13:25
Snared
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a grizzly image of helplessness. Graphic and poetic a fave
June 25th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a grizzly image of helplessness. Graphic and poetic a fave
June 25th, 2025 12:26
Terminal Mile
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write, the frozen stare , very relatable, nicely written, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:38
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write, the frozen stare , very relatable, nicely written, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:38
Terminal Mile
sorenbarrett said:
I love the metaphor, the combination of time and an emotional stare on another\'s face. The incongruence is genius. A brilliant piece and a fave
June 24th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
I love the metaphor, the combination of time and an emotional stare on another\'s face. The incongruence is genius. A brilliant piece and a fave
June 24th, 2025 07:28
Primeval
Poetic Licence said:
A clever setting the scene for the sacrifice to be made, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 23:41
Poetic Licence said:
A clever setting the scene for the sacrifice to be made, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 23:41
Primeval
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to set the scene for a ritual that is to follow. Great painting of the image in words. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 21:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to set the scene for a ritual that is to follow. Great painting of the image in words. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 21:19
Horrible
Poetic Licence said:
The slow and painful unveiling of a child\'s dark past, nicely expressed and written
June 22nd, 2025 20:20
Poetic Licence said:
The slow and painful unveiling of a child\'s dark past, nicely expressed and written
June 22nd, 2025 20:20
Horrible
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery that leaves a dark past to be revealed. Short and nicely penned
June 21st, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery that leaves a dark past to be revealed. Short and nicely penned
June 21st, 2025 14:04
Above the Trenchline
sorenbarrett said:
I read this as words that we throw at each other conversation battles where no one wins although it could well be literal battles. A lovely write and fave
June 20th, 2025 17:51
sorenbarrett said:
I read this as words that we throw at each other conversation battles where no one wins although it could well be literal battles. A lovely write and fave
June 20th, 2025 17:51
Without Depth
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed truth that proclaims the unity of nature and all that we are. A fave
June 19th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed truth that proclaims the unity of nature and all that we are. A fave
June 19th, 2025 06:49
Without Depth
arqios said:
This poem flows with a universal embrace, capturing the essence of existence as both transient and timeless. The imagery of water, dust, gem, rain—anchors the reader in the tangible, yet spirals into the intangible realms of thoughts and life itself. It beautifully reflects the interconnectedness of all things, blurring the line between the physical and the ethereal. The repetition of \"I am\" strengthens the poem’s voice, an invitation to consider the profound depth hidden within even the simplest elements of being. An enjoyable contemplative and resonant piece.
June 19th, 2025 06:36
arqios said:
This poem flows with a universal embrace, capturing the essence of existence as both transient and timeless. The imagery of water, dust, gem, rain—anchors the reader in the tangible, yet spirals into the intangible realms of thoughts and life itself. It beautifully reflects the interconnectedness of all things, blurring the line between the physical and the ethereal. The repetition of \"I am\" strengthens the poem’s voice, an invitation to consider the profound depth hidden within even the simplest elements of being. An enjoyable contemplative and resonant piece.
June 19th, 2025 06:36
Melanie
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well written with rhyme and good flow. The metaphor is well placed and followed. Very nice
June 18th, 2025 06:47
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well written with rhyme and good flow. The metaphor is well placed and followed. Very nice
June 18th, 2025 06:47
Melanie
arqios said:
What a delightfully eerie and mischievous tale! Melanie’s flesh, escaping the confines of expectation, takes on a life of its own—a nocturnal creature venturing into the dark underbelly of the world. It’s both chilling and playful, weaving images of slithering shadows and forbidden feasts. The contrast between the grotesque nighttime escapades and its quiet retreat at dawn adds a sly rhythm, capturing an odd balance of menace and whimsy. It feels like a story that slinks under the surface, asking us what lies beyond ordinary façades.
June 18th, 2025 06:47
arqios said:
What a delightfully eerie and mischievous tale! Melanie’s flesh, escaping the confines of expectation, takes on a life of its own—a nocturnal creature venturing into the dark underbelly of the world. It’s both chilling and playful, weaving images of slithering shadows and forbidden feasts. The contrast between the grotesque nighttime escapades and its quiet retreat at dawn adds a sly rhythm, capturing an odd balance of menace and whimsy. It feels like a story that slinks under the surface, asking us what lies beyond ordinary façades.
June 18th, 2025 06:47
Farewell to the See
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one and the comparison of capitalism to a scavenger picking bones. Lovely a fave
June 17th, 2025 13:47
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one and the comparison of capitalism to a scavenger picking bones. Lovely a fave
June 17th, 2025 13:47
On Nudism
arqios said:
A bare statement that authenticity is a powerful force. Whether in moments of physical or emotional unburdening, stepping into the world as your true self is an act of courage and liberation. The world may try to impose expectations, but there is beauty in living unfiltered, in embracing who you are without apology. You are worthy, you are enough, and your freedom—whatever form it takes—is something to celebrate. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 16th, 2025 21:07
arqios said:
A bare statement that authenticity is a powerful force. Whether in moments of physical or emotional unburdening, stepping into the world as your true self is an act of courage and liberation. The world may try to impose expectations, but there is beauty in living unfiltered, in embracing who you are without apology. You are worthy, you are enough, and your freedom—whatever form it takes—is something to celebrate. 🕊️🙏🏻
June 16th, 2025 21:07
On Nudism
sorenbarrett said:
Fine choice of words and the symbol of cloths as the fabrication (nice play on words) of society and its demands. A fave
June 16th, 2025 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
Fine choice of words and the symbol of cloths as the fabrication (nice play on words) of society and its demands. A fave
June 16th, 2025 08:20
The Companion
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to so many people, when night comes the fears and doubts come out to play, nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 10:52
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable write to so many people, when night comes the fears and doubts come out to play, nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 10:52
The Companion
sorenbarrett said:
Doubts echo in this poem and such a relatable theme it is well worded and so identifiable.
June 14th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Doubts echo in this poem and such a relatable theme it is well worded and so identifiable.
June 14th, 2025 08:21
Closure
sorenbarrett said:
Such vivid words paint a clear picture of weakness struggling for the smallest sign of pardon. A wonderful write and a fave
June 13th, 2025 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
Such vivid words paint a clear picture of weakness struggling for the smallest sign of pardon. A wonderful write and a fave
June 13th, 2025 08:30
Ode to Poe
sorenbarrett said:
Well done I think the he would be proud to take a bow to this. Very well rhymed with the aid of a little poetic license. A fun read
June 12th, 2025 13:13
sorenbarrett said:
Well done I think the he would be proud to take a bow to this. Very well rhymed with the aid of a little poetic license. A fun read
June 12th, 2025 13:13
Lives
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful poem! Words of deterioration and rot in a metaphor of love. A definite fave
June 11th, 2025 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
What a beautiful poem! Words of deterioration and rot in a metaphor of love. A definite fave
June 11th, 2025 11:21
Words About the Journey
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that speaks of a path of life in dark and no markers where we listen to others guide us, sometimes for good and others for ill. It is our choice whom to listen to but who do you trust? Good thought provoking write
June 10th, 2025 07:18
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that speaks of a path of life in dark and no markers where we listen to others guide us, sometimes for good and others for ill. It is our choice whom to listen to but who do you trust? Good thought provoking write
June 10th, 2025 07:18
Words About the Journey
Poetic Licence said:
Very true write we decide the paths we will travel on, enjoyed the read
June 10th, 2025 07:16
Poetic Licence said:
Very true write we decide the paths we will travel on, enjoyed the read
June 10th, 2025 07:16
Pilgrimage
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful sensuous piece of poetry, nicely crafted
June 9th, 2025 20:01
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful sensuous piece of poetry, nicely crafted
June 9th, 2025 20:01
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