Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Sanctuary
sorenbarrett said:
This one is hard hitting. Short and so is life. It is cold and graphic,. Dark but not as dark as what is to come. And so it is with all of us. A fave
August 5th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
This one is hard hitting. Short and so is life. It is cold and graphic,. Dark but not as dark as what is to come. And so it is with all of us. A fave
August 5th, 2025 16:14
Lunacy
sorenbarrett said:
Light hearted and fun in its wording it carries some wisdom with it just enough for it to make sense. A fave
August 4th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Light hearted and fun in its wording it carries some wisdom with it just enough for it to make sense. A fave
August 4th, 2025 04:33
Messines
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in this mound is a metaphor awaiting birth and sprouting. A lovely write
August 2nd, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in this mound is a metaphor awaiting birth and sprouting. A lovely write
August 2nd, 2025 06:45
Bare Witness
Poetic Licence said:
I love the essence of this write, we dress according to what is expected of us or to cover who we really are, we just be proud and happy just to be ourselves, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 11:53
Poetic Licence said:
I love the essence of this write, we dress according to what is expected of us or to cover who we really are, we just be proud and happy just to be ourselves, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 11:53
Bare Witness
sorenbarrett said:
As both literal and metaphorical this poem makes sense to the individual that wants to be accepted for who they are. For society that needs conformity to survive it is not accepted. Loved the poem
August 1st, 2025 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
As both literal and metaphorical this poem makes sense to the individual that wants to be accepted for who they are. For society that needs conformity to survive it is not accepted. Loved the poem
August 1st, 2025 11:24
Repercussions
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great allegory and rhyme this poem paints a picture. Nicely done
July 30th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great allegory and rhyme this poem paints a picture. Nicely done
July 30th, 2025 10:29
Rumination
Poetic Licence said:
So relatable to so many, the inabilty just to get a simple nights sleep, nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 23:33
Poetic Licence said:
So relatable to so many, the inabilty just to get a simple nights sleep, nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 23:33
Rumination
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia in its helplessness leaves the victim distraught and depressed. A sad saturation.
July 28th, 2025 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia in its helplessness leaves the victim distraught and depressed. A sad saturation.
July 28th, 2025 16:45
The Sane Age
sorenbarrett said:
When the burden is heavy we dream and I love the last line for sanity is determined by a point of view. Very nice
July 27th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
When the burden is heavy we dream and I love the last line for sanity is determined by a point of view. Very nice
July 27th, 2025 09:37
Year
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and raw with graphic images of metaphor pull the scab off the meaning and it bleeds through. Lovely
July 26th, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and raw with graphic images of metaphor pull the scab off the meaning and it bleeds through. Lovely
July 26th, 2025 08:25
Dead Stars
arqios said:
This poem appears to depict its speaker as the remnant of a collapsed star: \'blackened coal\' flickering with \'fading embers\'; using its deliberate rhyme and meter to mimic a dying star’s slow pulse. By asserting that no earthly fuel can incinerate remorse, it casts guilt as an elemental force beyond extinguishment. Through stark geological and astronomical imagery, it offers a powerful meditation on the unyielding permanence of regret.
July 23rd, 2025 21:00
arqios said:
This poem appears to depict its speaker as the remnant of a collapsed star: \'blackened coal\' flickering with \'fading embers\'; using its deliberate rhyme and meter to mimic a dying star’s slow pulse. By asserting that no earthly fuel can incinerate remorse, it casts guilt as an elemental force beyond extinguishment. Through stark geological and astronomical imagery, it offers a powerful meditation on the unyielding permanence of regret.
July 23rd, 2025 21:00
Dead Stars
sorenbarrett said:
Meaning encapsulated in coal becomes a diamond. Loved it a fave
July 23rd, 2025 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
Meaning encapsulated in coal becomes a diamond. Loved it a fave
July 23rd, 2025 11:16
Malfaiteur
sorenbarrett said:
Hypocrisy will eventually lead to just deserts. A poem well written
July 22nd, 2025 18:59
sorenbarrett said:
Hypocrisy will eventually lead to just deserts. A poem well written
July 22nd, 2025 18:59
Destiny of a Fool
Poetic Licence said:
The tale of many a fool, nicely written, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 12:46
Poetic Licence said:
The tale of many a fool, nicely written, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 12:46
Destiny of a Fool
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme paired with flowing meter and a haunting tale what more can I ask for in a poem a fave
July 21st, 2025 06:42
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme paired with flowing meter and a haunting tale what more can I ask for in a poem a fave
July 21st, 2025 06:42
Liberation
MatPie said:
A letter to the freedom we have but constrained by social norms. I love it
July 20th, 2025 13:39
MatPie said:
A letter to the freedom we have but constrained by social norms. I love it
July 20th, 2025 13:39
Liberation
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that speaks in reality but also in metaphor. What are cloths but constraints against exposure that the rest of the world is not ready to accept. A most unique poem about a seldom spoken of controlling world.
July 20th, 2025 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting poem that speaks in reality but also in metaphor. What are cloths but constraints against exposure that the rest of the world is not ready to accept. A most unique poem about a seldom spoken of controlling world.
July 20th, 2025 12:42
Code
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write of insults and resulting pain, then those eyes, which can so much without a word being spoken, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 09:58
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful write of insults and resulting pain, then those eyes, which can so much without a word being spoken, nicely expressed and written
July 19th, 2025 09:58
Code
Priya Tomar said:
Very nice poem , it is the reaction against the insult you suffered....
July 19th, 2025 08:05
Priya Tomar said:
Very nice poem , it is the reaction against the insult you suffered....
July 19th, 2025 08:05
Code
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words in a powerful poem of past insult and pain. Well written
July 19th, 2025 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words in a powerful poem of past insult and pain. Well written
July 19th, 2025 07:15
City Girl Blues
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad this poem speaks of loss and death. Very well written and a fave
July 18th, 2025 11:39
sorenbarrett said:
Dark and sad this poem speaks of loss and death. Very well written and a fave
July 18th, 2025 11:39
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