Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Plague
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard…raw, intimate, and absolutely devastating. The pain feels immediate and merciless throughout. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard…raw, intimate, and absolutely devastating. The pain feels immediate and merciless throughout. One hell of a powerful poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 24th, 2026 09:05
Plague
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of alienation from self itself. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 18:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic write of alienation from self itself. Well done
July 23rd, 2026 18:53
Buried Bones
RSM0812 said:
This is very well written. Denial, confusion and acceptance. Nice write.
July 23rd, 2026 05:51
RSM0812 said:
This is very well written. Denial, confusion and acceptance. Nice write.
July 23rd, 2026 05:51
Bruises
RSM0812 said:
Interesting write man. Messed up pic to go along with it. We are all alone sometimes and need to make the best out of it. That is what i got from your poem. Hope im close.
July 23rd, 2026 05:49
RSM0812 said:
Interesting write man. Messed up pic to go along with it. We are all alone sometimes and need to make the best out of it. That is what i got from your poem. Hope im close.
July 23rd, 2026 05:49
Hobgoblins
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is one heck of a poem. Those destructive patterns become almost mischievous little saboteurs here...waiting for the slightest lapse to send us tumbling again. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 19:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is one heck of a poem. Those destructive patterns become almost mischievous little saboteurs here...waiting for the slightest lapse to send us tumbling again. Powerful work, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 21st, 2026 19:19
Hobgoblins
sorenbarrett said:
Hobbled by hobgoblins quite the image created here. It seems amusing at one level but has great metaphoric meaning as well. Nicely written
July 21st, 2026 04:21
sorenbarrett said:
Hobbled by hobgoblins quite the image created here. It seems amusing at one level but has great metaphoric meaning as well. Nicely written
July 21st, 2026 04:21
Shabbat
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ränz, this is a passionate defense of Sabbath and a strong challenge to inherited tradition. I deeply agree that sacred rest should be remembered and protected, even where our theological conclusions differ. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
ränz, this is a passionate defense of Sabbath and a strong challenge to inherited tradition. I deeply agree that sacred rest should be remembered and protected, even where our theological conclusions differ. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 18th, 2026 09:21
Shabbat
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of old vs new where a day of worship was changed from the seventh to the first day of the week. People do not realize this just as they do not realize that an eye for an eye was changed for forgiveness depending on what religion one follows. We live in a changing world.
July 18th, 2026 03:34
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of old vs new where a day of worship was changed from the seventh to the first day of the week. People do not realize this just as they do not realize that an eye for an eye was changed for forgiveness depending on what religion one follows. We live in a changing world.
July 18th, 2026 03:34
Shabbat
Doggerel Dave said:
I have no intention of doing the study, nothing to disagree or agree with.
However good luck to you - go in peace .
July 18th, 2026 00:32
Doggerel Dave said:
I have no intention of doing the study, nothing to disagree or agree with.
However good luck to you - go in peace .
July 18th, 2026 00:32
Got Dem Oligarchy Blues
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Fränz, this is concise and damning! Those with the greatest power to change our course remain consumed by profit while everything collapses around them. Brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow, Fränz, this is concise and damning! Those with the greatest power to change our course remain consumed by profit while everything collapses around them. Brilliantly done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 17th, 2026 08:22
Got Dem Oligarchy Blues
sorenbarrett said:
Priorities come into view and like a monopoly game everyone leaves their money, houses and hotels in the box when the game is over. A good read Franz
July 17th, 2026 03:17
sorenbarrett said:
Priorities come into view and like a monopoly game everyone leaves their money, houses and hotels in the box when the game is over. A good read Franz
July 17th, 2026 03:17
Wildfires
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful little piece. The hazy window creates such an uneasy distance...close enough to witness what\'s happening, but never quite sure if there\'s still time to act. That final note of hope keeps the whole poem balanced beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful little piece. The hazy window creates such an uneasy distance...close enough to witness what\'s happening, but never quite sure if there\'s still time to act. That final note of hope keeps the whole poem balanced beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 16th, 2026 08:04
Exposed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really warmed my heart. There\'s something so beautifully ordinary about this moment, and that\'s exactly what makes it special. Love doesn\'t always need grand gestures. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this really warmed my heart. There\'s something so beautifully ordinary about this moment, and that\'s exactly what makes it special. Love doesn\'t always need grand gestures. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 15th, 2026 20:44
Wildfires
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes it\'s the same every Summer. Is it to late?
The Burning (Pardon the Pun) Question.
These Haiku\'s hit the nail on the Head: as did yours.
July 15th, 2026 20:23
Kevin Hulme said:
Yes it\'s the same every Summer. Is it to late?
The Burning (Pardon the Pun) Question.
These Haiku\'s hit the nail on the Head: as did yours.
July 15th, 2026 20:23
Wildfires
sorenbarrett said:
What a great blend of the senryu and haiku. Very nice
July 15th, 2026 19:40
sorenbarrett said:
What a great blend of the senryu and haiku. Very nice
July 15th, 2026 19:40
Wildfires
Friendship said:
I hope not lots of smoke coming across to Long Island, right now, stay safe.
July 15th, 2026 18:56
Friendship said:
I hope not lots of smoke coming across to Long Island, right now, stay safe.
July 15th, 2026 18:56
Petrification
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is delightfully grim. The rhythm keeps it light while the humor grows darker with each stanza, and by the end I couldn\'t help but smile at the shared misery of greeting another fresh horror...another new day. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 18:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is delightfully grim. The rhythm keeps it light while the humor grows darker with each stanza, and by the end I couldn\'t help but smile at the shared misery of greeting another fresh horror...another new day. Great write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 14th, 2026 18:57
Exposed
sorenbarrett said:
Suggestive and sensual it turns warm and welcoming a lovely reassuring poem or relationship.
July 14th, 2026 07:33
sorenbarrett said:
Suggestive and sensual it turns warm and welcoming a lovely reassuring poem or relationship.
July 14th, 2026 07:33
Exposed
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sweet intimacy here, finding love in the ordinary moments before the world wakes up.
A simple kitchen scene becomes a warm little portrait of affection, comfort, and quiet devotion.
July 14th, 2026 07:14
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a sweet intimacy here, finding love in the ordinary moments before the world wakes up.
A simple kitchen scene becomes a warm little portrait of affection, comfort, and quiet devotion.
July 14th, 2026 07:14
Exposed
isa kemmy said:
es errineret mich an die gutes altes Gedächtnis, est ist sehr schön
July 14th, 2026 06:37
isa kemmy said:
es errineret mich an die gutes altes Gedächtnis, est ist sehr schön
July 14th, 2026 06:37
Petrification
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in good rhyme and meter it has an appealing flow to it and the content is about a feeling that most have had before an uneasiness that seems to have no reason or cause but is identifiable and present. Well done
July 14th, 2026 03:04
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely written in good rhyme and meter it has an appealing flow to it and the content is about a feeling that most have had before an uneasiness that seems to have no reason or cause but is identifiable and present. Well done
July 14th, 2026 03:04
Humanity
RSM0812 said:
Reminds me of current war in the world. Unnecessary and regretable. Machines of death.
July 12th, 2026 09:41
RSM0812 said:
Reminds me of current war in the world. Unnecessary and regretable. Machines of death.
July 12th, 2026 09:41
Choose Your Poison
RSM0812 said:
Blue or red. Which one to take. The blue, i think.
July 12th, 2026 09:40
RSM0812 said:
Blue or red. Which one to take. The blue, i think.
July 12th, 2026 09:40
The Pen (Is) a Problem
RSM0812 said:
Naked women is art of God. Naked man is angels reincarnated. Good write.
July 12th, 2026 09:39
RSM0812 said:
Naked women is art of God. Naked man is angels reincarnated. Good write.
July 12th, 2026 09:39
Unblessed
rhmn_7 said:
Your poem beautifully highlights the profound power of free will, reminding us that our daily choices shape our destinies and invite either divine blessings or curses dear poet!
July 12th, 2026 08:09
rhmn_7 said:
Your poem beautifully highlights the profound power of free will, reminding us that our daily choices shape our destinies and invite either divine blessings or curses dear poet!
July 12th, 2026 08:09
Unblessed
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a thoughtful poem. \"Every night and every morn / we get to choose\" especially resonated with me. I like that it keeps the focus on personal responsibility while also holding onto the hope that each day offers a fresh beginning. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a thoughtful poem. \"Every night and every morn / we get to choose\" especially resonated with me. I like that it keeps the focus on personal responsibility while also holding onto the hope that each day offers a fresh beginning. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 12th, 2026 07:29
Unblessed
sorenbarrett said:
Viewing blessings from a religious point of view and how they should motivate. Well written
July 11th, 2026 14:25
sorenbarrett said:
Viewing blessings from a religious point of view and how they should motivate. Well written
July 11th, 2026 14:25
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