Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Not So Broken
sorenbarrett said:
We all break things from time to time but that does not mean that we are broken. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 18:16
sorenbarrett said:
We all break things from time to time but that does not mean that we are broken. Nicely written
August 18th, 2025 18:16
Down
sorenbarrett said:
Grim and tragic this poem conveys a feeling of hopelessness and resignation as well as horror. Nicely done
August 17th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
Grim and tragic this poem conveys a feeling of hopelessness and resignation as well as horror. Nicely done
August 17th, 2025 04:20
Down
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang, what a well painted poem. I totally felt present, and with it being such a short piece, that is impressive indeed.
August 16th, 2025 22:30
Spencer Wilhelm said:
Dang, what a well painted poem. I totally felt present, and with it being such a short piece, that is impressive indeed.
August 16th, 2025 22:30
Baggage
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a child who wants to be in a different world to the one they are living in, they want to see the light and dance for real, nicely expressed and written
August 15th, 2025 16:22
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of a child who wants to be in a different world to the one they are living in, they want to see the light and dance for real, nicely expressed and written
August 15th, 2025 16:22
Baggage
sorenbarrett said:
Tiny worlds where in reality size makes no difference. A lovely write
August 15th, 2025 15:56
sorenbarrett said:
Tiny worlds where in reality size makes no difference. A lovely write
August 15th, 2025 15:56
Traces
Poetic Licence said:
The image clearly set in this very poetic write of the impending tradegy, very nicely written
August 14th, 2025 14:28
Poetic Licence said:
The image clearly set in this very poetic write of the impending tradegy, very nicely written
August 14th, 2025 14:28
Traces
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic write with wonderful images that set a mood ending in tragedy. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 13:18
sorenbarrett said:
A most poetic write with wonderful images that set a mood ending in tragedy. Nicely written
August 14th, 2025 13:18
Lydia
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that one attempts to kill the pain of aging with drink numbing the awareness. Nicely written
August 13th, 2025 19:34
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that one attempts to kill the pain of aging with drink numbing the awareness. Nicely written
August 13th, 2025 19:34
Enfers
sorenbarrett said:
Surrealist, mythical, metaphorical it speaks. Lovely
August 12th, 2025 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Surrealist, mythical, metaphorical it speaks. Lovely
August 12th, 2025 09:56
Emily
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid picture painted of a soul that captured others out of pity. Lovely
August 11th, 2025 07:52
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid picture painted of a soul that captured others out of pity. Lovely
August 11th, 2025 07:52
Romance
sorenbarrett said:
A great short that setts the scene for nature\'s story of life and begs the question of why is this necessary. Fields ploughed under setting sun, seeds spread before day is done. A wonderful write and a fave
August 11th, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A great short that setts the scene for nature\'s story of life and begs the question of why is this necessary. Fields ploughed under setting sun, seeds spread before day is done. A wonderful write and a fave
August 11th, 2025 03:53
Beneath the Black Thumb of Charon
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely crafted write and description of the lord of the dark , enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 15:57
Poetic Licence said:
A very nicely crafted write and description of the lord of the dark , enjoyed the read
August 8th, 2025 15:57
Beneath the Black Thumb of Charon
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderfully worded poem of the grim reaper, angel of death, Charon or who ever. Loved it a fave
August 8th, 2025 15:35
sorenbarrett said:
This is a wonderfully worded poem of the grim reaper, angel of death, Charon or who ever. Loved it a fave
August 8th, 2025 15:35
Sanctuary
sorenbarrett said:
This one is hard hitting. Short and so is life. It is cold and graphic,. Dark but not as dark as what is to come. And so it is with all of us. A fave
August 5th, 2025 16:14
sorenbarrett said:
This one is hard hitting. Short and so is life. It is cold and graphic,. Dark but not as dark as what is to come. And so it is with all of us. A fave
August 5th, 2025 16:14
Lunacy
sorenbarrett said:
Light hearted and fun in its wording it carries some wisdom with it just enough for it to make sense. A fave
August 4th, 2025 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Light hearted and fun in its wording it carries some wisdom with it just enough for it to make sense. A fave
August 4th, 2025 04:33
Messines
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in this mound is a metaphor awaiting birth and sprouting. A lovely write
August 2nd, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
Buried in this mound is a metaphor awaiting birth and sprouting. A lovely write
August 2nd, 2025 06:45
Bare Witness
Poetic Licence said:
I love the essence of this write, we dress according to what is expected of us or to cover who we really are, we just be proud and happy just to be ourselves, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 11:53
Poetic Licence said:
I love the essence of this write, we dress according to what is expected of us or to cover who we really are, we just be proud and happy just to be ourselves, enjoyed the read
August 1st, 2025 11:53
Bare Witness
sorenbarrett said:
As both literal and metaphorical this poem makes sense to the individual that wants to be accepted for who they are. For society that needs conformity to survive it is not accepted. Loved the poem
August 1st, 2025 11:24
sorenbarrett said:
As both literal and metaphorical this poem makes sense to the individual that wants to be accepted for who they are. For society that needs conformity to survive it is not accepted. Loved the poem
August 1st, 2025 11:24
Repercussions
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great allegory and rhyme this poem paints a picture. Nicely done
July 30th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Well written with great allegory and rhyme this poem paints a picture. Nicely done
July 30th, 2025 10:29
Rumination
Poetic Licence said:
So relatable to so many, the inabilty just to get a simple nights sleep, nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 23:33
Poetic Licence said:
So relatable to so many, the inabilty just to get a simple nights sleep, nicely expressed and written
July 28th, 2025 23:33
Rumination
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia in its helplessness leaves the victim distraught and depressed. A sad saturation.
July 28th, 2025 16:45
sorenbarrett said:
Insomnia in its helplessness leaves the victim distraught and depressed. A sad saturation.
July 28th, 2025 16:45
The Sane Age
sorenbarrett said:
When the burden is heavy we dream and I love the last line for sanity is determined by a point of view. Very nice
July 27th, 2025 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
When the burden is heavy we dream and I love the last line for sanity is determined by a point of view. Very nice
July 27th, 2025 09:37
Year
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and raw with graphic images of metaphor pull the scab off the meaning and it bleeds through. Lovely
July 26th, 2025 08:25
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful and raw with graphic images of metaphor pull the scab off the meaning and it bleeds through. Lovely
July 26th, 2025 08:25
Dead Stars
arqios said:
This poem appears to depict its speaker as the remnant of a collapsed star: \'blackened coal\' flickering with \'fading embers\'; using its deliberate rhyme and meter to mimic a dying star’s slow pulse. By asserting that no earthly fuel can incinerate remorse, it casts guilt as an elemental force beyond extinguishment. Through stark geological and astronomical imagery, it offers a powerful meditation on the unyielding permanence of regret.
July 23rd, 2025 21:00
arqios said:
This poem appears to depict its speaker as the remnant of a collapsed star: \'blackened coal\' flickering with \'fading embers\'; using its deliberate rhyme and meter to mimic a dying star’s slow pulse. By asserting that no earthly fuel can incinerate remorse, it casts guilt as an elemental force beyond extinguishment. Through stark geological and astronomical imagery, it offers a powerful meditation on the unyielding permanence of regret.
July 23rd, 2025 21:00
Dead Stars
sorenbarrett said:
Meaning encapsulated in coal becomes a diamond. Loved it a fave
July 23rd, 2025 11:16
sorenbarrett said:
Meaning encapsulated in coal becomes a diamond. Loved it a fave
July 23rd, 2025 11:16
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