Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Second Comings
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the anger in this poem it comes through like a draft under a door. The disregard with which people and relationships are thrown away come through clear in this poem. Powerful and nicely written
July 15th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
I hear the anger in this poem it comes through like a draft under a door. The disregard with which people and relationships are thrown away come through clear in this poem. Powerful and nicely written
July 15th, 2025 04:31
Prick the Blood Feather
sorenbarrett said:
Quite descriptive and vivid in imagery it tells its story. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 16:35
sorenbarrett said:
Quite descriptive and vivid in imagery it tells its story. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 16:35
Fusion
sorenbarrett said:
This one scrambled my brain trying to unravel it. A fun read
July 13th, 2025 04:44
sorenbarrett said:
This one scrambled my brain trying to unravel it. A fun read
July 13th, 2025 04:44
Year
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, dark, vivid, with a sense of doom this poem is descriptive of one that has seen too much. Very nicely worked metaphors and images and a fave
July 8th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, dark, vivid, with a sense of doom this poem is descriptive of one that has seen too much. Very nicely worked metaphors and images and a fave
July 8th, 2025 03:46
Regrets
Poetic Licence said:
Reflection on what could of and should of been, thoughts we all have at some stage, nicely done
July 5th, 2025 22:55
Poetic Licence said:
Reflection on what could of and should of been, thoughts we all have at some stage, nicely done
July 5th, 2025 22:55
Regrets
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that explores those shoulds and coulds we all have. Very nice
July 5th, 2025 18:15
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that explores those shoulds and coulds we all have. Very nice
July 5th, 2025 18:15
Bowery
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic event with so many tragic consequences beyond the deaths there. Ignorance, incompetence, favoritism, inaction and haste. Wars, more deaths, misunderstandings, greed, religious beliefs blinded not only by smoke but all.
July 4th, 2025 10:44
sorenbarrett said:
A tragic event with so many tragic consequences beyond the deaths there. Ignorance, incompetence, favoritism, inaction and haste. Wars, more deaths, misunderstandings, greed, religious beliefs blinded not only by smoke but all.
July 4th, 2025 10:44
Relic
sorenbarrett said:
This is a powerful poem and in its simplicity and metaphor it takes the heart of the reader. A fave
July 3rd, 2025 20:28
sorenbarrett said:
This is a powerful poem and in its simplicity and metaphor it takes the heart of the reader. A fave
July 3rd, 2025 20:28
Twenty-Sixth Ward Bank
sorenbarrett said:
On first reading I though of the city but then came to mind the holocaust and shivers did raise. A cold and stark write of darkness
July 2nd, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
On first reading I though of the city but then came to mind the holocaust and shivers did raise. A cold and stark write of darkness
July 2nd, 2025 13:11
Revelation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desire and a plea for closeness. Nicely worded and well organized. Well done
July 1st, 2025 16:19
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of desire and a plea for closeness. Nicely worded and well organized. Well done
July 1st, 2025 16:19
Boxed
sorenbarrett said:
Although this poem on the surface appears simple upon reflection is is quite complex. Just the type of poem I love. It speaks of causation and reactions of the unexplained and the explained it is the essence of change. A fave
June 30th, 2025 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
Although this poem on the surface appears simple upon reflection is is quite complex. Just the type of poem I love. It speaks of causation and reactions of the unexplained and the explained it is the essence of change. A fave
June 30th, 2025 09:18
Today
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of winter and the use of metaphor within the poem in the final line of falling asleep as an allegory for winter itself. A lovely poem
June 29th, 2025 15:05
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of winter and the use of metaphor within the poem in the final line of falling asleep as an allegory for winter itself. A lovely poem
June 29th, 2025 15:05
Post-Mortem Show
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for two reasons. One the creative use of unusual imagery and Two the good meter and rhyme in this poem. Well done
June 28th, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
A fave for two reasons. One the creative use of unusual imagery and Two the good meter and rhyme in this poem. Well done
June 28th, 2025 09:45
Poison Ink
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a love unrequited. Sad and the anger at the end. Lovely and well written
June 27th, 2025 19:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of a love unrequited. Sad and the anger at the end. Lovely and well written
June 27th, 2025 19:51
Void
Damaso said:
Real facts! I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Cheers
June 26th, 2025 12:18
Damaso said:
Real facts! I enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing. Cheers
June 26th, 2025 12:18
Void
sorenbarrett said:
I felt this and for that the fave. A heart felt poem of hesitation frozen in disbelief and fear
June 26th, 2025 08:54
sorenbarrett said:
I felt this and for that the fave. A heart felt poem of hesitation frozen in disbelief and fear
June 26th, 2025 08:54
Snared
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of complete helplessness crying out for some help, nicely expressed and written
June 25th, 2025 13:25
Poetic Licence said:
Sense of complete helplessness crying out for some help, nicely expressed and written
June 25th, 2025 13:25
Snared
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a grizzly image of helplessness. Graphic and poetic a fave
June 25th, 2025 12:26
sorenbarrett said:
Sad a grizzly image of helplessness. Graphic and poetic a fave
June 25th, 2025 12:26
Terminal Mile
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write, the frozen stare , very relatable, nicely written, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:38
Poetic Licence said:
A very clever write, the frozen stare , very relatable, nicely written, enjoyed the read
June 24th, 2025 22:38
Terminal Mile
sorenbarrett said:
I love the metaphor, the combination of time and an emotional stare on another\'s face. The incongruence is genius. A brilliant piece and a fave
June 24th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
I love the metaphor, the combination of time and an emotional stare on another\'s face. The incongruence is genius. A brilliant piece and a fave
June 24th, 2025 07:28
Primeval
Poetic Licence said:
A clever setting the scene for the sacrifice to be made, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 23:41
Poetic Licence said:
A clever setting the scene for the sacrifice to be made, enjoyed the read
June 22nd, 2025 23:41
Primeval
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to set the scene for a ritual that is to follow. Great painting of the image in words. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 21:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to set the scene for a ritual that is to follow. Great painting of the image in words. Lovely
June 22nd, 2025 21:19
Horrible
Poetic Licence said:
The slow and painful unveiling of a child\'s dark past, nicely expressed and written
June 22nd, 2025 20:20
Poetic Licence said:
The slow and painful unveiling of a child\'s dark past, nicely expressed and written
June 22nd, 2025 20:20
Horrible
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery that leaves a dark past to be revealed. Short and nicely penned
June 21st, 2025 14:04
sorenbarrett said:
A mystery that leaves a dark past to be revealed. Short and nicely penned
June 21st, 2025 14:04
Above the Trenchline
sorenbarrett said:
I read this as words that we throw at each other conversation battles where no one wins although it could well be literal battles. A lovely write and fave
June 20th, 2025 17:51
sorenbarrett said:
I read this as words that we throw at each other conversation battles where no one wins although it could well be literal battles. A lovely write and fave
June 20th, 2025 17:51
Without Depth
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed truth that proclaims the unity of nature and all that we are. A fave
June 19th, 2025 06:49
sorenbarrett said:
A well rhymed truth that proclaims the unity of nature and all that we are. A fave
June 19th, 2025 06:49
Without Depth
arqios said:
This poem flows with a universal embrace, capturing the essence of existence as both transient and timeless. The imagery of water, dust, gem, rain—anchors the reader in the tangible, yet spirals into the intangible realms of thoughts and life itself. It beautifully reflects the interconnectedness of all things, blurring the line between the physical and the ethereal. The repetition of \"I am\" strengthens the poem’s voice, an invitation to consider the profound depth hidden within even the simplest elements of being. An enjoyable contemplative and resonant piece.
June 19th, 2025 06:36
arqios said:
This poem flows with a universal embrace, capturing the essence of existence as both transient and timeless. The imagery of water, dust, gem, rain—anchors the reader in the tangible, yet spirals into the intangible realms of thoughts and life itself. It beautifully reflects the interconnectedness of all things, blurring the line between the physical and the ethereal. The repetition of \"I am\" strengthens the poem’s voice, an invitation to consider the profound depth hidden within even the simplest elements of being. An enjoyable contemplative and resonant piece.
June 19th, 2025 06:36
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