Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller
Flytrap
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and uplifting it is a most positive and encouraging write Franz
June 24th, 2026 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and uplifting it is a most positive and encouraging write Franz
June 24th, 2026 09:13
Fog
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me right away. Three lines, and the atmosphere is instantly there. That feeling of waking into a gray world and carrying a bit of that grayness inside yourself comes through beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:38
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me right away. Three lines, and the atmosphere is instantly there. That feeling of waking into a gray world and carrying a bit of that grayness inside yourself comes through beautifully. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 23rd, 2026 22:38
Control the Narrative
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, “And not a drop of ink?” made me smile. The whole poem builds so naturally toward that moment before charging right back into the creative solution. Really enjoyed this one, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 23rd, 2026 22:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, “And not a drop of ink?” made me smile. The whole poem builds so naturally toward that moment before charging right back into the creative solution. Really enjoyed this one, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
June 23rd, 2026 22:12
Fog
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely hybrid haiku senryu that may be taken literally or metaphorically. Nicely done my friend
June 23rd, 2026 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely hybrid haiku senryu that may be taken literally or metaphorically. Nicely done my friend
June 23rd, 2026 08:19
Control the Narrative
RSM0812 said:
This is really well written and quite enjoyable to read. Perfect rhyme scheme as well. Great job.
June 23rd, 2026 07:03
RSM0812 said:
This is really well written and quite enjoyable to read. Perfect rhyme scheme as well. Great job.
June 23rd, 2026 07:03
Control the Narrative
sorenbarrett said:
How true this poem is poetry can be a therapist, a minister, rabbi or priest, a friend, a healer. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 21:08
sorenbarrett said:
How true this poem is poetry can be a therapist, a minister, rabbi or priest, a friend, a healer. Well written
June 22nd, 2026 21:08
Patience
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice in poetic form about a subject that seems more and more common with a constantly growing population. Well done
June 20th, 2026 14:28
sorenbarrett said:
Good advice in poetic form about a subject that seems more and more common with a constantly growing population. Well done
June 20th, 2026 14:28
Al Fresco
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, sometimes a poem doesn\'t need to be complicated. This is fun, carefree, and delivered with a wink. It brought a little humor to my morning, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:28
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, sometimes a poem doesn\'t need to be complicated. This is fun, carefree, and delivered with a wink. It brought a little humor to my morning, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 20th, 2026 09:28
Times Square Musings
Paul Bell said:
Democracy, don\'t believe the hype.
Soon as the power starts, the people are forgotton.
June 19th, 2026 07:27
Paul Bell said:
Democracy, don\'t believe the hype.
Soon as the power starts, the people are forgotton.
June 19th, 2026 07:27
Times Square Musings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful piece. I appreciate that it doesn\'t stop at frustration or criticism but moves toward action. The call to care for the widow, the stranger, the poor, and the homeless gives the poem both heart and purpose. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a powerful piece. I appreciate that it doesn\'t stop at frustration or criticism but moves toward action. The call to care for the widow, the stranger, the poor, and the homeless gives the poem both heart and purpose. Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:56
Skyline
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what I love here is the reminder that not everything inspiring has to be built by human hands. Glass towers may reach high, but an ancient oak or redwood carries a different kind of presence altogether. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what I love here is the reminder that not everything inspiring has to be built by human hands. Glass towers may reach high, but an ancient oak or redwood carries a different kind of presence altogether. Really enjoyed this, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 18th, 2026 20:29
Times Square Musings
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem provokes self-reflection and inspires action to help those in need.
June 18th, 2026 10:22
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem provokes self-reflection and inspires action to help those in need.
June 18th, 2026 10:22
Skyline
sorenbarrett said:
I wood heartily agree the root of the towering problem is missing. A fine write and a fave
June 18th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
I wood heartily agree the root of the towering problem is missing. A fine write and a fave
June 18th, 2026 04:13
Graven
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this gave me a smile, my friend. There is a playful edge to it, but the message comes through loud and clear. Sometimes a little humor is the perfect vehicle for a serious reminder. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:15
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this gave me a smile, my friend. There is a playful edge to it, but the message comes through loud and clear. Sometimes a little humor is the perfect vehicle for a serious reminder. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 16th, 2026 09:15
Graven
sorenbarrett said:
Very well said with good rhyme and meter as well as good flow. A fave
June 15th, 2026 16:17
sorenbarrett said:
Very well said with good rhyme and meter as well as good flow. A fave
June 15th, 2026 16:17
Graven
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the contrast between selfishness and selflessness in contemporary society.
June 15th, 2026 16:11
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem revolves around the contrast between selfishness and selflessness in contemporary society.
June 15th, 2026 16:11
Headstones
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard. The thought is simple, but it carries real weight. We move through so many ordinary moments never realizing one of them will be the last shared with someone we care about. That truth stays with me. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:05
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this hit me hard. The thought is simple, but it carries real weight. We move through so many ordinary moments never realizing one of them will be the last shared with someone we care about. That truth stays with me. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 13th, 2026 22:05
Fool’s Gold
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is a powerful lament, my friend. There is a deep sense of disillusionment running through these lines...not just with politics, but with the loss of a vision of what a nation could be. Thought-provoking work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 12:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, this is a powerful lament, my friend. There is a deep sense of disillusionment running through these lines...not just with politics, but with the loss of a vision of what a nation could be. Thought-provoking work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 12th, 2026 12:59
Fool’s Gold
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of deterioration and corruption of a nation. Well written
June 11th, 2026 11:11
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of deterioration and corruption of a nation. Well written
June 11th, 2026 11:11
Choose Your Poison
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a thought-provoking piece. The tension builds so naturally from the opening question that by the end there is no comfortable answer left to reach for. Life wanted and life lived collide head-on here, and the result lingers long after the reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Fränz, what a thought-provoking piece. The tension builds so naturally from the opening question that by the end there is no comfortable answer left to reach for. Life wanted and life lived collide head-on here, and the result lingers long after the reading. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
June 11th, 2026 08:29
Choose Your Poison
marissa said:
This is a great way to express how the difficulty of choosing,makes the outcome more than the choice itself
June 10th, 2026 15:02
marissa said:
This is a great way to express how the difficulty of choosing,makes the outcome more than the choice itself
June 10th, 2026 15:02
Choose Your Poison
sorenbarrett said:
The red pill or the blue as for me I\'ll take the forbidden life. Nicely written
June 10th, 2026 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
The red pill or the blue as for me I\'ll take the forbidden life. Nicely written
June 10th, 2026 14:57
Breezes
sorenbarrett said:
An old medical remedy it sounds like and sure can\'t hurt. Nicely done Franz
June 9th, 2026 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
An old medical remedy it sounds like and sure can\'t hurt. Nicely done Franz
June 9th, 2026 08:06
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