Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller



Censored
sorenbarrett said:

This is clear in its message but it applies to being yourself at most any level. People do not want to see the real person just the dressed up one. Well done

May 13th, 2026 16:33

Weary
Janey_Boo said:

What a beautiful way to describe this, wonderful written!!

May 13th, 2026 07:05

Dissonance
Abdullah123 said:

All of us feel this dissociated from the world at times, and I personally believe it is those moments we must live for… great write, it reminds me of the short story: The Man Who Walked On The Moon by JG Ballard.

May 12th, 2026 08:39

Dissonance
sorenbarrett said:

We are all suspended in time. Nicely written

May 11th, 2026 21:37

Dissonance
Friendship said:

Lovely written, your poem captures the essence of mindfulness and the beauty of living in the present moment. It contrasts the rush of daily life with the serenity found in stillness and reflection.

May 11th, 2026 12:05

NSFW
arqios said:

Well put and well said 🙏🕊️

May 11th, 2026 06:19

NSFW
sorenbarrett said:

Clever a well written message that remains a cultural problem to this day. Well said and a fave

May 10th, 2026 09:30

Memento
sorenbarrett said:

Well done

May 9th, 2026 22:05

Fables
Friendship said:

nicely written

May 9th, 2026 09:21

Fables
Zelda Vanrooyen said:

Welll written🤗

May 9th, 2026 05:20

Fables
sorenbarrett said:

What a great poem with a great message. The rhyme is good and the last lines made the poem. A fave

May 8th, 2026 19:55

Skin
sorenbarrett said:

How comfortable are each of us with our naked self. Well expressed

May 7th, 2026 13:25

Skin
Friendship said:

Lovely said, my friend 🌹

May 7th, 2026 08:26

Pilgrim
sorenbarrett said:

Sad and most melancholic but so well worded a fave

May 6th, 2026 20:28

Pilgrim
Friendship said:

Pilgrim State Psychiatric Hospital on Long Island. I heard so many Horror stories of this place growing up on the Island.

May 6th, 2026 11:54

A Force of Nature
Friendship said:

Nicely said

May 6th, 2026 07:57

A Force of Nature
sorenbarrett said:

Pride and strength hold firm and the wind rushes by until strong enough to break them. Well done

May 5th, 2026 20:21

Fractured
Friendship said:

Well written. Your poem explores the complexity of identity and the various roles a person can embody in different situations. You highlight the struggle of self-perception and the pressure to conform to societal expectations while grappling with one\'s inner self.

May 5th, 2026 05:48

Fractured
sorenbarrett said:

We are all complex beings with different facets. To understand all of them would be a monumental task. Well written

May 4th, 2026 21:21

Babylon
Friendship said:

Well done. Your poem addresses themes of temptation, excess, and the psychological toll of modern life, emphasizing how easy access to indulgent distractions can lead to a deterioration of mental and spiritual well-being.


May 3rd, 2026 06:11

Babylon
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely rhymed and metered this poem has an old biblical feel to values

May 3rd, 2026 04:12

Babylon
Poetic Dan said:

Ooo that\'s good and definitely worth a read. One more click is sometimes all I didn\'t need

May 3rd, 2026 01:08

Carnality
Durdica Porobija said:

I agree that this duality, the ambivalence of the human being is a source of frustration and an unfinished battle. A well-written poem.

May 2nd, 2026 09:50

Witness
sorenbarrett said:

The news a transmitter of tragedy leaves all shocked and broken. Nicely written

May 1st, 2026 16:36

Witness
Friendship said:

Nicely said

May 1st, 2026 11:41

Violins
sorenbarrett said:

Romantic and seductive. This poem is a sirens call. Nicely written.

April 30th, 2026 09:16

Violins
Friendship said:

Beautifully said. Your poem focuses on a shared experience between lovers, capturing a moment of reunion and affection following a shower. You emphasize physical and emotional closeness, suggesting that love can be felt in the smallest details.


April 30th, 2026 09:10

Oklahoma
sorenbarrett said:

I love the flow and rhyme of this poem but more so the message given a fave and by the way I lived in Oklahoma for four years and there is not much to see there.

April 29th, 2026 04:43

Oklahoma
swedishme123 said:

heyyy I live there and truly beautiful!!!!!

April 28th, 2026 23:41

Hangry
sorenbarrett said:

Bad luck or good, food takes many forms. Good read

April 28th, 2026 04:21

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