Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller



Gravity’s Fall
sorenbarrett said:

A well written poem with a great meter that fits the mood of the poem. Nicely rhymed and with great imagery all of which gets a fave

June 5th, 2025 13:30

Covet
Tony36 said:

Great write

June 4th, 2025 15:14

Covet
sorenbarrett said:

Used to watch the beach when the Portuguese Men of War would be blown by the wind to wash up on the beach. I thought of this with this poem. A lovely write.

June 4th, 2025 08:45

Distance
sorenbarrett said:

Powerful and dark it speaks of death and pain of ground gained in a struggle, whether a battle literal or of life itself all comes to the same end. This was a very well written piece and a fave.

June 4th, 2025 04:25

Distance
Poetic Licence said:

That\'s quite a powerful and poignant write, nicely expressed

June 4th, 2025 00:45

Lamentation
arqios said:

Welcome to MPS 🙏🏻🕊

June 3rd, 2025 09:07

Lamentation
sorenbarrett said:

A sad poem of loss that leaves a feeling of melancholy and longing. Well written

June 3rd, 2025 03:45