Comments received on poems by Fränz Müller



Tongues of Fire
Friendship said:

Well written. Your poem advocates for kindness and the conscious choice to use gentle words to positively impact others, aligning with the biblical teaching from the Book of James about the importance of controlling one\'s speech.

May 24th, 2026 16:41

Tongues of Fire
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful message contained in this write well said.

May 24th, 2026 15:54

The Burning Bones
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Fränz…this burns with a sharp, compact intensity. The progression from “Desire” to “Passion” to “Sin” to “Id” feels almost like descending levels of the psyche, each stanza stripping away another layer of restraint. “drives sense right off the rails” lands perfectly at the end. Strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

May 24th, 2026 12:09

The Burning Bones
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful description of how primal urges take over. With Id driving the bus ego takes a back seat and superego is never picked up. Well done Franz

May 24th, 2026 03:54

Compassion
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Fränz, this hit me hard because of how quietly true it feels. The poem starts almost conversationally, then slowly reveals the emotional cost of self-protection underneath it all. That final image of the spirit becoming “cold and pure” lands with real sadness. Powerful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

May 23rd, 2026 10:32

Mile Marker
arqios said:

Best drives are on asphalt roads. But that\'s just a personal preference. And melting asphalt, now there\'s the limit. Very engaging read. 🙏🕊️

May 23rd, 2026 08:02

Compassion
sorenbarrett said:

Well written a poem of conflict between the is and the desired. Well done

May 22nd, 2026 19:27

Compassion
Friendship said:

Well said. Your poem explores the tension between authenticity and the desire to maintain appearances: that being true to oneself can lead to emotional exhaustion, while putting up emotional barriers might protect the ego at the cost of genuine connection and warmth.

May 22nd, 2026 18:37

Bare Necessities
Friendship said:

🤣😂enjoy your write

May 20th, 2026 11:06

Bare Necessities
sorenbarrett said:

Return to nature in this poem of the AL natural. Well done

May 20th, 2026 10:43

Cremation
sorenbarrett said:

Maintaining proper mental health by stress management and organizing one\'s life is important. Here this poem seems to indicate that prayer may also help. Nicely done

May 19th, 2026 18:07

The Warning
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

A fab enchanting like intrigue. Abstract muse poem woah! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

May 19th, 2026 12:17

The Warning
Zelda Vanrooyen said:

Well written

May 19th, 2026 06:48

The Warning
sorenbarrett said:

Things do not always go as planned and we do not always get what we search for. Nicely written Franz

May 19th, 2026 03:21

Failure
Friendship said:

Nicely written, my friend

May 18th, 2026 16:57

Failure
sorenbarrett said:

Whether habits, stubbornness, blindness, or stupidity many walk the same path over and over. Well written with good rhyme and flow. Loved it a fave

May 18th, 2026 02:23

Wilderness
sorenbarrett said:

Most coincidentally this poem falls on the day I return to my forest home and its wonders. A lovely write well done

May 15th, 2026 13:35

Morning Mist
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Fränz, this has such a peaceful meditative quality to it. The mist becomes more than weather…it feels like a temporary veil over the harshness of the world, allowing imagination and tranquility room to breathe. Beautiful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

May 14th, 2026 11:34

Morning Mist
sorenbarrett said:

A beautiful transition from sleep to waking state where the blur softens all. Nicely done

May 14th, 2026 08:08

Censored
sorenbarrett said:

This is clear in its message but it applies to being yourself at most any level. People do not want to see the real person just the dressed up one. Well done

May 13th, 2026 16:33

Weary
Janey_Boo said:

What a beautiful way to describe this, wonderful written!!

May 13th, 2026 07:05

Dissonance
Abdullah123 said:

All of us feel this dissociated from the world at times, and I personally believe it is those moments we must live for… great write, it reminds me of the short story: The Man Who Walked On The Moon by JG Ballard.

May 12th, 2026 08:39

Dissonance
sorenbarrett said:

We are all suspended in time. Nicely written

May 11th, 2026 21:37

Dissonance
Friendship said:

Lovely written, your poem captures the essence of mindfulness and the beauty of living in the present moment. It contrasts the rush of daily life with the serenity found in stillness and reflection.

May 11th, 2026 12:05

NSFW
arqios said:

Well put and well said 🙏🕊️

May 11th, 2026 06:19

NSFW
sorenbarrett said:

Clever a well written message that remains a cultural problem to this day. Well said and a fave

May 10th, 2026 09:30

Memento
sorenbarrett said:

Well done

May 9th, 2026 22:05

Fables
Friendship said:

nicely written

May 9th, 2026 09:21

Fables
Zelda Vanrooyen said:

Welll written🤗

May 9th, 2026 05:20

Fables
sorenbarrett said:

What a great poem with a great message. The rhyme is good and the last lines made the poem. A fave

May 8th, 2026 19:55

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