Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
Colours of shroud
sorenbarrett said:
I don not understand the the language but the process of watching creativity at work is poetic itself and mesmerizing. Lovely
August 22nd, 2025 05:03
sorenbarrett said:
I don not understand the the language but the process of watching creativity at work is poetic itself and mesmerizing. Lovely
August 22nd, 2025 05:03
Solitude is Blessing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this one carries such quiet strength…solitude painted as treasure, as pearl, as sacred space. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 19:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this one carries such quiet strength…solitude painted as treasure, as pearl, as sacred space. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 19:57
Solitude is Blessing
RSM0812 said:
A lovely sonnet about spirituality and reality. Nice write.
August 20th, 2025 06:04
RSM0812 said:
A lovely sonnet about spirituality and reality. Nice write.
August 20th, 2025 06:04
Burning Letters
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A powerful piece, Priya. The bangles, anklets, and flute all carry such weight, turned fragile in the fire. You’ve woven sorrow and beauty together seamlessly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
A powerful piece, Priya. The bangles, anklets, and flute all carry such weight, turned fragile in the fire. You’ve woven sorrow and beauty together seamlessly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:23
Burning Letters
arqios said:
Somehow brings to mind Hamelin and a sort of pied piper; surely a Fave🙏🏻🕊
August 18th, 2025 16:16
arqios said:
Somehow brings to mind Hamelin and a sort of pied piper; surely a Fave🙏🏻🕊
August 18th, 2025 16:16
Burning Letters
sorenbarrett said:
I may be reaching too far here but to me this poem brings images of Indian tradition, of innocent violation, purification by the burning with fire. So many symbolic images here. We are all in some ways burned by tradition being placed on its pyre. Lovely and a fave
August 18th, 2025 15:07
sorenbarrett said:
I may be reaching too far here but to me this poem brings images of Indian tradition, of innocent violation, purification by the burning with fire. So many symbolic images here. We are all in some ways burned by tradition being placed on its pyre. Lovely and a fave
August 18th, 2025 15:07
Burning Letters
Lorenz said:
Your poetry has that breath where I find the burning words of those cursed poets my brothers .
August 18th, 2025 12:45
Lorenz said:
Your poetry has that breath where I find the burning words of those cursed poets my brothers .
August 18th, 2025 12:45
From Snow to Showers
Paul Bell said:
What started as a whirlwind romance ended in tragedy, me thinks.
The journey though short still asks the reader what happened, but the answer might not be what we want to hear.
August 17th, 2025 07:20
Paul Bell said:
What started as a whirlwind romance ended in tragedy, me thinks.
The journey though short still asks the reader what happened, but the answer might not be what we want to hear.
August 17th, 2025 07:20
From Snow to Showers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, This poem moves from tender warmth into heartbreak so seamlessly…the seasons turning right alongside love’s rise and fall. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:18
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, This poem moves from tender warmth into heartbreak so seamlessly…the seasons turning right alongside love’s rise and fall. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 17th, 2025 07:18
From Snow to Showers
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write of the journey from being in the sun to standing in rain, wonderfully written, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:39
Poetic Licence said:
A sad write of the journey from being in the sun to standing in rain, wonderfully written, enjoyed the read
August 17th, 2025 04:39
From Snow to Showers
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem a running through the months that started in December and end in June making my mind wonder why start on the 12th month and end on the sixth month is there some significance that I am not seeing or is it merely circumstantial. A fun read of development of a relationship.
August 17th, 2025 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
Here in this poem a running through the months that started in December and end in June making my mind wonder why start on the 12th month and end on the sixth month is there some significance that I am not seeing or is it merely circumstantial. A fun read of development of a relationship.
August 17th, 2025 04:35
The Colour Rhyme
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this reads like a fable wrapped in vivid threads. The colors pull you in, but the story underneath is sharp and unflinching. That closing indigo line ties it all together beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this reads like a fable wrapped in vivid threads. The colors pull you in, but the story underneath is sharp and unflinching. That closing indigo line ties it all together beautifully, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 11th, 2025 19:37
The Colour Rhyme
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write, nice to read something to brighten up the day, enjoyed
August 11th, 2025 07:55
Poetic Licence said:
Beautiful write, nice to read something to brighten up the day, enjoyed
August 11th, 2025 07:55
The Colour Rhyme
Lorenz said:
My colors are green and indigo .Blue attracts me and scares me ...
August 11th, 2025 06:58
Lorenz said:
My colors are green and indigo .Blue attracts me and scares me ...
August 11th, 2025 06:58
The Colour Rhyme
sorenbarrett said:
Colorful indeed every other line a new color. A rainbow of a poem. Very nice
August 11th, 2025 06:26
sorenbarrett said:
Colorful indeed every other line a new color. A rainbow of a poem. Very nice
August 11th, 2025 06:26
Guest on mother\'s chest
Jainesh.D said:
Your poem beautifully reminds us that life is short and we’re all guests here. It calls for kindness, acceptance, and appreciating the good while letting go of the past. Simple and meaningful.
August 3rd, 2025 05:56
Jainesh.D said:
Your poem beautifully reminds us that life is short and we’re all guests here. It calls for kindness, acceptance, and appreciating the good while letting go of the past. Simple and meaningful.
August 3rd, 2025 05:56
Whispering to weep
NafisaSB said:
so it is with humans too - promises made in secret are often forgotten in the harsh daylight
beautifully rendered
July 29th, 2025 00:33
NafisaSB said:
so it is with humans too - promises made in secret are often forgotten in the harsh daylight
beautifully rendered
July 29th, 2025 00:33
War in the wild
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the destructive consequences of conflict and the futility of power struggles, particularly in the animal kingdom. It highlights the suffering that arises from the greed and violence of the lions, which symbolizes broader themes of war and its impact on nature and its inhabitants.
July 25th, 2025 16:41
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the destructive consequences of conflict and the futility of power struggles, particularly in the animal kingdom. It highlights the suffering that arises from the greed and violence of the lions, which symbolizes broader themes of war and its impact on nature and its inhabitants.
July 25th, 2025 16:41
War in the wild
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vvid and sorrowful, Priya. The imagery hits hard...innocents caught in a clash they never asked for. Pretty much the way it universally works out. That closing line carries a bitter truth. Profoundly powerful, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 12:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vvid and sorrowful, Priya. The imagery hits hard...innocents caught in a clash they never asked for. Pretty much the way it universally works out. That closing line carries a bitter truth. Profoundly powerful, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 12:02
Guest on mother\'s chest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this poem delivers. Simple words, but the metaphor/message carries weight. That line about alphabets on sand sticks for me. You’ve named something fragile, but still managed to hold it with care. Grateful you shared this. A fave. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this poem delivers. Simple words, but the metaphor/message carries weight. That line about alphabets on sand sticks for me. You’ve named something fragile, but still managed to hold it with care. Grateful you shared this. A fave. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:22
War in the wild
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of humans constantly fighting each other at the cost of those and the harmony of nature all around, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 08:44
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of humans constantly fighting each other at the cost of those and the harmony of nature all around, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 08:44
War in the wild
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems to go from natural to unnatural from harmony to discordant the world we a humans live in.
July 25th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems to go from natural to unnatural from harmony to discordant the world we a humans live in.
July 25th, 2025 08:21
Guest on mother\'s chest
arqios said:
The rhymes work excellently together with the words and their message. My current favourite of yours🕊️🙏🏻
July 25th, 2025 06:47
arqios said:
The rhymes work excellently together with the words and their message. My current favourite of yours🕊️🙏🏻
July 25th, 2025 06:47
Guest on mother\'s chest
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps the best gift of mother nature is the Mother Figure.
July 25th, 2025 01:35
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps the best gift of mother nature is the Mother Figure.
July 25th, 2025 01:35
Witty wings
Dan Williams said:
Evocative of nature tied to human existence. Well done.
July 25th, 2025 00:20
Dan Williams said:
Evocative of nature tied to human existence. Well done.
July 25th, 2025 00:20
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