Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
Whispering to weep
NafisaSB said:
so it is with humans too - promises made in secret are often forgotten in the harsh daylight
beautifully rendered
July 29th, 2025 00:33
NafisaSB said:
so it is with humans too - promises made in secret are often forgotten in the harsh daylight
beautifully rendered
July 29th, 2025 00:33
War in the wild
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the destructive consequences of conflict and the futility of power struggles, particularly in the animal kingdom. It highlights the suffering that arises from the greed and violence of the lions, which symbolizes broader themes of war and its impact on nature and its inhabitants.
July 25th, 2025 16:41
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the destructive consequences of conflict and the futility of power struggles, particularly in the animal kingdom. It highlights the suffering that arises from the greed and violence of the lions, which symbolizes broader themes of war and its impact on nature and its inhabitants.
July 25th, 2025 16:41
War in the wild
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vvid and sorrowful, Priya. The imagery hits hard...innocents caught in a clash they never asked for. Pretty much the way it universally works out. That closing line carries a bitter truth. Profoundly powerful, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 12:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Vvid and sorrowful, Priya. The imagery hits hard...innocents caught in a clash they never asked for. Pretty much the way it universally works out. That closing line carries a bitter truth. Profoundly powerful, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 12:02
Guest on mother\'s chest
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this poem delivers. Simple words, but the metaphor/message carries weight. That line about alphabets on sand sticks for me. You’ve named something fragile, but still managed to hold it with care. Grateful you shared this. A fave. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:22
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this poem delivers. Simple words, but the metaphor/message carries weight. That line about alphabets on sand sticks for me. You’ve named something fragile, but still managed to hold it with care. Grateful you shared this. A fave. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 25th, 2025 11:22
War in the wild
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of humans constantly fighting each other at the cost of those and the harmony of nature all around, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 08:44
Poetic Licence said:
A sense of humans constantly fighting each other at the cost of those and the harmony of nature all around, nicely expressed and written
July 25th, 2025 08:44
War in the wild
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems to go from natural to unnatural from harmony to discordant the world we a humans live in.
July 25th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems to go from natural to unnatural from harmony to discordant the world we a humans live in.
July 25th, 2025 08:21
Guest on mother\'s chest
arqios said:
The rhymes work excellently together with the words and their message. My current favourite of yours🕊️🙏🏻
July 25th, 2025 06:47
arqios said:
The rhymes work excellently together with the words and their message. My current favourite of yours🕊️🙏🏻
July 25th, 2025 06:47
Guest on mother\'s chest
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps the best gift of mother nature is the Mother Figure.
July 25th, 2025 01:35
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps the best gift of mother nature is the Mother Figure.
July 25th, 2025 01:35
Witty wings
Dan Williams said:
Evocative of nature tied to human existence. Well done.
July 25th, 2025 00:20
Dan Williams said:
Evocative of nature tied to human existence. Well done.
July 25th, 2025 00:20
Guest on mother\'s chest
Damaso said:
Beautiful, it comforts me with a thought as wise as the earth itself and its healing herbs. Thank you so much for sharing it. I enjoyed it very much. Best regards.
July 24th, 2025 14:23
Damaso said:
Beautiful, it comforts me with a thought as wise as the earth itself and its healing herbs. Thank you so much for sharing it. I enjoyed it very much. Best regards.
July 24th, 2025 14:23
Guest on mother\'s chest
Poetic Licence said:
We are a guest and we should show alot more respect and love to Mother Nature, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 11:21
Poetic Licence said:
We are a guest and we should show alot more respect and love to Mother Nature, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 11:21
Guest on mother\'s chest
sorenbarrett said:
Mother nature we are all a guest of hers. Nicely written.
July 24th, 2025 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
Mother nature we are all a guest of hers. Nicely written.
July 24th, 2025 10:14
Witty wings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, what a playful and lifting poem. The line “pluck virgin buds of spring days” especially caught me…sensual and innocent in the same breath. You’ve woven a soft enchantment of a poem here. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 07:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, what a playful and lifting poem. The line “pluck virgin buds of spring days” especially caught me…sensual and innocent in the same breath. You’ve woven a soft enchantment of a poem here. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 07:31
Witty wings
ElizabethMoroz said:
Such beautiful nature imagery. This is so authentically poetic and uplifting. I love the style structure themes content descriptions and poetic expression. Genuinely loved reading this piece. Well done! Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 06:09
ElizabethMoroz said:
Such beautiful nature imagery. This is so authentically poetic and uplifting. I love the style structure themes content descriptions and poetic expression. Genuinely loved reading this piece. Well done! Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 06:09
Whispering to weep
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful notions and gorgeous nature descriptions. Uplifting piece. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:32
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful notions and gorgeous nature descriptions. Uplifting piece. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:32
Witty wings
arqios said:
This to me reads like an ode to apprenticeship: earn your “witty wings” through devotion to sound, sight, and sensation, then let those wings carry you beyond every boundary you once called home. Delightful🙏🏻🕊️
July 23rd, 2025 19:12
arqios said:
This to me reads like an ode to apprenticeship: earn your “witty wings” through devotion to sound, sight, and sensation, then let those wings carry you beyond every boundary you once called home. Delightful🙏🏻🕊️
July 23rd, 2025 19:12
Witty wings
jim56 said:
cleverly done nice rhyming lines
steady flow nice use of words to
enhance poem nice to read well done
keep writing jim
July 23rd, 2025 14:08
jim56 said:
cleverly done nice rhyming lines
steady flow nice use of words to
enhance poem nice to read well done
keep writing jim
July 23rd, 2025 14:08
Witty wings
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem revolves around creativity, self-expression, and the liberation that comes from embracing one\'s imagination. The poem encourages the reader to explore the beauty of language, nature, and life itself to attain a sense of freedom—symbolized by \"witty wings
July 23rd, 2025 12:45
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem revolves around creativity, self-expression, and the liberation that comes from embracing one\'s imagination. The poem encourages the reader to explore the beauty of language, nature, and life itself to attain a sense of freedom—symbolized by \"witty wings
July 23rd, 2025 12:45
Witty wings
Poetic Licence said:
That is not only very entertaining but very cleverly done, leaving the reader to interpret as they wish, some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 10:01
Poetic Licence said:
That is not only very entertaining but very cleverly done, leaving the reader to interpret as they wish, some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 10:01
Whispering to weep
Tony Grannell said:
This is a lovely verse, Priya, so delicately woven as if done with a whisper of poetic threads. You are to be admired and praised for this. Thank you very much.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 23rd, 2025 09:06
Tony Grannell said:
This is a lovely verse, Priya, so delicately woven as if done with a whisper of poetic threads. You are to be admired and praised for this. Thank you very much.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 23rd, 2025 09:06
Witty wings
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme spiced with enough ambiguity to leave room for various interpretations and enough of the cryptic to engage the mind. A fave
July 23rd, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme spiced with enough ambiguity to leave room for various interpretations and enough of the cryptic to engage the mind. A fave
July 23rd, 2025 07:22
Whispering to weep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, my friend, this is a gentle and dreamlike, almost a whisper. The parrot, the leaves, the green wings…each image feels like it carries something sacred. Lovely work. 🌹👏
July 22nd, 2025 14:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, my friend, this is a gentle and dreamlike, almost a whisper. The parrot, the leaves, the green wings…each image feels like it carries something sacred. Lovely work. 🌹👏
July 22nd, 2025 14:01
Whispering to weep
Damaso said:
What a beautiful landscape it describes. A beautiful feeling. What a sad but real ending. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 11:13
Damaso said:
What a beautiful landscape it describes. A beautiful feeling. What a sad but real ending. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 11:13
Whispering to weep
Poetic Licence said:
You have a lovely tender way with words, very enjoyable read
July 22nd, 2025 10:39
Poetic Licence said:
You have a lovely tender way with words, very enjoyable read
July 22nd, 2025 10:39
Morning Dew
NafisaSB said:
and so it is with human relationships too - trust is soon broken, and the innocence cruelly ripped apart
you have very beautifully and yet tenderly handled this piece of verse
July 22nd, 2025 00:51
NafisaSB said:
and so it is with human relationships too - trust is soon broken, and the innocence cruelly ripped apart
you have very beautifully and yet tenderly handled this piece of verse
July 22nd, 2025 00:51
My Dream Dress
Damaso said:
Wow, sorry, I just had to pick my jaw up off the floor. Incredible, with all due respect. I enjoyed it so much. It conveys pride, beauty, courage, and joy. A very knowledgeable piece on the craft. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 21st, 2025 16:15
Damaso said:
Wow, sorry, I just had to pick my jaw up off the floor. Incredible, with all due respect. I enjoyed it so much. It conveys pride, beauty, courage, and joy. A very knowledgeable piece on the craft. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 21st, 2025 16:15
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