Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
Calligraphy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful job, Priya! Haunting and the alliteration sings! Lilac lies! Mmm. Love it! Well done!
October 18th, 2025 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful job, Priya! Haunting and the alliteration sings! Lilac lies! Mmm. Love it! Well done!
October 18th, 2025 08:07
Ignorance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this one aches softly…the child’s voice so pure it hurts. The innocence makes the heartbreak sharper. You’ve painted absence with tenderness. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this one aches softly…the child’s voice so pure it hurts. The innocence makes the heartbreak sharper. You’ve painted absence with tenderness. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:09
Ignorance
Friendship said:
Well written,a very sad poem. Your poem revolves around the themes of childhood innocence, longing, and the pain of abandonment.
October 16th, 2025 10:20
Friendship said:
Well written,a very sad poem. Your poem revolves around the themes of childhood innocence, longing, and the pain of abandonment.
October 16th, 2025 10:20
Ignorance
sorenbarrett said:
They say ignorance is bliss but tis only so until the truth be known. A most lovely poem that bears a bit of dark foreboding
October 16th, 2025 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
They say ignorance is bliss but tis only so until the truth be known. A most lovely poem that bears a bit of dark foreboding
October 16th, 2025 10:05
Haiku
rajatbagchi said:
Sweet...I need to learn to write some Haiku style of poetry!
October 14th, 2025 22:56
rajatbagchi said:
Sweet...I need to learn to write some Haiku style of poetry!
October 14th, 2025 22:56
Burning Letters
rajatbagchi said:
Well, very subtly woven and presented, the message gets clearly conveyed even in these few lines. I like it!
October 13th, 2025 22:23
rajatbagchi said:
Well, very subtly woven and presented, the message gets clearly conveyed even in these few lines. I like it!
October 13th, 2025 22:23
Memories
spilleronsheet said:
Very soulful and warming of the moments lover share….a glimpse is enough to capture the fading time….keep penning such poetries underline
October 11th, 2025 15:37
spilleronsheet said:
Very soulful and warming of the moments lover share….a glimpse is enough to capture the fading time….keep penning such poetries underline
October 11th, 2025 15:37
Memories
Friendship said:
The poem \"Memories\" revolves around nostalgia and the act of cherishing moments spent with a beloved. It highlights the emotional depth of memories that linger and the reverence one feels for a person who has left a significant impact on their life. The subject matter focuses on the connection between the speaker and the beloved, emphasizing the sacredness of their bond and the profound respect the speaker has for the beloved\'s essence.
September 20th, 2025 14:54
Friendship said:
The poem \"Memories\" revolves around nostalgia and the act of cherishing moments spent with a beloved. It highlights the emotional depth of memories that linger and the reverence one feels for a person who has left a significant impact on their life. The subject matter focuses on the connection between the speaker and the beloved, emphasizing the sacredness of their bond and the profound respect the speaker has for the beloved\'s essence.
September 20th, 2025 14:54
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this is tender and reverent. The heart as camera catching a sacred soul…such a beautiful way to frame devotion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this is tender and reverent. The heart as camera catching a sacred soul…such a beautiful way to frame devotion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:49
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When you were resting
in the lap of silver nights
The camera of my heart
captured countless images
Of the sacred , rare soul
Enough for me to worship
No desire of the silent statue.
September 19th, 2025 15:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When you were resting
in the lap of silver nights
The camera of my heart
captured countless images
Of the sacred , rare soul
Enough for me to worship
No desire of the silent statue.
September 19th, 2025 15:47
Memories
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely unlike many that are enamored by the outer shell this time it is the inner self that catches the imagination a marvelous poem
September 19th, 2025 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely unlike many that are enamored by the outer shell this time it is the inner self that catches the imagination a marvelous poem
September 19th, 2025 13:34
Haikus
RSM0812 said:
Very imaginative and poetic. Short and sweet. A fave for sure. Nicdly done.
September 19th, 2025 06:01
RSM0812 said:
Very imaginative and poetic. Short and sweet. A fave for sure. Nicdly done.
September 19th, 2025 06:01
Siblings (Haiku)
Anmol Sinha said:
Short but Deep meaning.....
Very good ...
September 17th, 2025 19:55
Anmol Sinha said:
Short but Deep meaning.....
Very good ...
September 17th, 2025 19:55
Do You remember
Friendship said:
The poem explores themes of nostalgia, love, and the complexity of emotional connection. The speaker reminisces about intimate moments shared with a loved one, reflecting on both the joy and pain associated with those memories. The imagery of nature, childhood, and promises evokes a sense of longing for a paradise that has since been lost. The recurring question \"Do you remember...\" emphasizes the significance of shared experiences and the emotional weight they carry, while the final lines hint at a deep,
September 17th, 2025 08:08
Friendship said:
The poem explores themes of nostalgia, love, and the complexity of emotional connection. The speaker reminisces about intimate moments shared with a loved one, reflecting on both the joy and pain associated with those memories. The imagery of nature, childhood, and promises evokes a sense of longing for a paradise that has since been lost. The recurring question \"Do you remember...\" emphasizes the significance of shared experiences and the emotional weight they carry, while the final lines hint at a deep,
September 17th, 2025 08:08
Do You remember
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is heartfelt, Priya…the mango tree, the garden, the cyclone, all bound by the ache of someone who settled too deep to leave. Beautiful and sorrowful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is heartfelt, Priya…the mango tree, the garden, the cyclone, all bound by the ache of someone who settled too deep to leave. Beautiful and sorrowful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:39
Do You remember
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines of love especially meaningful to me. I proposed to my wife in a garden under a mango tree. A most lovely write said so poetically
September 16th, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines of love especially meaningful to me. I proposed to my wife in a garden under a mango tree. A most lovely write said so poetically
September 16th, 2025 13:38
Do You remember
Fred1794 said:
Innocently written eroticism. Gives the impression of hazy memories under the soft glow of sunlight under the trees.
September 16th, 2025 12:14
Fred1794 said:
Innocently written eroticism. Gives the impression of hazy memories under the soft glow of sunlight under the trees.
September 16th, 2025 12:14
Positivity ( Haiku )
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lovely haiku and fun watching typed in real time! I could feel your thought process. So cool! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 13:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lovely haiku and fun watching typed in real time! I could feel your thought process. So cool! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 13:06
Positivity ( Haiku )
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely haiku that speaks of color, sound, taste, and possibly smell Very nicely done.
September 15th, 2025 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely haiku that speaks of color, sound, taste, and possibly smell Very nicely done.
September 15th, 2025 11:57
Haiku
NafisaSB said:
all three brief, to the point, and lovely..
keep up - you excel at haiku too
September 15th, 2025 06:09
NafisaSB said:
all three brief, to the point, and lovely..
keep up - you excel at haiku too
September 15th, 2025 06:09
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