Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
Memories
Friendship said:
The poem \"Memories\" revolves around nostalgia and the act of cherishing moments spent with a beloved. It highlights the emotional depth of memories that linger and the reverence one feels for a person who has left a significant impact on their life. The subject matter focuses on the connection between the speaker and the beloved, emphasizing the sacredness of their bond and the profound respect the speaker has for the beloved\'s essence.
September 20th, 2025 14:54
Friendship said:
The poem \"Memories\" revolves around nostalgia and the act of cherishing moments spent with a beloved. It highlights the emotional depth of memories that linger and the reverence one feels for a person who has left a significant impact on their life. The subject matter focuses on the connection between the speaker and the beloved, emphasizing the sacredness of their bond and the profound respect the speaker has for the beloved\'s essence.
September 20th, 2025 14:54
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this is tender and reverent. The heart as camera catching a sacred soul…such a beautiful way to frame devotion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this is tender and reverent. The heart as camera catching a sacred soul…such a beautiful way to frame devotion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:49
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When you were resting
in the lap of silver nights
The camera of my heart
captured countless images
Of the sacred , rare soul
Enough for me to worship
No desire of the silent statue.
September 19th, 2025 15:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When you were resting
in the lap of silver nights
The camera of my heart
captured countless images
Of the sacred , rare soul
Enough for me to worship
No desire of the silent statue.
September 19th, 2025 15:47
Memories
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely unlike many that are enamored by the outer shell this time it is the inner self that catches the imagination a marvelous poem
September 19th, 2025 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely unlike many that are enamored by the outer shell this time it is the inner self that catches the imagination a marvelous poem
September 19th, 2025 13:34
Haikus
RSM0812 said:
Very imaginative and poetic. Short and sweet. A fave for sure. Nicdly done.
September 19th, 2025 06:01
RSM0812 said:
Very imaginative and poetic. Short and sweet. A fave for sure. Nicdly done.
September 19th, 2025 06:01
Siblings (Haiku)
Anmol Sinha said:
Short but Deep meaning.....
Very good ...
September 17th, 2025 19:55
Anmol Sinha said:
Short but Deep meaning.....
Very good ...
September 17th, 2025 19:55
Do You remember
Friendship said:
The poem explores themes of nostalgia, love, and the complexity of emotional connection. The speaker reminisces about intimate moments shared with a loved one, reflecting on both the joy and pain associated with those memories. The imagery of nature, childhood, and promises evokes a sense of longing for a paradise that has since been lost. The recurring question \"Do you remember...\" emphasizes the significance of shared experiences and the emotional weight they carry, while the final lines hint at a deep,
September 17th, 2025 08:08
Friendship said:
The poem explores themes of nostalgia, love, and the complexity of emotional connection. The speaker reminisces about intimate moments shared with a loved one, reflecting on both the joy and pain associated with those memories. The imagery of nature, childhood, and promises evokes a sense of longing for a paradise that has since been lost. The recurring question \"Do you remember...\" emphasizes the significance of shared experiences and the emotional weight they carry, while the final lines hint at a deep,
September 17th, 2025 08:08
Do You remember
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is heartfelt, Priya…the mango tree, the garden, the cyclone, all bound by the ache of someone who settled too deep to leave. Beautiful and sorrowful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is heartfelt, Priya…the mango tree, the garden, the cyclone, all bound by the ache of someone who settled too deep to leave. Beautiful and sorrowful. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 16th, 2025 15:39
Do You remember
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines of love especially meaningful to me. I proposed to my wife in a garden under a mango tree. A most lovely write said so poetically
September 16th, 2025 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful lines of love especially meaningful to me. I proposed to my wife in a garden under a mango tree. A most lovely write said so poetically
September 16th, 2025 13:38
Do You remember
Fred1794 said:
Innocently written eroticism. Gives the impression of hazy memories under the soft glow of sunlight under the trees.
September 16th, 2025 12:14
Fred1794 said:
Innocently written eroticism. Gives the impression of hazy memories under the soft glow of sunlight under the trees.
September 16th, 2025 12:14
Positivity ( Haiku )
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lovely haiku and fun watching typed in real time! I could feel your thought process. So cool! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 13:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lovely haiku and fun watching typed in real time! I could feel your thought process. So cool! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 15th, 2025 13:06
Positivity ( Haiku )
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely haiku that speaks of color, sound, taste, and possibly smell Very nicely done.
September 15th, 2025 11:57
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely haiku that speaks of color, sound, taste, and possibly smell Very nicely done.
September 15th, 2025 11:57
Haiku
NafisaSB said:
all three brief, to the point, and lovely..
keep up - you excel at haiku too
September 15th, 2025 06:09
NafisaSB said:
all three brief, to the point, and lovely..
keep up - you excel at haiku too
September 15th, 2025 06:09
Haikus
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
These read like little windows into bigger truths; goodbyes and questions of belonging, expressed with such simplicity. Beautifully written.
September 14th, 2025 22:52
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
These read like little windows into bigger truths; goodbyes and questions of belonging, expressed with such simplicity. Beautifully written.
September 14th, 2025 22:52
Haiku
Doggerel Dave said:
You sprinkle a rich nature loving environment over us with your haikus. Thanks.
September 14th, 2025 17:52
Doggerel Dave said:
You sprinkle a rich nature loving environment over us with your haikus. Thanks.
September 14th, 2025 17:52
Nobody is mine
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Priya, Solitude is the best place in the world, and you have touched it gracefully.
Beautiful lines.......
I feel warmth in my own arms
My tears soft healing balms
September 14th, 2025 13:32
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Priya, Solitude is the best place in the world, and you have touched it gracefully.
Beautiful lines.......
I feel warmth in my own arms
My tears soft healing balms
September 14th, 2025 13:32
Haikus
sorenbarrett said:
Two nicely done Haiku\'s that present lovely images
September 14th, 2025 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
Two nicely done Haiku\'s that present lovely images
September 14th, 2025 11:29
Wind of Verses
Soman Ragavan said:
A paraphrase of the English translation of the writings :
--The threads of love are such that, once broken, they cannot be remade into the originals. The pains remain in memory. There is the similarity with physical threads : when rejoined, knots remain.
--The date tree has made itself inaccessible. No branches to hold on to while you climb it. It does produce fruits, but they remain inaccessible, at the top which is difficult to reach. The branches don’t give much shade. Even birds find it difficult to build nests up there. Thus, that tree has surrounded itself with defences.
--It is pointless to moan during hard times. This will change nothing. Change comes about in its own time.
--Principles and patience should not be broken. The fallen leaf will never go back to the spot where it came from. New leaves can come out, but they are different stories. Friendship is like glass. Once broken it can never be mended completely.
--When you are great, your words have power. Power to comfort, to soothe or to hurt. Speak humbly, as the writings say.
“Do wrong to none; be able for thine enemy
Rather in power than use, and keep thy friend
Under thy own life’s key; be check’d for silence,
But never tax’d for speech.”
--Shakespeare (1564-1616)
--Keep your sorrow under close guard. Sharing them can bring you trouble, for they are not all friends those that “befriend” us.
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September 14th, 2025 02:32
Soman Ragavan said:
A paraphrase of the English translation of the writings :
--The threads of love are such that, once broken, they cannot be remade into the originals. The pains remain in memory. There is the similarity with physical threads : when rejoined, knots remain.
--The date tree has made itself inaccessible. No branches to hold on to while you climb it. It does produce fruits, but they remain inaccessible, at the top which is difficult to reach. The branches don’t give much shade. Even birds find it difficult to build nests up there. Thus, that tree has surrounded itself with defences.
--It is pointless to moan during hard times. This will change nothing. Change comes about in its own time.
--Principles and patience should not be broken. The fallen leaf will never go back to the spot where it came from. New leaves can come out, but they are different stories. Friendship is like glass. Once broken it can never be mended completely.
--When you are great, your words have power. Power to comfort, to soothe or to hurt. Speak humbly, as the writings say.
“Do wrong to none; be able for thine enemy
Rather in power than use, and keep thy friend
Under thy own life’s key; be check’d for silence,
But never tax’d for speech.”
--Shakespeare (1564-1616)
--Keep your sorrow under close guard. Sharing them can bring you trouble, for they are not all friends those that “befriend” us.
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September 14th, 2025 02:32
Haikus
Tristan Robert Lange said:
perfect...and I do mean flawlessly perfect, haikus, my friend! Hands down. Beautiful!
September 14th, 2025 01:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
perfect...and I do mean flawlessly perfect, haikus, my friend! Hands down. Beautiful!
September 14th, 2025 01:12
Wind of Verses
Soman Ragavan said:
Please give an English translation of the poem. Thanks.
September 14th, 2025 00:35
Soman Ragavan said:
Please give an English translation of the poem. Thanks.
September 14th, 2025 00:35
Wind of Verses
Navjot Singh Nagra said:
A graceful weave of languages and literature, blending maths, poetry, and culture into a timeless celebration of wisdom and beauty.
September 14th, 2025 00:28
Navjot Singh Nagra said:
A graceful weave of languages and literature, blending maths, poetry, and culture into a timeless celebration of wisdom and beauty.
September 14th, 2025 00:28
Haikus
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and so nature like. A lovely pair of haikus
September 13th, 2025 11:51
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and so nature like. A lovely pair of haikus
September 13th, 2025 11:51
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