Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
Echoes of Grief .
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this carries that gentle, loving tone while quietly revealing something deeper…like noticing the small changes in someone close to you and not quite understanding why. The beauty of the imagery and that underlying concern work really well together. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this carries that gentle, loving tone while quietly revealing something deeper…like noticing the small changes in someone close to you and not quite understanding why. The beauty of the imagery and that underlying concern work really well together. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 11th, 2026 11:12
Echoes of Grief .
sorenbarrett said:
This is most beautiful in its imagery of a culture poorly known in the west. It is softly sad and so nicely written. A fave
April 11th, 2026 05:34
sorenbarrett said:
This is most beautiful in its imagery of a culture poorly known in the west. It is softly sad and so nicely written. A fave
April 11th, 2026 05:34
Echoes of Grief .
Teddy.15 said:
I lost my father just yesterday, and this is very beautiful condolences to the girl. 🌹
April 11th, 2026 04:28
Teddy.15 said:
I lost my father just yesterday, and this is very beautiful condolences to the girl. 🌹
April 11th, 2026 04:28
A Silent Soul
Waiting for Silence said:
I feel, man becomes father only after daughter is born.
April 10th, 2026 00:30
Waiting for Silence said:
I feel, man becomes father only after daughter is born.
April 10th, 2026 00:30
Ignorance
Paul Bell said:
Adults lie to the point where they can\'t lie no more.
The child grows to the realisation of those lies, and that can go either way as they go forward in life.
January 17th, 2026 05:42
Paul Bell said:
Adults lie to the point where they can\'t lie no more.
The child grows to the realisation of those lies, and that can go either way as they go forward in life.
January 17th, 2026 05:42
Burning Letters
Cirawrites01 said:
This poem is so freaking layered and I love the depth of it naturally that it flows into and the message it conveys, it kinda sounds like an arranged marriage and dude I love reading thee poems like our culture is shown in them and its sooo gooood dudee lysm
October 29th, 2025 12:25
Cirawrites01 said:
This poem is so freaking layered and I love the depth of it naturally that it flows into and the message it conveys, it kinda sounds like an arranged marriage and dude I love reading thee poems like our culture is shown in them and its sooo gooood dudee lysm
October 29th, 2025 12:25
Calligraphy
NafisaSB said:
short, sweet, and yet with a wealth of meaning. .like it
October 24th, 2025 01:28
NafisaSB said:
short, sweet, and yet with a wealth of meaning. .like it
October 24th, 2025 01:28
Calligraphy
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful job, Priya! Haunting and the alliteration sings! Lilac lies! Mmm. Love it! Well done!
October 18th, 2025 08:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful job, Priya! Haunting and the alliteration sings! Lilac lies! Mmm. Love it! Well done!
October 18th, 2025 08:07
Ignorance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this one aches softly…the child’s voice so pure it hurts. The innocence makes the heartbreak sharper. You’ve painted absence with tenderness. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this one aches softly…the child’s voice so pure it hurts. The innocence makes the heartbreak sharper. You’ve painted absence with tenderness. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
October 17th, 2025 10:09
Ignorance
Friendship said:
Well written,a very sad poem. Your poem revolves around the themes of childhood innocence, longing, and the pain of abandonment.
October 16th, 2025 10:20
Friendship said:
Well written,a very sad poem. Your poem revolves around the themes of childhood innocence, longing, and the pain of abandonment.
October 16th, 2025 10:20
Ignorance
sorenbarrett said:
They say ignorance is bliss but tis only so until the truth be known. A most lovely poem that bears a bit of dark foreboding
October 16th, 2025 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
They say ignorance is bliss but tis only so until the truth be known. A most lovely poem that bears a bit of dark foreboding
October 16th, 2025 10:05
Haiku
rajatbagchi said:
Sweet...I need to learn to write some Haiku style of poetry!
October 14th, 2025 22:56
rajatbagchi said:
Sweet...I need to learn to write some Haiku style of poetry!
October 14th, 2025 22:56
Burning Letters
rajatbagchi said:
Well, very subtly woven and presented, the message gets clearly conveyed even in these few lines. I like it!
October 13th, 2025 22:23
rajatbagchi said:
Well, very subtly woven and presented, the message gets clearly conveyed even in these few lines. I like it!
October 13th, 2025 22:23
Memories
spilleronsheet said:
Very soulful and warming of the moments lover share….a glimpse is enough to capture the fading time….keep penning such poetries underline
October 11th, 2025 15:37
spilleronsheet said:
Very soulful and warming of the moments lover share….a glimpse is enough to capture the fading time….keep penning such poetries underline
October 11th, 2025 15:37
Memories
Friendship said:
The poem \"Memories\" revolves around nostalgia and the act of cherishing moments spent with a beloved. It highlights the emotional depth of memories that linger and the reverence one feels for a person who has left a significant impact on their life. The subject matter focuses on the connection between the speaker and the beloved, emphasizing the sacredness of their bond and the profound respect the speaker has for the beloved\'s essence.
September 20th, 2025 14:54
Friendship said:
The poem \"Memories\" revolves around nostalgia and the act of cherishing moments spent with a beloved. It highlights the emotional depth of memories that linger and the reverence one feels for a person who has left a significant impact on their life. The subject matter focuses on the connection between the speaker and the beloved, emphasizing the sacredness of their bond and the profound respect the speaker has for the beloved\'s essence.
September 20th, 2025 14:54
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this is tender and reverent. The heart as camera catching a sacred soul…such a beautiful way to frame devotion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:49
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this is tender and reverent. The heart as camera catching a sacred soul…such a beautiful way to frame devotion. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 19th, 2025 15:49
Memories
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When you were resting
in the lap of silver nights
The camera of my heart
captured countless images
Of the sacred , rare soul
Enough for me to worship
No desire of the silent statue.
September 19th, 2025 15:47
Tristan Robert Lange said:
When you were resting
in the lap of silver nights
The camera of my heart
captured countless images
Of the sacred , rare soul
Enough for me to worship
No desire of the silent statue.
September 19th, 2025 15:47
Memories
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely unlike many that are enamored by the outer shell this time it is the inner self that catches the imagination a marvelous poem
September 19th, 2025 13:34
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely unlike many that are enamored by the outer shell this time it is the inner self that catches the imagination a marvelous poem
September 19th, 2025 13:34
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