Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
A Silent Soul
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this poem is stark and sorrowful, as it should be. Each stage of life unfolds like a quiet indictment...soft in tone, sharp in truth. You’ve captured the silencing of women with haunting metaphors (“a room without window,” “native nostalgia”), and the final line is both devastating and reflective. This one has impact, my friend. Great job. A fave. 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this poem is stark and sorrowful, as it should be. Each stage of life unfolds like a quiet indictment...soft in tone, sharp in truth. You’ve captured the silencing of women with haunting metaphors (“a room without window,” “native nostalgia”), and the final line is both devastating and reflective. This one has impact, my friend. Great job. A fave. 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 07:55
Morning Dew
RSM0812 said:
A very pretty poem about the soft touch of nature. Well done.
July 16th, 2025 07:13
RSM0812 said:
A very pretty poem about the soft touch of nature. Well done.
July 16th, 2025 07:13
A Silent Soul
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of the ongoing inequality in the world, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 05:18
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of the ongoing inequality in the world, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 05:18
A Silent Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Some places inequality is more evident than in others. A poem of inequality. Sad.
July 16th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Some places inequality is more evident than in others. A poem of inequality. Sad.
July 16th, 2025 03:55
Morning Dew
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quite the haunting, yet quiet parable...innocence undone by what it couldn’t foresee. The dew, the thorn, the touch...it’s sensual and sorrowful in the same breath. A delicate, devastating piece. 🌹👏 Well done, friend.
July 15th, 2025 14:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quite the haunting, yet quiet parable...innocence undone by what it couldn’t foresee. The dew, the thorn, the touch...it’s sensual and sorrowful in the same breath. A delicate, devastating piece. 🌹👏 Well done, friend.
July 15th, 2025 14:51
Let Me Live in my World
Tony Grannell said:
A country lass of pure a beauty, without the regalia of royalty, her own woman, her own path, as was the way of the Greek philosopher. A beautifully crafted poem, tenderly expressed yet powerfully perceived. Excellent.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 15th, 2025 13:51
Tony Grannell said:
A country lass of pure a beauty, without the regalia of royalty, her own woman, her own path, as was the way of the Greek philosopher. A beautifully crafted poem, tenderly expressed yet powerfully perceived. Excellent.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 15th, 2025 13:51
Morning Dew
Damaso said:
Incredible story. It left me stunned and reflective. I enjoyed it from the beginning. Then, the final ending is tremendous; it splits me in half like a sword. I\'m amazed. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 11:44
Damaso said:
Incredible story. It left me stunned and reflective. I enjoyed it from the beginning. Then, the final ending is tremendous; it splits me in half like a sword. I\'m amazed. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 11:44
Morning Dew
Poetic Licence said:
Well that\'s a write of beauty, around the honesty, desires, deceptions, loyalty within human relationships, so well crafted a pleasure to read
July 15th, 2025 07:48
Poetic Licence said:
Well that\'s a write of beauty, around the honesty, desires, deceptions, loyalty within human relationships, so well crafted a pleasure to read
July 15th, 2025 07:48
Morning Dew
sorenbarrett said:
Masked in metaphor, dipped in rhyme a most magnificent poem sublime. Very poetically written this poem in its brevity conveys feelings of human relationships their purity, innocence, desires, deception, broken bonds. So well conceived and portrayed in wonderful natural images. A definite fave
July 15th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Masked in metaphor, dipped in rhyme a most magnificent poem sublime. Very poetically written this poem in its brevity conveys feelings of human relationships their purity, innocence, desires, deception, broken bonds. So well conceived and portrayed in wonderful natural images. A definite fave
July 15th, 2025 06:24
Let Me Live in my World
Teddy.15 said:
I feel the need for freedom and free spirit, I love this it has a magnificent strength. 🌹
July 15th, 2025 04:14
Teddy.15 said:
I feel the need for freedom and free spirit, I love this it has a magnificent strength. 🌹
July 15th, 2025 04:14
Let Me Live in my World
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write which was a pleasure to read
July 14th, 2025 22:34
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful write which was a pleasure to read
July 14th, 2025 22:34
Who is His Beloved
jim56 said:
love this nice words nice flow
you have a talent there keep writing
July 14th, 2025 15:36
jim56 said:
love this nice words nice flow
you have a talent there keep writing
July 14th, 2025 15:36
Let Me Live in my World
Soman Ragavan said:
There are stark contrasts here. “common country lass” versus “queen.” “borrowed glass” is mysterious. What is the exact meaning ? Glass symbolizes fragility. There are comparisons with buds, lotus and the lily. One thing we will notice with the lily is the sharp contrast between the mud that feeds the plant and the beauty of the flower. Though the plant lives off mud, it produces striking flowers. “Don’t love me” are devastating words…. We often hear the opposite : crying to be loved. Here, there is a rejection of love. Perhaps this comes from deception or bad experiences. Choosing nostalgia : insisting on living in the past. “build my utopia” : another indication of refusing evolving reality and taking refuge in dreams. Dreams are secure because they are fixed in time; they cannot be altered.
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July 14th, 2025 08:48
Soman Ragavan said:
There are stark contrasts here. “common country lass” versus “queen.” “borrowed glass” is mysterious. What is the exact meaning ? Glass symbolizes fragility. There are comparisons with buds, lotus and the lily. One thing we will notice with the lily is the sharp contrast between the mud that feeds the plant and the beauty of the flower. Though the plant lives off mud, it produces striking flowers. “Don’t love me” are devastating words…. We often hear the opposite : crying to be loved. Here, there is a rejection of love. Perhaps this comes from deception or bad experiences. Choosing nostalgia : insisting on living in the past. “build my utopia” : another indication of refusing evolving reality and taking refuge in dreams. Dreams are secure because they are fixed in time; they cannot be altered.
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July 14th, 2025 08:48
Let Me Live in my World
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so easy to identify with and my favorite line is the last (Let me build my Utopia, once Plato dreamed in Greece) perfect.
July 14th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so easy to identify with and my favorite line is the last (Let me build my Utopia, once Plato dreamed in Greece) perfect.
July 14th, 2025 04:55
Who is His Beloved
Aman 12 said:
The ache of loving a heart already claimed... beautifully captured
July 14th, 2025 00:48
Aman 12 said:
The ache of loving a heart already claimed... beautifully captured
July 14th, 2025 00:48
Who is His Beloved
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written write, I get the feeling of the loss of innocence in the write and regret afterwards, well expressed
July 13th, 2025 09:46
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written write, I get the feeling of the loss of innocence in the write and regret afterwards, well expressed
July 13th, 2025 09:46
Who is His Beloved
sorenbarrett said:
A story in itself this could also be a metaphor for the loss of innocence. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
A story in itself this could also be a metaphor for the loss of innocence. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 05:17
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