Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
The Bloom Spring Forgot
Poetic Licence said:
This has a lovely feel, being comforted and reassured by the strength and beauty of nature around them, that they will be ok, enjoyed the read
July 19th, 2025 07:56
Poetic Licence said:
This has a lovely feel, being comforted and reassured by the strength and beauty of nature around them, that they will be ok, enjoyed the read
July 19th, 2025 07:56
The Bloom Spring Forgot
sorenbarrett said:
Continued reassurances from nature over being what one is. A wonderful poem with Indian flavor. Nicely done
July 19th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Continued reassurances from nature over being what one is. A wonderful poem with Indian flavor. Nicely done
July 19th, 2025 05:14
The Bloom Spring Forgot
Lorenz said:
This is what touches the spring child in me !
July 19th, 2025 03:36
Lorenz said:
This is what touches the spring child in me !
July 19th, 2025 03:36
To My Dream Queen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, there’s a sweet, ethereal beauty in this. It reads like a dream spoken softly into a spring morning...tender, hopeful, and quietly haunting. That image of dew parting from petals really worked well. Lovely work. 🌹👏
July 18th, 2025 06:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, there’s a sweet, ethereal beauty in this. It reads like a dream spoken softly into a spring morning...tender, hopeful, and quietly haunting. That image of dew parting from petals really worked well. Lovely work. 🌹👏
July 18th, 2025 06:40
To My Dream Queen
Poetic Licence said:
This is beautifully written and has a very exotic flavour to the writing, full of colourful images and some lovely lines, really enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 05:43
Poetic Licence said:
This is beautifully written and has a very exotic flavour to the writing, full of colourful images and some lovely lines, really enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 05:43
To My Dream Queen
sorenbarrett said:
Several most interesting metaphors here. This poem has a most eastern flavor to it in its settings colors and wording. It feels exotic. Most lovely
July 18th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Several most interesting metaphors here. This poem has a most eastern flavor to it in its settings colors and wording. It feels exotic. Most lovely
July 18th, 2025 04:01
Monarch of Morning
Keeter C said:
Interesting. I can only try to guess what is alluded but nice.
July 17th, 2025 17:36
Keeter C said:
Interesting. I can only try to guess what is alluded but nice.
July 17th, 2025 17:36
Monarch of Morning
Tony Grannell said:
From the rise of the kings court to the destruction of virgin lands to fill the royal coffers; greed and power personified in this excellent poem. Very well done.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 13:38
Tony Grannell said:
From the rise of the kings court to the destruction of virgin lands to fill the royal coffers; greed and power personified in this excellent poem. Very well done.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 13:38
Monarch of Morning
Poetic Licence said:
A very beautiful write with Lovely metaphor, very enjoyable read
July 17th, 2025 08:23
Poetic Licence said:
A very beautiful write with Lovely metaphor, very enjoyable read
July 17th, 2025 08:23
Let Me Live in my World
jim56 said:
love this love the words flows really nice
keep it up jim
July 17th, 2025 06:41
jim56 said:
love this love the words flows really nice
keep it up jim
July 17th, 2025 06:41
Morning Dew
jim56 said:
another lovely write well written poem
keep writing jim
July 17th, 2025 06:38
jim56 said:
another lovely write well written poem
keep writing jim
July 17th, 2025 06:38
Monarch of Morning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There’s a rich sense of ceremony in this...pageantry woven into every image. The courtly metaphors, the gold, the surrendering moon...it all builds this sunrise like a kingdom rising from the silence of early morning. You kept the tone both regal and quietly unsettling. 🌹👏 A fave for sure, my friend.
July 17th, 2025 06:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There’s a rich sense of ceremony in this...pageantry woven into every image. The courtly metaphors, the gold, the surrendering moon...it all builds this sunrise like a kingdom rising from the silence of early morning. You kept the tone both regal and quietly unsettling. 🌹👏 A fave for sure, my friend.
July 17th, 2025 06:02
Monarch of Morning
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor flows from sun to moon in this poem nicely done
July 17th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor flows from sun to moon in this poem nicely done
July 17th, 2025 04:41
Morning Dew
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful poem, rich in imagery visually and with such emotion. 🌹
July 17th, 2025 00:32
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful poem, rich in imagery visually and with such emotion. 🌹
July 17th, 2025 00:32
Morning Dew
ElizabethMoroz said:
Profound subject matter and so beautifully written Priya. The poetic sentiment of your language and delicate rhyming is so graceful and beautiful in this composition. Thankyou, its existential beauty personified. I love this piece. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 16th, 2025 08:09
ElizabethMoroz said:
Profound subject matter and so beautifully written Priya. The poetic sentiment of your language and delicate rhyming is so graceful and beautiful in this composition. Thankyou, its existential beauty personified. I love this piece. Sincerely, Elizabeth
July 16th, 2025 08:09
A Silent Soul
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this poem is stark and sorrowful, as it should be. Each stage of life unfolds like a quiet indictment...soft in tone, sharp in truth. You’ve captured the silencing of women with haunting metaphors (“a room without window,” “native nostalgia”), and the final line is both devastating and reflective. This one has impact, my friend. Great job. A fave. 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 07:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this poem is stark and sorrowful, as it should be. Each stage of life unfolds like a quiet indictment...soft in tone, sharp in truth. You’ve captured the silencing of women with haunting metaphors (“a room without window,” “native nostalgia”), and the final line is both devastating and reflective. This one has impact, my friend. Great job. A fave. 🌹👏
July 16th, 2025 07:55
Morning Dew
RSM0812 said:
A very pretty poem about the soft touch of nature. Well done.
July 16th, 2025 07:13
RSM0812 said:
A very pretty poem about the soft touch of nature. Well done.
July 16th, 2025 07:13
A Silent Soul
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of the ongoing inequality in the world, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 05:18
Poetic Licence said:
A sad and touching write of the ongoing inequality in the world, nicely expressed and written
July 16th, 2025 05:18
A Silent Soul
sorenbarrett said:
Some places inequality is more evident than in others. A poem of inequality. Sad.
July 16th, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Some places inequality is more evident than in others. A poem of inequality. Sad.
July 16th, 2025 03:55
Morning Dew
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quite the haunting, yet quiet parable...innocence undone by what it couldn’t foresee. The dew, the thorn, the touch...it’s sensual and sorrowful in the same breath. A delicate, devastating piece. 🌹👏 Well done, friend.
July 15th, 2025 14:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This is quite the haunting, yet quiet parable...innocence undone by what it couldn’t foresee. The dew, the thorn, the touch...it’s sensual and sorrowful in the same breath. A delicate, devastating piece. 🌹👏 Well done, friend.
July 15th, 2025 14:51
Let Me Live in my World
Tony Grannell said:
A country lass of pure a beauty, without the regalia of royalty, her own woman, her own path, as was the way of the Greek philosopher. A beautifully crafted poem, tenderly expressed yet powerfully perceived. Excellent.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 15th, 2025 13:51
Tony Grannell said:
A country lass of pure a beauty, without the regalia of royalty, her own woman, her own path, as was the way of the Greek philosopher. A beautifully crafted poem, tenderly expressed yet powerfully perceived. Excellent.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 15th, 2025 13:51
Morning Dew
Damaso said:
Incredible story. It left me stunned and reflective. I enjoyed it from the beginning. Then, the final ending is tremendous; it splits me in half like a sword. I\'m amazed. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 11:44
Damaso said:
Incredible story. It left me stunned and reflective. I enjoyed it from the beginning. Then, the final ending is tremendous; it splits me in half like a sword. I\'m amazed. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 15th, 2025 11:44
Morning Dew
Poetic Licence said:
Well that\'s a write of beauty, around the honesty, desires, deceptions, loyalty within human relationships, so well crafted a pleasure to read
July 15th, 2025 07:48
Poetic Licence said:
Well that\'s a write of beauty, around the honesty, desires, deceptions, loyalty within human relationships, so well crafted a pleasure to read
July 15th, 2025 07:48
Morning Dew
sorenbarrett said:
Masked in metaphor, dipped in rhyme a most magnificent poem sublime. Very poetically written this poem in its brevity conveys feelings of human relationships their purity, innocence, desires, deception, broken bonds. So well conceived and portrayed in wonderful natural images. A definite fave
July 15th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Masked in metaphor, dipped in rhyme a most magnificent poem sublime. Very poetically written this poem in its brevity conveys feelings of human relationships their purity, innocence, desires, deception, broken bonds. So well conceived and portrayed in wonderful natural images. A definite fave
July 15th, 2025 06:24
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