Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
Who is His Beloved
jim56 said:
love this nice words nice flow
you have a talent there keep writing
July 14th, 2025 15:36
jim56 said:
love this nice words nice flow
you have a talent there keep writing
July 14th, 2025 15:36
Let Me Live in my World
Soman Ragavan said:
There are stark contrasts here. “common country lass” versus “queen.” “borrowed glass” is mysterious. What is the exact meaning ? Glass symbolizes fragility. There are comparisons with buds, lotus and the lily. One thing we will notice with the lily is the sharp contrast between the mud that feeds the plant and the beauty of the flower. Though the plant lives off mud, it produces striking flowers. “Don’t love me” are devastating words…. We often hear the opposite : crying to be loved. Here, there is a rejection of love. Perhaps this comes from deception or bad experiences. Choosing nostalgia : insisting on living in the past. “build my utopia” : another indication of refusing evolving reality and taking refuge in dreams. Dreams are secure because they are fixed in time; they cannot be altered.
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July 14th, 2025 08:48
Soman Ragavan said:
There are stark contrasts here. “common country lass” versus “queen.” “borrowed glass” is mysterious. What is the exact meaning ? Glass symbolizes fragility. There are comparisons with buds, lotus and the lily. One thing we will notice with the lily is the sharp contrast between the mud that feeds the plant and the beauty of the flower. Though the plant lives off mud, it produces striking flowers. “Don’t love me” are devastating words…. We often hear the opposite : crying to be loved. Here, there is a rejection of love. Perhaps this comes from deception or bad experiences. Choosing nostalgia : insisting on living in the past. “build my utopia” : another indication of refusing evolving reality and taking refuge in dreams. Dreams are secure because they are fixed in time; they cannot be altered.
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July 14th, 2025 08:48
Let Me Live in my World
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so easy to identify with and my favorite line is the last (Let me build my Utopia, once Plato dreamed in Greece) perfect.
July 14th, 2025 04:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem so easy to identify with and my favorite line is the last (Let me build my Utopia, once Plato dreamed in Greece) perfect.
July 14th, 2025 04:55
Who is His Beloved
Aman 12 said:
The ache of loving a heart already claimed... beautifully captured
July 14th, 2025 00:48
Aman 12 said:
The ache of loving a heart already claimed... beautifully captured
July 14th, 2025 00:48
Who is His Beloved
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written write, I get the feeling of the loss of innocence in the write and regret afterwards, well expressed
July 13th, 2025 09:46
Poetic Licence said:
Nicely written write, I get the feeling of the loss of innocence in the write and regret afterwards, well expressed
July 13th, 2025 09:46
Who is His Beloved
sorenbarrett said:
A story in itself this could also be a metaphor for the loss of innocence. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
A story in itself this could also be a metaphor for the loss of innocence. Nicely done
July 13th, 2025 05:17
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