Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
Haiku
RSM0812 said:
This is a really pretty write. I like the words used and the way u used them to capture the imagery for the reader. Nice write.
September 12th, 2025 23:03
RSM0812 said:
This is a really pretty write. I like the words used and the way u used them to capture the imagery for the reader. Nice write.
September 12th, 2025 23:03
Haiku
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, these haiku feel like little windows into stillness...the peacock in monsoon winds, dew like pearls, the rose smiling in her veil. Gentle, delicate, and quietly alive. A gift to read. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2025 14:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, these haiku feel like little windows into stillness...the peacock in monsoon winds, dew like pearls, the rose smiling in her veil. Gentle, delicate, and quietly alive. A gift to read. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 12th, 2025 14:36
Nobody is mine
Paul Bell said:
In a way, you can\'t get hurt loving yourself, and you can even cancel dates on your own behalf without the grief.
I\'m liking this new way of life.
September 12th, 2025 13:15
Paul Bell said:
In a way, you can\'t get hurt loving yourself, and you can even cancel dates on your own behalf without the grief.
I\'m liking this new way of life.
September 12th, 2025 13:15
Haiku
sorenbarrett said:
Three beautiful haikus each with their own merit and the last with thorns. Loved them all.
A stem bent with dew
kisses the lowest of all
but springs back anew
September 12th, 2025 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
Three beautiful haikus each with their own merit and the last with thorns. Loved them all.
A stem bent with dew
kisses the lowest of all
but springs back anew
September 12th, 2025 11:06
Siblings (Haiku)
Navjot Singh Nagra said:
Very meaningful and deep thought, very good one...
September 12th, 2025 04:54
Navjot Singh Nagra said:
Very meaningful and deep thought, very good one...
September 12th, 2025 04:54
Perception(Haiku)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lovely and profound! Wonderful job, Priya! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 21:07
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Lovely and profound! Wonderful job, Priya! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 11th, 2025 21:07
Perception(Haiku)
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we all do sing and cry changing our heart yet all remains the same. A lovely Haiku
September 11th, 2025 13:11
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we all do sing and cry changing our heart yet all remains the same. A lovely Haiku
September 11th, 2025 13:11
Nobody is mine
Anmol Sinha said:
I also have Masters in English Literature.
Loved your poem.
September 11th, 2025 10:17
Anmol Sinha said:
I also have Masters in English Literature.
Loved your poem.
September 11th, 2025 10:17
Siblings (Haiku)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written this Senryu is, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:42
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderfully written this Senryu is, my dear friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 10th, 2025 18:42
Siblings (Haiku)
Teddy.15 said:
My relationship with my siblings is incredibly tragic, but it doesn\'t mean I cannot appreciate your beautiful work. Kudos. 🌹
September 10th, 2025 13:12
Teddy.15 said:
My relationship with my siblings is incredibly tragic, but it doesn\'t mean I cannot appreciate your beautiful work. Kudos. 🌹
September 10th, 2025 13:12
Siblings (Haiku)
Kevin Hulme said:
A Volume in so little words . Well Said.
September 10th, 2025 11:59
Kevin Hulme said:
A Volume in so little words . Well Said.
September 10th, 2025 11:59
Siblings (Haiku)
Lorenz said:
Soothing image of Rama and Sita !
Your haiku puzzles my gemini mind !
September 10th, 2025 09:54
Lorenz said:
Soothing image of Rama and Sita !
Your haiku puzzles my gemini mind !
September 10th, 2025 09:54
Siblings (Haiku)
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful senryu is woven in this relationship between half sisters. Nicely written
September 10th, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
What a wonderful senryu is woven in this relationship between half sisters. Nicely written
September 10th, 2025 08:16
Nobody is mine
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this carries such strength…solitude turned into sanctuary, self turned into healing. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2025 09:23
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, this carries such strength…solitude turned into sanctuary, self turned into healing. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
September 9th, 2025 09:23
Nobody is mine
sorenbarrett said:
Sad. When nobody wants you, you must fall back upon wanting oneself and so I take the last part (that makes me happy). If so you are free. The poem still carries a sense of loneliness and thus I said sad. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 11:46
sorenbarrett said:
Sad. When nobody wants you, you must fall back upon wanting oneself and so I take the last part (that makes me happy). If so you are free. The poem still carries a sense of loneliness and thus I said sad. Nicely written
September 8th, 2025 11:46
Burning Letters
NafisaSB said:
Deeply moving and touching. Sad but tells a hidden tale
September 7th, 2025 19:23
NafisaSB said:
Deeply moving and touching. Sad but tells a hidden tale
September 7th, 2025 19:23
War in the wild
RSM0812 said:
A thougjt provoking write. Great imagery and over all nickey written. I enjoyed this quite a lot.
September 3rd, 2025 05:39
RSM0812 said:
A thougjt provoking write. Great imagery and over all nickey written. I enjoyed this quite a lot.
September 3rd, 2025 05:39
War in the wild
NafisaSB said:
The mighty think they are always right and are never aware of the silent and subdued people’s plight. - well brought out in this poem
September 2nd, 2025 07:17
NafisaSB said:
The mighty think they are always right and are never aware of the silent and subdued people’s plight. - well brought out in this poem
September 2nd, 2025 07:17
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