Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
Witty wings
Dan Williams said:
Evocative of nature tied to human existence. Well done.
July 25th, 2025 00:20
Dan Williams said:
Evocative of nature tied to human existence. Well done.
July 25th, 2025 00:20
Guest on mother\'s chest
Damaso said:
Beautiful, it comforts me with a thought as wise as the earth itself and its healing herbs. Thank you so much for sharing it. I enjoyed it very much. Best regards.
July 24th, 2025 14:23
Damaso said:
Beautiful, it comforts me with a thought as wise as the earth itself and its healing herbs. Thank you so much for sharing it. I enjoyed it very much. Best regards.
July 24th, 2025 14:23
Guest on mother\'s chest
Poetic Licence said:
We are a guest and we should show alot more respect and love to Mother Nature, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 11:21
Poetic Licence said:
We are a guest and we should show alot more respect and love to Mother Nature, enjoyed the read
July 24th, 2025 11:21
Guest on mother\'s chest
sorenbarrett said:
Mother nature we are all a guest of hers. Nicely written.
July 24th, 2025 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
Mother nature we are all a guest of hers. Nicely written.
July 24th, 2025 10:14
Witty wings
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, what a playful and lifting poem. The line “pluck virgin buds of spring days” especially caught me…sensual and innocent in the same breath. You’ve woven a soft enchantment of a poem here. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 07:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, what a playful and lifting poem. The line “pluck virgin buds of spring days” especially caught me…sensual and innocent in the same breath. You’ve woven a soft enchantment of a poem here. 🌹👏
July 24th, 2025 07:31
Witty wings
ElizabethMoroz said:
Such beautiful nature imagery. This is so authentically poetic and uplifting. I love the style structure themes content descriptions and poetic expression. Genuinely loved reading this piece. Well done! Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 06:09
ElizabethMoroz said:
Such beautiful nature imagery. This is so authentically poetic and uplifting. I love the style structure themes content descriptions and poetic expression. Genuinely loved reading this piece. Well done! Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 06:09
Whispering to weep
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful notions and gorgeous nature descriptions. Uplifting piece. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:32
ElizabethMoroz said:
Beautiful notions and gorgeous nature descriptions. Uplifting piece. Elizabeth
July 24th, 2025 05:32
Witty wings
arqios said:
This to me reads like an ode to apprenticeship: earn your “witty wings” through devotion to sound, sight, and sensation, then let those wings carry you beyond every boundary you once called home. Delightful🙏🏻🕊️
July 23rd, 2025 19:12
arqios said:
This to me reads like an ode to apprenticeship: earn your “witty wings” through devotion to sound, sight, and sensation, then let those wings carry you beyond every boundary you once called home. Delightful🙏🏻🕊️
July 23rd, 2025 19:12
Witty wings
jim56 said:
cleverly done nice rhyming lines
steady flow nice use of words to
enhance poem nice to read well done
keep writing jim
July 23rd, 2025 14:08
jim56 said:
cleverly done nice rhyming lines
steady flow nice use of words to
enhance poem nice to read well done
keep writing jim
July 23rd, 2025 14:08
Witty wings
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem revolves around creativity, self-expression, and the liberation that comes from embracing one\'s imagination. The poem encourages the reader to explore the beauty of language, nature, and life itself to attain a sense of freedom—symbolized by \"witty wings
July 23rd, 2025 12:45
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem revolves around creativity, self-expression, and the liberation that comes from embracing one\'s imagination. The poem encourages the reader to explore the beauty of language, nature, and life itself to attain a sense of freedom—symbolized by \"witty wings
July 23rd, 2025 12:45
Witty wings
Poetic Licence said:
That is not only very entertaining but very cleverly done, leaving the reader to interpret as they wish, some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 10:01
Poetic Licence said:
That is not only very entertaining but very cleverly done, leaving the reader to interpret as they wish, some lovely lines, enjoyed the read
July 23rd, 2025 10:01
Whispering to weep
Tony Grannell said:
This is a lovely verse, Priya, so delicately woven as if done with a whisper of poetic threads. You are to be admired and praised for this. Thank you very much.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 23rd, 2025 09:06
Tony Grannell said:
This is a lovely verse, Priya, so delicately woven as if done with a whisper of poetic threads. You are to be admired and praised for this. Thank you very much.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 23rd, 2025 09:06
Witty wings
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme spiced with enough ambiguity to leave room for various interpretations and enough of the cryptic to engage the mind. A fave
July 23rd, 2025 07:22
sorenbarrett said:
Clever rhyme spiced with enough ambiguity to leave room for various interpretations and enough of the cryptic to engage the mind. A fave
July 23rd, 2025 07:22
Whispering to weep
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, my friend, this is a gentle and dreamlike, almost a whisper. The parrot, the leaves, the green wings…each image feels like it carries something sacred. Lovely work. 🌹👏
July 22nd, 2025 14:01
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, my friend, this is a gentle and dreamlike, almost a whisper. The parrot, the leaves, the green wings…each image feels like it carries something sacred. Lovely work. 🌹👏
July 22nd, 2025 14:01
Whispering to weep
Damaso said:
What a beautiful landscape it describes. A beautiful feeling. What a sad but real ending. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 11:13
Damaso said:
What a beautiful landscape it describes. A beautiful feeling. What a sad but real ending. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
July 22nd, 2025 11:13
Whispering to weep
Poetic Licence said:
You have a lovely tender way with words, very enjoyable read
July 22nd, 2025 10:39
Poetic Licence said:
You have a lovely tender way with words, very enjoyable read
July 22nd, 2025 10:39
Morning Dew
NafisaSB said:
and so it is with human relationships too - trust is soon broken, and the innocence cruelly ripped apart
you have very beautifully and yet tenderly handled this piece of verse
July 22nd, 2025 00:51
NafisaSB said:
and so it is with human relationships too - trust is soon broken, and the innocence cruelly ripped apart
you have very beautifully and yet tenderly handled this piece of verse
July 22nd, 2025 00:51
My Dream Dress
Damaso said:
Wow, sorry, I just had to pick my jaw up off the floor. Incredible, with all due respect. I enjoyed it so much. It conveys pride, beauty, courage, and joy. A very knowledgeable piece on the craft. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 21st, 2025 16:15
Damaso said:
Wow, sorry, I just had to pick my jaw up off the floor. Incredible, with all due respect. I enjoyed it so much. It conveys pride, beauty, courage, and joy. A very knowledgeable piece on the craft. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 21st, 2025 16:15
My Dream Dress
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful sonnet, my friend! “I like the color of character and courage”…what a line. You didn’t just craft a dress...you claimed your space. No borrowed fabric, no borrowed voice. And yes…it sings, Priya. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful sonnet, my friend! “I like the color of character and courage”…what a line. You didn’t just craft a dress...you claimed your space. No borrowed fabric, no borrowed voice. And yes…it sings, Priya. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:26
My Dream Dress
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful of write of deciding who they want to be and the way the want to be knowing they will shine in the world, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:15
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful of write of deciding who they want to be and the way the want to be knowing they will shine in the world, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:15
My Dream Dress
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever use of metaphor throughout with details worked in. Loved it a fave
July 21st, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever use of metaphor throughout with details worked in. Loved it a fave
July 21st, 2025 03:55
Clever Guest
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificently worded, fine rhyme, good meter, nice flow. A brain teaser. Love such poems. A fave but I won\'t give it away and spoil someone else\'s day. I think I know. And all around us they grow.
July 20th, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificently worded, fine rhyme, good meter, nice flow. A brain teaser. Love such poems. A fave but I won\'t give it away and spoil someone else\'s day. I think I know. And all around us they grow.
July 20th, 2025 11:55
Clever Guest
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like the devil in disguise, the greedy rats are slowly tearing the world apart and we continue to allow them to do it, a very interesting and enjoyable read
July 20th, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like the devil in disguise, the greedy rats are slowly tearing the world apart and we continue to allow them to do it, a very interesting and enjoyable read
July 20th, 2025 06:18
Monarch of Morning
jim56 said:
beautiful poem has feeling and emotion
expressed by such lovely words
flows really nice a pleasure to read keep writing
jim
July 19th, 2025 09:35
jim56 said:
beautiful poem has feeling and emotion
expressed by such lovely words
flows really nice a pleasure to read keep writing
jim
July 19th, 2025 09:35
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