Comments received on poems by Priya Tomar
My Dream Dress
Damaso said:
Wow, sorry, I just had to pick my jaw up off the floor. Incredible, with all due respect. I enjoyed it so much. It conveys pride, beauty, courage, and joy. A very knowledgeable piece on the craft. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 21st, 2025 16:15
Damaso said:
Wow, sorry, I just had to pick my jaw up off the floor. Incredible, with all due respect. I enjoyed it so much. It conveys pride, beauty, courage, and joy. A very knowledgeable piece on the craft. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 21st, 2025 16:15
My Dream Dress
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful sonnet, my friend! “I like the color of character and courage”…what a line. You didn’t just craft a dress...you claimed your space. No borrowed fabric, no borrowed voice. And yes…it sings, Priya. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautiful sonnet, my friend! “I like the color of character and courage”…what a line. You didn’t just craft a dress...you claimed your space. No borrowed fabric, no borrowed voice. And yes…it sings, Priya. Beautifully done. 🌹👏
July 21st, 2025 08:26
My Dream Dress
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful of write of deciding who they want to be and the way the want to be knowing they will shine in the world, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:15
Poetic Licence said:
A beautiful of write of deciding who they want to be and the way the want to be knowing they will shine in the world, enjoyed the read
July 21st, 2025 06:15
My Dream Dress
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever use of metaphor throughout with details worked in. Loved it a fave
July 21st, 2025 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
Very clever use of metaphor throughout with details worked in. Loved it a fave
July 21st, 2025 03:55
Clever Guest
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificently worded, fine rhyme, good meter, nice flow. A brain teaser. Love such poems. A fave but I won\'t give it away and spoil someone else\'s day. I think I know. And all around us they grow.
July 20th, 2025 11:55
sorenbarrett said:
Magnificently worded, fine rhyme, good meter, nice flow. A brain teaser. Love such poems. A fave but I won\'t give it away and spoil someone else\'s day. I think I know. And all around us they grow.
July 20th, 2025 11:55
Clever Guest
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like the devil in disguise, the greedy rats are slowly tearing the world apart and we continue to allow them to do it, a very interesting and enjoyable read
July 20th, 2025 06:18
Poetic Licence said:
Feels like the devil in disguise, the greedy rats are slowly tearing the world apart and we continue to allow them to do it, a very interesting and enjoyable read
July 20th, 2025 06:18
Monarch of Morning
jim56 said:
beautiful poem has feeling and emotion
expressed by such lovely words
flows really nice a pleasure to read keep writing
jim
July 19th, 2025 09:35
jim56 said:
beautiful poem has feeling and emotion
expressed by such lovely words
flows really nice a pleasure to read keep writing
jim
July 19th, 2025 09:35
The Bloom Spring Forgot
Poetic Licence said:
This has a lovely feel, being comforted and reassured by the strength and beauty of nature around them, that they will be ok, enjoyed the read
July 19th, 2025 07:56
Poetic Licence said:
This has a lovely feel, being comforted and reassured by the strength and beauty of nature around them, that they will be ok, enjoyed the read
July 19th, 2025 07:56
The Bloom Spring Forgot
sorenbarrett said:
Continued reassurances from nature over being what one is. A wonderful poem with Indian flavor. Nicely done
July 19th, 2025 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
Continued reassurances from nature over being what one is. A wonderful poem with Indian flavor. Nicely done
July 19th, 2025 05:14
The Bloom Spring Forgot
Lorenz said:
This is what touches the spring child in me !
July 19th, 2025 03:36
Lorenz said:
This is what touches the spring child in me !
July 19th, 2025 03:36
To My Dream Queen
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, there’s a sweet, ethereal beauty in this. It reads like a dream spoken softly into a spring morning...tender, hopeful, and quietly haunting. That image of dew parting from petals really worked well. Lovely work. 🌹👏
July 18th, 2025 06:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Priya, there’s a sweet, ethereal beauty in this. It reads like a dream spoken softly into a spring morning...tender, hopeful, and quietly haunting. That image of dew parting from petals really worked well. Lovely work. 🌹👏
July 18th, 2025 06:40
To My Dream Queen
Poetic Licence said:
This is beautifully written and has a very exotic flavour to the writing, full of colourful images and some lovely lines, really enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 05:43
Poetic Licence said:
This is beautifully written and has a very exotic flavour to the writing, full of colourful images and some lovely lines, really enjoyed the read
July 18th, 2025 05:43
To My Dream Queen
sorenbarrett said:
Several most interesting metaphors here. This poem has a most eastern flavor to it in its settings colors and wording. It feels exotic. Most lovely
July 18th, 2025 04:01
sorenbarrett said:
Several most interesting metaphors here. This poem has a most eastern flavor to it in its settings colors and wording. It feels exotic. Most lovely
July 18th, 2025 04:01
Monarch of Morning
Keeter C said:
Interesting. I can only try to guess what is alluded but nice.
July 17th, 2025 17:36
Keeter C said:
Interesting. I can only try to guess what is alluded but nice.
July 17th, 2025 17:36
Monarch of Morning
Tony Grannell said:
From the rise of the kings court to the destruction of virgin lands to fill the royal coffers; greed and power personified in this excellent poem. Very well done.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 13:38
Tony Grannell said:
From the rise of the kings court to the destruction of virgin lands to fill the royal coffers; greed and power personified in this excellent poem. Very well done.
Kind regards,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 13:38
Monarch of Morning
Poetic Licence said:
A very beautiful write with Lovely metaphor, very enjoyable read
July 17th, 2025 08:23
Poetic Licence said:
A very beautiful write with Lovely metaphor, very enjoyable read
July 17th, 2025 08:23
Let Me Live in my World
jim56 said:
love this love the words flows really nice
keep it up jim
July 17th, 2025 06:41
jim56 said:
love this love the words flows really nice
keep it up jim
July 17th, 2025 06:41
Morning Dew
jim56 said:
another lovely write well written poem
keep writing jim
July 17th, 2025 06:38
jim56 said:
another lovely write well written poem
keep writing jim
July 17th, 2025 06:38
Monarch of Morning
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There’s a rich sense of ceremony in this...pageantry woven into every image. The courtly metaphors, the gold, the surrendering moon...it all builds this sunrise like a kingdom rising from the silence of early morning. You kept the tone both regal and quietly unsettling. 🌹👏 A fave for sure, my friend.
July 17th, 2025 06:02
Tristan Robert Lange said:
There’s a rich sense of ceremony in this...pageantry woven into every image. The courtly metaphors, the gold, the surrendering moon...it all builds this sunrise like a kingdom rising from the silence of early morning. You kept the tone both regal and quietly unsettling. 🌹👏 A fave for sure, my friend.
July 17th, 2025 06:02
Monarch of Morning
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor flows from sun to moon in this poem nicely done
July 17th, 2025 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Metaphor flows from sun to moon in this poem nicely done
July 17th, 2025 04:41
Morning Dew
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful poem, rich in imagery visually and with such emotion. 🌹
July 17th, 2025 00:32
Teddy.15 said:
What a wonderful poem, rich in imagery visually and with such emotion. 🌹
July 17th, 2025 00:32
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