Comments received on poems by Katie B.
May it be Spoken
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this feels like a call spoken with purpose…steady, intentional, and grounded in compassion. There’s a sincerity here that doesn’t waver, just builds line by line into something affirming and outward-facing. It carries a quiet strength. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this feels like a call spoken with purpose…steady, intentional, and grounded in compassion. There’s a sincerity here that doesn’t waver, just builds line by line into something affirming and outward-facing. It carries a quiet strength. Beautifully done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 28th, 2026 11:31
May it be Spoken
sorenbarrett said:
Christ like, the words of a Buddha, it speaks with soft power a kind exhortation of charity that all need to hear. Lovely words spoken most poetically Katie one our your best and a definite fave
March 28th, 2026 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
Christ like, the words of a Buddha, it speaks with soft power a kind exhortation of charity that all need to hear. Lovely words spoken most poetically Katie one our your best and a definite fave
March 28th, 2026 05:36
Crossroads
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always walk our own path Katie and we will eventually end up in the right place.
Andy
March 28th, 2026 02:54
Goldfinch60 said:
We must always walk our own path Katie and we will eventually end up in the right place.
Andy
March 28th, 2026 02:54
Crossroads
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, “I gave myself away / But I buy myself back” stands out… that moment carries the whole transformation. It shifts the piece from reflection into action. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, “I gave myself away / But I buy myself back” stands out… that moment carries the whole transformation. It shifts the piece from reflection into action. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 27th, 2026 09:34
Crossroads
sorenbarrett said:
We all walk our own trails in this life well stated Katie. This poem brims with responsibility and taking charge. Nicely written my friend
March 27th, 2026 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
We all walk our own trails in this life well stated Katie. This poem brims with responsibility and taking charge. Nicely written my friend
March 27th, 2026 09:16
So Goes our Light
Goldfinch60 said:
May the light always be with you Katie.
Andy
March 27th, 2026 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
May the light always be with you Katie.
Andy
March 27th, 2026 01:57
So Goes our Light
Vipassana said:
I love the rhythm of it, the short bursts of words (most lines 1 - 3 syllables), the galloping feel to it (if you will). Especially like
Sky’s
Drama abates
Renewal
Comes crawling and
Stars
Remember to shine
March 27th, 2026 00:57
Vipassana said:
I love the rhythm of it, the short bursts of words (most lines 1 - 3 syllables), the galloping feel to it (if you will). Especially like
Sky’s
Drama abates
Renewal
Comes crawling and
Stars
Remember to shine
March 27th, 2026 00:57
So Goes our Light
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet intensity running through it that never lets go. It moves like a storm you feel before you fully see it…steady, building, then easing just enough to breathe again. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this hit me hard…there’s a quiet intensity running through it that never lets go. It moves like a storm you feel before you fully see it…steady, building, then easing just enough to breathe again. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 26th, 2026 11:36
So Goes our Light
sorenbarrett said:
Nature is such and a great metaphor with splendid imagery \"a yellow harvest erupts\" what a great expression of the lightning. Loved the poem Katie a fave
March 26th, 2026 07:14
sorenbarrett said:
Nature is such and a great metaphor with splendid imagery \"a yellow harvest erupts\" what a great expression of the lightning. Loved the poem Katie a fave
March 26th, 2026 07:14
Worth
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this is a strong foundation…what you’ve built here is clear in its purpose and full of heart. Since you asked for feedback to make it \"excellent\", and I already think it is, I’d say this…you’ve got a lot of powerful affirmations, and tightening just a few of them would make the strongest lines stand out even more. Let a couple images carry more weight instead of saying everything at once. Your voice is solid throughout, just give those lines a little more space to breathe. But that is being super picky to honor your request in your comment. Beautiful intent, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this is a strong foundation…what you’ve built here is clear in its purpose and full of heart. Since you asked for feedback to make it \"excellent\", and I already think it is, I’d say this…you’ve got a lot of powerful affirmations, and tightening just a few of them would make the strongest lines stand out even more. Let a couple images carry more weight instead of saying everything at once. Your voice is solid throughout, just give those lines a little more space to breathe. But that is being super picky to honor your request in your comment. Beautiful intent, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 25th, 2026 10:54
Worth
sorenbarrett said:
It starts off on the right foot addressing the question of whether one knows themself and ends on the same one more assertively. It is only by knowing and accepting oneself that one can understand others and in effect wish them well. The last phrases fall as a blessing on others and it is in knowing oneself that this can be said. Nicely done Katie
March 25th, 2026 06:54
sorenbarrett said:
It starts off on the right foot addressing the question of whether one knows themself and ends on the same one more assertively. It is only by knowing and accepting oneself that one can understand others and in effect wish them well. The last phrases fall as a blessing on others and it is in knowing oneself that this can be said. Nicely done Katie
March 25th, 2026 06:54
Worth
arqios said:
An essential for self and when facing those that don’t recognise/respect this truth about ourselves 🕊️🙏🏻
March 25th, 2026 06:11
arqios said:
An essential for self and when facing those that don’t recognise/respect this truth about ourselves 🕊️🙏🏻
March 25th, 2026 06:11
Last
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it can be hard but it has made you stronger Katie and that strength will not come to the others.
Andy
March 24th, 2026 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it can be hard but it has made you stronger Katie and that strength will not come to the others.
Andy
March 24th, 2026 02:21
I Will Hear Your Song
NafisaSB said:
it is extremely challenging, but we have to let them go sooner or later - very well explained
March 24th, 2026 00:54
NafisaSB said:
it is extremely challenging, but we have to let them go sooner or later - very well explained
March 24th, 2026 00:54
Last
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this brings me back to those moments…standing there, waiting, hoping not to be last. The disappointment of always being picked last...That mix of embarrassment and quiet resilience feels very real here. Well done and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this brings me back to those moments…standing there, waiting, hoping not to be last. The disappointment of always being picked last...That mix of embarrassment and quiet resilience feels very real here. Well done and a fave.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 23rd, 2026 09:29
Last
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and hard hitting for anyone that was not picked for the team. It speaks with hurt but as the last line says courage thrives in adversity. Well written Katie
March 23rd, 2026 07:37
sorenbarrett said:
Raw and hard hitting for anyone that was not picked for the team. It speaks with hurt but as the last line says courage thrives in adversity. Well written Katie
March 23rd, 2026 07:37
Happiness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Me too, my friend, me too! Katie, this hit me…so simple, but there’s real weight in it. That fight for something you can’t even see yet…that’s honest and raw. It lands quietly but stays. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Me too, my friend, me too! Katie, this hit me…so simple, but there’s real weight in it. That fight for something you can’t even see yet…that’s honest and raw. It lands quietly but stays. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 22nd, 2026 09:33
Happiness
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness and joy are there for us all, I am sure that joy will come you way soon Katie.
Andy
March 22nd, 2026 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Happiness and joy are there for us all, I am sure that joy will come you way soon Katie.
Andy
March 22nd, 2026 02:24
It Should Never Be This Way
Goldfinch60 said:
It does happen in family life Katie, it certainly has with me.
Andy
March 21st, 2026 02:25
Goldfinch60 said:
It does happen in family life Katie, it certainly has with me.
Andy
March 21st, 2026 02:25
It Should Never Be This Way
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this kind of loss feels so different from anything else…not an ending, but a distance that lingers. Reading this, you can feel how much love is still there. As a parent with adult children myself, I can only begin to imagine your pain. Praying for you, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 10:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this kind of loss feels so different from anything else…not an ending, but a distance that lingers. Reading this, you can feel how much love is still there. As a parent with adult children myself, I can only begin to imagine your pain. Praying for you, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 20th, 2026 10:12
It Should Never Be This Way
sorenbarrett said:
It is a sad occurrence that happens from time to time and one wonders when this began and why. One searches memory for signs unless one can identify the occurrence and reason. A haunting poem Katie where some of us experience this temporarily and others permanently. It is daytime darkness nature\'s need for independence taken too far. Well written
March 20th, 2026 07:16
sorenbarrett said:
It is a sad occurrence that happens from time to time and one wonders when this began and why. One searches memory for signs unless one can identify the occurrence and reason. A haunting poem Katie where some of us experience this temporarily and others permanently. It is daytime darkness nature\'s need for independence taken too far. Well written
March 20th, 2026 07:16
I Will Hear Your Song
RSM0812 said:
Some spirits are eternally connected. Your poem puts the longing and emotion of love in one basket. Let it go, if it comes back its yours.
March 20th, 2026 06:32
RSM0812 said:
Some spirits are eternally connected. Your poem puts the longing and emotion of love in one basket. Let it go, if it comes back its yours.
March 20th, 2026 06:32
I Will Hear Your Song
Goldfinch60 said:
They will always be there for you Katie.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:18
Goldfinch60 said:
They will always be there for you Katie.
Andy
March 20th, 2026 02:18
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