Comments received on poems by Katie B.



Like A River After Rain
gray0328 said:

poem is a vivid, emotionally charged portrait of anger, frustration, and isolation, expressed through a mix of surreal and elemental imagery. It reads like a moment of inner eruption β€” a glimpse into someone overwhelmed by their feelings, unable to find release or recognition. Well Done Katie

January 20th, 2026 10:35

Autism in Girls
Friendship said:

Nice story.

January 20th, 2026 09:49

Autism in Girls
arqios said:

Thanks for bringing that up, Katie. Having relatives on the spectrum has given us first hand day to day experiences and treasures. πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

January 20th, 2026 09:33

Autism in Girls
sorenbarrett said:

A heart felt piece Katie that I have come to feel through the years working with the autistic, retarded, mentally ill they all have something to teach us. We are all human and not that much different.

January 20th, 2026 07:26

What was Lost
Goldfinch60 said:

Luckily this has never happened in my life Katy, I am a very lucky person.

Andy

January 20th, 2026 02:55

What was Lost
arqios said:

The lengths that people go to to make their (combined) existence work!

January 20th, 2026 01:48

A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
NafisaSB said:

a delightful verse about a pretty little flower..

January 19th, 2026 23:44

What was Lost
sorenbarrett said:

Duality in opposition, where opposites attract they also grow weary and in this poem there is this push and pull that both keeps things together but causes great discomfort. It is as two nations tied to each other out of convence and reliance but adversaries pursuing different values and aims. Nicely written

January 19th, 2026 08:57

Repaired
Goldfinch60 said:

Very emotive words Katie, I am sure that your heart will be fine.

Andy

January 19th, 2026 02:52

Repaired
Allie561 said:

What a fabulous poem Katie! I sometimes think we try to fix other things when we cannot fix ourselves. Your imagery and plot was very entertaining. Nice work.

January 18th, 2026 12:35

Repaired
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Katie, this poem understands repair as both physical and inward. The measured pace, the attention to weight and effort, and that stilling at the close all feel true. It’s gentle, grounded, and affirming. Beautifully done, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 18th, 2026 10:10

Repaired
Thomas W Case said:

This carries a lovely tension between stillness and effort. I love how the physical act of repair mirrors the inner workβ€”the slow tortoise pace makes the eventual rise feel earned, gritty, and quietly triumphant.

January 18th, 2026 07:51

Repaired
xTattooingPaperx said:

An abstract metaphor to represent what we can change and what must be left behind.

January 18th, 2026 07:35

Repaired
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a good read, they are things we simply cannot mend

January 18th, 2026 07:02

Repaired
sorenbarrett said:

Now this is a lovely metaphor Katie it is painted with beautiful imagery that puts in vivid contrast that, that needs repair. The introduction of the heart at the end emphasizes that there are some things that lie beyond our capacity to repair. Beautifully done Katie

January 18th, 2026 05:52

Bliss
Goldfinch60 said:

May that bliss be forever in your life Katie.

Andy

January 18th, 2026 02:52

Bliss
arqios said:

Grew up at the coast where every no-school day was spent. Now we live inland. So this has special meaning for me.πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

January 18th, 2026 02:30

Bliss
Allie561 said:

A lovely write Katie. I too am a fan of the beach, it’s one of my favorite spots to be. Your imagery is very good, I almost thought I was there!

January 17th, 2026 12:46

Bliss
sorenbarrett said:

Nature cast in a fanciful metaphoric images painted in a blissful array of colors and visions. Well done Katie

January 17th, 2026 10:31

Bliss
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Katie, this is immersive and unsettling in the best way. It moves from ease to danger so fluidly that the shift almost sneaks up on you. That tension lingers long after the read. Well done, my friend. Powerful write. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 17th, 2026 09:30

We are All Waiting
Goldfinch60 said:

My waiting has stopped twice in my life Katie when the right ladies cam into my life.
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Andy

January 17th, 2026 02:50

We are All Waiting
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Katie, this resonates deeply. Waiting for connection, for renewal, for release…it’s something so many of us carry quietly. Well done, my friend!. πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 16th, 2026 23:27

We are All Waiting
arqios said:

There is indeed that eternal waiting that is hopeful and never too long in its despairing, wonderfully captured here. Much enjoyed πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

January 16th, 2026 21:20

We are All Waiting
sorenbarrett said:

A glorious bucket list that we await. Some we find early others late some never at all. Loved it Katie

January 16th, 2026 09:04

A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Katie, you took me to that beautiful place.

Andy

January 16th, 2026 02:47

A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
arqios said:

The exquisite joys of simple beauty; and it surrounds us everyday πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

January 15th, 2026 20:50

A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
Paul Bell said:

Hint of spring in the offering.
Needed this on a miserable day here.

January 15th, 2026 11:35

A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Katie, this feels bright and unguarded. There’s a quiet happiness here that doesn’t rush itself, and it made me smile reading it. Well done, my friend! Hope you have a great day!πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ™πŸ•―οΈπŸ¦β€β¬›

January 15th, 2026 10:39

A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful write and so are flowers. Nicely paired in this poem they shine

January 15th, 2026 09:31

A Sky of Whispers
Goldfinch60 said:

Each dawn we arise into that new day Katie is a wonderful day.

Andy

January 15th, 2026 02:50

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