Comments received on poems by Katie B.
Abducted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, the idea of a perfectly arranged space that still feels empty or imprisoning is something many people can relate to. The tidy order becomes almost a mask over the deeper emotions moving beneath it. Fabulous job on this. A fave, for sure.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 10:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, the idea of a perfectly arranged space that still feels empty or imprisoning is something many people can relate to. The tidy order becomes almost a mask over the deeper emotions moving beneath it. Fabulous job on this. A fave, for sure.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 12th, 2026 10:09
Abducted
sorenbarrett said:
In a secluded room fantasy reigns. A poem that is dark and carries the feelings of depression in luxury. Well done Katie
March 12th, 2026 07:54
sorenbarrett said:
In a secluded room fantasy reigns. A poem that is dark and carries the feelings of depression in luxury. Well done Katie
March 12th, 2026 07:54
Sun and Moon
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, I like how this poem moves through the cycle of day and night as if two quiet guardians trade places. The reluctant sun and watchful moon create a subtle narrative of transition. The closing images of moonlit alleys and prowling cats give the night its own personality. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 08:08
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, I like how this poem moves through the cycle of day and night as if two quiet guardians trade places. The reluctant sun and watchful moon create a subtle narrative of transition. The closing images of moonlit alleys and prowling cats give the night its own personality. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 08:08
Sun and Moon
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture of nature in the movement of moon and sun. It is most poetic Katie
March 11th, 2026 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful picture of nature in the movement of moon and sun. It is most poetic Katie
March 11th, 2026 07:53
Hope
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. Indeed, it does. Profound in its simplicity, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 07:52
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Amen. Indeed, it does. Profound in its simplicity, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 11th, 2026 07:52
Hope
sorenbarrett said:
Had to think for a moment before it clicked in. Well said Katie
March 10th, 2026 13:20
sorenbarrett said:
Had to think for a moment before it clicked in. Well said Katie
March 10th, 2026 13:20
Abundance
Goldfinch60 said:
As are we all flushed with abundance Katie, we are so lucky.
Andy
March 10th, 2026 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
As are we all flushed with abundance Katie, we are so lucky.
Andy
March 10th, 2026 01:56
Abundance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, there’s a beautiful thread of gratitude running through this…seeing grace in birds in the sky, mercy in forgiveness, and love in human embrace. The image of Blue Jays suspended by grace opens the poem with a sense of wonder that carries all the way through. It leaves the reader with that same feeling of quiet abundance. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 08:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, there’s a beautiful thread of gratitude running through this…seeing grace in birds in the sky, mercy in forgiveness, and love in human embrace. The image of Blue Jays suspended by grace opens the poem with a sense of wonder that carries all the way through. It leaves the reader with that same feeling of quiet abundance. Well done, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 9th, 2026 08:30
Abundance
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words and thoughts in this poem. Gracefully arranged they make for a most peaceful feeling and one of reassurance that calms. A fave
March 9th, 2026 06:28
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful words and thoughts in this poem. Gracefully arranged they make for a most peaceful feeling and one of reassurance that calms. A fave
March 9th, 2026 06:28
A Taste of You
Durdica Porobija said:
The song depicts love as an act of nourishment and healing, where body and soul merge in a sensual, almost ritualistic experience that oscillates between tenderness and elemental strength. Expertly written!
March 8th, 2026 11:38
Durdica Porobija said:
The song depicts love as an act of nourishment and healing, where body and soul merge in a sensual, almost ritualistic experience that oscillates between tenderness and elemental strength. Expertly written!
March 8th, 2026 11:38
Bring me Home
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this feels so peaceful and grounding. The whole poem moves like a gentle walk through memory and nature…each image slowing the breath a little more. There’s a quiet gratitude in these lines that really lingers. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this feels so peaceful and grounding. The whole poem moves like a gentle walk through memory and nature…each image slowing the breath a little more. There’s a quiet gratitude in these lines that really lingers. Beautiful piece. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 7th, 2026 09:55
Bring me Home
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of splendid images of nature. Well done
March 7th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of splendid images of nature. Well done
March 7th, 2026 08:37
In the End
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, reading this reminds me how love sometimes arrives in fragments rather than full sentences…small impressions, sensations, and words that build into something larger. The way you let those pieces accumulate gives the poem a gentle, yet powerful rhythm. It’s simple but heartfelt. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:33
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, reading this reminds me how love sometimes arrives in fragments rather than full sentences…small impressions, sensations, and words that build into something larger. The way you let those pieces accumulate gives the poem a gentle, yet powerful rhythm. It’s simple but heartfelt. Well done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 6th, 2026 13:33
In the End
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written in form and presentation. Well worded a fave
March 6th, 2026 10:55
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely written in form and presentation. Well worded a fave
March 6th, 2026 10:55
Acceptance
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Katie, watching the news only shows the bad things in life but I know that there are more better things in life that are never reported.
Andy
March 6th, 2026 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Katie, watching the news only shows the bad things in life but I know that there are more better things in life that are never reported.
Andy
March 6th, 2026 01:33
Acceptance
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this reads like someone trying to protect their inner ground while the outside world burns… there’s a tension between withdrawal and wisdom that runs through the whole piece. The poem wrestles honestly with that question of what we carry and what we let go. The final line lingers quietly: “So many have closed.” Thoughtful reflection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 5th, 2026 16:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this reads like someone trying to protect their inner ground while the outside world burns… there’s a tension between withdrawal and wisdom that runs through the whole piece. The poem wrestles honestly with that question of what we carry and what we let go. The final line lingers quietly: “So many have closed.” Thoughtful reflection, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 5th, 2026 16:12
Acceptance
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so many feel this way, a hard and pointed write
March 5th, 2026 10:09
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so many feel this way, a hard and pointed write
March 5th, 2026 10:09
Acceptance
sorenbarrett said:
Katie I have walked that road felt those feeling come to the same conclusions and now remain discontent with what lies outside of me. A hard read but identifiable. Nicely done and raw to the point of pain
March 5th, 2026 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
Katie I have walked that road felt those feeling come to the same conclusions and now remain discontent with what lies outside of me. A hard read but identifiable. Nicely done and raw to the point of pain
March 5th, 2026 09:36
An Insidious Illness
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Katie but each new day will lead to a better life, go forward in harmony.
Andy
March 5th, 2026 02:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Katie but each new day will lead to a better life, go forward in harmony.
Andy
March 5th, 2026 02:02
An Insidious Illness
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this is painfully honest… the exhaustion in these lines feels real and unfiltered. The everyday details make the heaviness tangible. When a poem names that kind of inner battle so plainly it takes real courage. Thank you for putting it into words, my friend. Powerfully penned, for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 4th, 2026 13:06
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this is painfully honest… the exhaustion in these lines feels real and unfiltered. The everyday details make the heaviness tangible. When a poem names that kind of inner battle so plainly it takes real courage. Thank you for putting it into words, my friend. Powerfully penned, for sure. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 4th, 2026 13:06
An Insidious Illness
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
We have a lot of in common just based off this poem… masterpiece for sure thank you for sharing
March 4th, 2026 12:36
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
We have a lot of in common just based off this poem… masterpiece for sure thank you for sharing
March 4th, 2026 12:36
An Insidious Illness
Rachel P said:
I love that I can feel every single word in my bones! It gives me chills reading your ending line of \"I live without\". What a thought-provoking piece here. Thank you for sharing!
March 4th, 2026 11:07
Rachel P said:
I love that I can feel every single word in my bones! It gives me chills reading your ending line of \"I live without\". What a thought-provoking piece here. Thank you for sharing!
March 4th, 2026 11:07
An Insidious Illness
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful it speaks of being drugged with depression where society created troubles overwhelm to the point of giving up. And so it is that society maintains control of the masses with a gas and drug that no one takes responsibility for but those in power gain by. Doped to the point of thoughtlessness the people comply numbly and the economy and politics meander onward. Nicely worded
March 4th, 2026 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful it speaks of being drugged with depression where society created troubles overwhelm to the point of giving up. And so it is that society maintains control of the masses with a gas and drug that no one takes responsibility for but those in power gain by. Doped to the point of thoughtlessness the people comply numbly and the economy and politics meander onward. Nicely worded
March 4th, 2026 09:18
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