Comments received on poems by Katie B.
Charles
PerditaRose said:
One life cursed with the afflictions of multiple others, taking it out on his wife. He shows the world, either by choice or due to infirmity or both, what he really thinks of it. Both sad and disturbing. This is a hard read, Katie, but not as hard as the lives that some of us live. Eloquent.
December 23rd, 2025 06:07
PerditaRose said:
One life cursed with the afflictions of multiple others, taking it out on his wife. He shows the world, either by choice or due to infirmity or both, what he really thinks of it. Both sad and disturbing. This is a hard read, Katie, but not as hard as the lives that some of us live. Eloquent.
December 23rd, 2025 06:07
Charles
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Charles\" explores the themes of neglect, resilience, and the impact of trauma on an individual\'s life. It portrays the life of Charles, a man living on the fringes of society, highlighting his struggles, eccentricities, and the ways he has adapted to his circumstances.
December 23rd, 2025 05:55
Friendship said:
Your poem \"Charles\" explores the themes of neglect, resilience, and the impact of trauma on an individual\'s life. It portrays the life of Charles, a man living on the fringes of society, highlighting his struggles, eccentricities, and the ways he has adapted to his circumstances.
December 23rd, 2025 05:55
Charles
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid and colorful description of a life set in metaphor as well as living description. This man is a metaphor itself of life at a certain level of existence not living but existing. Nicely written and a fave
December 23rd, 2025 05:08
sorenbarrett said:
A vivid and colorful description of a life set in metaphor as well as living description. This man is a metaphor itself of life at a certain level of existence not living but existing. Nicely written and a fave
December 23rd, 2025 05:08
I KNOW THIS PLACE
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful imagery throughout. “Calm knows no contradiction” and the childhood stanza both stood out to me — they carry a quiet sense of peace that lingers.
December 22nd, 2025 17:57
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful imagery throughout. “Calm knows no contradiction” and the childhood stanza both stood out to me — they carry a quiet sense of peace that lingers.
December 22nd, 2025 17:57
I KNOW THIS PLACE
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around the deep human desires for compassion, peace, innocence, and love. The poet explores the emotional landscape tied to these themes, presenting a yearning for connection with nature, tranquility, the purity of childhood, and enduring romantic love.
December 22nd, 2025 09:17
Friendship said:
Nicely written, your poem revolves around the deep human desires for compassion, peace, innocence, and love. The poet explores the emotional landscape tied to these themes, presenting a yearning for connection with nature, tranquility, the purity of childhood, and enduring romantic love.
December 22nd, 2025 09:17
I KNOW THIS PLACE
PerditaRose said:
Katie - so many images and tactile references. Who has not run in the grass as a child. What a what wonderful remembrance. A good way to start the day. So many great poems this morning. And yours is one of them.
December 22nd, 2025 07:14
PerditaRose said:
Katie - so many images and tactile references. Who has not run in the grass as a child. What a what wonderful remembrance. A good way to start the day. So many great poems this morning. And yours is one of them.
December 22nd, 2025 07:14
I KNOW THIS PLACE
arqios said:
A distinct pleasure and a definite Fave 🤩🕊️🙏🏻
December 22nd, 2025 06:48
arqios said:
A distinct pleasure and a definite Fave 🤩🕊️🙏🏻
December 22nd, 2025 06:48
I KNOW THIS PLACE
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write Katie that calls out to the universe where in a quite eco comes the answer Peace, innocence and love come from an internal foundation found within each soul. A lovely write
December 22nd, 2025 06:40
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write Katie that calls out to the universe where in a quite eco comes the answer Peace, innocence and love come from an internal foundation found within each soul. A lovely write
December 22nd, 2025 06:40
Homeless
Friendship said:
The poem seeks to highlight the humanity of those experiencing homelessness and provoke thought about individual responsibility and the impact of small acts of kindness in a broken system. It emphasizes that while one may not be able to solve all problems, one can contribute positively in small ways.
December 21st, 2025 18:06
Friendship said:
The poem seeks to highlight the humanity of those experiencing homelessness and provoke thought about individual responsibility and the impact of small acts of kindness in a broken system. It emphasizes that while one may not be able to solve all problems, one can contribute positively in small ways.
December 21st, 2025 18:06
Judge Ye Not
arqios said:
Speaks directly to the poet heart. An essential share 🕊️🙏
December 21st, 2025 04:23
arqios said:
Speaks directly to the poet heart. An essential share 🕊️🙏
December 21st, 2025 04:23
Homeless
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of charity extended and the knowledge that one can not fix the plant when the root is damaged but one can momentarily allay the suffering. Well written Katie and so nice for the season
December 21st, 2025 03:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of charity extended and the knowledge that one can not fix the plant when the root is damaged but one can momentarily allay the suffering. Well written Katie and so nice for the season
December 21st, 2025 03:53
Homeless
Goldfinch60 said:
So many are homeless in a world where they could all be helped but those in power just do not care about anything but their own wealth.
Andy
December 21st, 2025 02:31
Goldfinch60 said:
So many are homeless in a world where they could all be helped but those in power just do not care about anything but their own wealth.
Andy
December 21st, 2025 02:31
Judge Ye Not
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Katie and so very true.
Andy
December 21st, 2025 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Katie and so very true.
Andy
December 21st, 2025 02:22
Judge Ye Not
PerditaRose said:
I think I have some time to go before I submit my poems anywhere. Something to look forward to with trepidation.
December 20th, 2025 08:54
PerditaRose said:
I think I have some time to go before I submit my poems anywhere. Something to look forward to with trepidation.
December 20th, 2025 08:54
Judge Ye Not
sorenbarrett said:
Good write Katie yes I agree we are often our most judgmental judges and critics. Yes indeed some poems need to breath like a fine wine before they can be appreciated.
December 20th, 2025 04:22
sorenbarrett said:
Good write Katie yes I agree we are often our most judgmental judges and critics. Yes indeed some poems need to breath like a fine wine before they can be appreciated.
December 20th, 2025 04:22
An Insidious Illness
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Katie but all is well as I say to people, you got up this morning as I did so all is well.
Andy
December 20th, 2025 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Katie but all is well as I say to people, you got up this morning as I did so all is well.
Andy
December 20th, 2025 02:15
An Insidious Illness
arqios said:
That is an excruciating thing to go through. Very moving and resonant. 🕊️🙏
December 19th, 2025 23:36
arqios said:
That is an excruciating thing to go through. Very moving and resonant. 🕊️🙏
December 19th, 2025 23:36
An Insidious Illness
orchidee said:
Good write K. I\'m reading a bit about consciousness, if this ties in at all with this poem? If having some pain, we may be aware of it, but in an \'unconscious\' sort of way. But the moment we start thinking about it, we notice it more, become conscious of it, and it may trouble us more then. Just a thought, though I didn\'t understand all the philosophising behind it (and that\'s a long word too! lol).
December 19th, 2025 11:49
orchidee said:
Good write K. I\'m reading a bit about consciousness, if this ties in at all with this poem? If having some pain, we may be aware of it, but in an \'unconscious\' sort of way. But the moment we start thinking about it, we notice it more, become conscious of it, and it may trouble us more then. Just a thought, though I didn\'t understand all the philosophising behind it (and that\'s a long word too! lol).
December 19th, 2025 11:49
An Insidious Illness
sorenbarrett said:
Raw, exposed, an open wound that when it heals bursts open again to drain. A sad illness that is dark and gives its own prognosis as terminal. To cleanse this to the bone may be too painful and beyond the scope of the patient or even the surgeon. A very descriptive write that takes the reader on this dark journey to a nightmare world with them wishing to awaken from the dream. Well done my friend
December 19th, 2025 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
Raw, exposed, an open wound that when it heals bursts open again to drain. A sad illness that is dark and gives its own prognosis as terminal. To cleanse this to the bone may be too painful and beyond the scope of the patient or even the surgeon. A very descriptive write that takes the reader on this dark journey to a nightmare world with them wishing to awaken from the dream. Well done my friend
December 19th, 2025 08:05
An Insidious Illness
Friendship said:
Wow, a compelling poem. But in all due respect, I\'m sorry you\'re going through all this. It\'s so hard to comprehend1 struggle powerful words hang in there, my friend.
The poem serves as an exploration of the impact of mental illness on the individual\'s life, aiming to convey the often-hidden struggles faced by those experiencing similar feelings. It offers a raw and honest portrayal of the emotional turmoil associated with mental health challenges, potentially providing a voice for others who feel similarly isolated.
December 19th, 2025 07:41
Friendship said:
Wow, a compelling poem. But in all due respect, I\'m sorry you\'re going through all this. It\'s so hard to comprehend1 struggle powerful words hang in there, my friend.
The poem serves as an exploration of the impact of mental illness on the individual\'s life, aiming to convey the often-hidden struggles faced by those experiencing similar feelings. It offers a raw and honest portrayal of the emotional turmoil associated with mental health challenges, potentially providing a voice for others who feel similarly isolated.
December 19th, 2025 07:41
Dawn
Goldfinch60 said:
May that new world be always full of peace and love Katie.
Andy
December 19th, 2025 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
May that new world be always full of peace and love Katie.
Andy
December 19th, 2025 02:46
Dawn
PerditaRose said:
Your poem is very uplifting. I will think of it at 3am tomorrow. I wouldn\'t miss it. Thank you, Katie.
December 18th, 2025 15:19
PerditaRose said:
Your poem is very uplifting. I will think of it at 3am tomorrow. I wouldn\'t miss it. Thank you, Katie.
December 18th, 2025 15:19
Dawn
jim56 said:
amazing poem has feeling and emotion
words present the poem perfectly nice to read
you have an amazing talent keep,writing dont waste it jim xx
December 18th, 2025 10:51
jim56 said:
amazing poem has feeling and emotion
words present the poem perfectly nice to read
you have an amazing talent keep,writing dont waste it jim xx
December 18th, 2025 10:51
Dawn
Paul Bell said:
Dawn is the best time of day.
I hit the roads at dawn, me the birds and trees in harmony.
Then I join the humans at rush hour and bitch.
December 18th, 2025 08:38
Paul Bell said:
Dawn is the best time of day.
I hit the roads at dawn, me the birds and trees in harmony.
Then I join the humans at rush hour and bitch.
December 18th, 2025 08:38
Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
Blessed hours before the dawn, hours of peace and calm. A lovely poem Katie
December 18th, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Blessed hours before the dawn, hours of peace and calm. A lovely poem Katie
December 18th, 2025 08:00
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