Comments received on poems by Katie B.
Like A River After Rain
gray0328 said:
poem is a vivid, emotionally charged portrait of anger, frustration, and isolation, expressed through a mix of surreal and elemental imagery. It reads like a moment of inner eruption β a glimpse into someone overwhelmed by their feelings, unable to find release or recognition. Well Done Katie
January 20th, 2026 10:35
gray0328 said:
poem is a vivid, emotionally charged portrait of anger, frustration, and isolation, expressed through a mix of surreal and elemental imagery. It reads like a moment of inner eruption β a glimpse into someone overwhelmed by their feelings, unable to find release or recognition. Well Done Katie
January 20th, 2026 10:35
Autism in Girls
arqios said:
Thanks for bringing that up, Katie. Having relatives on the spectrum has given us first hand day to day experiences and treasures. ποΈππ»
January 20th, 2026 09:33
arqios said:
Thanks for bringing that up, Katie. Having relatives on the spectrum has given us first hand day to day experiences and treasures. ποΈππ»
January 20th, 2026 09:33
Autism in Girls
sorenbarrett said:
A heart felt piece Katie that I have come to feel through the years working with the autistic, retarded, mentally ill they all have something to teach us. We are all human and not that much different.
January 20th, 2026 07:26
sorenbarrett said:
A heart felt piece Katie that I have come to feel through the years working with the autistic, retarded, mentally ill they all have something to teach us. We are all human and not that much different.
January 20th, 2026 07:26
What was Lost
Goldfinch60 said:
Luckily this has never happened in my life Katy, I am a very lucky person.
Andy
January 20th, 2026 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Luckily this has never happened in my life Katy, I am a very lucky person.
Andy
January 20th, 2026 02:55
What was Lost
arqios said:
The lengths that people go to to make their (combined) existence work!
January 20th, 2026 01:48
arqios said:
The lengths that people go to to make their (combined) existence work!
January 20th, 2026 01:48
A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
NafisaSB said:
a delightful verse about a pretty little flower..
January 19th, 2026 23:44
NafisaSB said:
a delightful verse about a pretty little flower..
January 19th, 2026 23:44
What was Lost
sorenbarrett said:
Duality in opposition, where opposites attract they also grow weary and in this poem there is this push and pull that both keeps things together but causes great discomfort. It is as two nations tied to each other out of convence and reliance but adversaries pursuing different values and aims. Nicely written
January 19th, 2026 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Duality in opposition, where opposites attract they also grow weary and in this poem there is this push and pull that both keeps things together but causes great discomfort. It is as two nations tied to each other out of convence and reliance but adversaries pursuing different values and aims. Nicely written
January 19th, 2026 08:57
Repaired
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Katie, I am sure that your heart will be fine.
Andy
January 19th, 2026 02:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Katie, I am sure that your heart will be fine.
Andy
January 19th, 2026 02:52
Repaired
Allie561 said:
What a fabulous poem Katie! I sometimes think we try to fix other things when we cannot fix ourselves. Your imagery and plot was very entertaining. Nice work.
January 18th, 2026 12:35
Allie561 said:
What a fabulous poem Katie! I sometimes think we try to fix other things when we cannot fix ourselves. Your imagery and plot was very entertaining. Nice work.
January 18th, 2026 12:35
Repaired
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this poem understands repair as both physical and inward. The measured pace, the attention to weight and effort, and that stilling at the close all feel true. Itβs gentle, grounded, and affirming. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 18th, 2026 10:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this poem understands repair as both physical and inward. The measured pace, the attention to weight and effort, and that stilling at the close all feel true. Itβs gentle, grounded, and affirming. Beautifully done, my friend. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 18th, 2026 10:10
Repaired
Thomas W Case said:
This carries a lovely tension between stillness and effort. I love how the physical act of repair mirrors the inner workβthe slow tortoise pace makes the eventual rise feel earned, gritty, and quietly triumphant.
January 18th, 2026 07:51
Thomas W Case said:
This carries a lovely tension between stillness and effort. I love how the physical act of repair mirrors the inner workβthe slow tortoise pace makes the eventual rise feel earned, gritty, and quietly triumphant.
January 18th, 2026 07:51
Repaired
xTattooingPaperx said:
An abstract metaphor to represent what we can change and what must be left behind.
January 18th, 2026 07:35
xTattooingPaperx said:
An abstract metaphor to represent what we can change and what must be left behind.
January 18th, 2026 07:35
Repaired
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a good read, they are things we simply cannot mend
January 18th, 2026 07:02
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a good read, they are things we simply cannot mend
January 18th, 2026 07:02
Repaired
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a lovely metaphor Katie it is painted with beautiful imagery that puts in vivid contrast that, that needs repair. The introduction of the heart at the end emphasizes that there are some things that lie beyond our capacity to repair. Beautifully done Katie
January 18th, 2026 05:52
sorenbarrett said:
Now this is a lovely metaphor Katie it is painted with beautiful imagery that puts in vivid contrast that, that needs repair. The introduction of the heart at the end emphasizes that there are some things that lie beyond our capacity to repair. Beautifully done Katie
January 18th, 2026 05:52
Bliss
arqios said:
Grew up at the coast where every no-school day was spent. Now we live inland. So this has special meaning for me.ποΈππ»
January 18th, 2026 02:30
arqios said:
Grew up at the coast where every no-school day was spent. Now we live inland. So this has special meaning for me.ποΈππ»
January 18th, 2026 02:30
Bliss
Allie561 said:
A lovely write Katie. I too am a fan of the beach, itβs one of my favorite spots to be. Your imagery is very good, I almost thought I was there!
January 17th, 2026 12:46
Allie561 said:
A lovely write Katie. I too am a fan of the beach, itβs one of my favorite spots to be. Your imagery is very good, I almost thought I was there!
January 17th, 2026 12:46
Bliss
sorenbarrett said:
Nature cast in a fanciful metaphoric images painted in a blissful array of colors and visions. Well done Katie
January 17th, 2026 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
Nature cast in a fanciful metaphoric images painted in a blissful array of colors and visions. Well done Katie
January 17th, 2026 10:31
Bliss
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this is immersive and unsettling in the best way. It moves from ease to danger so fluidly that the shift almost sneaks up on you. That tension lingers long after the read. Well done, my friend. Powerful write. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 17th, 2026 09:30
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this is immersive and unsettling in the best way. It moves from ease to danger so fluidly that the shift almost sneaks up on you. That tension lingers long after the read. Well done, my friend. Powerful write. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 17th, 2026 09:30
We are All Waiting
Goldfinch60 said:
My waiting has stopped twice in my life Katie when the right ladies cam into my life.
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Andy
January 17th, 2026 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
My waiting has stopped twice in my life Katie when the right ladies cam into my life.
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Andy
January 17th, 2026 02:50
We are All Waiting
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this resonates deeply. Waiting for connection, for renewal, for releaseβ¦itβs something so many of us carry quietly. Well done, my friend!. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 16th, 2026 23:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this resonates deeply. Waiting for connection, for renewal, for releaseβ¦itβs something so many of us carry quietly. Well done, my friend!. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 16th, 2026 23:27
We are All Waiting
arqios said:
There is indeed that eternal waiting that is hopeful and never too long in its despairing, wonderfully captured here. Much enjoyed πποΈ
January 16th, 2026 21:20
arqios said:
There is indeed that eternal waiting that is hopeful and never too long in its despairing, wonderfully captured here. Much enjoyed πποΈ
January 16th, 2026 21:20
We are All Waiting
sorenbarrett said:
A glorious bucket list that we await. Some we find early others late some never at all. Loved it Katie
January 16th, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A glorious bucket list that we await. Some we find early others late some never at all. Loved it Katie
January 16th, 2026 09:04
A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Katie, you took me to that beautiful place.
Andy
January 16th, 2026 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Katie, you took me to that beautiful place.
Andy
January 16th, 2026 02:47
A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
arqios said:
The exquisite joys of simple beauty; and it surrounds us everyday ππ»ποΈ
January 15th, 2026 20:50
arqios said:
The exquisite joys of simple beauty; and it surrounds us everyday ππ»ποΈ
January 15th, 2026 20:50
A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
Paul Bell said:
Hint of spring in the offering.
Needed this on a miserable day here.
January 15th, 2026 11:35
Paul Bell said:
Hint of spring in the offering.
Needed this on a miserable day here.
January 15th, 2026 11:35
A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this feels bright and unguarded. Thereβs a quiet happiness here that doesnβt rush itself, and it made me smile reading it. Well done, my friend! Hope you have a great day!πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 15th, 2026 10:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this feels bright and unguarded. Thereβs a quiet happiness here that doesnβt rush itself, and it made me smile reading it. Well done, my friend! Hope you have a great day!πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬
January 15th, 2026 10:39
A Tinge of Yellow Runs Through
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful write and so are flowers. Nicely paired in this poem they shine
January 15th, 2026 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful write and so are flowers. Nicely paired in this poem they shine
January 15th, 2026 09:31
A Sky of Whispers
Goldfinch60 said:
Each dawn we arise into that new day Katie is a wonderful day.
Andy
January 15th, 2026 02:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Each dawn we arise into that new day Katie is a wonderful day.
Andy
January 15th, 2026 02:50
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