Comments received on poems by Katie B.
I Will Hear Your Song
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this carries a quiet, tender love…that balance between holding close and letting go is felt in every line. “So we will be familiar in the passing wind” really anchors that connection, and the ending…“I will sing it back to you” brings it full circle in a beautiful way. Lovely work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:24
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this carries a quiet, tender love…that balance between holding close and letting go is felt in every line. “So we will be familiar in the passing wind” really anchors that connection, and the ending…“I will sing it back to you” brings it full circle in a beautiful way. Lovely work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 19th, 2026 10:24
I Will Hear Your Song
sorenbarrett said:
Katie I hear your song in the form of a bird calling for its fledglings flown. This contains the pain of a mother that watch her young fly. Well done a fave
March 19th, 2026 04:37
sorenbarrett said:
Katie I hear your song in the form of a bird calling for its fledglings flown. This contains the pain of a mother that watch her young fly. Well done a fave
March 19th, 2026 04:37
iNNOCENCE IMPARTED
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Time would best be served standing still\'. Great line. From your comment it would seem there\'s not too much regret... Happy here, because this is not always the case.
March 18th, 2026 16:27
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Time would best be served standing still\'. Great line. From your comment it would seem there\'s not too much regret... Happy here, because this is not always the case.
March 18th, 2026 16:27
iNNOCENCE IMPARTED
sorenbarrett said:
Katie that last line holds all the power of a poem well composed and beautiful. A most lovely write that drips with innocence, bubbles with youth and tickles the memory of any parent. Oh that they would stay that age. A fave
March 18th, 2026 07:17
sorenbarrett said:
Katie that last line holds all the power of a poem well composed and beautiful. A most lovely write that drips with innocence, bubbles with youth and tickles the memory of any parent. Oh that they would stay that age. A fave
March 18th, 2026 07:17
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Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Katie, that end come to all but what we must do is remember the good times we had with them.
Andy
March 17th, 2026 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Katie, that end come to all but what we must do is remember the good times we had with them.
Andy
March 17th, 2026 02:14
Cobalt
Doggerel Dave said:
Coffee would never taste the same in anything else. You have a deep connection which transcends the first clichéd comment I made. I understand this well.
March 16th, 2026 17:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Coffee would never taste the same in anything else. You have a deep connection which transcends the first clichéd comment I made. I understand this well.
March 16th, 2026 17:58
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Doggerel Dave said:
A sketch of great veracity, not a spare word or line yet a complete truth. Thanks for that, Katie.
March 16th, 2026 17:37
Doggerel Dave said:
A sketch of great veracity, not a spare word or line yet a complete truth. Thanks for that, Katie.
March 16th, 2026 17:37
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Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this hit me hard…there’s such raw honesty in the way you move through those final hours. The room, the smoke, the waiting…all of it carries that quiet heaviness that comes when time is running out. The ending lands with real emotional weight. A powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:50
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this hit me hard…there’s such raw honesty in the way you move through those final hours. The room, the smoke, the waiting…all of it carries that quiet heaviness that comes when time is running out. The ending lands with real emotional weight. A powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 16th, 2026 08:50
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sorenbarrett said:
Tension and then the finality of the last line. An abrupt stop as if a concrete wall in the windshield. A powerful poem cushioned with the soft but tense beginning. Very nicely done.
March 16th, 2026 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
Tension and then the finality of the last line. An abrupt stop as if a concrete wall in the windshield. A powerful poem cushioned with the soft but tense beginning. Very nicely done.
March 16th, 2026 07:19
A Shrine
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Katie, the beauty of us is within our hearts and minds.
Andy
March 16th, 2026 02:14
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Katie, the beauty of us is within our hearts and minds.
Andy
March 16th, 2026 02:14
All Things White
NafisaSB said:
white is always considered the epitome of beauty and purity
lovely poem, and great musings
keep them coming
March 16th, 2026 00:40
NafisaSB said:
white is always considered the epitome of beauty and purity
lovely poem, and great musings
keep them coming
March 16th, 2026 00:40
A Shrine
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Happy Sunday, Katie. This carries a powerful honesty…moving from the harsh voice of the mirror to the deeper recognition of a life lived. The shift from criticism to reverence gives the poem its strength. By the end, the body becomes something sacred rather than judged. Beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 15th, 2026 18:46
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Happy Sunday, Katie. This carries a powerful honesty…moving from the harsh voice of the mirror to the deeper recognition of a life lived. The shift from criticism to reverence gives the poem its strength. By the end, the body becomes something sacred rather than judged. Beautifully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 15th, 2026 18:46
A Shrine
sorenbarrett said:
A body a shrine that ages sometimes with patina and sometimes with rust. A lovely write about feeling at home with oneself. Lovely Katie
March 15th, 2026 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
A body a shrine that ages sometimes with patina and sometimes with rust. A lovely write about feeling at home with oneself. Lovely Katie
March 15th, 2026 13:36
Birthing
Neville said:
You are indeed write .. muchly enjoyed ink ma\'am .. write on .. Neville 😎
March 14th, 2026 09:45
Neville said:
You are indeed write .. muchly enjoyed ink ma\'am .. write on .. Neville 😎
March 14th, 2026 09:45
All Things White
Neville said:
Made me shiver so much my glass of milk near turned to butter ... write on Katie B .. Neville 😎👍
March 14th, 2026 09:43
Neville said:
Made me shiver so much my glass of milk near turned to butter ... write on Katie B .. Neville 😎👍
March 14th, 2026 09:43
All Things White
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, the image of the pond becoming glass and reflecting the tree reaching for the unreachable really stayed with me. That moment feels symbolic and still at the same time…nature stretching upward even in the cold. It’s a lovely visual that anchors the poem. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:53
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, the image of the pond becoming glass and reflecting the tree reaching for the unreachable really stayed with me. That moment feels symbolic and still at the same time…nature stretching upward even in the cold. It’s a lovely visual that anchors the poem. Nicely done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 14th, 2026 08:53
All Things White
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful frozen images here Katie painted on a white canvass it depicts well the season in a blazingly crystal picture of poetic grandeur. Well done
March 14th, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful frozen images here Katie painted on a white canvass it depicts well the season in a blazingly crystal picture of poetic grandeur. Well done
March 14th, 2026 06:57
Birthing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this resonates with me… that feeling of bringing a poem into the world and suddenly feeling protective of it. You captured that strange mixture of struggle and affection perfectly. Writing really can feel like that. Beautifully expressed. A most wonderful metaphor my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 13th, 2026 09:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Katie, this resonates with me… that feeling of bringing a poem into the world and suddenly feeling protective of it. You captured that strange mixture of struggle and affection perfectly. Writing really can feel like that. Beautifully expressed. A most wonderful metaphor my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
March 13th, 2026 09:09
Birthing
sorenbarrett said:
Katie I have always thought of poems as an author\'s child and for this reason it is rude to criticize them unless invited to do so. They are part of the author and birthed through pain in the labor process. This is a lovely write and most heart felt.
March 13th, 2026 07:10
sorenbarrett said:
Katie I have always thought of poems as an author\'s child and for this reason it is rude to criticize them unless invited to do so. They are part of the author and birthed through pain in the labor process. This is a lovely write and most heart felt.
March 13th, 2026 07:10
Abducted
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Katie, may that luxury be with her with her freedom as well.
Andy
March 13th, 2026 02:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine words Katie, may that luxury be with her with her freedom as well.
Andy
March 13th, 2026 02:46
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