Comments received on poems by satishverma
JUXTAPOSED
baj-a said:
profoundly sad and strong... give me a piece of your body... wow! amazing work here!
March 26th, 2013 07:17
baj-a said:
profoundly sad and strong... give me a piece of your body... wow! amazing work here!
March 26th, 2013 07:17
JUXTAPOSED
diamonddagger said:
magnificently sad. "by your absence I will live in the bones of tangled bodies" this is so well written that I loved reading it. I told you, I love your work. I could read it all day if I didn't have so much to do. diamond
March 25th, 2013 22:01
diamonddagger said:
magnificently sad. "by your absence I will live in the bones of tangled bodies" this is so well written that I loved reading it. I told you, I love your work. I could read it all day if I didn't have so much to do. diamond
March 25th, 2013 22:01
ANOTHER STROKE
baj-a said:
the horror of the scene is so vivid in the words you write. I am so pained by the words I cannot even find words to describe how deeply it has affected me.
March 25th, 2013 07:10
baj-a said:
the horror of the scene is so vivid in the words you write. I am so pained by the words I cannot even find words to describe how deeply it has affected me.
March 25th, 2013 07:10
HE
baj-a said:
I have to agree with everything diamonddager said. this is another wow! poem.
March 24th, 2013 06:56
baj-a said:
I have to agree with everything diamonddager said. this is another wow! poem.
March 24th, 2013 06:56
HE
diamonddagger said:
Wow! very power packed poem. I felt as though I were reading about a prophet. Well written as usual.
March 24th, 2013 00:07
diamonddagger said:
Wow! very power packed poem. I felt as though I were reading about a prophet. Well written as usual.
March 24th, 2013 00:07
THE END
baj-a said:
your poetry always has a deep impact. always profound. that last line is really strong!
March 23rd, 2013 07:10
baj-a said:
your poetry always has a deep impact. always profound. that last line is really strong!
March 23rd, 2013 07:10
ART AND DESIRE
diamonddagger said:
I love your poetry. Very well penned. Very power filled poem.
March 20th, 2013 09:49
diamonddagger said:
I love your poetry. Very well penned. Very power filled poem.
March 20th, 2013 09:49
FUTURITY
diamonddagger said:
you are one great poet. Your words thrill me. The words jump off the page and create a picture for the reader.
March 19th, 2013 18:36
diamonddagger said:
you are one great poet. Your words thrill me. The words jump off the page and create a picture for the reader.
March 19th, 2013 18:36
SLAIN ROSES
diamonddagger said:
I love the imagery. It made the poem jump out at me. Totally awesome!
March 19th, 2013 18:29
diamonddagger said:
I love the imagery. It made the poem jump out at me. Totally awesome!
March 19th, 2013 18:29
REMINISCENCE
baj-a said:
your poems take me to a place that is not always comfortable but is always honest even in it's stark reality of life. very well penned!
March 19th, 2013 07:07
baj-a said:
your poems take me to a place that is not always comfortable but is always honest even in it's stark reality of life. very well penned!
March 19th, 2013 07:07
SLAIN ROSES
baj-a said:
I like the way you use words to make scenes come to life and make the reader face the reality of the world. excellent write.
March 18th, 2013 07:33
baj-a said:
I like the way you use words to make scenes come to life and make the reader face the reality of the world. excellent write.
March 18th, 2013 07:33
FUTURITY
baj-a said:
very effective words and well written. the end is so sad and so honest.
March 17th, 2013 07:04
baj-a said:
very effective words and well written. the end is so sad and so honest.
March 17th, 2013 07:04
FARTHER AWAY
diamonddagger said:
awesome!! I especially like the second verse. It is very deep and soul searching.
March 16th, 2013 12:47
diamonddagger said:
awesome!! I especially like the second verse. It is very deep and soul searching.
March 16th, 2013 12:47
THE VISITOR
baj-a said:
such an ethereal mystical quality to this beautifully penned poem that it takes the reader to a higher place.
March 15th, 2013 07:52
baj-a said:
such an ethereal mystical quality to this beautifully penned poem that it takes the reader to a higher place.
March 15th, 2013 07:52
FROZEN
baj-a said:
I can only add a ditto to what diamonddagger said :-). very powerful and skillfully written.
March 14th, 2013 07:47
baj-a said:
I can only add a ditto to what diamonddagger said :-). very powerful and skillfully written.
March 14th, 2013 07:47
FROZEN
diamonddagger said:
you have such a beautiful way with words. I love the imagery of your work. to resist, rebel or kill....very powerful words. Very powerful poem. Enjoyed, have a happy day.
March 13th, 2013 22:58
diamonddagger said:
you have such a beautiful way with words. I love the imagery of your work. to resist, rebel or kill....very powerful words. Very powerful poem. Enjoyed, have a happy day.
March 13th, 2013 22:58
ETERNITY
diamonddagger said:
This poem is filled with beautiful imagery. I also loved the pearl drops on your upper lip....I could picture it. Well written. Have a happy day.
March 13th, 2013 10:51
diamonddagger said:
This poem is filled with beautiful imagery. I also loved the pearl drops on your upper lip....I could picture it. Well written. Have a happy day.
March 13th, 2013 10:51
ETERNITY
baj-a said:
you have such a strong grasp on the use of imagery that your poems come to life on the page. I love the pearl drops on your upper lip... wonderfully enchanting.
March 13th, 2013 07:01
baj-a said:
you have such a strong grasp on the use of imagery that your poems come to life on the page. I love the pearl drops on your upper lip... wonderfully enchanting.
March 13th, 2013 07:01
CHESSBOARD
baj-a said:
Amazing write! the title drew me in as I am a chess player... very powerful poem.
March 12th, 2013 07:51
baj-a said:
Amazing write! the title drew me in as I am a chess player... very powerful poem.
March 12th, 2013 07:51
SYMPHONY
diamonddagger said:
very deep and powerful poem. I enjoyed it very much. Well written. have a happy day, diamond
March 11th, 2013 19:35
diamonddagger said:
very deep and powerful poem. I enjoyed it very much. Well written. have a happy day, diamond
March 11th, 2013 19:35
SYMPHONY
baj-a said:
powerful strong images created with your words! I can feel sadness and despair in every line.
March 11th, 2013 07:05
baj-a said:
powerful strong images created with your words! I can feel sadness and despair in every line.
March 11th, 2013 07:05
STILLBIRTH
baj-a said:
this poem left me with chills it was so real and so haunting in it's images.
March 8th, 2013 08:53
baj-a said:
this poem left me with chills it was so real and so haunting in it's images.
March 8th, 2013 08:53
DEPARTURE
baj-a said:
truly and amazing and provocative write. so many feelings wrapped up in your beautiful words.
March 7th, 2013 15:22
baj-a said:
truly and amazing and provocative write. so many feelings wrapped up in your beautiful words.
March 7th, 2013 15:22
SLEEPING BUDDHA
baj-a said:
your poetry humbles me! you writings are only what I can dream and aspire to accomplish some day. so beautiful and gentle and yet so powerful.
March 6th, 2013 08:50
baj-a said:
your poetry humbles me! you writings are only what I can dream and aspire to accomplish some day. so beautiful and gentle and yet so powerful.
March 6th, 2013 08:50
RAGING KINDNESS
baj-a said:
what a powerful and poignant write! exceptional work here! that last line is very strong and emotional. well written!
March 5th, 2013 08:17
baj-a said:
what a powerful and poignant write! exceptional work here! that last line is very strong and emotional. well written!
March 5th, 2013 08:17
WANDERER
baj-a said:
wow! poignant write! you really draw the reader in with the power of your words.
March 3rd, 2013 16:19
baj-a said:
wow! poignant write! you really draw the reader in with the power of your words.
March 3rd, 2013 16:19
THE FROST
Dolphine29 said:
Do you think the day will come, when people will see that there is no need to search from an empty table?
I like this poem, it makes me see the seed of change is moving.
September 18th, 2012 17:53
Dolphine29 said:
Do you think the day will come, when people will see that there is no need to search from an empty table?
I like this poem, it makes me see the seed of change is moving.
September 18th, 2012 17:53
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