Comments received on poems by satishverma
Eternal Drift
Yorke said:
As beautiful as it is , I rarely understand your work. This piece however is more direct I feel, possibly about recent life experiences, maybe cathartic or an acceptance of illness?
Whatever the meaning your words themselves always hold an abstract beauty, always a joy to read.
November 21st, 2015 04:05
Yorke said:
As beautiful as it is , I rarely understand your work. This piece however is more direct I feel, possibly about recent life experiences, maybe cathartic or an acceptance of illness?
Whatever the meaning your words themselves always hold an abstract beauty, always a joy to read.
November 21st, 2015 04:05
 Heterosexuality
ChicagoSojourner said:
I like the feel and the mystery of the poem.
I would add a question mark in the first stanza, after "harpoons."
October 24th, 2015 13:11
ChicagoSojourner said:
I like the feel and the mystery of the poem.
I would add a question mark in the first stanza, after "harpoons."
October 24th, 2015 13:11
Stripping to the Bones
Dolphine29 said:
I could listen to chaotic cries and dwelling in a hollowness that makes the particles’ shrivel and collapse, a feeling to share and a feeling to lose the fear of the seeds within… that will set one free, when the voices become music. :)
May 29th, 2014 11:55
Dolphine29 said:
I could listen to chaotic cries and dwelling in a hollowness that makes the particles’ shrivel and collapse, a feeling to share and a feeling to lose the fear of the seeds within… that will set one free, when the voices become music. :)
May 29th, 2014 11:55
UMBRELLA
ragamuffin said:
You well paint quite the picture with your words. Starts off being ominous and wraps up with determination and strength. I like this a lot.
August 29th, 2013 07:12
ragamuffin said:
You well paint quite the picture with your words. Starts off being ominous and wraps up with determination and strength. I like this a lot.
August 29th, 2013 07:12
ANSWERED...
Soumita Sarkar said:
a good write..........I invite you to read my poems.Thanks.
July 13th, 2013 10:15
Soumita Sarkar said:
a good write..........I invite you to read my poems.Thanks.
July 13th, 2013 10:15
DAY DREAMING
Soumita Sarkar said:
a good write in search of a mate ........... eternally!Keep writing and plz read my poems.Thank you.
June 12th, 2013 23:35
Soumita Sarkar said:
a good write in search of a mate ........... eternally!Keep writing and plz read my poems.Thank you.
June 12th, 2013 23:35
DIGNITY
Soumita Sarkar said:
I liked this poem addressed to the impending Danger.I invite u to read my poems and comment.Thank you
June 10th, 2013 00:58
Soumita Sarkar said:
I liked this poem addressed to the impending Danger.I invite u to read my poems and comment.Thank you
June 10th, 2013 00:58
HOLY WINGS
baj-a said:
your imagery is always so complex and fills my heart with sadness. your words are so fitting for the world in which we live today.
April 17th, 2013 07:46
baj-a said:
your imagery is always so complex and fills my heart with sadness. your words are so fitting for the world in which we live today.
April 17th, 2013 07:46
RAGS AND RICHES
baj-a said:
the imagery is both eye opening and intriguing. bronzed tongue digs the spirit ouf of flesh behind the shadows... awesome!
April 12th, 2013 08:10
baj-a said:
the imagery is both eye opening and intriguing. bronzed tongue digs the spirit ouf of flesh behind the shadows... awesome!
April 12th, 2013 08:10
HALLUCINATION
baj-a said:
this is one of those awe inspiring poems that leaves me breathless.
April 11th, 2013 07:41
baj-a said:
this is one of those awe inspiring poems that leaves me breathless.
April 11th, 2013 07:41
CURVATURE
baj-a said:
haunting images that sear the soul. to kiss the feet of a burning god... what an intriguing and powerful line!
April 10th, 2013 08:03
baj-a said:
haunting images that sear the soul. to kiss the feet of a burning god... what an intriguing and powerful line!
April 10th, 2013 08:03
DISASTER AND AFTER
baj-a said:
powerful and true words that tear at the heart and bring us face to face with the reality of war and suffering.
April 7th, 2013 07:43
baj-a said:
powerful and true words that tear at the heart and bring us face to face with the reality of war and suffering.
April 7th, 2013 07:43
FACE TO FACE
baj-a said:
this one just hit me in the gut with the powerful images...especially
A small girl with pellets
in her belly
was searching her wounded mother.
April 6th, 2013 07:40
baj-a said:
this one just hit me in the gut with the powerful images...especially
A small girl with pellets
in her belly
was searching her wounded mother.
April 6th, 2013 07:40
PINK CITY
diamonddagger said:
here is a power in your poetry that is in no other . You create, you do not merely write. You devastate yet please the eye and the mind....this poem you have created a world unto its own.
April 5th, 2013 23:00
diamonddagger said:
here is a power in your poetry that is in no other . You create, you do not merely write. You devastate yet please the eye and the mind....this poem you have created a world unto its own.
April 5th, 2013 23:00
FACE TO FACE
diamonddagger said:
So beautifully sad. I read it three times, I enjoyed it so much. Great poetry!!!!!
April 5th, 2013 22:13
diamonddagger said:
So beautifully sad. I read it three times, I enjoyed it so much. Great poetry!!!!!
April 5th, 2013 22:13
PINK CITY
baj-a said:
you have created such vivid and powerful images with each verse. while your poems remind us of the harsh realities of life and war and death they are always so beautifully sculpted you make them easy to read.
April 5th, 2013 07:18
baj-a said:
you have created such vivid and powerful images with each verse. while your poems remind us of the harsh realities of life and war and death they are always so beautifully sculpted you make them easy to read.
April 5th, 2013 07:18
SWEET REVENGE
baj-a said:
You are so right! it is the unspoken words that speak the loudest and often the harshest and cruelest.
April 4th, 2013 07:11
baj-a said:
You are so right! it is the unspoken words that speak the loudest and often the harshest and cruelest.
April 4th, 2013 07:11
IT HAPPENED
diamonddagger said:
The last three lines were so powerful that they brought tears to my eyes. Great poem.
April 3rd, 2013 17:52
diamonddagger said:
The last three lines were so powerful that they brought tears to my eyes. Great poem.
April 3rd, 2013 17:52
LOCKED DOOR
baj-a said:
for some reason this poem left me with a chilling feeling of doom. very powerful verses. the last verse and last line are especially powerful.
March 31st, 2013 08:12
baj-a said:
for some reason this poem left me with a chilling feeling of doom. very powerful verses. the last verse and last line are especially powerful.
March 31st, 2013 08:12
GENOCIDE
diamonddagger said:
A very dark reality poem. The stark naked truths are shockingly amazing just as your imagination. You are a true poet in all the glory of the meaning of the word. Thank you for publishing on here. You are a delight to read. Diamond
March 29th, 2013 19:17
diamonddagger said:
A very dark reality poem. The stark naked truths are shockingly amazing just as your imagination. You are a true poet in all the glory of the meaning of the word. Thank you for publishing on here. You are a delight to read. Diamond
March 29th, 2013 19:17
GENOCIDE
baj-a said:
you have such deep insight into the realities of life that at times it scares me but never ceases to amaze and astound me.
March 29th, 2013 07:57
baj-a said:
you have such deep insight into the realities of life that at times it scares me but never ceases to amaze and astound me.
March 29th, 2013 07:57
OF TIME AND CHAINS
baj-a said:
the powerful images you make with your words leave me in awe of your ability as a writer. I especially love the line downstairs moon was sleeping... wow!
March 28th, 2013 07:05
baj-a said:
the powerful images you make with your words leave me in awe of your ability as a writer. I especially love the line downstairs moon was sleeping... wow!
March 28th, 2013 07:05
FAITHLESS HANDS
baj-a said:
the entire poem is filled with truth but the last two lines are the truest of all! we do play in sand and yes, it will be hunger that decides the fate of the earth. always inspired by your poetry.
March 27th, 2013 07:53
baj-a said:
the entire poem is filled with truth but the last two lines are the truest of all! we do play in sand and yes, it will be hunger that decides the fate of the earth. always inspired by your poetry.
March 27th, 2013 07:53
JUXTAPOSED
baj-a said:
profoundly sad and strong... give me a piece of your body... wow! amazing work here!
March 26th, 2013 07:17
baj-a said:
profoundly sad and strong... give me a piece of your body... wow! amazing work here!
March 26th, 2013 07:17
JUXTAPOSED
diamonddagger said:
magnificently sad. "by your absence I will live in the bones of tangled bodies" this is so well written that I loved reading it. I told you, I love your work. I could read it all day if I didn't have so much to do. diamond
March 25th, 2013 22:01
diamonddagger said:
magnificently sad. "by your absence I will live in the bones of tangled bodies" this is so well written that I loved reading it. I told you, I love your work. I could read it all day if I didn't have so much to do. diamond
March 25th, 2013 22:01
ANOTHER STROKE
baj-a said:
the horror of the scene is so vivid in the words you write. I am so pained by the words I cannot even find words to describe how deeply it has affected me.
March 25th, 2013 07:10
baj-a said:
the horror of the scene is so vivid in the words you write. I am so pained by the words I cannot even find words to describe how deeply it has affected me.
March 25th, 2013 07:10
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