Comments received on poems by satishverma
ART AND DESIRE
diamonddagger said:
I love your poetry. Very well penned. Very power filled poem.
March 20th, 2013 09:49
diamonddagger said:
I love your poetry. Very well penned. Very power filled poem.
March 20th, 2013 09:49
FUTURITY
diamonddagger said:
you are one great poet. Your words thrill me. The words jump off the page and create a picture for the reader.
March 19th, 2013 18:36
diamonddagger said:
you are one great poet. Your words thrill me. The words jump off the page and create a picture for the reader.
March 19th, 2013 18:36
SLAIN ROSES
diamonddagger said:
I love the imagery. It made the poem jump out at me. Totally awesome!
March 19th, 2013 18:29
diamonddagger said:
I love the imagery. It made the poem jump out at me. Totally awesome!
March 19th, 2013 18:29
REMINISCENCE
baj-a said:
your poems take me to a place that is not always comfortable but is always honest even in it's stark reality of life. very well penned!
March 19th, 2013 07:07
baj-a said:
your poems take me to a place that is not always comfortable but is always honest even in it's stark reality of life. very well penned!
March 19th, 2013 07:07
SLAIN ROSES
baj-a said:
I like the way you use words to make scenes come to life and make the reader face the reality of the world. excellent write.
March 18th, 2013 07:33
baj-a said:
I like the way you use words to make scenes come to life and make the reader face the reality of the world. excellent write.
March 18th, 2013 07:33
FUTURITY
baj-a said:
very effective words and well written. the end is so sad and so honest.
March 17th, 2013 07:04
baj-a said:
very effective words and well written. the end is so sad and so honest.
March 17th, 2013 07:04
FARTHER AWAY
diamonddagger said:
awesome!! I especially like the second verse. It is very deep and soul searching.
March 16th, 2013 12:47
diamonddagger said:
awesome!! I especially like the second verse. It is very deep and soul searching.
March 16th, 2013 12:47
THE VISITOR
baj-a said:
such an ethereal mystical quality to this beautifully penned poem that it takes the reader to a higher place.
March 15th, 2013 07:52
baj-a said:
such an ethereal mystical quality to this beautifully penned poem that it takes the reader to a higher place.
March 15th, 2013 07:52
FROZEN
baj-a said:
I can only add a ditto to what diamonddagger said :-). very powerful and skillfully written.
March 14th, 2013 07:47
baj-a said:
I can only add a ditto to what diamonddagger said :-). very powerful and skillfully written.
March 14th, 2013 07:47
FROZEN
diamonddagger said:
you have such a beautiful way with words. I love the imagery of your work. to resist, rebel or kill....very powerful words. Very powerful poem. Enjoyed, have a happy day.
March 13th, 2013 22:58
diamonddagger said:
you have such a beautiful way with words. I love the imagery of your work. to resist, rebel or kill....very powerful words. Very powerful poem. Enjoyed, have a happy day.
March 13th, 2013 22:58
ETERNITY
diamonddagger said:
This poem is filled with beautiful imagery. I also loved the pearl drops on your upper lip....I could picture it. Well written. Have a happy day.
March 13th, 2013 10:51
diamonddagger said:
This poem is filled with beautiful imagery. I also loved the pearl drops on your upper lip....I could picture it. Well written. Have a happy day.
March 13th, 2013 10:51
ETERNITY
baj-a said:
you have such a strong grasp on the use of imagery that your poems come to life on the page. I love the pearl drops on your upper lip... wonderfully enchanting.
March 13th, 2013 07:01
baj-a said:
you have such a strong grasp on the use of imagery that your poems come to life on the page. I love the pearl drops on your upper lip... wonderfully enchanting.
March 13th, 2013 07:01
CHESSBOARD
baj-a said:
Amazing write! the title drew me in as I am a chess player... very powerful poem.
March 12th, 2013 07:51
baj-a said:
Amazing write! the title drew me in as I am a chess player... very powerful poem.
March 12th, 2013 07:51
SYMPHONY
diamonddagger said:
very deep and powerful poem. I enjoyed it very much. Well written. have a happy day, diamond
March 11th, 2013 19:35
diamonddagger said:
very deep and powerful poem. I enjoyed it very much. Well written. have a happy day, diamond
March 11th, 2013 19:35
SYMPHONY
baj-a said:
powerful strong images created with your words! I can feel sadness and despair in every line.
March 11th, 2013 07:05
baj-a said:
powerful strong images created with your words! I can feel sadness and despair in every line.
March 11th, 2013 07:05
STILLBIRTH
baj-a said:
this poem left me with chills it was so real and so haunting in it's images.
March 8th, 2013 08:53
baj-a said:
this poem left me with chills it was so real and so haunting in it's images.
March 8th, 2013 08:53
DEPARTURE
baj-a said:
truly and amazing and provocative write. so many feelings wrapped up in your beautiful words.
March 7th, 2013 15:22
baj-a said:
truly and amazing and provocative write. so many feelings wrapped up in your beautiful words.
March 7th, 2013 15:22
SLEEPING BUDDHA
baj-a said:
your poetry humbles me! you writings are only what I can dream and aspire to accomplish some day. so beautiful and gentle and yet so powerful.
March 6th, 2013 08:50
baj-a said:
your poetry humbles me! you writings are only what I can dream and aspire to accomplish some day. so beautiful and gentle and yet so powerful.
March 6th, 2013 08:50
RAGING KINDNESS
baj-a said:
what a powerful and poignant write! exceptional work here! that last line is very strong and emotional. well written!
March 5th, 2013 08:17
baj-a said:
what a powerful and poignant write! exceptional work here! that last line is very strong and emotional. well written!
March 5th, 2013 08:17
WANDERER
baj-a said:
wow! poignant write! you really draw the reader in with the power of your words.
March 3rd, 2013 16:19
baj-a said:
wow! poignant write! you really draw the reader in with the power of your words.
March 3rd, 2013 16:19
THE FROST
Dolphine29 said:
Do you think the day will come, when people will see that there is no need to search from an empty table?
I like this poem, it makes me see the seed of change is moving.
September 18th, 2012 17:53
Dolphine29 said:
Do you think the day will come, when people will see that there is no need to search from an empty table?
I like this poem, it makes me see the seed of change is moving.
September 18th, 2012 17:53
BLUE DIVINITY
Dolphine29 said:
I really enjoy it, seem like this moment in time the new begining is already at our feet, starting to grow.
August 15th, 2012 09:50
Dolphine29 said:
I really enjoy it, seem like this moment in time the new begining is already at our feet, starting to grow.
August 15th, 2012 09:50
UNBELIEVING
ianhm said:
very good short poem i really enjoyed it which is the point of poetry in the first place.
August 3rd, 2012 08:19
ianhm said:
very good short poem i really enjoyed it which is the point of poetry in the first place.
August 3rd, 2012 08:19
OUTRAGEOUS
Dolphine29 said:
The moon comes as an image reflection and then it was gone covered… I am trying to visualize the feeling of despair, as we stop to care what is around us. The feeling that the poem gives to me is this, Evoking and powerful.
Best
February 17th, 2012 11:24
Dolphine29 said:
The moon comes as an image reflection and then it was gone covered… I am trying to visualize the feeling of despair, as we stop to care what is around us. The feeling that the poem gives to me is this, Evoking and powerful.
Best
February 17th, 2012 11:24
ENORMOUS GUILT
if_you are a women_kiss me said:
MY DEAR LADY END GREAT POET YOUR WORDS
COME TO LIFE AND GIVES A GLINSE OF WHAT A
HEART IS CAPABLE TO WRITE WHEN IT COMES TO
GIVE THE BEST IN POETRY THANK YOU THANK YOU
MY DEAR POET
December 14th, 2011 17:48
if_you are a women_kiss me said:
MY DEAR LADY END GREAT POET YOUR WORDS
COME TO LIFE AND GIVES A GLINSE OF WHAT A
HEART IS CAPABLE TO WRITE WHEN IT COMES TO
GIVE THE BEST IN POETRY THANK YOU THANK YOU
MY DEAR POET
December 14th, 2011 17:48
GOLD-TIPPED
Bokononsense said:
I can't fault this poem! I'd love to leave some helpful feedback, but frankly I'm intimidated by its quality. It's so sweet and sorrowful, and creates such a beautiful sense of yearning in the reader. If I'm reading the themes correctly, the entwined motifs of natural beauty and remembered sensual love, and in particular the metaphors used, put me in mind of all the best qualities of Pablo Neruda, yet the poet's own voice remains clearly identifiable throughout. An absolute pleasure to read.
November 3rd, 2011 12:15
Bokononsense said:
I can't fault this poem! I'd love to leave some helpful feedback, but frankly I'm intimidated by its quality. It's so sweet and sorrowful, and creates such a beautiful sense of yearning in the reader. If I'm reading the themes correctly, the entwined motifs of natural beauty and remembered sensual love, and in particular the metaphors used, put me in mind of all the best qualities of Pablo Neruda, yet the poet's own voice remains clearly identifiable throughout. An absolute pleasure to read.
November 3rd, 2011 12:15
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