Comments received on poems by satishverma



HE
baj-a said:

I have to agree with everything diamonddager said. this is another wow! poem.

March 24th, 2013 06:56

HE
diamonddagger said:

Wow! very power packed poem. I felt as though I were reading about a prophet. Well written as usual.

March 24th, 2013 00:07

THE END
baj-a said:

your poetry always has a deep impact. always profound. that last line is really strong!

March 23rd, 2013 07:10

DESTINY
baj-a said:

Amen to that last line! nobody is blameless!

March 22nd, 2013 07:08

ART AND DESIRE
diamonddagger said:

I love your poetry. Very well penned. Very power filled poem.

March 20th, 2013 09:49

ART AND DESIRE
baj-a said:

as always a powerful and insightful poem

March 20th, 2013 07:13

FUTURITY
diamonddagger said:

you are one great poet. Your words thrill me. The words jump off the page and create a picture for the reader.

March 19th, 2013 18:36

SLAIN ROSES
diamonddagger said:

I love the imagery. It made the poem jump out at me. Totally awesome!

March 19th, 2013 18:29

REMINISCENCE
baj-a said:

your poems take me to a place that is not always comfortable but is always honest even in it's stark reality of life. very well penned!

March 19th, 2013 07:07

SLAIN ROSES
baj-a said:

I like the way you use words to make scenes come to life and make the reader face the reality of the world. excellent write.

March 18th, 2013 07:33

FUTURITY
baj-a said:

very effective words and well written. the end is so sad and so honest.

March 17th, 2013 07:04

FARTHER AWAY
diamonddagger said:

awesome!! I especially like the second verse. It is very deep and soul searching.

March 16th, 2013 12:47

FARTHER AWAY
baj-a said:

intriguing and mysteriously delicious!

March 16th, 2013 08:17

THE VISITOR
baj-a said:

such an ethereal mystical quality to this beautifully penned poem that it takes the reader to a higher place.

March 15th, 2013 07:52

FROZEN
baj-a said:

I can only add a ditto to what diamonddagger said :-). very powerful and skillfully written.

March 14th, 2013 07:47

FROZEN
diamonddagger said:

you have such a beautiful way with words. I love the imagery of your work. to resist, rebel or kill....very powerful words. Very powerful poem. Enjoyed, have a happy day.

March 13th, 2013 22:58

ETERNITY
diamonddagger said:

This poem is filled with beautiful imagery. I also loved the pearl drops on your upper lip....I could picture it. Well written. Have a happy day.

March 13th, 2013 10:51

ETERNITY
baj-a said:

you have such a strong grasp on the use of imagery that your poems come to life on the page. I love the pearl drops on your upper lip... wonderfully enchanting.

March 13th, 2013 07:01

CHESSBOARD
baj-a said:

Amazing write! the title drew me in as I am a chess player... very powerful poem.

March 12th, 2013 07:51

SYMPHONY
diamonddagger said:

very deep and powerful poem. I enjoyed it very much. Well written. have a happy day, diamond

March 11th, 2013 19:35

SYMPHONY
baj-a said:

powerful strong images created with your words! I can feel sadness and despair in every line.

March 11th, 2013 07:05

STILLBIRTH
baj-a said:

this poem left me with chills it was so real and so haunting in it's images.

March 8th, 2013 08:53

DEPARTURE
baj-a said:

truly and amazing and provocative write. so many feelings wrapped up in your beautiful words.

March 7th, 2013 15:22

SLEEPING BUDDHA
baj-a said:

your poetry humbles me! you writings are only what I can dream and aspire to accomplish some day. so beautiful and gentle and yet so powerful.

March 6th, 2013 08:50

RAGING KINDNESS
baj-a said:

what a powerful and poignant write! exceptional work here! that last line is very strong and emotional. well written!

March 5th, 2013 08:17

WANDERER
baj-a said:

wow! poignant write! you really draw the reader in with the power of your words.

March 3rd, 2013 16:19

THE FROST
Dolphine29 said:

Do you think the day will come, when people will see that there is no need to search from an empty table?
I like this poem, it makes me see the seed of change is moving.


September 18th, 2012 17:53

BLUE DIVINITY
Dolphine29 said:

I really enjoy it, seem like this moment in time the new begining is already at our feet, starting to grow.

August 15th, 2012 09:50

UNBELIEVING
ianhm said:

very good short poem i really enjoyed it which is the point of poetry in the first place.

August 3rd, 2012 08:19

IN REVERSE
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