Comments received on poems by Donteatmecows
The Bloodline Ends with Me 💔
sorenbarrett said:
A need and anticipation of receiving it. A romantic request. Nicely done
September 26th, 2026 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
A need and anticipation of receiving it. A romantic request. Nicely done
September 26th, 2026 18:17
Child onset schizophrenia
sorenbarrett said:
You explain well the difficulty of such a world and I don\'t believe that even explaining it that people will be able to understand. A poignant poem about the difficulty of understanding others even more so when their world is vastly different than ours. Very nicely done my friend.
September 25th, 2026 18:59
sorenbarrett said:
You explain well the difficulty of such a world and I don\'t believe that even explaining it that people will be able to understand. A poignant poem about the difficulty of understanding others even more so when their world is vastly different than ours. Very nicely done my friend.
September 25th, 2026 18:59
Legos
sorenbarrett said:
A write of bringing the familiar and friendly back into a life. A recognition of healing properties and their use to become functional. Lovely
September 24th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
A write of bringing the familiar and friendly back into a life. A recognition of healing properties and their use to become functional. Lovely
September 24th, 2026 08:53
Stream of Consciousness 6: Echoes of the Single Eye
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its surrealism paints feelings of anger and disgust. Nicely done my friend.
September 23rd, 2026 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its surrealism paints feelings of anger and disgust. Nicely done my friend.
September 23rd, 2026 08:33
Stream of Consciousness Part 5
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of not being heard in this poem. Life\'s troubles faced alone and desires not addressed only with an Ah. Sad
September 22nd, 2026 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of not being heard in this poem. Life\'s troubles faced alone and desires not addressed only with an Ah. Sad
September 22nd, 2026 09:13
Remembering Bruce
sorenbarrett said:
There is the anguish of mixed feelings in this poem. It is a sad write of suffering abuse and temptation that leaves turmoil. Nicely written it tells its tail of woe.
September 20th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
There is the anguish of mixed feelings in this poem. It is a sad write of suffering abuse and temptation that leaves turmoil. Nicely written it tells its tail of woe.
September 20th, 2026 04:30
Sweat, Tears, and Blood
sorenbarrett said:
There is pain in this write that takes the inverted name of an old band from the sixties and seventies. Nicely written from painful memories.
September 19th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
There is pain in this write that takes the inverted name of an old band from the sixties and seventies. Nicely written from painful memories.
September 19th, 2026 04:05
Wasted
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of time slipping away in this poem. Time the most precious commodity that no one can purchase and to have the feeling of wasting it through addiction and frittering it away. Well done my friend
September 18th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of time slipping away in this poem. Time the most precious commodity that no one can purchase and to have the feeling of wasting it through addiction and frittering it away. Well done my friend
September 18th, 2026 04:03
The Ooses of Slee
sorenbarrett said:
A horror write that may be a metaphor for much more. Dark and scary are many abuses that take a dream form. Well done my friend
September 16th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A horror write that may be a metaphor for much more. Dark and scary are many abuses that take a dream form. Well done my friend
September 16th, 2026 04:54
Too young for this garbage
sorenbarrett said:
I love this write with its imagery and meter. Very nicely written and a fave.
September 15th, 2026 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
I love this write with its imagery and meter. Very nicely written and a fave.
September 15th, 2026 14:48
A Letter to All Precious Children
sorenbarrett said:
My friend this poem hit hard. I have four children and four grandchildren that brought more joy than a man deserves. They have given purpose to my life and taught me more than I have taught them. There is nothing that warms like the smile of a child. A lovely write
September 12th, 2026 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
My friend this poem hit hard. I have four children and four grandchildren that brought more joy than a man deserves. They have given purpose to my life and taught me more than I have taught them. There is nothing that warms like the smile of a child. A lovely write
September 12th, 2026 11:04
Human Nature 2
sorenbarrett said:
Now that about says it all and in rhyme as well. Nicely done
September 11th, 2026 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
Now that about says it all and in rhyme as well. Nicely done
September 11th, 2026 16:16
I Loathe Scammers
sorenbarrett said:
Have had scammers call me with threats and promises that I told them they could keep. Nicely written my friend
September 10th, 2026 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
Have had scammers call me with threats and promises that I told them they could keep. Nicely written my friend
September 10th, 2026 15:55
I Loathe Scammers
Kevin Hulme said:
Well said. And that goes for Salespeople who somehow get your Number and keep ringing you up. 👍
September 10th, 2026 15:37
Kevin Hulme said:
Well said. And that goes for Salespeople who somehow get your Number and keep ringing you up. 👍
September 10th, 2026 15:37
Easy
sorenbarrett said:
Forgive and forget seems to be the message here. Why punish yourself with thoughts of the past that can\'t be changed, be good to yourself and move on and enjoy the day. Well said.
September 9th, 2026 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
Forgive and forget seems to be the message here. Why punish yourself with thoughts of the past that can\'t be changed, be good to yourself and move on and enjoy the day. Well said.
September 9th, 2026 08:39
Yankee Doodle’s Surreal Saga
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of cartoon and surreal makes this a metaphoric penning. Well done
September 8th, 2026 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of cartoon and surreal makes this a metaphoric penning. Well done
September 8th, 2026 13:00
Nobody Will Choose Me
sorenbarrett said:
We all have roles in life and some are seen and others not. Some sit in the sunshine of glory others do the work and get no credit. Nicely written
September 6th, 2026 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
We all have roles in life and some are seen and others not. Some sit in the sunshine of glory others do the work and get no credit. Nicely written
September 6th, 2026 05:07
When the Signal Clears
sorenbarrett said:
In this reflection the physical and emotional bind to each other reacting simultaneously in conjunction with each other and as the threat passes so too does the reaction. Nicely written my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
In this reflection the physical and emotional bind to each other reacting simultaneously in conjunction with each other and as the threat passes so too does the reaction. Nicely written my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:09
\"Fuck You, Moms.\"
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fantasy set in good rhyme and meter. The conflict between a false and real mother seemed the duality of the good and bad mom. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fantasy set in good rhyme and meter. The conflict between a false and real mother seemed the duality of the good and bad mom. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 03:59
A Pocket Full of Starlight
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fanciful read that takes one to the moon and back. Well done
September 2nd, 2026 17:23
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fanciful read that takes one to the moon and back. Well done
September 2nd, 2026 17:23
Safe Depths
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a search for affiliation and connection. It is a reflection on who one is and how one fits in this world. It is a call for integration and meaning psychologically and socially. Nicely said my friend
September 2nd, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a search for affiliation and connection. It is a reflection on who one is and how one fits in this world. It is a call for integration and meaning psychologically and socially. Nicely said my friend
September 2nd, 2026 04:04
Profit over Pulse
sorenbarrett said:
It is the sad truth where a comercial machine is hidden under a sterile facade. Holy holy is thy name whitened sepulcher of rotting capitalistic filth the pharmaceutical industry. A fave
August 31st, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
It is the sad truth where a comercial machine is hidden under a sterile facade. Holy holy is thy name whitened sepulcher of rotting capitalistic filth the pharmaceutical industry. A fave
August 31st, 2026 04:35
Burning in Suffering, I Say Yes
Donteatmecows said:
Thank you, sir! So i guess you\'re an old guy?
August 30th, 2026 15:48
Donteatmecows said:
Thank you, sir! So i guess you\'re an old guy?
August 30th, 2026 15:48
Burning in Suffering, I Say Yes
sorenbarrett said:
It is that fire inside that provides hope and comfort. Well written
August 30th, 2026 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
It is that fire inside that provides hope and comfort. Well written
August 30th, 2026 14:36
Sackajawouwee! (Kid-friendly, clean song)
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that makes use of a most unusual name that at first I mistook for Sacagawea but then she was a woman. It took me on a ride. Well done my friend
August 29th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that makes use of a most unusual name that at first I mistook for Sacagawea but then she was a woman. It took me on a ride. Well done my friend
August 29th, 2026 03:49
Seelasala\'s Salad
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration galore in this write. A fun read
August 28th, 2026 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration galore in this write. A fun read
August 28th, 2026 18:07
When Order Is the Only Calm I Know
sorenbarrett said:
Once a person has experienced the static normal feels much different. Nicely written my friend
August 27th, 2026 19:08
sorenbarrett said:
Once a person has experienced the static normal feels much different. Nicely written my friend
August 27th, 2026 19:08
The Ones Who Didn’t Flee
sorenbarrett said:
Now that sounds like a split personality indeed. Quite the tale and surely quite the trip. Wouldn\'t go back to that church. Well written
August 26th, 2026 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
Now that sounds like a split personality indeed. Quite the tale and surely quite the trip. Wouldn\'t go back to that church. Well written
August 26th, 2026 14:03
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