Comments received on poems by Donteatmecows
Static Disassociation
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams of being naked are common and reveal our fear of being known yet in this poem it is confronted and as a mirror image asked difficult questions to answer. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 06:06
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams of being naked are common and reveal our fear of being known yet in this poem it is confronted and as a mirror image asked difficult questions to answer. Well done
March 23rd, 2026 06:06
An emotional and contemplative man
Doggerel Dave said:
While your poems appear quite self revelatory demc, a basic bio on your Public Profile page wouldn\'t come amiss.
Interesting work.
March 21st, 2026 15:02
Doggerel Dave said:
While your poems appear quite self revelatory demc, a basic bio on your Public Profile page wouldn\'t come amiss.
Interesting work.
March 21st, 2026 15:02
An emotional and contemplative man
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt comes after knowledge and lasts until memory ceases. A lovely write
March 21st, 2026 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Guilt comes after knowledge and lasts until memory ceases. A lovely write
March 21st, 2026 07:24
Refusing waste
sorenbarrett said:
It is the end of this poem that captures my interest and the last two lines particularly that seem so common in all of us. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
It is the end of this poem that captures my interest and the last two lines particularly that seem so common in all of us. Well said
March 18th, 2026 04:41
A hard life
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to scream of a greater need of stimulation and I hear boredom. Nicely written raw.
March 17th, 2026 18:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems to scream of a greater need of stimulation and I hear boredom. Nicely written raw.
March 17th, 2026 18:31
My father
2781 said:
\"To err is human, to forgive is divine.\"
( Alexander Pope)
March 15th, 2026 08:37
2781 said:
\"To err is human, to forgive is divine.\"
( Alexander Pope)
March 15th, 2026 08:37
My father
sorenbarrett said:
A write of a sad childhood perceived abuse and neglect interspersed with a few hours of joy. Clearly written from memory\'s perspective. Well done
March 15th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
A write of a sad childhood perceived abuse and neglect interspersed with a few hours of joy. Clearly written from memory\'s perspective. Well done
March 15th, 2026 03:49
A unique relationship
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write of a seductive encounter accompanied by regret but then returning desire. Nicely done
March 14th, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
A clever write of a seductive encounter accompanied by regret but then returning desire. Nicely done
March 14th, 2026 04:10
Memories
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes a surreal format and with rhyme lays a sand and angry path to walk. Nicely done
March 13th, 2026 03:26
sorenbarrett said:
This poem takes a surreal format and with rhyme lays a sand and angry path to walk. Nicely done
March 13th, 2026 03:26
