Comments received on poems by Donteatmecows
Yankee Doodle’s Surreal Saga
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of cartoon and surreal makes this a metaphoric penning. Well done
September 8th, 2026 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of cartoon and surreal makes this a metaphoric penning. Well done
September 8th, 2026 13:00
Nobody Will Choose Me
sorenbarrett said:
We all have roles in life and some are seen and others not. Some sit in the sunshine of glory others do the work and get no credit. Nicely written
September 6th, 2026 05:07
sorenbarrett said:
We all have roles in life and some are seen and others not. Some sit in the sunshine of glory others do the work and get no credit. Nicely written
September 6th, 2026 05:07
When the Signal Clears
sorenbarrett said:
In this reflection the physical and emotional bind to each other reacting simultaneously in conjunction with each other and as the threat passes so too does the reaction. Nicely written my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
In this reflection the physical and emotional bind to each other reacting simultaneously in conjunction with each other and as the threat passes so too does the reaction. Nicely written my friend
September 5th, 2026 04:09
\"Fuck You, Moms.\"
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fantasy set in good rhyme and meter. The conflict between a false and real mother seemed the duality of the good and bad mom. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fantasy set in good rhyme and meter. The conflict between a false and real mother seemed the duality of the good and bad mom. Nicely done
September 4th, 2026 03:59
A Pocket Full of Starlight
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fanciful read that takes one to the moon and back. Well done
September 2nd, 2026 17:23
sorenbarrett said:
A fun fanciful read that takes one to the moon and back. Well done
September 2nd, 2026 17:23
Safe Depths
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a search for affiliation and connection. It is a reflection on who one is and how one fits in this world. It is a call for integration and meaning psychologically and socially. Nicely said my friend
September 2nd, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
This seems a search for affiliation and connection. It is a reflection on who one is and how one fits in this world. It is a call for integration and meaning psychologically and socially. Nicely said my friend
September 2nd, 2026 04:04
Profit over Pulse
sorenbarrett said:
It is the sad truth where a comercial machine is hidden under a sterile facade. Holy holy is thy name whitened sepulcher of rotting capitalistic filth the pharmaceutical industry. A fave
August 31st, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
It is the sad truth where a comercial machine is hidden under a sterile facade. Holy holy is thy name whitened sepulcher of rotting capitalistic filth the pharmaceutical industry. A fave
August 31st, 2026 04:35
Burning in Suffering, I Say Yes
Donteatmecows said:
Thank you, sir! So i guess you\'re an old guy?
August 30th, 2026 15:48
Donteatmecows said:
Thank you, sir! So i guess you\'re an old guy?
August 30th, 2026 15:48
Burning in Suffering, I Say Yes
sorenbarrett said:
It is that fire inside that provides hope and comfort. Well written
August 30th, 2026 14:36
sorenbarrett said:
It is that fire inside that provides hope and comfort. Well written
August 30th, 2026 14:36
Sackajawouwee! (Kid-friendly, clean song)
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that makes use of a most unusual name that at first I mistook for Sacagawea but then she was a woman. It took me on a ride. Well done my friend
August 29th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read that makes use of a most unusual name that at first I mistook for Sacagawea but then she was a woman. It took me on a ride. Well done my friend
August 29th, 2026 03:49
Seelasala\'s Salad
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration galore in this write. A fun read
August 28th, 2026 18:07
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration galore in this write. A fun read
August 28th, 2026 18:07
When Order Is the Only Calm I Know
sorenbarrett said:
Once a person has experienced the static normal feels much different. Nicely written my friend
August 27th, 2026 19:08
sorenbarrett said:
Once a person has experienced the static normal feels much different. Nicely written my friend
August 27th, 2026 19:08
The Ones Who Didn’t Flee
sorenbarrett said:
Now that sounds like a split personality indeed. Quite the tale and surely quite the trip. Wouldn\'t go back to that church. Well written
August 26th, 2026 14:03
sorenbarrett said:
Now that sounds like a split personality indeed. Quite the tale and surely quite the trip. Wouldn\'t go back to that church. Well written
August 26th, 2026 14:03
Pharmakeia… The Quiet Deception
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful as all things are that are pure truth. Men arrogant in feeling they know more than nature put their faith not in natural healing with what nature gives us but like distilled liquor changed to what makes us drunk. Putting all are cards into one hand we forge forward blind to other possibilities. A wonderful poem on the deceit of money and the harm it does in the wrong hands. A fave
August 25th, 2026 06:23
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful as all things are that are pure truth. Men arrogant in feeling they know more than nature put their faith not in natural healing with what nature gives us but like distilled liquor changed to what makes us drunk. Putting all are cards into one hand we forge forward blind to other possibilities. A wonderful poem on the deceit of money and the harm it does in the wrong hands. A fave
August 25th, 2026 06:23
False Gods and Real Wounds
sorenbarrett said:
You have been given a gift for that type of life opens you to writing things that others can not see and have not felt. You have a doorway to another world and the ability to share it with others. Keep up the good work
August 24th, 2026 14:02
sorenbarrett said:
You have been given a gift for that type of life opens you to writing things that others can not see and have not felt. You have a doorway to another world and the ability to share it with others. Keep up the good work
August 24th, 2026 14:02
Yo! (Banned)
sorenbarrett said:
These lines appear snatches of memory of the past grabbed and woven together into a fabric of life and now poem. Nicely done
August 23rd, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
These lines appear snatches of memory of the past grabbed and woven together into a fabric of life and now poem. Nicely done
August 23rd, 2026 08:43
Anguish
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of improving one\'s vision in life. Well done
August 22nd, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of improving one\'s vision in life. Well done
August 22nd, 2026 04:05
THE ARCHIVE OF IMPOSSIBLE NOISE
sorenbarrett said:
A most surreal vision presented in this poem that devolves into a dream that is recognized for what it is. Nicely done
August 21st, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most surreal vision presented in this poem that devolves into a dream that is recognized for what it is. Nicely done
August 21st, 2026 04:34
The Hug That Exists Only in Imagination, But the Need Exists in Me
Doggerel Dave said:
I remember (long time ago though it may be) that feeling, so well expressed in measured verse.
August 20th, 2026 17:14
Doggerel Dave said:
I remember (long time ago though it may be) that feeling, so well expressed in measured verse.
August 20th, 2026 17:14
The Hug That Exists Only in Imagination, But the Need Exists in Me
sorenbarrett said:
Amazingly good meter and rhythm to this poem that gives it a beat and wonderful flow. Nicely done
August 20th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Amazingly good meter and rhythm to this poem that gives it a beat and wonderful flow. Nicely done
August 20th, 2026 03:43
Time Abandoned Its Luggage at the Border
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic world presented with personified objects negotiating. Well done
August 19th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic world presented with personified objects negotiating. Well done
August 19th, 2026 04:25
The Shiver-Shamble Shadow Show
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme and meter mark this poem that has a fantastic feel. Well done
August 18th, 2026 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme and meter mark this poem that has a fantastic feel. Well done
August 18th, 2026 05:40
The Flicker-Flocker Fix-It Fox
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme, the meter, the story that wove a meaning to this poem. Well done
August 17th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme, the meter, the story that wove a meaning to this poem. Well done
August 17th, 2026 04:00
The Whimsy-Wobble Wicket Walk
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely so Lewis Carroll like it calls to the child in us all. Your images were great and the rhyme carried me on. Lovely
August 16th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely so Lewis Carroll like it calls to the child in us all. Your images were great and the rhyme carried me on. Lovely
August 16th, 2026 04:33
Worth the Weight of a Conversation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems a cry of independence. Nicely written it calls out.
August 15th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems a cry of independence. Nicely written it calls out.
August 15th, 2026 03:50
Dead Right Now
sorenbarrett said:
This poem became a rap as I read it. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem became a rap as I read it. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 20:04
Runic Rhymes of a Broken Home
sorenbarrett said:
This poem almost musical itself in its repetitions that mimic the bells. So nicely written it seems almost gothic in style and is dark and demonic. Well done and a fave my friend.
August 12th, 2026 16:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem almost musical itself in its repetitions that mimic the bells. So nicely written it seems almost gothic in style and is dark and demonic. Well done and a fave my friend.
August 12th, 2026 16:10
The Alarum of My Childhood
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this one it seemed that it fell out of The Hunchback of Notre Dame bread with Poe\'s The Tale Heart. It is loud and clamorous, excited but horribly so. A lovely write and a fave
August 11th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this one it seemed that it fell out of The Hunchback of Notre Dame bread with Poe\'s The Tale Heart. It is loud and clamorous, excited but horribly so. A lovely write and a fave
August 11th, 2026 03:49
Perception Beyond the Human Threshold
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of fantasy. Well done
August 10th, 2026 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of fantasy. Well done
August 10th, 2026 15:42
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