Comments received on poems by Donteatmecows
On Mr. Slicker-Slacker-Slither-slike
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that would entertain any child full of slapstick comedy. Nicely done
October 6th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that would entertain any child full of slapstick comedy. Nicely done
October 6th, 2026 03:43
Derealization: Tell Me I\'m Ugly
sorenbarrett said:
This must be a very unsettling feeling and confusing thoughts as well. Nicely explained in verse well done my friend
October 5th, 2026 16:43
sorenbarrett said:
This must be a very unsettling feeling and confusing thoughts as well. Nicely explained in verse well done my friend
October 5th, 2026 16:43
Jesus Saved My Life
sorenbarrett said:
We all need someone to be understanding and listen as well as give us support. We are social animals. This one uses a religious approach being nicely written in rhyme
October 4th, 2026 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
We all need someone to be understanding and listen as well as give us support. We are social animals. This one uses a religious approach being nicely written in rhyme
October 4th, 2026 03:31
School memories
sorenbarrett said:
This is a painful poem of a secret kept inside and attempts to blend when there was no blending. Nicely done
October 3rd, 2026 15:30
sorenbarrett said:
This is a painful poem of a secret kept inside and attempts to blend when there was no blending. Nicely done
October 3rd, 2026 15:30
A Sad Young Man
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the loneliness and darkness in this poem of the soul. It feels to be in shadows and though it would like to reach out it fears it. Nicely done my friend
October 2nd, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
I feel the loneliness and darkness in this poem of the soul. It feels to be in shadows and though it would like to reach out it fears it. Nicely done my friend
October 2nd, 2026 04:06
The Milkshake Meeting
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and cute, playful poem that would please any child and that child within the rest of us. Good job
October 1st, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and cute, playful poem that would please any child and that child within the rest of us. Good job
October 1st, 2026 03:58
The Milkshake Meeting
Alex Arnot said:
Well written... and reminds me that it has been far too long since I\'ve had a milkshake!
October 1st, 2026 01:07
Alex Arnot said:
Well written... and reminds me that it has been far too long since I\'ve had a milkshake!
October 1st, 2026 01:07
Televised Insanity
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in rhyme of taking a past, experience and pain and turning it into a strength and a way of living. Very nicely done my friend.
September 30th, 2026 14:43
sorenbarrett said:
A poem in rhyme of taking a past, experience and pain and turning it into a strength and a way of living. Very nicely done my friend.
September 30th, 2026 14:43
The Incomplete State
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its surreal nature and absurdity of circumstances breaths a childes voice and seems to speak from another world. Well done
September 29th, 2026 12:19
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its surreal nature and absurdity of circumstances breaths a childes voice and seems to speak from another world. Well done
September 29th, 2026 12:19
The Things I Went Through [18+ Content Warning]
Stephen Chesnut said:
Well written.
September 28th, 2026 12:03
Stephen Chesnut said:
Well written.
September 28th, 2026 12:03
The Things I Went Through [18+ Content Warning]
sorenbarrett said:
Traumas and desires mixed with youthful body changes make for confusion and an existential crisis. Nicely written
September 28th, 2026 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
Traumas and desires mixed with youthful body changes make for confusion and an existential crisis. Nicely written
September 28th, 2026 08:42
Montagnard Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
I found this intriguing, fascinated with other cultures and ways of life this was enlightening. Although we are all different we are all the same as well and there are many commonalities in this history and any other culture as well all part of being human. Nicely done
September 28th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
I found this intriguing, fascinated with other cultures and ways of life this was enlightening. Although we are all different we are all the same as well and there are many commonalities in this history and any other culture as well all part of being human. Nicely done
September 28th, 2026 04:14
The Bloodline Ends with Me 💔
sorenbarrett said:
A need and anticipation of receiving it. A romantic request. Nicely done
September 26th, 2026 18:17
sorenbarrett said:
A need and anticipation of receiving it. A romantic request. Nicely done
September 26th, 2026 18:17
Child onset schizophrenia
sorenbarrett said:
You explain well the difficulty of such a world and I don\'t believe that even explaining it that people will be able to understand. A poignant poem about the difficulty of understanding others even more so when their world is vastly different than ours. Very nicely done my friend.
September 25th, 2026 18:59
sorenbarrett said:
You explain well the difficulty of such a world and I don\'t believe that even explaining it that people will be able to understand. A poignant poem about the difficulty of understanding others even more so when their world is vastly different than ours. Very nicely done my friend.
September 25th, 2026 18:59
Legos
sorenbarrett said:
A write of bringing the familiar and friendly back into a life. A recognition of healing properties and their use to become functional. Lovely
September 24th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
A write of bringing the familiar and friendly back into a life. A recognition of healing properties and their use to become functional. Lovely
September 24th, 2026 08:53
Stream of Consciousness 6: Echoes of the Single Eye
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its surrealism paints feelings of anger and disgust. Nicely done my friend.
September 23rd, 2026 08:33
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its surrealism paints feelings of anger and disgust. Nicely done my friend.
September 23rd, 2026 08:33
Stream of Consciousness Part 5
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of not being heard in this poem. Life\'s troubles faced alone and desires not addressed only with an Ah. Sad
September 22nd, 2026 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feeling of not being heard in this poem. Life\'s troubles faced alone and desires not addressed only with an Ah. Sad
September 22nd, 2026 09:13
Remembering Bruce
sorenbarrett said:
There is the anguish of mixed feelings in this poem. It is a sad write of suffering abuse and temptation that leaves turmoil. Nicely written it tells its tail of woe.
September 20th, 2026 04:30
sorenbarrett said:
There is the anguish of mixed feelings in this poem. It is a sad write of suffering abuse and temptation that leaves turmoil. Nicely written it tells its tail of woe.
September 20th, 2026 04:30
Sweat, Tears, and Blood
sorenbarrett said:
There is pain in this write that takes the inverted name of an old band from the sixties and seventies. Nicely written from painful memories.
September 19th, 2026 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
There is pain in this write that takes the inverted name of an old band from the sixties and seventies. Nicely written from painful memories.
September 19th, 2026 04:05
Wasted
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of time slipping away in this poem. Time the most precious commodity that no one can purchase and to have the feeling of wasting it through addiction and frittering it away. Well done my friend
September 18th, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
There is a feel of time slipping away in this poem. Time the most precious commodity that no one can purchase and to have the feeling of wasting it through addiction and frittering it away. Well done my friend
September 18th, 2026 04:03
The Ooses of Slee
sorenbarrett said:
A horror write that may be a metaphor for much more. Dark and scary are many abuses that take a dream form. Well done my friend
September 16th, 2026 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
A horror write that may be a metaphor for much more. Dark and scary are many abuses that take a dream form. Well done my friend
September 16th, 2026 04:54
Too young for this garbage
sorenbarrett said:
I love this write with its imagery and meter. Very nicely written and a fave.
September 15th, 2026 14:48
sorenbarrett said:
I love this write with its imagery and meter. Very nicely written and a fave.
September 15th, 2026 14:48
A Letter to All Precious Children
sorenbarrett said:
My friend this poem hit hard. I have four children and four grandchildren that brought more joy than a man deserves. They have given purpose to my life and taught me more than I have taught them. There is nothing that warms like the smile of a child. A lovely write
September 12th, 2026 11:04
sorenbarrett said:
My friend this poem hit hard. I have four children and four grandchildren that brought more joy than a man deserves. They have given purpose to my life and taught me more than I have taught them. There is nothing that warms like the smile of a child. A lovely write
September 12th, 2026 11:04
Human Nature 2
sorenbarrett said:
Now that about says it all and in rhyme as well. Nicely done
September 11th, 2026 16:16
sorenbarrett said:
Now that about says it all and in rhyme as well. Nicely done
September 11th, 2026 16:16
I Loathe Scammers
sorenbarrett said:
Have had scammers call me with threats and promises that I told them they could keep. Nicely written my friend
September 10th, 2026 15:55
sorenbarrett said:
Have had scammers call me with threats and promises that I told them they could keep. Nicely written my friend
September 10th, 2026 15:55
I Loathe Scammers
Kevin Hulme said:
Well said. And that goes for Salespeople who somehow get your Number and keep ringing you up. 👍
September 10th, 2026 15:37
Kevin Hulme said:
Well said. And that goes for Salespeople who somehow get your Number and keep ringing you up. 👍
September 10th, 2026 15:37
Easy
sorenbarrett said:
Forgive and forget seems to be the message here. Why punish yourself with thoughts of the past that can\'t be changed, be good to yourself and move on and enjoy the day. Well said.
September 9th, 2026 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
Forgive and forget seems to be the message here. Why punish yourself with thoughts of the past that can\'t be changed, be good to yourself and move on and enjoy the day. Well said.
September 9th, 2026 08:39
Yankee Doodle’s Surreal Saga
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of cartoon and surreal makes this a metaphoric penning. Well done
September 8th, 2026 13:00
sorenbarrett said:
The combination of cartoon and surreal makes this a metaphoric penning. Well done
September 8th, 2026 13:00
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