Comments received on poems by Donteatmecows
THE ARCHIVE OF IMPOSSIBLE NOISE
sorenbarrett said:
A most surreal vision presented in this poem that devolves into a dream that is recognized for what it is. Nicely done
August 21st, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most surreal vision presented in this poem that devolves into a dream that is recognized for what it is. Nicely done
August 21st, 2026 04:34
The Hug That Exists Only in Imagination, But the Need Exists in Me
Doggerel Dave said:
I remember (long time ago though it may be) that feeling, so well expressed in measured verse.
August 20th, 2026 17:14
Doggerel Dave said:
I remember (long time ago though it may be) that feeling, so well expressed in measured verse.
August 20th, 2026 17:14
The Hug That Exists Only in Imagination, But the Need Exists in Me
sorenbarrett said:
Amazingly good meter and rhythm to this poem that gives it a beat and wonderful flow. Nicely done
August 20th, 2026 03:43
sorenbarrett said:
Amazingly good meter and rhythm to this poem that gives it a beat and wonderful flow. Nicely done
August 20th, 2026 03:43
Time Abandoned Its Luggage at the Border
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic world presented with personified objects negotiating. Well done
August 19th, 2026 04:25
sorenbarrett said:
A fantastic world presented with personified objects negotiating. Well done
August 19th, 2026 04:25
The Shiver-Shamble Shadow Show
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme and meter mark this poem that has a fantastic feel. Well done
August 18th, 2026 05:40
sorenbarrett said:
Good rhyme and meter mark this poem that has a fantastic feel. Well done
August 18th, 2026 05:40
The Flicker-Flocker Fix-It Fox
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme, the meter, the story that wove a meaning to this poem. Well done
August 17th, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the rhyme, the meter, the story that wove a meaning to this poem. Well done
August 17th, 2026 04:00
The Whimsy-Wobble Wicket Walk
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely so Lewis Carroll like it calls to the child in us all. Your images were great and the rhyme carried me on. Lovely
August 16th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely so Lewis Carroll like it calls to the child in us all. Your images were great and the rhyme carried me on. Lovely
August 16th, 2026 04:33
Worth the Weight of a Conversation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems a cry of independence. Nicely written it calls out.
August 15th, 2026 03:50
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that seems a cry of independence. Nicely written it calls out.
August 15th, 2026 03:50
Dead Right Now
sorenbarrett said:
This poem became a rap as I read it. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
This poem became a rap as I read it. Nicely done
August 14th, 2026 20:04
Runic Rhymes of a Broken Home
sorenbarrett said:
This poem almost musical itself in its repetitions that mimic the bells. So nicely written it seems almost gothic in style and is dark and demonic. Well done and a fave my friend.
August 12th, 2026 16:10
sorenbarrett said:
This poem almost musical itself in its repetitions that mimic the bells. So nicely written it seems almost gothic in style and is dark and demonic. Well done and a fave my friend.
August 12th, 2026 16:10
The Alarum of My Childhood
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this one it seemed that it fell out of The Hunchback of Notre Dame bread with Poe\'s The Tale Heart. It is loud and clamorous, excited but horribly so. A lovely write and a fave
August 11th, 2026 03:49
sorenbarrett said:
I loved this one it seemed that it fell out of The Hunchback of Notre Dame bread with Poe\'s The Tale Heart. It is loud and clamorous, excited but horribly so. A lovely write and a fave
August 11th, 2026 03:49
Perception Beyond the Human Threshold
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of fantasy. Well done
August 10th, 2026 15:42
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of fantasy. Well done
August 10th, 2026 15:42
Human nature 1
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tender care reciprocated with protective defense. Well rhymed and a story told well. Nicely done
August 9th, 2026 03:55
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of tender care reciprocated with protective defense. Well rhymed and a story told well. Nicely done
August 9th, 2026 03:55
The Scottish Boy’s Answer
sorenbarrett said:
It is from the mouths of the insane that the most sane answers come. A lovely write where one judged deranged to the point of being kept behind locked doors gives an answer that the world is not ready to hear. Well done my friend a fave.
August 8th, 2026 15:23
sorenbarrett said:
It is from the mouths of the insane that the most sane answers come. A lovely write where one judged deranged to the point of being kept behind locked doors gives an answer that the world is not ready to hear. Well done my friend a fave.
August 8th, 2026 15:23
The depths that bind me
Demar Desu said:
Well judging from your profile picture and the title of this poem it seems like you like to be free to write whatever you please!
August 3rd, 2026 20:32
Demar Desu said:
Well judging from your profile picture and the title of this poem it seems like you like to be free to write whatever you please!
August 3rd, 2026 20:32
The depths that bind me
sorenbarrett said:
This is a marvelous write of perceived differences in self and the difficulty with such through life. Yet we are all different some more than others and sadness could well be joy not to be like another. A fave my friend
August 3rd, 2026 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
This is a marvelous write of perceived differences in self and the difficulty with such through life. Yet we are all different some more than others and sadness could well be joy not to be like another. A fave my friend
August 3rd, 2026 11:07
The Past He Never Escaped
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of adversity and a hard life put to rhyme nicely done
August 1st, 2026 07:15
sorenbarrett said:
This is a poem of adversity and a hard life put to rhyme nicely done
August 1st, 2026 07:15
God’s Goodness Follows All My Life
sorenbarrett said:
Poetically touching a raw and revealing story of childhood faith and belief of family and being who one is. Nicely and courageously done
July 30th, 2026 03:23
sorenbarrett said:
Poetically touching a raw and revealing story of childhood faith and belief of family and being who one is. Nicely and courageously done
July 30th, 2026 03:23
The Waiting Room Disaster 18+ Contains Mature Themes, Sexual Content, Strong Language
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of a male fantasy put to rhyme where drink dulls the senses and leaves one with an aftermath to explain. Nicely worded with some creative rhyme all for a good time.
July 29th, 2026 08:51
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic expression of a male fantasy put to rhyme where drink dulls the senses and leaves one with an aftermath to explain. Nicely worded with some creative rhyme all for a good time.
July 29th, 2026 08:51
The Bible never said my sisters were queens
Kevin Hulme said:
I enjoyed this. A fine Poem. 👍
July 25th, 2026 16:07
Kevin Hulme said:
I enjoyed this. A fine Poem. 👍
July 25th, 2026 16:07
The Bible never said my sisters were queens
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of passion drawn by beauty where desire drives the car. A great read set in good rhyme
July 25th, 2026 04:35
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of passion drawn by beauty where desire drives the car. A great read set in good rhyme
July 25th, 2026 04:35
The Comfort I Shouldn’t Need
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of bouncing interests reflected in bouncing girls. Nicely written it makes its point.
July 24th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of bouncing interests reflected in bouncing girls. Nicely written it makes its point.
July 24th, 2026 04:08
Her gentle presence
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing for one that one is infatuated with. Nicely done
July 14th, 2026 18:11
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of longing for one that one is infatuated with. Nicely done
July 14th, 2026 18:11
Zombie
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, tortured and a hard read it speaks in raw terms of pain itself. Well done
June 7th, 2026 11:09
sorenbarrett said:
Graphic, tortured and a hard read it speaks in raw terms of pain itself. Well done
June 7th, 2026 11:09
Stream of consciousness Part 4
sorenbarrett said:
A tough upbringing leads to a downfall in this poem. Nicely written
May 6th, 2026 09:43
sorenbarrett said:
A tough upbringing leads to a downfall in this poem. Nicely written
May 6th, 2026 09:43
Stream of consciousness Part 3
sorenbarrett said:
Here I feel the rebellion against past advice and the ability to set one\'s own course. Well written
May 5th, 2026 20:09
sorenbarrett said:
Here I feel the rebellion against past advice and the ability to set one\'s own course. Well written
May 5th, 2026 20:09
Losing one\'s salvation
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious fervor well rhymed and with good flow
April 26th, 2026 01:46
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of religious fervor well rhymed and with good flow
April 26th, 2026 01:46
Stream of consciousness Part 2
sorenbarrett said:
Fears illusions, tears, delusions, dreams all come though in this poem. Nicely done
April 25th, 2026 10:40
sorenbarrett said:
Fears illusions, tears, delusions, dreams all come though in this poem. Nicely done
April 25th, 2026 10:40
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